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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ice _girl
hope A has not got married 2 kanan (as like kuch kuch hota hai plzzzzzzzz dont repeat d same thing but in d intro u said dat he luvs K 😕 😕 ) lets see wat happens wen dey meet

sorry dear but he is going to marry kanan after ruin krip's life.😭

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icegirl31

@icegirl31

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: monikaseth

sorry dear but he is going to marry kanan after ruin krip's life.😭

A 😡 so will A-K meet or not?

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Sujalthegreat

@Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: monikaseth

sorry dear but he is going to marry kanan after ruin krip's life.😭

ARRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! 😡

Brilliant part though, simply mind blowing

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ananya7736

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

awwww!!

ye kya kardiya??? Hope Angad does not marry Kanan... plz dont do that... 😭

do continue soon

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ice _girl

A 😡 so will A-K meet or not?

don't cry dear they will but it will take time.😭

Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ananya7736
awwww!!

ye kya kardiya??? Hope Angad does not marry Kanan... plz dont do that... 😭

do continue soon

sorry to make you cry 😭 but abhi angad kya kya karega woh dekh ke you must be more cry😭

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Sujalthegreat

ARRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! 😡

Brilliant part though, simply mind blowing

thank you so much and sorry i have to make this.😭

Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

Part 10

Please don't kill me .

Meine bahuit koshih ki khudh ki udaasi chupane ki, sab ko chood ke ,meine angad ke saath na Jane ka bhahana bhi banaya! kyuki mein angad ke saath eak pal bhi nahi bitana chati thi.

Mein nahi chati thi woh mere dard ko Jane,
Mein aur angad ghar ke liye abhi chale hi they ki barish hone lagi aur iss barih ne toofan ka rukh le liya.

Angad kafi khush tha kyuki 2 month baad usski kanan aarhi thi, mein apne dard mein hi khoye huye thi.

Mein angad aur apne un ankahe pal soch rahi thi jo ab kabhi mere nahi ho sakte they.

Mujhe eahsaas hi nahi hua ki hum gar ki bajaye beach house per ja rahe they.

Hum jaise hi beach house pahuche barish aur tez hone lagi, hum dono bilkul bheg gaye they, jaise hi hum ghar ke andar Jane lage toh jor ki bijli kadki aur mein dar ke angad ke seene se lag gaye.

Kripa ... angad mujhe bijli se dar lagta hai, please mujhe yaha se le chalo.

Tabhi doobara bijli kadki toh meine angad ko aur zor se hug kiya aur angad ko dekhne lagi,

Angad bhi mere ko kafi samay tak mujhe aise dekhta raha jaise ussne mujhe pehle kabhi na dekha ho.

Jaldi hi na jane ussko kya hua aur woh apne ko rok nahi paya woh apne hosh kho baitha aur woh mere karreb aaya aur..............

(I can't write hot scene in Hindi so this part in English it's looking cheep.)

Then angad bends down at my face and kiss my lips forcefully, firs't I don't understand but after meine bhi usski aakhoon mein khoye huye thi ki meine bhi ussko sab karne diya jo woh chata tha .i also kiss him back, and this kiss become passionate kiss.

While kissing me angad's hand come to my waist then I come to my real world.

Angad picked up me and walked towards beach house bedroom & angad opened the door and locked the door from inside. and he just gave me a tight hug just to make me more comfortable bec i am shivring after soking rainwater. .

Suddenly angad remove my choli from my shoulder and start kissing me I try to stop him but he said to me,

Shhhhhhhhhh

Then I feel
angad's hands moving on my each n every curve. I i try to stop angad but he can't listen to me, then angad's hand went to my choli .

Then I came back to my sense's become socked and t and went away from angad.

He move his hand, his lips on my bareback, he put his hands on my hands, start kissing me once again, then he take me to bed and put me down underneath him, he is giving me soft kisses on my body, he brush his face while kissing me every where

I totally become shoked bec every time he touch me and say 'I love you kanan',this make me cry a lot and try to stop him but i am not in a condition to protest he can not give me any chance to stop him, he is too strong, it s'look like angad occupy not only my body but soul too.

