My first Lk Ff . UPDATE!Comments please! - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

71

Views

6.3k

Users

14

Frequent Posters

moodle thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#61
Firstly my apologies, I've just been really busy lately

but anyways heres part 14 hope you guys like and please comment!!!

Part 14

In the morning Lakshya woke up to find that kt wasn't there.
She was on the other side of the hut fixing her sari.

Lakshya put on his shirt and went up to her
he hugged her from behind and kissed her cheek.

L: Good morning gorgeous!

Tears rolled down from her cheeks as she turned to face Lakshya.

L: Hey what's wrong? He said as he wiped her tears
K: Do you not think what we did yesterday was wrong?
L: What was wrong about it?
K: No it's just that I had promised myself that I wouldn't

Lakshya sat down and sat kt on his knee.

L: look you love me don't you?
K: Yeah
L: and I love you, as far as I'm concerned it would have been wrong of us to make love if we weren't in love
K: yeah but what if something happens in the future like I get pregnant and then we separate then what
L: Well that's not going to happen, I'll always be there for you.

He held her hands in his

K: I just feel that it's a bit awkward because we haven't really made any commitments to each other.
L: Wouldn't you call last night a commitment?

Kt remained silence
Lakshya didn't know what to say.

The silence was broken by the driver appearing at the door.

Driver: Sir, madam I was on the way to work when I saw the car, I'm sorry I forgot to tell you about the petrol

L: It's alright, just give us a lift back to the hotel.

Kt and Lakshya remained silent in the car, upon arriving at the hotel Lakshya broke the silence by saying

L: I need to go to the office today I should be back by 5pm.

He hesitantly kissed her on the forehead and went to get ready.

It was now 5.

Lakshya arrived at the hotel from the office,
Kt was in her room reading a magazine.
Lakshya knocked on her door.

L: can I come in?
K: yeah

They both spoke up at the same time

K: You go first
L: Look Kt I'm sorry about last night, how about we just forget about it?
K: No I can't, I mean I don't want to, I thought about it and it was a special night for both of us and it's a memory I want to cherish
L: you sure you're fine?

Kt went up to Lakshya and kissed him.

K: Does that give you your answer?
L: No, not quite he said with a cheeky smile

Kt then kissed him with more affection.

K: how about now?
L: hmm I still can't really tell

Kt then gave him a French kiss

K: Now?
L: Yeah!

He pulled kt closer to him and hugged her. I promise that I will never leave you.

PulkitMouni Fan thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#62
this ff rocks man 👏
laksh is so cute, i thought it was going to be obvious for kt to give a answer like that, but i'm happy that she doesn't feel ashamed about making love to laksh without marriage 😳
it was totally awesome 👏
please continue soon with more lkt romance 😳

preeti
aishu_fan thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#63
jaanu it was awesome!!it was superb!!yaar its wondeful!! 👏
moodle thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

jaanu it was awesome!!it was superb!!yaar its wondeful!! 👏

thanks 😊

moodle thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: PulkitMouni Fan

this ff rocks man 👏
laksh is so cute, i thought it was going to be obvious for kt to give a answer like that, but i'm happy that she doesn't feel ashamed about making love to laksh without marriage 😳
it was totally awesome 👏
please continue soon with more lkt romance 😳

preeti

thanks preeti 😊 will continue asap

Dr.Smart thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#66
PLease please contunie soon....It very good and i am dying to read further.....

Palchin
bradford3 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#67
plz continue this part was awesome
princess4120 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#68
one of the most romantic ffs.. i really hope you continue ssoon.. cant wait to read more.. 😊
moodle thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#69
thanks all of u
i will try to continue soon#
i just have exams atm

😊
moodle thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#70
A month had passed now, it was time for Kt to leave

She was packing her suitcase as her flight was the next morning

It was six o clock, lakshya would usually be back at the hotel by five
She was wondering where he had got to

She went next door (lakshya's room) and knocked on the door

L: Yeah come in

Kt walked in too see lakshya with files and papers scattered everywhere
Lakshya didn't look up he just sat on his laptop doing work

K: Oh sorry you're a bit busy
L: Hey kt. . Sorry I just have a deadline to meet I was going to call you to cancel dinner
K: Oh its fine, finish you're work, will you done by tomorrow morning?
L: Hopefully why what's happening tomorrow morning?
K: My flight, I'm going back to new York tomorrow
L: Lakshya looked surprised oh yeah I forgot, so that it means its your last night here?
K: Yeah pretty much
L: Oh I'm sorry, I just have to make this deadline
K: its alright, I understand, I'll go finish packing

Kt finished her packing and ordered some room service.
It was about 10pm now and she sat down to watch tv
Then lakshya knocked on her door

K: Lakshya what are you doing?
L: Its your last night
K: You're deadline?
L: I made a few phone calls, it always helps to be the bosses son at times like these (he grinned) and anyways right now you're what matters
Kt blushed
L: I'm sorry I couldn't plan anything special for tonight, I just got a little distracted
K: It's ok, come in

The couple sat on the bed
Lakshya wrapped his arms around kt

K: I'm going to miss you
L: same here

Lakshya turned kt around to face him
He kissed her softly on the lips

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno · 3 months ago

How do you react when a man asks you if you want to marry him?

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".