My first Lk Ff . UPDATE!Comments please! - Page 6

plz continue
this part was really good

omg!!!tht was ablsoutley postivley spectacular!!!

hey lovely part loved the romantic hope it didnt have to end though but nevertheless great job continue soon with more romance 😉

Tuba

Part 12

Lakshya and Kt enjoyed a beautiful candle lit dinner. They were on their way out of the restaurant when Lakshya told her he would be back in a second.

Kt went and sat in the back of the car.
The car door opened and Lakshya sat in the drivers seat.
Kt didn't realise it was Lakshya so she just continued to just look outside of the window.

L: Oye Madam I'm not your driver come and sit in the front
K: Lakshya what are you doing, where's the driver?
L: Oh I sent him home, I felt like driving
K: Ok then, kt went and sat in the front of the car

Lakshya started to drive.
It started to rain heavily
Then Lakshya stopped the car

K: What happened?
L: the car's run out of petrol. The driver didn't bother telling me that did he
K: Well we can't get petrol now, we're like in the middle on nowhere and it's late at night
L: We'll try and get a taxi or something
K: but it's raining so heavily!
L: Look there's a hut a head, we'll wait there until the rain calms down

They got to the hut it was quite shabby looking but at least it was shelter.

They were both drenched.
Lakshya took off his shirt, to leave it to dry.
He then lay down on the hay stack.
He could see kt looking miserable
He got up and walked towards her, he then put his arms around her

L: Cheer up at least we have a place to stay and we're not outside.
K: I know but it's just so dirty
L: Oh yeah I forgot that you were a princess

Kt hit lakshya
Lakshya started to tickle her

K: Lakshya stop please! she was in hysterics

She fell down on top of Lakshya.
Their faces were cm away from each other
Lakshya removed the hair gently from Kt's face
His touch made Kt quiver
Seeing the effect he had on her, made lakshya smile. . .

To be continued

tht was simply fantastic!!!!!!wonderufl job!!!wait,r u sure this is ur first ff?
wonderful job man!

Thanks guys for appreciating my writing 😊

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Part 13

L: You're looking very beautiful today
Kt blushed
K: Thank you Lakshya, you've been telling me this all night
L: Now get off me, I'm tired, I'm going to sleep
K: What?!

Kt couldn't believe Lakshya wanted to go to sleep he was in a very romantic mood before and now.
Lakshya smiled seeing Kts face, but hid his laughter

L: come on Kt its like 2am, can't blame me for being tired

Kt immediately got up and went on sat on a hay stack on the opposite side of the hut irritated and quite frankly confused

L: are you not even going to say good night!
K: Good night! She said sarcastically

Lakshya pretended to be asleep, he peered over to see Kt sat there resting her head on her knees looking outside.

He thought this was his chance
He crept up behind her and swept her off her feet
Kt screamed

L: shhh it's me!
K: What I thought you were tired?
L: Haha! Which fool would go to sleep when they're with a pretty girl all alone

Kt blushed
K: So that was all a drama?
L: Yeah course! You looked so shocked it was so funny!
K: I actually don't know how I put up with you sometimes (she said in a disappointed tone)

She went and sat back down looking fed up
Lakshya felt bad, he had just ruined the whole mood, he felt like an idiot

L: I'm sorry kt
K: You don't need to say sorry, I just get fed up sometimes

He went forward to go and hug her, but kt put her hand out.

K: Lakshya not now, I just want to be alone for a while
L: Oh ok I'm really sorry though and remember I love you

He gave a faint smile and walked away looking dejected
L: I'll go and see if I can find a cab

Kt ran behind him and shouted wait.

Lakshya turned around and Kt put his arms around his neck and started to kiss Lakshya passionately.

Lakshya was taken aback at first, this was the first time kt had made the first move but then he got accustomed to it.

As they shared their kiss he moved his hands up across her back and removed her pallu to reveal her bare midriff.

He carefully removed her jewellery and began to kiss her neck, he could feel her heart beat faster

He removed her hair from her back and kissed that as well.

All this time, Kt was completely lost in Lakshya's affection.
His touch was so tender.

He untied the dori of her blouse and delicately removed that.
He lifted her up, and carried her over to the corner of the hut and gently laid her down.

The couple spent the whole night lost in each other's love.

awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luvedddddddddd ittttttt!!!! continue soonnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

👏 love,
Shifa

that was great please please please update soon.....

Palchin

it was too gooodd!!yaar i cant tell u how awesome it was!