SS Ek Pal part 10 pg 20 6/1 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnawaz

niru jaanu...me first 😃... .. helloo jazz di.. how r u??

haila...'ek pal'...bring back memories...i had a ss in KS with that title and have a running ff in kayamath too...😆😆😆...kool naa..... ya that is really.. cool. the first thing that came to mind.. when i saw ur comment was.. when r u going to update.. ur ff's.. i am dying.. to read.. ur update.. u know that.. right.. hehehe😳😳😳

i love this update...it was so cute...i loved how ranu called kanu baby even though no one was in the guest room...😳😳😳...thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaki 😉😉😉...cant wait for next update.. ya.. of course.. i mean.. why wouldnt he.. call her.. baby.. hehe.. jk jk.. that.. it is so cute.. when ranbir.. calls kanya.. baby.. acutally. i was laughing.. so much.. when i saw.. him.. calling kanya.. baby.. eheh😳

JAZ .. Nir



Originally posted by: blah07

aww its really good!! i especailly liked it b/c you wrote it in english, which is a huge plus b/c my hindi is horrible.. thx 😊 im looking forward to wats gonna happen.. .. aww thanks.. nabila.. as.. ya u r going to read.. lots of english.. in here.. as..i cant.. write in hindi.. for some odd reason.. as i can.. read.. it.. perfectly.. fine.. hehe.. i am so weird.. hehe😆😆😆

~Nabila .. Nirali



Originally posted by: sam78

ranbir talking sweet to kanya, that is very nice.
i love this FF. ..thank u.. so much.. for liking.. this ss.. sam.ya.. i know.. i love him. when he is nice.. to her.. it is so cute..

do con't soon, i want to know what will happend next. ..i will.. try to continue today.. if i get time.. promise..



Originally posted by: kunataanya

that was really really cute.... 😊
please continue soon......thank u thank u.. it is really.. sweet of u.. guys.. to comment.. it really.. means loads..



Originally posted by: nazeeei

oh love it. 😃 ..thank u so much



Originally posted by: aish-uk

Nir_janu, thats was cuute when Ranbir calls her baby lol...shoo shweet!..plz do carry on.....so glad that u liked it.. btw.. u can call me nir.. will try to continue today..



Originally posted by: shila04

i hope that happens on monday ohh i hope kanya does not fall in any kind of trouble..she is so sweet.... ya i hope soo.. too. that kanya.. doesnt.. get into.. any kind of trouble.. as that would be so not cool at all





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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: indiangirl31

hey its really good and u shud continue it all through out the weekend... if u have time lol 😳..oo.. i cant.. continue all through out.. the weekened.. as.. i have hw.. and stuff.. to do.. but i do promise.. that i will.. continue tonight.. if i get time.. promise..



Originally posted by: suganain



I agree excellent!! Keep Continuing ..that is really.. sweet of u.. i will try to continue soon.. promise



Originally posted by: amoreedamicizia

great work..thank u so much..

👏

but i have a question FF stands for Fan Fiction. Whats does SS stand for? ..oo.. sorrie about that.. SS stands for.. Short Story..

Nehal ..Nirali



..thank u so much.. very.. one.. for.. reading my SS.. and commenting.. thanks a lot..
this really.. means a lot to me.. as.. without.. ur comments.. i will not be able to continue this SS.. so keep on.. writing those comments..thanks a lot.. everyone.. once again.

Nirali
Edited by nir_jaanu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

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haila...do u realize that green and purple are my fav colors...me and guli already planned out my whole wedding theme to these two colors...😆...lol...u know what...its sad...because i am totally serious...dress code for my gals for my wedding is violet and olive green...anyone else who wears that color to the wedding will be sent home...for real 😉😉😉
JAZ

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey niru great part yaar.. arrey wah hummey chod kar yahan agayi 😉 .. lol... anywayz lovey part.. wait how many parts does this S have.. this was really interesting.. and i feel like killing the mom with my own hands.. 😡 .. humari bechari kanya itni bholi bhali hai and they are accusing her of cheating on our lover boy.. hehehe 😉 ... anywayz continue soon.. and yeah not 2 weeks later.. hehheheh b4 that would be nice.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnawaz


..aww jaz di.. that is so cute.. so when r u planing to get married.. i mean.. u have some one.. hehe😉 ya i like those two colors.. too.. all ur gals.. would look realy.. cute.. in this colors.. as.. the best colors.. hehe.. i like.. bright green and violet.. and hot pink.. seriously.. hehe.. aww. that is sad.. jaz di.. u r going to sent them.. home.. aww..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: phool527

hey niru great part yaar.. arrey wah hummey chod kar yahan agayi 😉 .. lol... anywayz lovey part.. wait how many parts does this S have.. this was really interesting.. and i feel like killing the mom with my own hands.. 😡 .. humari bechari kanya itni bholi bhali hai and they are accusing her of cheating on our lover boy.. hehehe 😉 ... anywayz continue soon.. and yeah not 2 weeks later.. hehheheh b4 that would be nice.. 😉


