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Posted: 17 years ago

hey no!

if u aint feelin well tc of urself...cuz in the short run u mite fiill our suspense!! but i want more fanfics!!!

Originally posted by: Perfangel5655

I have been sneezing all morning (sick again)..but now that you remind me I will start typing. Great I will be done in an hour or so.😃

Edited by tanyadas_leo - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

Sorry I took this long to update. I have been busy, then sick, then busy, then sick, then couldn't find the right way to write the scene. So it would be the sweetest thing if you tell me what you thought.

** Just a reminder if there is a song on my ff please play it. I always provide the link. And always read the lyrics**

Recap:

-- Kanya is engaged

:::PART 12:::

Anand walks upto Ranbir and Aayan.

An: Namaste.

Ranbir and Aayan both say namaste to him

An: Aap se milke bohut khushi huyi.

R: Jee..... [he can't seem to find words]

Varun (kanya's fiance walks over)

An: Beta ye Ranbir Nanda hai, aur yeh Aayan Nanda. Tum log bate karo. Main zara aata hoon.

V: mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho rahi hain, I am meeting Ranbir Nanda. Pooja di apke liye kaam karti hai? Kanya should've told me.

Ay: well you are not the only one. Kanya didn't tell us about you either! (teasing him) So..kabh se chal raha hai yeh chakkar?

V: [laughs] Bachpaan se

R: [lools at him]

Ay: See. I swear that kanya..No wonder main jab bhi uski saath flirt karta tha woh mujhe ignore karti thi. But seriously? Tum dono ka chakkar bachpan se se hai?

V: we have always been inseprable. Sab jaante the hum ek din shaadi karne wale hai. It was just a matter of time.

R: [shocked]

V: [looks at Ranbir] Are you ok? Sorry I am talking too much. Aap to bohut busy honge.Aur main yaha aap ka waqt barbaad kar raha hoon.

R: No it's ok! Aayan aab chale?

Ay: yea right after I wish Kanya.

R: tum jao, I will wait.

V: No you should come too.

Ranbir feels exhausted, he doesn't want to create a scene. So he follows Aayan to Kanya's room.

She was sitting on the bed and stands up instantly. She looks at Ranbir. Ranbir gives her a cold stare.

Ay: What is this Kanya? Maangni karali? Main kya yeh Varun se kuch kamm tha? [she tears her gaze away from Ranbir and looks at Aayan]

V: [laughs] you are too late Aayan. Main already propose kar chuka hoon.

Ay: kabh kiya?

V: do din pehle.

R: Aabh chale?

Kanya gets hurt. He doesn't even want to spend a second with her? She lost him.

Adita comes in.

Ad: kyon love birds. Finally you guys are together khush ho naa?? [touches Kanya's face]

K: [she nodds her head]

Ad: Varun!! Mama needs your help with the laddoos.

Ay: Laddoos??!!! I am coming too!

He is about to leave with Adita and Varun.

R: Aayan .We have to go now.

Ay: chachu you can go. I will come later. Just send a car for me.

Everyone leaves, except Ranbir and Kanya in the room.

Ranbir looks at her. She looks away. Ranbir turns to leave, Kanya raises her hand slightly to stop him. She wants to ask him if there is anyway he could ever love her. Because she is miserable without him. But decides against it.

Ranbir turns back, stalks toward kanya. He grabs her arms tightly, and pulls her closer.

K: R...Ranbir [whispers...feeling breathless]

R: It was so easy, wasn't it? [in a low whispering voice]

K: [confused] Please chodo. You are hurting me.

R: Really? [sarcastic] Dard ho raha hai??Bulaoon tumhari Varun ko?

K: [stuggles beneath his hand] Ranbir..stop.

R: stop what? Abhi tak to kuch kiya hi nahi hai.

K: [looks up at him]

R: [kisses her with all the anger he has. He wants to hurt her because she hurt him. He hardens the kiss. Deep within his heart hoping she will say she loves him and come back to him. He loves her so much. How will he live without her. His kiss becomes softer.]

K: [feels like screaming at her own luck. Her house is filled with family and friends. Her fiance just left the room 2 mins ago. And here she is in Ranbir's arm trying to live life one last time. She loves him. She can never stop loving him.]

She hears Varun's voice. He is coming near the door. She stops Ranbir.

K: Ranbir stop. Varun.....

R: kyon [in a low voice] He doesn't know we slept together?? [gives her a cold/bitter mocking look]

K: [wondering how he hates her]

R: I am leaving. Saagaai mubarak ho. [leaves]

{{song starts playing: Bhula denge tumko from HDKG. Click the link (mandatory) https://hindisongs.apniisp.com/hdkg/hdkg03.rm }}

Kanya stands motionless for few moments. She sits on the bed and grabs a side of the pillow, digging her nail into it. Trying to keep herself from breaking down and cry.

