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Sujal is talking to the emergency. The police trys to find out who he is. They find his cell phone. They check the last miss calls and redial the number. They have dialed kashish's number. Kashish sees that the call is from sujal's cell she takes it.

KAshish: Sujal kahan ho tum abhi tak phauche nahin yahan???

Police: Excuse me maam. Who are u and how are u related to this person.

KAshish: Is surprised?? Jeee aap kaun yeh cell toh mere pati ka hai.

Police: Excuse me maam we are sorry to inform u that ur husband has met with an accident

Before they cld tell kashsih anything else the cell falls from her hand. Rishi and piyush who were around run to kashish.

Rishi: Bhabhi kya hua kya baat hai????

Kashish: Woh sujal..... and she starts crying

Piyush picks up hte phone.

He calls back on sujal's phone as he saw that was hte lst recieved call on her cell. THe policeman takes the call.

Piyush: Sujal

Police: Hello dekhiya humne abhi pehla bhi phone kiya tha. Mr. Sujal ka accident ho gaya hai aur woh is waqt emergency mein hai RML hosp.

Piyush: Hum abhi aa rahe hai.

Piyush to Rishi: Tu kashish ka dhyan rakh mein akshat aur varun ko lekar hosp ja raha hua. Sujal ka accident ho gaya hai.

Kashsih: Mujhe bhi sujal ke paas jana hai. She is crying.

Piyush tells her okay lets go. They inform everone abt sujal's accident all of theem run to the hosp. Simran is also crying. Rishi takes her in his arms and tells her not to cry sujal bhaiya theek ho jaye ge. Rishi himself has tears in his eyes. All of them are upset. Veena too is crying.

AS soon as they reach their and and find abt sujal.

Piyush to the doctor: Sujal kaisa hai???

Doc: Dekhiya abhi hum kuch nahin keah sakte. We are taking him for an operaion. Unhe sar par bahut chot lagi hai after the operation onlly we will be able to tell u. Now excuse me.

Listening to this kashish starts crying. and she faints. Piyush and Rishi take her to the doctor. Veena an dulsi follow them. Akshat, Varun, Chetan, Mihir, and Om are outside the operation theatre.
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Posted: 19 years ago
The doctor does her check up and then calls fro veena and tulsi. and tells them that kashish is pregnent.Veena and Tulsi are happy but at the same time remember sujal's condition.

Veena tells the doctor abt sujal and tells her that is why she fainted. The doctor gives her an injection and tells veena and tulsi that let her rest here.

Veena tells everyone abt kashishs's pregnancy. Everyone is happy.suddenly everyone becomes sad. Rishi has tears in his eyes. He says aaj agar bhaiya theek hote toh kitna khush hote. Evryone is now waiting for the doctor to tell them abt sujal.

After 2hrs sujal's operation gets over. The doctor comes out. All of them run to him to ask abt sujal.

Doctor: The operation is sucessful but we cannot say anything at this point of time. Jab tak woh hosh mein nahin aa jate tab tak kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai.

Doctor leaves. Everyone is very disturbed. Veena's thought immediately turns to Kashish. Woh sochti hai ki Kashish se woh log kya kaheinge jab woh sujal ke baare mein poochegi.

Sujal is still unconsious. Here kashish becomes consious. She asks Tulsi abt Sujal. Tulsi doesnt want to tell her abt sujal but she is forcing her. Tulsi first tells her abt her pregnancy.

Tulsi: Kashish beta tere ko ab aapna pura khyal rakhna hai.

Kashish: Mumma mein theek hua par sujal woh kaisa hai. Mujhe uske paas jana hai woh mere liya pooch raha hoga.

Tulsi: Kashish tu maa banewali hai ab tere ko apna aur apne baache ka pura khyal rakhna hoga.

Kashish doesnt realise wat Tulsi jst said.: Mummy mujhe Sujal ke paas jana hai.

Tulsi: Abhi Sujal ke paas chalte hai tere liya itni excitment achi nahin hai. Tu maa bane wali hai.

Now kashish realises that she is pregnent. Hearing this she wants to run to sujal to give him this news.

Tulsi doesnt allow her to get up but she is admant. Then she tells her ki sujal abhi recovery room mein hai no one can go and meet him yet.

Kashish starts crying. Tulsi pacifies hers adn tells her not to worry sujal will be fine. Kashish comes out. Veena comes near her and kisses her on her forehead. Then she tells kashish hamare sujal ko kuch nahin hoga tu fikar mat kar there are tears in Veena's eyes. Kashish composes herself adn says mumma aap fikar mat karo hamare Sujal ko kuch nahin hoga. Both of them hug each other.
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After 3 hrs Sujal starts gaining consiousness but not fully. He is calling for kashish. The nurse comes out and goes and calls the doctor. The doctor goes inside to check on sujal. Everyone outside are really worried. Sujal is still semi consious and is calling for kashish. The doctor comes out and says he shld be fine now. And asks for kashish and allows her to go inside the room.