....thanks binish.. and btw.. stop being so mean tooo mean.. and i did not leave u guys.. the first. place i visit.. is still Ks.. ok.. so take a chill.. and.. what is with this.. two weeks.. i dont take.. 2 weeks.. to update.. and.. last.. week.. it was like that.. becuase.. i was busy.. geez.. with superbowl.. party.. and things.. so take a chill jaan..

and.. as i said before.. i will update.. today.. okkk.. miss. i am so perfect.. person hehehe😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nir_jaanu


....thanks binish.. and btw.. stop being so mean tooo mean.. and i did not leave u guys.. the first. place i visit.. is still Ks.. ok.. so take a chill.. and.. what is with this.. two weeks.. i dont take.. 2 weeks.. to update.. and.. last.. week.. it was like that.. becuase.. i was busy.. geez.. with superbowl.. party.. and things.. so take a chill jaan..

and.. as i said before.. i will update.. today.. okkk.. miss. i am so perfect.. person hehehe😆

lmao.. omg.. jaanu me and being mean to u.. i dont htink thats possible.. lol... so u admitt u take 2 weeks to update.. lmao.. o and yeah thank god ur updating tonight.. lets see.. kehte hain na keh kehne mein or karne mein bohut fark hota hai.. lmao.. o and u being perfect.. lmao.. wow is that the biggest lie u have ever said in ur life.. 😉 j/k

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys.. back with my update.. for today.. as i said.. i will.. write it.. so.. anyways.. please do not listen to binish.. i do try to update.. when i have time.. i am not like u binish..who dont have anything to do.. okkk.

..Part 2

Re: ya.. umm.. we saww themm..

R: see shanya.. u r just being nosy..

S: what?? and starts crying..

K: ranbir, ye aap ne ke kar diya.. ( trying to be nice.. as they hit ayaan in the head) and goes towards.. shanya.. and comforts her..

R: what kanya.. why r u comforting her?? u should be yelling at her.. for making a rai into a mountain.. or whatever it is...

K: ranbir.. chup, its ok.. she was just trying to know where her husband was. right shanya?

S: ya.. (sobbing)

R: ok whatever..
and ranbir leaves from there actually.. angry..

R:(to himself): how dare they yell at my kanya..

R: my kanya.. when did that happen?

R: ranbir u r just going to crazy.. and ignores the whole fight that is going on in his mind..

in ranya's bedroom

Kanya is just sitting there on their bed,and thinking if shanta tai didnt come on time i dont know what would have happened to me.. seriously...

Just than maillaka comes in the room

M: kanya beta

K didnt even notice that M was in the room..

K:ji mummy ji..

M: beta i am so sorrie about what happened in the guestroom, i know that i promised ur parents that i will take care of u and either i failed to do that

K walks over to her : mummyji please dont say this.. u have not done anything wrong.. if i was in ur place i would have done the samething..

(while kanya and maillika were having this conv, ranbir was listening to everything)

M: nahi kanya, mein ek bohut buri sas hoon..

K: nahi mummyji, actually aap bohut acchi si pyaari si sas hain.. kanya hugs M

Outside ranbir was thinking that even thought this 2 by 2 is so rude and ehww.. she is so nice she does care about others, and she is taking such a good care of my mom..

when M turns to leave she sees R there lost..

M: areey ranbir, wahan kyon khade hoo.. come here..

R: ji mom..

R comes to where M n K were standing..

M: ranbir, u r coming right..

R: ya mom, i will be right there.. u go..

M: okk, theek hai.. but jaldi ana.. okk..

R: ji mom, mein bhi aya..

M left from there.. so it was only kanya and ranbir in their room..

both of them didnt know what to say.. or even if they both should look at each other..

R: cleared his throat

K: what?

R: what nothing??

K: ok whatever.. just as she was about to go.. ranbir holds her wrist.. and pulls.... her..

so Kanya hits ranbirs chest.. and they both hold each others eyes for quiet sometime, ranbir looked at her.. lips.. and kanya looked at his ..

ok guys.. that is it for now.. as i need to finish my hw.. although.. tom is sunday.. i dont do.. my hw.. on sundays.. as.. that is my free day.. hehe..



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: phool527

lmao.. omg.. jaanu me and being mean to u.. i dont htink thats possible.. lol... so u admitt u take 2 weeks to update.. lmao.. o and yeah thank god ur updating tonight.. lets see.. kehte hain na keh kehne mein or karne mein bohut fark hota hai.. lmao.. o and u being perfect.. lmao.. wow is that the biggest lie u have ever said in ur life.. 😉 j/k


oo.. i only.. took.. two weeks to update.. because i had.. my bro coming back.. from india.. than had.. superbowl.. party.. okk.. see now i updated.. so stop complaning.. or nir is coming after u.. okk.. i was talking about u.. being so perfect.. okk.. "miss i am so perfect".. this was for u.. i was not talking about myself.. hehe and stop spreading rumors.. about me.. geez
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwnn.. kya niru.. couldnt u find a better place to end.. seriously.. things were just getting romantic and u broke our heart.. 😳 😉 .. lol.. and ppl im not lieing.. and i do not have all the time in the world.. but loved how ranbir saw how much his pyari wife kanya loves his family even after wat happened.. shes such a typical indian bahu.... hehehheh.. lol.. continue soon yaar. cant wait for da next part.. 😉

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