HI Bakri (sounds very odd to call you that....) lol..you'll get used to it, just imagine me like an actual bakri...😃
I read your entire FF in one go & it was mind blowing... 👏 Wow...in one go!!?? Didn't you get tired...? Ok now starts my long post:
Loved the way you defined the characters, in the beg....intially I thought Rehan would be a spoilt brat, but turned out to be rather sweet I can understand why you would have thought Rehan would be a bit spoilt...but his character develops as you get to know the real him...
Then I assumed that Ali would be def. a unique case, but no I was wrong again...when you showed her actual unique style lol...yep Aaliyah is a one piece!
now its Atul, such a sweetheart....who takes care of little bro...talks to plants...fights like crazy with angie..but then also share his deepest pain with her...loved it I think Atul is perhaps one of my most well thought out characters...
Sapna..perfect character, I thought Ray would flirt with her, but no, I had to be proven wrong again, he made her his di, so cute... Ahhh..i initially thought Ray would do that too...but that was when i was still pondering over his charcateristics..and i actually realised that he isnt always a flirty flirt...and Sapna is just a sweetheart...
Sameer..such a sweet senior, hanging out with interns, altough I would love to see him flirt with Ridz & annoy Arman, but never the less his 5 minute non stop blaberring was nice Sameer is probably the coolest senior doc. I had thought before hand on making him flirt with Ridz a bit as a joke...but as a reserved shy guy, i kind of realised he wouldn't do that...
Angie...nice character totally..simple & straight forward she has friends & no flirting, which is good, love to her falling for Atul That's the best thing i like about Anjie too..is that she is straighforward and to the point...now her falling for Atul will definetly be a riot to see...
Ridz...basket her fav nickname from Arman, but Superman from her to Arman was so cute too, really nice for her to get him the necklace..she is so unpredictable I thought she might get upset when he held her by waist, but she was super cool, unlike our DMG ridz hehehe lol...our DMG Ridz is cool too...at times...Riddhima is probably the most unpredictable out of the lot...but i didn't really see her getting upset by Armaan's actions so i didn't add that...
Arman..lover boy, he is simply mavarlous...just love him to bits, him getting so appropriate gifts for Atul really was so touching & then getting that t shirt for Ridz, just shows how much of a child he his.. Armaan Armaan Armaan...lol, he is THE ultimate Lover Boy!!! Origionally i knew he was childish...but i needed a way to portray it..and im glad you understood it very well.
before you get really bored reading my post, I will end this up here, a gentle request, can you pm me when you post the next part...thank you so much & keep writing.. I would never get bored reading such a sweet post...Sure I'll PM you...no harm on me....Thank you soo much for the sweet and lovely comment/review...I'll try and update soon
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