Fallin in love 2 update pg 54! - Page 17

WOW!
i just read frm part1!!
nice!!

please do continue/./. haila ranbir loves her...ranbir go and get kanya!

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come on
cont soon
doing a gr8 job
and i luv ur ideas
hope they get together soon!

😳man!!!
3 pages of every1s thoughts!!
cmon fast!! 😳

Originally posted by: tanyadas_leo

😳man!!!
3 pages of every1s thoughts!!
cmon fast!! 😳

lol!!!!! I guess you are right! I will update tomorrow!

RECAP

- Ranbir asks Kanya to marry him.

- Kanya denies since he loves someone else and not her.

- Ranbir realizes his love for Kanya.

:::PART 11:::

Ranbir feels like he is out of breath.Kanya can't marry someone else. She loves him. And he loves her.

Aayan comes toward them.

Ay: Pooja!!

Ranbir and Pooja both look at him. He comes over.

Ay: What's going on?

P: maat pucho. Kanya ko dekhne ladkewale aah rahe hai aur koi bhi stupid auto nahi mil rahi hai.

[Ranvir is a little out of it. He still can't understand how Kanya is getting married?]

Aayan looks around..

Ay: We can drop you off. You won't mind, would you chachu? [Ranbir is not paying attention. Aayan snaps infront of his face]

R: huh??

Ay: Kaha khoye ho? Let's drop her off.

R: [trying to get a grasp on Aayan's wordss] Yes sure.

They get in the car. The road is really crowded. There is an accident. So the traffic is stuck.

Ranbir is getting really mad.

R: Aaah!

P: What's wrong?

R: Nothing. [except he needs to hurry up and tell Kanya how he feel. He runs his fingers through his hair]

They finally get to the house.

Pooja runs inside. Aayan follows her. Ranbir runs to the door and freezes. The guy just put the ring on her finger.

{{{song Ya rabba from salam e ishq. PLAY IT. very important. http://hindisongs.apniisp.com/salaameishq/salaameishq07.rm and PAY ATTENTION to my lyrics}}}

Kanya looks at him. Ranbir opens his mouth but no words come out. The time goes still for both of them.

~ pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan

ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata

tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila~

Their gazes are locked. They are oblivious to everyone around them. Even though everyone is talking they can't hear them. Kanya takes a step toward him, and another, and another...Pooja comes infront of her and hugs her tight. There is no reaction from Kanya, she is still looking at Ranbir. Pooja grabs her arm and takes her to her room.

~ kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka

na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka

dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein

saansein saansein tooti bandishein

kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai

kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar~

Pooja is talking to Kanya. She can't hear a word. She remembers her and Ranbir dancing in the library. And when he was planning their future with kids and she threw the book. She remembers the morning after they made love. And then it ends with him closing her car door.

~ koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko

koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko

aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein

tooti footi sab farmaaishein

kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai

kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain

ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar

dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar ~

She starts crying.

P: Kanya???

K: [crying. Pooja comes and sits beside her. Kanya hugs her tightly]

P: Tu roh kyon rahi hai?

[doesn't say anything but keeps crying]

P: Tu is mangni se khush nahi hai??

[keeps crying]

P: [grabs her hand] Aanuthi utar. Kanya if you are not happy baby you don;t have to marry him.

Kanya shakes her head, and wipes her tears off.

K: Di, Ranbir yaha kyon aaye hai?

P: [confused] Kanya??

K: Di...Ranbir yaha kyon aaye hai?

Pooja looks at her trying to understand.

P: Kanya...?? Tu Ranbir se....?

K: [looks down, doesn't say anything]

P: Tu pagal ho gayi hai?? Ranbir? Ranbir Nanda se pyar karti hai> Ranbir jaante bhi hai pyar ka matlab?

Kanya is silent.

P: Bohut pyaar karti hai?

K: [nodds and cries]

P: Uss raat jab ro rahi thi tab bhi Ranbir ke liye the?

K: [nodds]

P: Aur dance mein intezaar??

K: [nodds] Ajeeb hain na. Ek hi insaan ke saath mujhe baar baar pyar ho jata hai?? [smiles]

P: My god kaise?? It's unbelievable. Does Ranbir know all this? Chal chod. Jaanke bhi kya karega. Dil hi nahi hai uska paas.

K: Shaadi karna chahte hai.

P: kya?

K: woh mujhse shaadi karna chahte hain. Maine naa kehdi.

P: Kanya have you gone mad?

K: [burts out crying] Toh aur kya karoon di? Main usse itna pyaar karti hoon. Uske liye har pal bechaini se maarti hoon lekin woh kisi aur se pyar karti hain.

Pooja hugs Kanya.

P: It's ok.

K: Di aap yeh sab Ranbir ko nahi kahenge.

P: [opens her mouth]

K: [grabs pooja's hand] Di Promise??

P: ok baba promise!!

I know I said he will find out she is the girl on this part. But I had a change of plan. He will find out on the next one or the one after that. I won't post the next part till I know everyone thinks.😆

*** Make sure to check out falling in love 3 ***

ooo plezzzzzz plezzzz cont soon!!!
great part!! 😛

This si cheating..
u update after such a long time..
and.. that too this short..
that is just not cool at all..
omg..
omg omg omg omg omg
kanya.. got engaged so not cool at all..
continue soon please

That was awesome
I loved Ranbir
Plzzzz Continue

hey great update!
plzz continue soon!
ur a great writer and i also love ur other FF-part 3 😳