FF - Dil se ..Part 18 Pg 32 - 28/6 - Page 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelicSoniya

it was very very nice...amazing
👏
plzz cont soon....
& can u plz pm me wenever u update??

thank u dear, n yes i will pm u when i update 😳 i m glad u liked it

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

wow...fabulous part......sooo rmantic n lovey dovey talks...

thanxxxxx 4 d pm

plzzzz continue soon..

luv
*vini*

aww vini thanks a lot for wonderful comment dear ....

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hey pari yaar wow yaar at rght tme yaar i am also hre nd jst gttng 2 go nd saw ur pm nd thought 2 reply u warna late ho jata hai bcz tom is my exm thts whyaww no dear, exams comes first 😳me don't mind if u reply to my pm late 😃............thnks fr d pm.......that's perfectly fine yaar
omg yaar it ws superb yaar realy enjoyd ths prt yaar chupa rustam nikle hailaaaaaaa all of thm wre teasng our cute couples wow fabulous yaar.. aww thanks a ton dear... me glad u liked it 😳..............lvd it..😛😛............nd throw a prty fr thm nd stay thre only gud nd armaan nd ridz enjoyd ech nd evry momnt wow how romantic really u think so? me is honoured 😳yaar ....................chioooooooooooooooooooooo cute cutieeeeeeeeeeeeeee..........................😊😊.............
wonderful yaar their salsa dance wow jst lvd tht their all memories ...............hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeei know i felt they need some time together to relive their memories naafter all they are engaged now 😳 ......................nd now muski
parents.........omg wht now gonna happn..........nd who saw thm holdng their hnds hope nt muski parents........well lets just wait for that shall we .. me just saying no need to worry 😳..oh god awwwwwwwww it ws choooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeet........................ur nt able 2 update bt now u'll gv us 3 prts upcmng days .............wow eagrly waitng fr tht............thanks dear, i'll post about 3 parts in next week i think... 😳
cont sooooooooooon
luv yachu
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@kvn1983: thanks a lot dear, n i will continue soon pakka

@swansea: thanks dear

[quote=missypatel]

sweet!

it was cute..d scene wer tey cherish old moments!!nIcE!! thanks
So..its muskaan parents huh..watchin tem..rahul shd tell tem he luves her n wants 2 marry her n all..soo she cnt go bck lol!!tht can never happen!!LMAO!! hmm tht's gud idea, but lets see what happens next 😉
thx for d PM! :)work is always more appreciated by otherz than urself...u cannot be d judge of yurself!;) aww thanks dear, i think i have high standards for myslef than😆

btw!u goin 2 India..tht too for 2 mnths..soooo lucky!! 😛
well yes i m so happy i can go atlast after about 4 years of planning 😆
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@sarazahid: thanks a lot dear, n i will definately continue soon 😳

Edited by pari0706 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Pari

Thanks for the pm hun
great update
loved the romance and
now the promo sounds exciting too
lovely stuff
Hope u have a great time in India,
even I wanna go,please take me
Thanks in advance for the updates u're gonna give in the next few days
very nice
Love
Hina
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Hey Pari hey hina 😳

Thanks for the pm hun no probs at all hun
great update
loved the romance and phew htanks a lot i did put a bit of effort in it 😳
now the promo sounds exciting too thx .. lets see what the next update holds 😳
lovely stuff thanks once again
Hope u have a great time in India,
even I wanna go,please take me awww ... y not come with me we will have gr8 time together 😉
Thanks in advance for the updates u're gonna give in the next few days
very nice aww thanks a lot hun
Love
Hina

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Posted: 17 years ago
awsum prt! im sure its muskaan's parents!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice update
so sweet
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

its a nice one please continue it soon please and thanks for the pm sorry for late comment


Sweet Fruits Nice 2 Eat Sweet Words Easy 2 Say But Sweet Friend Hard 2 Find And It's My Goodness How Did I Find U ...