Hearing that sujal is fine everyi\one is happy adn relieved. Tears are trickling down kashish's eyes she moves inside the room. And goes and sits next to sujal on the bed sujal is still not fully consious. Kashish holds his hand in her hand adn kisses it.

Kashsih says agar tumhe sujal kuch hojata toh mera kya hota. Tumhare bina toh mein jeena ka soch bhi nahin sakti. tumhi toh meri zindagi ho. Tears are falling from kashish's eyes. Pata hai tumhare liya kitni baari kushi hai. Tm jald se hosh n\mein aajao sujal. Idhar sujal ko ab hosh aajata hai. He haas heard her says Kushi hai tumhare liya.

Sujal: Kashish.

Kashish: Sujal

and then there is a silent between them kahsish is so happy that she is unable to say anything.

Sujal: Kashish bahut pyar karta hua tumse jee nahin sakta tumhare bina. And there are tears in his eyes. (Actually he is feeling guilty for misunderstanding kahsish but rt now doesnt have the ccourage to tell her anything.). He had heard kashish saying abt khushi. He thinks that kashish wants to th\ell abt hte orphanage which he has opene in Diya's memory. He wants to ask but stops as it is still making him feel guilty seeing kashish's love for him.

Kashish: Sujal ab kaise ho???? Pata hai tumhe ek kush khabri deni hai.(she wants to tell abt the child)

Sujal; (sujal is still thinking kahsish wants to tell abt the part) Kashish abi nahin baad mein abhi bas mere paas baitho.

Kashish: Achha baad mein baatati hua tumhe par mujhe sab ko baatahne doo ki tm theek ho aur tumhe hosh aagaya hai.

Sujal: Pls kashish mujhe chod kar mat jao.

Kashish: Sujal bas ek minute mein aayi.

Sujal:(smiles) hummm
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Kashish goes out and informms that sujal is fine aur usko hosh aagaya hai. Everyone is very happy. The doctor also gives permission to meet him but not more than 2 people at a time. Veena along with kashish go in first.

Veena: Kaisa hai beta?? and kisses him onhis forehead

Sujal: Ab theek hua.

Veena: Kashish tuna isko kush khabri di ya nahin.

Kashish:(sharmate hua) nahin mumma abhi nahin.

Veena: Sujal tujhe pata hai mein Dadi banewali hua.

Sujal: Kya bola aape mumma

Veena; Arye buhu tu baap bane wala hai.

Sujal in excitement tries to get up ouch.....

Veena: aaram se.

sujal sweetly looks towards kashish and is smiling and winks at her.

One by one evryone comes and checks on sujal then sujal asks from kashish abt simran.

Sujal: Kashish tumne mujhe baataya kyon nahin.

Kashsih: aap ko baatane wali thi aap ne baatane nahin diya.

Sujal: Sorry galti meri hai.

The nurse comes and gives some pain killers to sujal so that he could rest.

Sujal: Kashish gudiya kahan hai.

Kashish; usko mumma ne ghar bhej diya tha bahut ro rahi thi.

Sujal: Bahut parshan karta hua naa tum sab ko.

Kashish: Aisi koi baat nahin hai.

sujal: Par ab mein tumko bilkiul taang nahin karoonga.

Kashish: Thats good. Pata hai tumko kitna ghabra gaye thea hum sab

Sujal: Bola naa ab mein tumhe bilkul taang nahin karoonga balki meri beti tumko tang karegi.

Kashish; Achaji baache ke aane se pehla hee soch liya ki beti hogi aur woh ang bhi karegi mujh ko.

Sujal: Aur nahin toh kya meri beti ha tumhari naak mein dum kardegi.

Kashish: Nahin beta hoga

Sujal: tries to turn a bit but is in pain oooooh.

Kashish: kya hua? Aacha ab tum so jao.
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Time passes by after 10 days sujal comes back home. Eveeryone is really happy.

Sujal is alone in his room standing at the window thinking how wrong he was and why he didnt trust kashish he was feeling sorry. Tears trickle down his cheek.

Tabhi kashish waha aa jati hai.

KAshish: Sujal kya hua kya soch rahe ho.

Sujal quickly wipes his tears. Goes near kashish and kisses her forehead.

Sujal: Hamesha aisa hee pyar karti rehna mere ko nahin toh jee nahin paonga tumhare bina.

Kashish: Sujal kaisi baat kar rahe ho hamesha pyar karoongi tumhe. Tum bhi toh mujhe itna pyar karte ho.