He start removing my sari, I am trying to stop him but he can't listen me then he cant stop himself for going further & he make force full entry on my body. Suddenly I feel lot of pain, tears fell out from my eyes I cried bec he is not making love with me bec he think I am kanan every time he call me I love you kanan plece accept me as your love kanan, this pain more then a pain of love making, angad's love making giving me a lot of pain & pain only bec this love not for me this for some one elase.

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I cried a lot when angad force me and he isn't listen me once , I know tomorrow he is going to regret what he did to me.

But it's too late now he changed my life completely and I feel so disgust , why I come with him.

but I thik after this angad can't leave me.that night changed me forever.

She belonged to Angad completely now and for angad????????????

Next ... Iss raat ki subah nahi!

Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Part 11.

I don't know when I become drowsy? I'll try to stop him but he become deaf, he played with my body and soul all night.

Early morning when I getup I started crying bec I lost every thing to this man who never loves me & he make love me while thinking I am his love kanan this make me feel more guilty and I started shivering.

I feel complete bec from now I belong to angad only; i know this is wrong bec I know angad going to regret him after.

But after last night I am sure angad cannot leave me,

But you don't know what your destiny hold for you?

Meine poore roon mein dekhne ki koshish ki par angad kahi nahi dikh raha tha.

I got up and wrap sheets around me,
And went to main hall.

I saw him sitting on sofa and he is crying, after see me he getup from there and went to near window.

I started crying and slowly collect my cloths from there & went to wash room.

Jab mein wapas aaye tab bhi angad wahi khara tha.
Mein janti thi ki kal jo hua woh sab galat tha? Magar issmein meri galti nahi thi.

Meine himmat kar ke anagd se baat Kari kyu ki mere liye yeh janna jaroori tha ki angad kya sochtah hai kal raat ke bare mein?

Mein angad ke paas gaye aur usske shoulder per haath rakh ke poocha..........

Kripa… angad tum chup kyu ho? Kuch bolte kyu nahi? is tarah nazar kyu chura rahe ho mere se ? Angad please say some thing please angad???

Angad... kri.pa i, i am sorry per kal jo hua woh nahi hona chahiye tha, mein behek gaya tha mein apne hosh mein nahi tha, aur tum mein kanan ko feel kar raha tha, kripa mein janta hu kal jo hua ussmein tumhari koi galti nahi thi per kripa mein iss eak raat ki galti ki wajah se mein apna pyar nahi khona chata nahi chata khoona kanan ko...

Kripa ab kya hoga mein kanan ko kaise kahuuga ki yeh sab meri kamjoori ki wajah se hua kya woh mera yakeen karege oh god please help me i can't loos her.

Kripa I lover her. and you know jab koi kisis se pyar karta hai toh ussko khona nahi chata, mein bhi iss eak galti ki saza khud ko aur kanan ko nahi dena chata .

Kripa in her mind...(oh god I know this angad you are going to feel ashamed for last night, but you can not think about me once, for angad kanan is only important i am nothing to angad)

Yeh sab soch ke mere ko khud se nafart hone lagi thi, meri sari duniya mere saamne khatam ho rahi thi, mein angad se itna pyar karti thi ki usski in baaton ko bhi sehne ke liye taiyaar ho gaye .cha ke bhi pata nahi angad se nafrat nahi kar pa rahi thi.

Kripa …… angad tum kya chate ho saaf saaf kahoo, mein sab sunne ko taiyaar hu.

Angad… kripa I know tum iss waqt kya soch rahi hogi merre bare mein, per kripa mein iss rishtey ko aage nahi badha sakta mein kanan ko nahi chood sakta please try to understand me. Eak tum hi ho jo mere ko samajh sakti ho.

Kripa in her mind.
(Angad tum ne eak pal mein meri zindagi badal di, tum ko mere dard ka eahsaas tak nahi ki who ladki jisske sath tum ne kal who sab kiya usska kya hoga kaun usska haath thamega, tum ne mere ko aaj aisa dard diya hai jo ab zindagi bhar mere saath rahega, per mein tum se bahuit pyar karti hu pyar ke khone ka dard kya hai mein janti hu angad iss liye mein tum ko iss rishtey ko ab aage nahi badahane duuge itna sab sunne ke baad.)

