Fallin in love 2 update pg 54! - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
it was funny and great.

i like this ranbir nanda.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
itz very funny great job
cont soon! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
i really liked it !! good job 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
wow soo great lol our rannuu is so cute i wish summa like dat really happend lol 😉 plz carry on its really great ff 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
yeah this is a good new twist to the original
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap:
-Kanya and Pooja come to Ira's bday party.
-Kanya ends up in the outside with Ranbir because of his dog.
-Ranbir kisses Kanya
-Ranbir ends up carrying her home.
-Kanya realizes Ranbir is the guy she danced with.


Part 4

R: hi mom.
M: Tum abh tak kaha the?
Ira: Haan chachu. you didn't even come to my party.
BD: Puttar yeh kaun hai? [looking at Kanya]
M: And why are you carrying her?
R: [whisper to Kanya] so many questions at once?? which one do I answer 1st? [looks to Malika] Main thora busy tha mom. That should answer your question to Ira. big D mujhe maloom nahi hai yeh kaun hai, maine iska naam abhi taak nahi poocha. Don't worry yeh mera honewali biwi nahi hain. And mom, bechari ko paa mein chot pauchi hain. I am helping her. Whew!!! I think I have answered everybody. Aur kisiko koi sawal pooch na hai??
K: Put me down
R: [confused] what?
K: put me down. Now
R: [whispers so no one can hear him } kyon??
K: Just put me down. Now
R: [ he puts her down on a sofa, and goes to talk to Malika}
P: are you okay?
K: I am fine. Di let's go from here please!
P: Wait, main cab bulati hoon.
Ay: I can drop you off.
K: Nahi uski koi zaroorat nahi hain.
Ay: Kanya, stop it. Main tumhe ghar chodna chahti hoon. tha't it.
K: Ok fine.
Pooja helps Kanya walk. As she is stepping out of the house, she looks back to see ranbir. He does not even notice she is leaving. He is talking to his mom while Rema is holding on to his arm.

Later on is Kanya's bedroom

Kanya is resting, Pooja comes in with two cups of coffee.
P: Here you go
K: Thanks di.
P: Tu thik to hain na?
K: Haan di, ofcourse. Why?
P: I don't know. But something is wrong I can tell.
K: Nothing is wrong. Di ek baat poochoo?
P: Ofcourse.
K: Can you fall in love with someone twice? Aap ko kisi se do baar pyar ho sakta hai?
P: [confused] Kanya....? tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai?
K: [doesn't say anything]
P: Kanya tell me.
K: [starts crying and nodds her head]
P: to tu ro kyon rahi hai?
K: [shakes her head and doesn't say anything, Pooja will have a fit if she learned she was in love with her stupid engaged boss] Please di, don't ask me anythng.
P: [wanted to push the matter farther but she didn't want to upset Kanya] Accha chor. Guess what? I have good news. I got you a job.
K: Really? [wipes her tears off] where?
P: let me tell you the whole story. today at the party I heard Malikaji complain how she has been looking for a interior designer for her shimla house. So I told her about you and voila.
K: Di you got me a job with Malika Nanda??
P: yeah!! isn't that great?
K: Di main woh job nahi kar sakti.
P: Kanya why not? tum ek fabulous interior designer ho. And working for the Nanda's will be great for your reputation. Beside main unhe vaada kar chuka hoon.
K: Promise karne se pehle mujhe pooch lena chahiye tha na?
P: Kanya....[holds her hand]
K: [she hesitates then says] Can I have till tomorrow morning to think about it?
P: Thank you [hugs her and leaves]
K: Maybe if I go to Shimla it would be good for me. I will have time to forget Ranbir. Beside Shimla is beautiful and I have never been there.


She decides to say yes to Pooja tomorrow. After she falls asleep, she has a dream about the masquarade ball dancing with Ranbir. She wakes up and throws a pillow across the room.
K: Pichle char mehno se yeh sapna dekhrahi hoon...Uska chehra dekhne ki intezaar mein ek paal bhi chain mein nahi thi main. Aur aaj jo chehra dekha.....to saare chain hi gayab ho gayi..

She lies down with her face on the pillow to sleep. She remembers the 1st time she met him. She sees him kneeling down. Then taking her sandals off. She starts crying. She has never felt so empty before.

{{song starts playing. Tumse hi from JWM. I suggest you play the song or http://hindisongs.apniisp.com/jwm/jwm02.rmor hum it yourself. It's very important}}



She remembers when they had the eyelock while she was holding the lighter. And when he wrapped his arms around her waist because she was going to fall. And pulled her closer

~aankhon mein ankhein teri, bahoon mein baahein teri
mera na mujhmein kuch raha, hua kya

She remembers when dancing with him

~baaton mein baatein teri, raatein saugatein teri
kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya, hua kya

She remembers meeting him in the outhouse and how he made fun of her.

~main kahin bhi jata hoon, tumse hi mil jata hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi
shoor mein khamoshi hai, thodi si behoshi hai, tum se hi, tum se hi


She remembers him leaving her all by her herself on the dance but giving a kiss on the cheek before leaving.Kissing her on the lips in the outhouse then leaving her again all alone.

~aadha sa wada kabhi, aadhe se jayada kabhi
jee chaahe kar lu is tarah wafa ka


She remember him picking her up after she fell and hurt her ankle.

~chhode na chhoote kabhi, tode na tute kabhi
jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka


She remembers how he carried her into the house and the smile

~main tera sarmaya hoon, jo main ban paya hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi
raaste mil jaate hai, manzile mil jaati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi
na hai yeh paana, na khona hi hai
tera na hona jaane kyun hona hi hai......


tell me what you guys think to find out what happens next!!! 😊

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
it was nice.

poor kanya.

please please continue soon i can not wait see what will happens next.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
very good pls continue and also the old falling in love continue that one too
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
OMG
i just read the whole thing at once...
i cant tell yoou how much i love it...
btw i thought when he kisses her in the outhouse.. 😳
i thought he kissed her on the lips...now that wud have been hOT n CutE!
anywayz plz cont soon....
and jst wanna say i LOVE ur writing...
so romantic!
Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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