Sujal: haan shayad thoda kam karoonga ab tumhe koi aur bhi hai jisko mein pyar karte hua tumhe mera pyar baatna parega uske saath

Kashish: Yeh kya keh rahe ho tum kaun hai woh? saying this there are tears in kashish's eyes.

Sujal: Woh woh naaaa ....

Kashish: Is now crying even more....

Sujal: Arey tum ro kyon rahi ho. Tum bhi toh usko mere hissa ka pyar dogi.

KAshish understands wat sujal wants to say aur rate hua uske chehra par muskurahat aa jati hai aur usko pyar se maarti hai.
Then sujal takes her into his arms and hugs her tightly. Then kisses her on her forehead. Tabhi simran aati hai bhagti hua kamre mein.

Simran: Sujal bhaiya mumma keh rahi hai ki ek choti si gudiya aane wali hai ghar mein. kaha hai? kaha se aayigi woh? Kya woh mere saath khelegi.

Sujal starts laughing at simran's questions and takes her into his arms and makes her sit on his lap. and says abhi choti gudiya ko aane mein time hai jab woh aa jaeygi naa toh aap uske saath khelna.

Here kashish gets up and starts putting things in the cupboard. She is watching sujal playing and chatting with simran. She could see how haapy sujal is since he has head the news of his child.

After sumtime simran leaves the room. kashish is still busy doing sum work. Sujal tiptoes and holds her from the back.

Kashish: Sujal yeh kya kar rahe ho tum?

Sujal: Tum se pyar.

kashish: Looks towards sujal and has a smile on her face

Sujal: Kya hua aise kyon muskura rahi ho?

Kashsih: kuch nahin bas?

Sujal: kya kuch nahin kuch toh hai?

Kashish: Bas yehi soch rahi thi ki tum simran se itna pyar karte ho aur apne baache se bhi itna hee karogi toh mein kaha jaaongi.

Sujal: Tumhari wajhe se toh yeh khushi meri zindagi mein aarahi hai toh tum toh mere liya sab se imporant ho.


Slowly timepaasses by. Sujal takes full care of kashsih always goes wiht her to the doctor. Never says no to her for anything. Its time for her delivery. In the middle of the night kashsih is in pain. Sujal gets panicky he calls Veena she asks him to take kashsih to the hosp. All of hem take kashish to the hosp.

Kashsih is taken inside by hte doctor. Sujal is really woried outside.Anyone looking at his face can feel the tension he is going thru. He is praying that kashsih shld be fine. Veena tries to comfort him that everything would be fine.

After sometime the doctor comes and says that it is a baby girl. Both mothe and the child are absolutely fine they can go and see hte mother and the child. Sujal is the first one to run to kashish. Veena tells everyone to go in after sumtime. Sujal enters the room
goes and sits next to kashish on th bed.

Sujal: Theek ho?

KAshish: Hmm

The nurse gets the child after cleaning it. She gives the child in sujal's hands. he very carefully holds her and says Thank you beta for cuming tinto our life u have given us so much of happiness. he then kisses the baby girl. Tears trickle down his eyes. Then he keeps the baby next to kasshish on the bed. She is happy to see sujal so happy. Slowly evryone comes in to see kashsih and the baby. After 4-5 days kashish is bought home.

At the entrance veena does the aarti. Tehn sujal kashish and the baby enter the house. Sujal takes kashish and the baby to their room. Wen they enter the whole room is decorated with stuff toys and toys for the baby. There is a cot also for the baby a pram too. Kashsih is surprised at all this she looks at sujal

Kashish: Yeh sab?

Sujal: Apni beti ke liya kyon aacha nahin laga.

Kashish: Bahut aacha hai.

After few minutes simran enters the room and brings her stuff toys.

Sujal: Arye gudiya yeh kya hai?

Simran: Bhaiya yeh choti gudiya ke liya.

Sujal; Kisses simran and makes her sit with them.

Sujal then turns to kashish and says aaj meri family complete ho gayi hai tum, mein, gudiya aur baby.

Kashish smiles at him.

On the 13th day the Naam karan ceremony takes place. The Baby is named " KAJAL". ( I know u all must have guessed it)

Thereafter sujal, kashsih, simran, kajal and the rest of the family live happily.


THE END

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx 4 a lovely story ur story was really very gud hope 2 see ur new fan fic soo 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
GRE8 STORY........................................... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
every1's stories are goin soooo well!!!
, sun_423 u used to rite yr own fanfic rite?, wat happnd to it? i remmber wen i bgan readng the fanfics, i wud look frward to yr story n den u stopped riting...

rajeevAC pleassse rite one mre romntic part in yr story b4 sk go bak home!!.. plss...!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
golu very nice story i just enjoyed it but now write a new fan fiction
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Posted: 19 years ago
rajeevac plz write soon next part 😊

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