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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bollyrockstar

dude...you are an AMAZING writer! i just read both your ff's straight in one day...they are just soooo good!!!

good job! i love how you put the music in!
update soon...i can't wait to read on!! thanks! 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awiee..tht wa such an awesome part..kanya is rite..when u love someone, u keep falling for them all over again..i hope the whole misunderstanding gets cleared out soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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RECAP:

-Ranbir makes lunch for Kanya.

-They dance in the library.

-He tells Kanya he is in love with someone.

~~ Part 7~~

Kanya tosses and turns on her pillow. She can't sleep. So she sits up. Puts her pillow on her face and screams.

K: [gets up to drink water and sees there is no water in her glass]

She goes to the kitchen

Ranbir's room

He wakes up from a dream. He sits up.

R: Kanya?? I was dreaming about Kanya? [runs his fingers through his hair] kya ho raha hain mujhe?

He goes to the kitchen for a drink.

Ranbir comes in the kitchen. Kanya's back is toward him so she doesn't see him.

R: Tum abhi tak jage ho?

K: [startled by his voice] Main, woh....Pani!

R: [walks to the fridge, takes out a water bottle and start drinking]

K: Ranbir..pehle se hi yaha dhand hai aur tum dhandi pani pi rahe ho. Tum bimar par gaye to?

R: [raised eyebrow] Tumhe itni fikar hai?

K: no. I don't care. Main sirf ...you know.

R: I swear agar main kisi aur se pyar nahi karta na, to main definetly tumse shaadi karleta.

K: Yea right.

R: No seriously. [pulls the chair and sits] Tumhari aankhen thori kaamzor hai but khoobsurat hain. Figure bhi thik thak hai. [looks at her top to bottom] chalega!! Aur Bruno ko bhi tum bohut pasand ho. Usne pehle din mein hi tumhe apni mummy banali.

K: ::gasps:: Main tumse Kabhi bhi shaadi nahi karti..

R: Yea right! Aaj tak aisi koi ladki paida hi nahi huyi jo meri charm resisit kare.

K: Really? [asks very sweetly]

R: Really! [gives the a look that says Obviously]

K: Main tumse kabhi shaadi nahi karoongi. [starts walking away]

R: Oye!! Tumhe pucha kis ne? [follows her] Main to sirf keh raha tha.

They go to the library. She turns the lights on.

R: [looks around] Hum yaha kya kar rahe hai?

K: Mujhe kaam karna hai.

R: Kaam?? Mera mom to mujhse bhi beraham nikli. Tumhe nightshift bhi karna parti hain? tht tht tht so sad.

K: [tries not to laugh] Tumhara wakwas kabhi bandh nahi hota hai kya?

R: [gives her a big smile] Ek tumhi to ho jiske saath main yeh sab kar sakta hoon.

K: [God, she is never going to get over him. That's it. She can spend every second of the rest of her life trying but she will never get over him.]

R: [grabs some of the books and starts helping her]

K: Kya kar rahe ho?

R: Koi acchi book dhoondh raha hoon. [lying]

K: Is waqt??

R: Mujhe neend nahi aarahi hain.

K: kyon?

R: Tumhare bare mein sapna dekh raha tha..[looks at her]

K: [looks away and blushes. He had a dream about her??]

Kanya goes back to sorting out the books. Ranbir settles in a armchair with his book.

K: [looks at him] Parho naa?? Mujhe kyon ghur rahe ho? God [pulls her hair back, it was bothering her]

R: [whistles] how sexy, phir se karo.

K: [throws a book at him]

R: Kya ajeeb ladki hai? Main compliments de raha hoon.

K: [throws another book] Aapni compliments aapni paas hi rakho. Main kaam kar rahi hoon. Stop bothering me.

7 minutes later

R: Bunty and Bubli

K: Kya?

R: Hamare Bacche. Mujhe sirf do hi chahiye. One boy one girl. Thik hain na?

K: [getting mad]

R: Kuch kamm hai? Thik hai. Bunty or bubli ko ek chote bhai or behen de denge. Mujhe kya problem hain. Paida to tum karogi. Mom bhi khush ho jayenge.

K: [starts tossing books at him]

R: [He ends up catching all the books] Just imagine..Me, you, Bunty, Bubli, ummm.....uhh..Bablu aur bruno. [he stands up, hugs the book (dreaming)]

K: [she is getting more mad now, she throws another book, it hits his forehead]

R: OUCH!!

K: [covers her mouth] I am so sorry!! Sorrrrrryy..[walks over to him]

They sit on the sofa.

K: tum thik to ho na?

R: Agar nahi hoon to kya milega?

K: thapad.

R: wow how nice (sarcastic). Tumhari haathon se .To pher main bilkul thik nahi hoon.

K: [laughs]

She turns to leave, he grabs her hand.

Tell me your thoughts to find out what happens NEXT!!

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
me first..yaaay.. that was sooo hilarious... i loved it... agar thik na hua to kya
milega...thapad hahah it was very exhilirating and relaxing i loved it =]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
that was a hot part... keep continuing.. i hope he find out soon that she is the "girl"
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
that was so cool
yaar ure an awesome writer 👏 👏
Plzz continue 😛
I loved the way ranbir kept on talkin about their marriage and there kidz 😳
Cant wait 2 see wat happens when he finds out thet she is the 1
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
very good pls continue today and also make him find out that she is that "anklet girl" 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
wait and see how he finds out!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
gr8 part
wow ranvir talking abt marrying kanya n 'veing kids wth her lol...
cont.sooon

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