Kripa... angad meri taraf dekhoo please?

Kripa……… Tum chinta mat karoo yeh baat kisisi KO nahi pata chalege, yeh mera tum se wada hai. Itna trust hai na mere per apni bachpan ki dost per?

Angag tum chinta mat karoo sab theek ho jayega. Tum apni naye zindagi shuru karoo kanan ke saath aur haaa tum KO meri kasam hai ki tum ussko kuch nahi bataoge kal jo bhi hua humare beech mein?

Angad... aisa kaise ho sakta hai kripa? Mein kaise?

Kripa... angad apne pyar ko khoone se acha hai ki tum chup rahoo, waise bhi meri kasam hai tumhe.

Kripa in her mind………. pyar KO khona kya hota hai yeh mere soo poochoo.

angad bahuit dard hota hai, mein nahi chati ki tum yeh dard sahoo.

Angad.......... thank you so much kripa, tum ne jo aaj mere liye kiya koi nahi kar sakta, tum ko kbhi bhi meri jaroorat ho please without any hessitation come to me.
You are my best and very sweet friend.

Kripa... angad ab tum please yaha se jaao aur kisi ko mat kehna ki kal hum saath they.

Angad ......... par kripa iss tarah iss halat mein tum ko yaha chood ke jana, nahi tum mere saath chalo.

Kripa....... tum mereko chood chuke ho angad.

Angad ... kya kaha?

Kripa......... please go angad and leave me alone for some time.

Mere eak baar kehne per angad mere ko waha chood ke bhi chala gaya, mere se zid bhi nahi ki, yeh baat tood gaye mere ko, ki itni bari baat angad kaise asani se bhoolne ko taiyaar hai?

Angad ke Jane ke baad mein khudh ko nahi rok paye aur bhagwaan se cheekh cheekh ke poochne lagiiiiiii

Why why with me kyu kiya yeh mere saath? Angad ke liye yeh sab eak galti thi, aur mere liye yeh mera pyar tha.

Mein jiss insaan ki hamesha hona chati thi ussko apna sab kuch de diya Ur woh kehta hai usske liye yeh eak galti hai.

Phir bhi dil angad se nafrat nahi karna cha raha tha.

Mein waha ghanto aise hi baith ke rooti rahi eak raat ne meri poori zindagi badal di sab khatam ho gaya tha.

Meine khud se wada kiya mein angad ki hochuki chae jo ho mein ab Kisi aur ke bare mein nahi soch sakti.

Angad mujhe nahi chata toh kya hua mein sari zindagi usske diye iss thode se pyer ke sahare kaat duuge chae who pyar bhi kisis aur ki daya ka ho.

Mein janti thi ki abhi ladai khatam nahi huye, kyuki abhi ghar mein sab ko yeh baat batani thi?

Aur usske baad aanewale toofan ko bhi sehna tha, mujhe khud ko sabhaal na tha kyuki mere apne mera yeh dad bardast nahi kar pate, meine apne aasoo pooche khudh se wada kiya ki ab mein kabhi Kisi per wishwaas nahi karuuge aur apne naye zindagi shuru karooge.

Socha ki sab bhool ke naye shuruaat karooge magar nahi janti thi kismat mere saath aur kya kya khel khelege pata nahi tha.

Uss khel ne mere andar se pyar naam ke shabd ko hi mita diya.

Song for kripa …….

Hindi Song Title: dushman naa kareHindi Movie/Album Name: AAKHIR KYON Singer(s): LATA MANGESHKAR, AMIT KUMAR

Hindi Lyrics:
dushman naa kare dost ne wo kaam kiyaa hai
umar bhar kaa gam humei inaam diyaa hai

toofaan mein hum ko chhod ke saahil pe aa gaye
naakhudaa kaa hum ne inhe naam diyaa hai

pahale to hosh chhin liye julma-o-sitam se
diwaanagee kaa fir humei iljaam diyaa hai

apane hee giraate hain nasheman pe bijaliyaan
gairo ne aa ke fir bhee use thaam diyaa hai

next ......... Broken kripa .

Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago