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Posted: 17 years ago

*NOTE*

Heyy All... umm u all r gonna hate me for this but i cannot updte this week due to 2 major assignments due this week... (commerce n english.... :( ) sorry...
i pinky promise to have it ready by the time i come back from malaysia sorrry..
thanks for understanding...
Sonia
PS: next part will b the last one...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

*NOTE*

Heyy All... umm u all r gonna hate me for this but i cannot updte this week due to 2 major assignments due this week... (commerce n english.... :( ) sorry...
i pinky promise to have it ready by the time i come back from malaysia sorrry..
thanks for understanding...
Sonia
PS: next part will b the last one...



its ok no problem
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 19:
'This part is dedicated to all the readers of this ff....'

"Anjie…kaha le jare ho mujhe?" "Ridz kitne sawaal poochte ho… maine kaha na… mere bahut poorane dost ki sagai hain and I needed someone to come with me…so I dragged you… now don't be such a party pooper…" "Party pooper and me? I'm not the one who called 2 hours before leaving saying… 'I need someone to come with me to a engagement party… pick you up in 2 hours…'" "Well darl it's good to be spontaneous every now and then… and anyways you look amazing… Armaan would die if he saw you…." Hearing his name she blushed, leaning on the car frame she looked ahead at the wide road, wind blowing in her hair she remembered back a week ago.

After coming back to India from Australia, it was as if no one was surprised at armaan's proposal apart from her; it was as if she had been the only one not let it on the joke. Of course they were happy but it was nothing new to them, they knew it was all going to happen and that she would answer in a yes; but still their faces were shocked when they had seen the rock that glistened on riddhima's finger now.

Armaan had gone to the extreme to get a beautiful Tiffany & Co engagement ring. She was taken back by the cost but Armaan immediately said No to getting something cheaper, replying in the exact same words of 'it's a once in a life time chance… and it will be forever… and like they say diamonds are a girls best friend… so don't say no just because of the price tag…'

"here we are…" spoke Anjali parking just outside the white building, that glowed in lights, "chal…" nodding riddhima stepped out, lifting up her light blue and cream lengha her heels stepped out onto the pebbles, looking over to Anjali dressed in a hot pink sari showing of her figure riddhima composed her self and together they walked up the stairs into the hall.

"Why is it so dark?" Riddhima asked looking around at the dead silent hall lights had been turned of apart from a few candles which showed a stair case at the back of the hall, "pata nahin…chal andar jaiye…" walking through the main arch way into the hall she stopped as the lights flickered on and a sudden noise of "SURPRISE" her eyes flew open to face what was in front of her.

Before her, stood hundreds of people shouting surprise at her, Anjali smiled mischievously as she pulled riddhima further in the hall as she stood struck by shock.

From Rahul to Muskaan, atul to Shubhankar and Keerti, Padma and last to Armaan; all dressed formally with smiles upon there faces, her eyes stayed on Armaan dressed in a matching crme sherwani with a smile plastered on his face.

"yeh sab kya hain…." She said softly but loud enough for all to hear, "tumhare aur Armaan ke liye engagement party… you wouldn't give us one so we gave you one…" answered Rahul as walked over to riddhima, "we couldn't let you get away like that without giving us all a reason to party…" put in Muskaan, they all laughed as riddhima went and stood in between Padma and Armaan she looked at everyone thanking them for the wonderful surprise.

"welcome to the family beta…I've dreamed of this day… shashank aur smriti bahut khush honge…" spoke padma as she caressed riddhima's cheeked and kissed her forehead, moving along to see the other guests she left riddhima and Armaan alone.

"tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahin…at least I wouldn't be as shocked as I was…" Armaan held her waist and smiled, "this isn't the end…" he said quickly pecking her on the cheek and walking away, standing there confused riddhima looked around as she heard music playing in the background.

Maahi ve maahi ve that's the way maahi ve

Rahul moved beside her out of nowhere, singing to her…
Tere maathe jhumar damke
Tere kannno baali chamke hai re
Maahi ve

And then came atul, from the other side he sang…
Tere haatho kangana khanke
Tere pairo payal chance hai re
Maahi ve

Spinning her around to face the back, they joined the girls as they sang and danced with few other friends, armaan stood beside her swinging along to the beat…
Naino se bole rabba rabba
Mann mein dole rabba rabba
Amrut ghole rabba rabba
Tu soniye
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve

That's the way maahi ve

Armaan circled around her singing, as she laughed holding her hand up to her face she slightly blushed, looking at him she ran away from the embarrassment to the girls
O tere aankhen kali kali
Tera gora gora mukhdha hai re
Maahi ve

He wouldn't go that easily following her he took hold of her wrists and pulled her close, her eyes widened in horror and embarrassment as everyone's eyes were on them.
Tere rangat jaise sona
Tu chaand ka tukda hai re maahi ve
Tere gaal gulabi rabba rabba
Chal sharabi rabba rabba
Dil ki kharabi rabba rabba
Tu soniye

He then once again spun her as he went to rahul and atul singing and dancing along to her, she caught a glimpse of him winking at her while he sang increasing her embarrassment meter and making her turn crimson red.
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve

Walking around the hall she sang, as she danced with the little kids the happiness was evident on her face, she moved around to Anjali and Muskaan as she sang hugging her by the side with tears forming around her eyes in delight.

