'Anjaana Saaya' (Short Story)last Part V - Page 4

Originally posted by: golu_1677

sorry for the late reply. was busy .

wat an ending to the fic. It was awesome. I loved thus fic.

waiting for more fics . hope it comes up soon

Hi Golu.. hey dont say sorry.. its fine.. even i get busy..and delay hota hai to post the parts..U liked the ending..😃.. Am so glad to know that u liked it.. ur appreciation makes me really glad at my effort..Yup will post few and ya soon as well..😃.. another short story ..

hiiiiiii
i read this one too and regardless to say tht this one was also very good
it seems like i m repeating the same compliment again and again 😆 😆 😆
well jokes apart the story was cool and different one
post another one soon 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: seasplash

hiiiiiii
i read this one too and regardless to say tht this one was also very good
it seems like i m repeating the same compliment again and again 😆 😆 😆
well jokes apart the story was cool and different one
post another one soon 😳 😳 😳

hi seasplash.... u read Anjana Sayaa..😃 though u r repeatign ur compliments is feels nice.. kahin achaa nahi lagaa sotry to..😉.. so its always ncie to know the story is fine enoguh and to post more..... its different.. ehheh ya most of my story r simple but this one is a bit sweet and full of imaginative stuf... i wish koi iski short film banata..😆.. and u can imagine Angad n kripa in this... 😉.. will post one more soon.. dont know whetehr it will be that nice.. butstill ...

👏 hey bhoomi dear you are awesome writer thx for great short lovely ff 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 hey bhoomi dear you are awesome writer thx for great short lovely ff 👏 👏 👏

Hi monika .... awww thank u so much for appreciatign it and reading so many of my short stories an dreplyign it qucily i get the warmth from all of u .readers ehre adn feel so lucky ...

Originally posted by: kookie_crinks91

this was a really wonderful story... i loved the concept and all... it was really great...
i kinda guessed that vidhi was sarita, but i was surprised when i came to know that moksh was also a part of the previous janam...
really great story, i dunno how many times i am gonna say that, but yeah... hats off to u, for writing such short wunnerful stories

and no offence... unlike kekta hai, who extends her serials till ppl get bored of them... i mean seriously, the zee channel shud start the chausath panne series again... dil na jane kyun/ aandhi/ lavanya were a good bunch.... even manshaa was even though they extended the show to more than 64 episodes, but still, that was coz ppl loved the show so much... heyy, remember how RK looked as vinay?? and now as jai walia he looks so different......)

Hi ,

Feels so nice after gettign the comment on this story... am glad u liked it so much that u appreciated it so many times in ur comments... Ya moksh in the past life made the story interestign have got the same response from so many of my readers...😃

hey u know what i use to luv that Zee ka show with short stories gogin for few weeks and new one coming.. after Mansha.. they made mansh go on n on like a daily serial and shtopped the short story format... yup Jai walia ..Ram kappoor just looks liek he like the charcter to the cor eand not himself... i hope he relaises that soon... some day.. and think from his head and not ekta's mind..😆

Originally posted by: ssh57

bhoomi, your suspense was also very novel. everyone might have guessed that vidhi was sarita n her earlier life but the last part abt her husband no one would have guessed. Good job yaar. Superb twist in the end.

Hi,

Suspense writing is really difficult for me... i cant write thrillers and I guess to keep my readers on their edges of the seat feeling worried thats also somethign i cant do.. still there was this suspense element in this story and am glad to know if with all the guessing n thinking.. everyone almost most of the readers were plesantly surprised by Moksh in the dream.. thanks for appreciatign the thought n concept.. ur replies and comments have become memorable for me.. as feelign soemone gogin throguh all my work in a very shor span of time..😊

hey bhoomi..
started reading u fics..so u will see my comment..
in detail..will post again..
good wishes..
sri:-)