Fallin in love 2 update pg 54! - Page 4

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This is probably my update for friday and saturday so it's a little long. (sorry for making it so long)

RECAP:

Ranbir and Kanya separate without knowing who they are.

PART 3

4-5 months later

Nanda Mansion :: Ira's b-day party.

Ay: Tum dono late ho.
P: Yea sorry. Tumhari behen kaha hai?
Ay: she is right over there.
P: ok, main use wish karke aati hoon. Kanya let's go.
Kanya is about follow pooja but Aayan grabs her hand.
Ay: dance with me.
K: [before Kanya can say anything Aayan leads her to the dace floor]
Ay: my god Kanya it's so hard to find you babe. where are you all the time?
K: Jaha par mujhe hona chahiye.
Ay: I haven't seen you forever. Agar tum milti bhi ho to thori der ki baad gayab ho jati ho. Not fair.
K: kya karoo? thora busy hoon.
Ay: haan haan excuses. {comes a little bit closer}
K: Aayan stop flirting with me. I am not interested.
Ay: wow! tum rejection bhi kitne sweetly karti ho.
K: [laughs] ok hamari dance khatam ho chuki hai. Beside I need some fresh air.


Kanya is about to leave when she bumps into a girl and drops her drink on her outfit.
K: Oh no! I am so sorry...really sorry.
Rema: [rewa's younger sister] Are you blind?? Tum dekh ke nahi chal sakti?
K: I am really sorry.
Rem: Sorry se mera naya designer outfit to nahi thik hoga naa??
K: Dekho...maine kahan sorry.
Rem: Oh shut up!! [trying to wipe her outfit]
K: Thik hai!! Main to andhi hoon. Tumhare aankhen kaha hain? Tumne mujhe nahi dekha kya?
Rem: You!!!
Rewa: [walks upto them] Rema darling! tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Oh no!! tumhari dress ko kya hua?
Rem: Is andhi ne drink giradi.
Rew: You! how could you?
M: [notices all them from far and walks over] Yaha kya chal raha hai?
Rem: Dekhiye naa auntyji isne mere dress par drink giradi?
K: It was an accident. I swear.
M: It's ok beti. Koi baat nahi hai.[turns to Rema] Come on Rema tumhari paas hazaron aise dresses hai. Itni choti si baat pe bechari ko pareshaan kar rahi ho. Use maafi mango and let's go. [malika and Rewa walks away]
K: Suna nahi tumne? Andhi to ho hi, I hope behri nahi ho.
Rem: Main tumhe dekhloongi. Is ghar ki malkeen bannewali hoon main. I will see you then.
K: Lekin is ghar to Malika nandaji ki hain naa??
Rem: Main unki hone wali bahu hoon. [she walks off]
K: how weird. Pooja ne kabhi bataya nahi uski khadus boss engaged hai. Oh well.

Kanya gets out of the house and walks in the garden. She has never seen a nicer garden. It's so huge. She walks around for half an hour and notices the sun is about to go down. She should go find Pooja. Right when she turns, there is a big scary dog behind her.
K: Oh no!
D: [he seems angry...growls at her]
K: Hi dog..nice dog. [ backing up a little]
D: [still growling]
K: How are you today? [walking backwards slowly]
D: [gives her a big angry growl]
K: Oh no!! [she starts screaming and runs]
D: [running after her]
K: Aab main kaha jaaoon. [she sees a little outhouse] Oh god, please let it be open.

She runs to the outhouse. The door is open. She gets in and locks the door. Kanya is breathing really heavily, her eyes are closed.
K: Thank you, thank you god tumne mujhe bachali.
she hears a noise and opens her eyes. She looks around and there are workout equipments everywhere.