Barse rangini kaliyan hai mehki bhini bhini
Baje mann mein halke halke shehnaiya re
Jitne hai tare aanchal mein aa gaya sare
Dil ne jaise hi li angadayee re

She was pulled by Atul and Rahul, to the middle singing and dancing along.
Tu jo aayee sajhke mehndi rajke
Chal bajke oh soniye
Dil kit no ka khaye dhajke oh soniye
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve

Padma went and stood beside riddhima and Armaan, holding riddhima's hands she walked along with her pointing out to the stars in the night's sky that shone down on them through the large window.
Chanhda meri chanda tujhe kaise mein yeh samjhaoon
Mujhe lagti hai tu kitni pyaari re

Kissing her on the forehead she sang and as she sung the sweet words they reminded Riddhima of her mother, tears formed on the rims of her eyes and as they were about to fall Padma wiped them away giving a meaningful smile as if she knew what was happening in her thoguhts.
Khusiyan jitni hai sab jitni hai sab dhoondh ke laoon

Armaan came up and pulled both his mother and fiance to the dance floor making riddhima forget all of her sorrows and only making her think about the future, the future they had together.
Teri doli ke sang kar do sari re
Tu jo aayee sajhke mehndi rajke
Chal bajke oh soniye
Dil kit no ka khaye dhajke oh soniye
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve
Tere maathe jhumar damke
Tere kannno baali chamke hai re
Maahi ve
Tere haatho kangana khanke
Tere pairo payal chance hai re
Maahi ve
Naino se bole rabba rabba
Mann mein dole rabba rabba
Amrut ghole rabba rabba
Tu soniye

Jind maahi ve jind maahi ve jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve
Everybody sing soni soni aaja mahi ve
Soni soni aaja mahi ve soni soni aaja mahi ve

The song ended to armaan and riddhima in each others arms, she looked up at him to his eyes, silently thanking him for all that he had given and all he was about to give to her; kissing her lightly on her forehead he held her tight closing his eyes to embrace the moment.

"I love you…" she whispered quietly to him…

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"arghh yeh sab tumhara fault hain…. You don't know the definition of NO…" "and you don't know how to say NO!" he replied back, she shook her head and let out an angry sigh, "you… you…" she said pointing her finger at him, "will never change… arghh…." He tried keeping his laugh to himself but every time he saw her like this he couldn't help but laugh, "haso haso… khul ke haso… one day I will show you…" "sorry hun… not scientifically possible…" "to hell with science…chal hath…" pushing him out of they way she waddled over to the bed, "mama phir se gussa ho?" hearing a soft voice she saw him in armaan's arms, "papa phir se mama ke anger management problems hain?" armaan quickly shut his eyes hoping that riddhima had not heard, opening them again he looked at there 2 years old son, "shh bacha aise nahin kehna…" "par papa aapne aise hi kiya tha…" walking over to them both riddhima nodded, "of course… tumhare papa hi aise ke sakte hain…par sach toh keh rahe hain na… anger management problems…haina armaan?" gulping he put Rishi down and looked at riddhima, "darling aise kuch bhi nahin hain… joke keh rahe tha…" "haan haan joke…" "see… har baat par tum gussa hote ho…" "toh phir mujhe anger management classes par kyun nahin bejte ho? Hmm?" angrily she walked out the bedroom doors and down stairs into the kitchen.

"phir se gussa…" "shh…rishi… kuch bhi nahin anadar reh sakte tumhare peth main… chal mummy ko sorry kehdiye…" letting out a sigh he picked Rishi in his arms and went towards the kitchen.