~Na jee sakein yahan, na mar sakein yahan
Hasne ki baat chhoro, na ro sakein yahan

She goes to the window. Ranbir is about get in the car. Ranbir looks at her.


~To jaaye hum kahan, to jaaye hum kahan
To jaaye hum kahan

He gets into his car and starts driving. he wants to get away from this place, away from her, anything that has to do with her.

~Yeh dard ki aahein juda huwi raahein
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere
Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere
Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere

He feels betrayed. he trusted her. Before he even knew he loved her. He gave her his trust. He fell in love with her. But she loved someone else. She was with someone else the whole time.

~ Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

He has tears in his eyes remembering her telling him she loved him the night he came home late. He wipes his tears and keeps driving.

~Dil mera chaahe ke seene se dil main nikal ke phaink doon
Bedard is berehem ko hawa mein uchhaal ke phaink doon
Dhoka diya mujhko dhoka diya dil ne mere haaye yeh kya kiya
Dil mera chaahe ke seene se dil main nikal ke phaink doon
Lamhon se haare bujhe nazarein
Ab to saheinge yeh gham dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

He gets to his house. He is about go into the house but doesn't feel like facing anyone. He decided to go the outhouse. He takes the coat of and throws it in the floor. The room is dark with a faint of sunlight coming through the window. He remembers Kanya running in when he 1st met her for the 1st time. He looks around and it just hurts him even more. When did his life become so attched to her?

~ Tanha akele mein yaadon ke mele mein tum gaye chhod ke
Waado ki rasmon ko chaahat ki kasmon ko tum gaye tod ke
Ghariyan sitamgar katti nahi, ulfat ke manzer se hatti nahi
Tanha akele mein yaadon ke mele mein tum gaye chhod ke
Jahan bhi jaoon tumhe hi paoon
Rukeinge humaare kadam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere

He sits down beside his weights. He runs his fingers through his hair closes his eyes trying to shut Kanya out of his mind. He will forget her. He will move on. He had a life before she came and he will have a life after she is gone. So what she made life worth living. Atleast now he won't get hurt. He will forget her.

~Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Abhi naaz hai toote dil ko wafa pe
Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere
Ke tootenge saare bharam dheere dheere
Bhula denge tumko sanam dheere dheere
Mohabbat ke saare sitam dheere dheere

::Kanya's room::

V: Tum kuch kahogi ke main shuru karoon?

[no response]

V: God Kanya!! Tum aisa kyon kar rahe ho? Tum usse pyar karti ho. Tum uske bacche ki maa bannewali ho. Tumne bataya kyon nahi it was Ranbir Nanda.

K: Varun. You don't have to marry me. Really I will be. I can't do this to you. That's why I told you everything when you asked me to marry you.

V: Kanya...[sits beside her] I love you. Hamesha se karte aayi hoon. Is liye tumhari khushi chahti hoon. Main hamesha tumhara saath doonga. Par is bar tum galad ho. Kanya...he has a right to know that he will be a father.

K: [being angry lashes out] Maine kaha na. No!!... look Varun [crying] Main usse shaadi kaise karloon? I love him. I LOVE him. He doesn't love me. Kaise samjhaoon mujh par kya beeth ti hai. He doesn't love me. [shakes her head] Thora sa bhi nahi. Abh to lagta hai mujhse nafrat bhi karta hai. What if he doesn't love the baby? [puts her hands over her stomach protectively] I love it already. I would never want anyone to harm it. Yeh mera pyar ki nishani hai.

You know what to do for the next part!!! Also https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kuchh-is-tara/898082/ffs-please-read I would like to know out my 3 ffs which one you like the best. And why? THANK YOU😊 (even my dear silent readers)

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
me first.. OMG😭 then 😡 he for being such a dumb**** and she for an idiot.... god.. but he does have the right to know.. before he goes and does something stupid.. great update i could feel the emotion in that scene.. great job =]
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg! after a long time you updated... Please update soon it was great!
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8t hun..hope they unite again! par kahani mein twist to hona hi tha 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
This was worth the wait
Ure update was awesome
Ranbir is such an idiot
Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
tat was such a gr8 update!!
ive always read ur ff updates but neva rilli commented but dis tym i had to.....nice update.......cont soooon pls!!!!!!!! 😉 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

lol I will try to update faster this time!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
fianlly u updated..
and this short.
not cool.
aww i just hope that this.. too langors..
find their.. ways.. together.. hehe
continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 😆 wait no!! 😭 😭 why is everyone being mean to my Rankan. They are just a little confused

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