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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
Guys my net has again stopped working, i am writing this message from my sister's computer. I was planning to update through my sister's computer only but USB is not working on my computer (silly computer)😡 , so u'll get the prologue whenever my net works even if it works for 5 minutes i'll post the prologue.

Take Care,
Love,
Saba.
Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: aishwaria

Guys my net has again stopped working, i am writing this message from my sister's computer. I was planning to update through my sister's computer only but USB is not working on my computer (silly computer)😡 , so u'll get the prologue whenever my net works even if it works for 5 minutes i'll post the prologue.

Take Care,
Love,
Saba.


okie saba..we are waiting....😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Prologue

He was looking out of the window, looking at the city of New York, it was about 9pm and he was still in his office, everyone had left which left him 'alone', there was nothing new about that he was used to this, used to being 'alone'. He smiles remembering how much he loved to be alone before but now he simply hated all this he wanted someone to be with him, he wanted 'her' in his life, only he knew how much he craved for 'her', why did destiny play such a game.

The guard came to him

Guard- Sir

Sujal-yes

Guard-aren't you going home

Sujal- home {smiled} I am just leaving

Sujal left the office; through out the way he kept on thinking about 'her', the driver brought him back to the world when they reached home. Sujal unlocked the door and entered his so called home where he only came to sleep and change his clothes, this place used to be a home when 'she' was here; he took out a bottle of whisky.

Two hours later

Sujal was sitting on the floor in his bedroom leaning against the bed; his eyes were red because he had been drinking since the last two hours remembering 'her'.

The clock struck twelve; Sujal looked at the clock, smiled and said

Sujal- kitni ajeeb baat hai pichle saal we celebrated your birthday together and aaj {he closes his eyes and tears start to flow from his eyes, after some time he wipes them and picks up the photo frame kept on the table} Happy Birthday {he somehow manages to stand up but falls unconscious on the bed still clutching the frame}
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I know u all will say small part but for this fic the length of the parts will differ, they would mostly be short and once my net problem gets fixed I'll be regular.
Edited by aishwaria - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
yaar saba that was an awesome start..lekin yeh kya hero, heroine alag...hmm..well koi baat nahii...unke naseeb mein milna likha..tho is wajah se woh log zaroor milenge... so fikar karne kii koi baat nahii... very nice indeed yaar... just too good.. abhi se mere dimaak mein sawaal ghooming aakhir kya hua unki zindagi mein..kyun woh log alag hai.. humare hero sahab kyun itne ghum mein dhoobe hai..and etc..etc..sawaal coming in my dimaak.. me already very curious to know the further story..keep up the good work going... 👏 do continue soon.. me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part saba, bechara sujal, feel really sad for him. Hope things get better soon. Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mindblowing part........awesome start......wonder who is in the picture........ple ple continue soon.......cant wait anymore........thanks

love

kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sun_423

yaar saba that was an awesome start..lekin yeh kya hero, heroine alag...hmm..well koi baat nahii...unke naseeb mein milna likha..tho is wajah se woh log zaroor milenge... so fikar karne kii koi baat nahii... very nice indeed yaar... just too good.. abhi se mere dimaak mein sawaal ghooming aakhir kya hua unki zindagi mein..kyun woh log alag hai.. humare hero sahab kyun itne ghum mein dhoobe hai..and etc..etc..sawaal coming in my dimaak.. me already very curious to know the further story..keep up the good work going... 👏 do continue soon.. me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃



will continue soon Suri, thanx sooooooo much for the comment u'll find out kyun humaare hero saab itnay ghum mein dubay huay hain 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: Arshie

nice part saba, bechara sujal, feel really sad for him. Hope things get better soon. Continue soon.



thanx Faiza,right u'll find out soon why Sujal is like this

Originally posted by: goodkashish

mindblowing part........awesome start......wonder who is in the picture........ple ple continue soon.......cant wait anymore........thanks

love

kashish



will deffo continue soon Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Although i only got 4 replies, i am continuing for the ones who replied.
aishwaria thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20

Part 1

The alarm woke Sujal up; he got up holding his head which felt extremely heavy. He took a bath, changed his clothes and went to the office without even having his breakfast.

At the office

Sujal was not able to concentrate on his work, 'she' and her thoughts were constantly disturbing him, it wasn't anything new, this happened everyday but today was special, it was her birthday.

There was a knock on the door, it was Sujal's secretary

Sujal- come in, hello Charlotte

Charlotte- good morning sir, sir there was a call from India from that company they want to have a meeting with u

Sujal- so arrange it

Charlotte- actually sir they I mean the owner of the company wants u to come to India

Sujal- and may I know why he can't come

Charlotte- sir actually his wife is expecting and there is no one to care of her in his absence so he thought if u could

Sujal did not say anything when Joe, Sujal's company's Executive Manager and also a nice friend came in

Joe- there is no need for him to go to India, if that man can't come u should cancel the deal

Charlotte- but

Joe- no buts Charlotte'..you know everything and still you are

Charlotte- I know everything but there is also something that you all should know'Sujal whats the use of running away from things'.you should face everything courageously

Sujal- I know Charlotte but India'.it refreshes all the pain'. I know I can't forget everything'.but I can't go to that place'I lost someone special over there'someone who was a part of me'someone who was just like'someone whom I loved immensely and still love even if that person is not in this world anymore'. {Tears started to flow from his eyes, but he composed himself and continued}'..please ask him if he or any one else from his company can come'but India'..never.

He knew he would not be able to live there he would completely break; there was no way he was going to India.

******* ********
comments awaited
Luv,
Saba.

Edited by aishwaria - 16 years ago

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