"mama…." Rishi spoke as he tugged on riddhima's salwar suit, "mama….chorry…" he said with sadness in his voice, she turned around to see her baby looking up at her, at that second her heart melted picking up Rishi and placing him on the bench top she looked at him, "it's alright bacha…" kissing him on the forehead she straightened out his clothes, "mama ek baat batao? Papa kehte hain ke aap gussa hote hain kyun baby aapko dard karte hain kya yeh sach hain?" he asked patting his mum's full grown stomach, riddhima laughed; "nahin bacha… aise kuch nahin hain… pata nahin ke tumhare papa kya bakwaas kehte hain tumko…." "bakwas?" she heard his voice and there he stood leaning against the frame of the kitchen door, "so your telling me when I say that I love you to your child… that I'm lying? Not fair…" she looked at him with a watever look, "joking joking…" he replied hugging her from the back, as he rested his chin on her shoulder he held her stomach, "sowi?" "it's alright… but I still blame you for this…" she said pointing down at her large pregnant stomach, he laughed "but you still are happy na" "always armaan… you have given me everything… I can't wish for anything more…" he smiled kissing her quickly on the lips while Rishi looked down at the plate of cookies lying beside him, licking his lips in temptation he looked up at his mother, "please?" he asked, "fine but only one…" nodding he picked up the cookie and jumped of the bench running out the kitchen.

"love you…"

"love you too…"

Like Shah Rukh khan had said in Kuch kuch hota hain, Pyar dosti hain; it's true without friendship no love can be formed between the two; but I also find with out love no friendship can be formed. We need someone who we can trust and rely upon, and love doesn't always have to be between a guy and a girl; we love our friends and that's what makes any relationship grow stronger.

All love that has not friendship for its base,
Is like a mansion built upon the sand.

Please watch this wonderful VM made by Avanti for this ff...
[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pyOHSKvd3JM]

The End..
Thanks To all The readers who have been supporting me throughout this ff...
without you none of this would have been possible...
i also want to say thanks because i got my results back for NAPLAN (National Assesment Program for Literacy and Numeracy) and when it came to my writing skills i was in band 10 when avergae of the yr 9's are in band 5 and so i give all the credit to everyone for encouraging me in the ff.
I hope you enjoyed the ff....

love always
Sonia😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
really an awesome one⭐️ so sweet😊😉 mindblowing😊😳👍🏼 but its end😭 so sad😭 plz start a new😳 one plz if u can😳 and thanks for the pm😉

"I love u Bcoz I belive u
I love u Bcoz I respect u
I love u Bcoz I want u
I love u Bcoz u r in my eyes
I love u Bcoz u r in my Heart
I love u Bcoz simply I love u, love u from my heart."

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"Life spent with someone
for a lifetime may be meaningless,
But a few moments spent
with someone who really loves U,
Means more than a life itself!"






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Edited by kvn1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey, i really enjoyed readin dis fanfic
im so sad tht dis fanfic is endin
luved the surprise nd the whole prt since its a happy endin
ridz ws funny whn she ws angry nd also abt anger management classes
dis fanfic ws superb, rockin, i hope yu write another fanfic like dis👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago

HI Sonia 😊

Welcome back. Buy whats this, you gave us a surprise by ending Hum-Tum so soon. It was a very cute story. But anyhow i enjoyed it a lot. The last part was very sweet. and I liked the scene between Armaan, Riddhima and Rishi. Rishi is so cute...😊
Thought i like the way you pen donw the story, but i specailly like one thing abut your writing skills and thats the song parts. I mean the way you decribe the songs are really wonderful. You should be a choreographer.😃
Well done 👏. i will wait when you will update the next part of Kuch pal as well.😊
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
sonia.. shona!!

love ur final part.. sad its over.. but it was superb!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sonia😊
thanks for the pm sweety😉
aww that was such a sweet part dear
very cute esp the last part b/w AR n their son wow it was a wonderful moment😳
very well written dear
i loved the last two lines what u mentioned
they were superb yaar👏
where did u find them😆
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: patem031

hey, i really enjoyed readin dis fanfic
im so sad tht dis fanfic is endin
luved the surprise nd the whole prt since its a happy endin
ridz ws funny whn she ws angry nd also abt anger management classes
dis fanfic ws superb, rockin, i hope yu write another fanfic like dis👍🏼

heyy thanks so much
am veryy happy u liked it...
:D
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

HI Sonia 😊

Welcome back. Buy whats this, you gave us a surprise by ending Hum-Tum so soon. It was a very cute story. But anyhow i enjoyed it a lot. The last part was very sweet. and I liked the scene between Armaan, Riddhima and Rishi. Rishi is so cute...😊
Thought i like the way you pen donw the story, but i specailly like one thing abut your writing skills and thats the song parts. I mean the way you decribe the songs are really wonderful. You should be a choreographer.😃
Well done 👏. i will wait when you will update the next part of Kuch pal as well.😊

heyy aimee...
i don't think i planned it as a surprise i thought i had told ppl i was ending it soon though...
hehe
i am so happy u liked it...
and chorographer??
lol... i do like my music and dancing hehe
maybe just as ahobby for u lol...
hehe
thanks again
Sonia

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