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Posted: 17 years ago
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Introduction:

Armaan:20 years old.He is a police.

Ridhima:18 years old student.

The story starts that Ridhima bumps into someone.

R:sorry i am really very sorry inspector ji.

A:It's ok.

Ridhima goes to her class with her friends who are Sapna,Nisha and Ana.

When the class finishes and she goes to the cafe with her friends she again bumps into someone.

R:I am sorry oh inspector ji!

A:It's ok again...

A:Uh excuse, me can you tell me where could I find Miss Nisha Sharma?

R:why??

A:That i cannot tell you that is something personal.

And then Nisha comes towards Ridhima.

N:oh Armaan I was waiting.So Ridhima meet my Mangetar Armaan.

R:Ahh so he is your mangetar ok,oh he is not to handsome as you told that he was...

Armaan's mobile rings he picks it up.

Man:Come fast to the police station there is a case for you.

A:OK I am coming.

A:I have to go and by the way what is her name.??

N:Her name is ridhima.

A: ok bye girls see you later.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow so hatke plz cont................its vry nce armaan is police officer look strange...........plz cont...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next chapter
2nd Chapter:

Ridhima and Nisha go back to their table.
S:What were you and Nisha doing their talking to a inspector?

N:That inspector was Armaan my mangetar.

R:Yes we were talking to him but then suddenly he had some important work so he had to go.

N:After college you and Ridhima come with me to my house want to show you and Ridhima something.

S,R:ok.

Suddenly the bell rang and everybody went to their classes.After the class finished Nisha,Sapna and Ridhima met at Nisha's house.When everybody reached there.

N:Come in.

S:Who is he Nisha?

R:Budhu he is Armaan Nisha's mangetar.

A:Hi i am Armaan.

S:I am Sapna Nisha's friend.

N:Armaan now you go I have to talk something personal with my friends.

A:ok ok bye girls see you later.

R,S,N:bye see you later.

N:Come with me girls I want to show you something special.

In Nisha's room.Nisha open's her cupboard.

N:See this is my shaadi ka jora and this the jewellry for the shaadi.

S,R:Wow it's so beautiful.

Suddenly Ridhima's mobile rings.She picks it up.

R:Hello mom.

Mom:Come home fast lunch is ready i am waiting.

R:ok bye.Sorry guys I have to go Mom's waiting for lunch.

S:I should also go.

N:ohh ok byeee.

S,R:Byeee.

Sapna and Ridhima go to their houses.Next day was saturday and Sapna calls Nisha.

S: Let's go to the cinema today I'll call Ridhima to meet us at the front door of ABC cinema.

N:ok i will bring Armaan also byeee.

S:bye.

Sapna calls Ridhima to meet Nisha and her at the front door of ABC cinema.

ok need 2 replies to continue.
Edited by 8484448 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG great concept really loving it pls continue,really want to know how the story goes.....pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heay
nice ff yaar its interesting nice yaar 😛
cont super sooooooonluv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next chapter
3rd chapter:

When everybody reaches at the front door of ABC cinema.

N:Let's go and buy popcorn the picture is going to start in 10 minuites.

R,S:yes let's.

A:you'll go I'll buy the popcorn.

N:ok come on girls let's go.

then after 5 minuites Armaan enters and sits between Ridhima and Nisha.

Then Ridhima get's scared and hold's Armaan's hand bymistake.

R:Sorry Armaan.

A: it's ok.

Then when the film finishes everybody goes to their houses Armaan drops everybody.First he drops Sapna then Nisha and then last he drops Ridhima.

R:Thank you.

A:your welcome.

Ridhima open's the door of the house when suddenly.

A:Ridhima your purse... ohh.

Next day was Sunday so everybody plans to go for dinner.
When everybody was getting ready in their houses.Ridhima
calls Armaan.

R:hello Armaan I'm Ridhima.

A:hi.

R:have I last night forgoten my purse in your car?

A:yes.

R:ok ,can you bring it in the restaurant to give it back to me ?

A:ok.

R:bye.

A:bye.


When everybody reaches the restaurant Armaan give's Ridhima her purse back.

R:Thanks.

A:your welcome.

ok need 3 replies to continue.
Edited by 8484448 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i hv read ur remaining prt nd it ws too good thnk god ab AR hvng no fghts nd he is nisha mangetar bad no pro plz cont soon its realy nce nd so diff..........cont soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
nice start! 👏 continue soon! 😃

❤️ Sanya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz continue soon...i really lyked it.new concept......
luv ur ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next chapter
4th chapter:

Every body sits and oders snacks.Then suddenly Armaan cellphone rings.

A:Nisha I'll go out I have an important call.

A:Hello Atul.

Atul:Hi Armaan I am coming to Mumbai.Please pick me up tomorrow at 10 am from the airport

A:Ok bye.

Atul:Bye.

Armaan enters inside and sits between Sapna and Nisha.

A:Nisha Tomorrow you come with me to the airport because Atul is coming from America.

Everybody oder's dinner and then when they leave Armaan drops everbody to their house.Next day Armaan get's ready to go to the airport.He picks Nisha from her house.

A:Come fast Nisha get in the car.

N:Yes coming give me only Five minuites.

When they reach the airport they did not find Atul anywhere.Then suddenly they saw Atul.

A:Where were you Atul we were finding you.

Atul:I was waiting on that bench.

A:Anyways meet my mangetar Nisha.

Atul:Namaste Bhabiji.

N:Namaste.

A:Now let's go.

Atul:Yes let's I am feeling very hungry.

A,N:Ok.

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Edited by 8484448 - 17 years ago

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