Ranbir: Oh no, please don't stop. Free show dekh raha tha. [sarcastic]
K: [looks to the side. It's a guy in a gray hoodie. She wonders who could he be? Maybe a servant. Well....he doesn't look like a servant but can't be a family member. Or he would be in the party right now. Must be a servant!]
R: I guess you can't talk. Thik hai main hi baat karti hoon. Get out!!
K: k-Kya?
R: Sunai nahi deta? You are invading my privacy. Get out!!
K: main yaha se nahi jaa sakti.
R: [grabs a towel to wipe his sweat off and walks toward her] Tum kya police bhag kar aayi ho? [looks at her top to bottom with an arched eyebrow] actually you do look like a criminal.
K: [she gives him a angry look]
R: definetly!! How dangerous. Tumne zaroor kisika murder kiya hai.
K: Haan. Aur tumhara bhi karoongi, If you dont shut up. [says it in a cute innocent way]
Ranbir starts drinking from his water bottle, turns the other way, where she can't see his face. He smiles and thinks she is funny...and kind of cute??
R: ek baat batao. Tumne crime kaunsi ki hai?
K: [doesn't say anything]
R: Wait!!...kahi tumhari underworld se to koi sambhand nahi hai. Agar tum kisi bhai ki girlfriend go to mujhe abhi bata do...mujhe badme lafra nahi chahiye.
K: [gives him a very angry look]
R: Accha baba. Honestly why are you here? Aise kisika privacy invade karna acchi nahi hai.
K: I am s-sor-ry. Woh kya hai mere piche el pagal kutta para tha.
R: [confused] pagal kutta? ..........yaha pe pagal kutta....What??? Tumne mere bruno ko pagal kutta kaha? [stops working out]
K: Kutta ko to kutta hi bolungi naa.
R: stop it.
K: pagal kutta?
R: I am warning you. [he is infront of her, really close]
K: Pa--a--g--a--l
R: [he grabs her hair and kisses her]
K: [shocked..and speechless. The guy is kissing her?? On the lips too!! She has never been kissed before and this is her 1st kiss?? how rude!!!She steps on his foot]
R: Ouch!
K: Kitne battameez ho tum. Akele ladki ko pakar ched rahe ho.
R: EH!!...tumhe kaun ched na chahta hai. Kabhi ayne mein aapni shakal dekhi hai. Mujhe sirf tumhe chup karana tha.
K: toh woh tum keh nahi sakte the? mujhe kiss kyon kiya?
R: Maine kaha tha stop it, i am warning you. Next time listen to me.
K: to.....woh....woh...pher bhi...tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.
R: ok ok I am sorry. [walks away, grabs his bottle and gives her a stop looking at me look] turns the other way and smiles so she can's see.]
K: oh no!!
R: aab kya hua meri maa?
K: Suraj dub chuka hai, mujhe Di ke paas lotna hai.
R: Tumhe darwaza dekhai nahi de rahi hai? it's right behind you.
K: I can't go out. Tumhari ku...[ranbir gives her a warning look] I mean pyara Bruno udhar hai.
R: To phir tum yaha raho. Aur aramse sarro. Mera workout khatam ho gaya hai. I am leaving.
K: Kya?? Tum jaa rahe ho. [worried]
R: [gives her a sexy questioning look] Kyon? You want me to stay? Itna pasand hoon main?
K: Are you crazy? In your dreams.
R: Chodo chodo. Main itna bura sapna nahi dekhta hoon. Well have fun. [he passes her and opens the door to leave]
K: Suno..
R: [stops] Abhi bhi kuch kehna hai?
K: [uhh he is so rude. How do I tell him to stay? I am better than that] Nothing.
R: Soch lo...baad mein nahi pachtaana..
K: Kahana nothing.
R: Ok bye. [he closes the door and leaves]
K: Chala gaya??? Aise kaise Chala gaya?
Kanya looks around the room and it's scary.
K: Aab mera kya hoga?
She sits in the corner so scared. She can't even call anyone. No battery.
K: Oh god!! Kitna khadus hai. Akele ladki ko aisa koi chod jaate hai kya?
She decides she has had enough. Beside the dog is probably gone by now. She gets up and opens the door. Looks around and there is no dog. So she starts walking.
K: thank god!
She hears a loud dog growl.
K: oh no...not again [starts running toward the house but falls midway] ouchhh!!
R: whistles [ standing arms folded by a tree..the really sexy way] Having fun?
K: tum! Tum abh tak yaha ho?
R: [walks over to her] haan, tumhara intezaar kar raha tha. Dekhna chahta tha ke tum kab tak waha reh sakti ho.
K: [tries to get up but her ankle hurt] ouch!!
R: [looks at her and realizes she is hurt] great! another twist to tonight's story. Aab kaise chalogi?
K: tumse kya? main chale jaoongi.
R: Woh to main dekhi raha hoon.
He grabs her and picks her up and starts carrying her toward the house.
K: [she would say something but then how will she gets home ? so she shuts up and wraps her arms around his neck]
They reach the steps of the house.
R: ek baat baataaon?
K: hmmm
R: Bruno suraj dubne ki baad kabhi bhi bahar nahi hota hai.
K: what??? to tumne kaha kyon nahi?
R: Agar woh tumko pehle se maloom hota to main tumhari iss bahadoori kahase dekhti? { and then he ...smiles}
K: [ oh my god...she has seen that smile before. How can she forget that smile. It knocks the life out of her, takes her breath away. It's him!! she is in his arm!!!! ]

They step into the house. And everyone pauses and looks at them. they are shocked!!
M: [whispers to BD] yeh mera Ranbir hain naa?
BD: mujhe to aisa hi lagta hai
M: Mere Ranbir ek ladki ke saath?? woh to ladkiyon se door bhagta hai.
BD: chalo dekhte hai,
{walks toward Ranbir and Kanya. }
R: [whispers /mummurs to Kanya] this is pretty uncomfortable
K: mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.
R: yea...I am sure mere gharwalo ko bhi kuch kehna hai...woh dekho mom aah rahi hai.
K: Mom?? [confused]
M: Ranbir beta what is this? why are you carrying her?
K: Ranbir...?? Ranbir.....Nanda?? [shocked 😲 and..........heartbroken]

👏 👏 👏 its comedy with sarcasm... lol it was amazing.. pls update sooon

that was soo good...loved how cute Ranbir is! lol plzz continue soon 😳

lovely ff 👏 👏 👏 i can't wait to read the next bit, ranbir especially is really cute

Lov33333 ranBir <3
lOve the part...know kanYa knows that its him...
But rAnbir dOn't ...
cont soon

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aww that was soo cute and i liked the dog part lol 😊

LoL everyone finds Ranbir cute. What about Kanya??

@ sejal - lol!! I love the dog part.