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 17

Now all interns go to do their duties… at lunch time atul is still doing his duty and Muski, rahul,armi and ridz are in canteen… muskaan seems very tensed…

Ridz: muskan kya hua? Tum itni udas kyun ho?

Muski: woh aaj mere mummyjee aur papajee aa rahe hai na!!

Rid: don't worry muskan hum sab hai na? aur humne papa se bhi baat ki hai, toh hum sab mere ghar par mil kar unhe sab batayenge aur manayenge bhi… tum bilkul phikar mat karo… yeh lo kuch kha lo tumne kuch nahi khaya…

R: muskan ridheemaji bilkul theek keh rahi hai, tum phikar mat karo… tum chaho to mein bhi aa sakta hu jab tum log yeh baat tere mummyjee aur daddyjee se kar rahe ho…

Mu: haan rahul tu ayega toh acha rahega…

R: theek hai mein aunga par tu plz kuch kha le…waise wooh log aa kab rahe hai?

Mu: unn logon ke pass mere ghar ki chabi hai, aur unhone bataya nahi ki kab ayenge lekin itna kaha ki aaj jab mein ghar jaungi toh wooh log ghar par honge…

R: acha toh theek hai, mein tere saath aunga aur phir hum ridheemaji ke ghar chalenge… theek hai?

M: theek hai, waise bhi aaj mein apni dhano nahi layi, use garage mein jana pada na iss liye

She eats and then all leave for duty…

Now its evening and the duty is over so AR leave for ridz's house… anji is already at their house as her duty finished earlier… while RM go to muski's house to pick her parents…

They reach at muski's place and muski's mum (MM) opens it

MM: areeee rahul putar tu aur muskaan ke saath?

R: aa… jee.. wohh… kya hai na, mein app dono ko lift dene aya tha mere pass car hai na iss liye.. aap log Armaan se milne jaa rahe hai na?

MD (muski's dad): ooo.. acha theek hai, aa jao andar aa jao

MM: muskaan putar tu ja aur jaldi se fresh ho ja phir hum chalenge.. theek hai?

M: jee

She goes n freshens up while rahul sits in living room with MM and MD just talking about patayla and hows rahul's parents

Then muski comes wearing same clothes and they all leave but rahul n muskan convinces MM and MD not to take anything for armi… n just make this an informal visit.

They reach Ridz's house… and armi opens the door. (while all others shash, ridz, nani, padma and anji are sitting in hall)

A: hum aap ka hi intazar kar rahe the ayi ye

They all come in;

MD: oye armaan putar, yeh log kaun hai?

Everyone except MM and MD exchanges looks..

R: aa uncle yeh ridheemajee hai aur yeh anjali, yeh dono bhi hamare saath interns hai… aur yeh dr. shashank hai humari hospital ke dean, aur yeh unki mom…. Aur yeh hai padma aunty Armaan ki mu boli maa

MM: wooh sab toh theek hai lekin yeh saab log Armaan putar ke ghar par kya kar rahe hai?

A: woooh yeh ghar inka hi hai, aur mera ghar bahaut messy tha toh meine rahul aur muskan se kaha ki hum saab yahi milte hai….

M: haan mummyjee… yeh saab bhi apne hi hai…

Nani: aayi ye na, hum saab Armaan ko apna beta hi mante hai …they all sit…

(padma, armi and ridz on one sofa, while anji, sashank and nani on other; muski's parents on one and muski & rahul grabs a chair each and muski sits between padma and nani (sofas of their) while rahul sits in between Muski's parents sofa and next to shashank.)

A:umm uncle hum saab ko ap dono ko kuch batana hai..

MD: ohh jee damad jee bolo kya baat hai,

A:umm.. woo…(he luks at everyone n everyone nods him indirectly saying go on while ridz places her hand on his to show her support. MM and MD realises this thing n are getting scared)

A: wooh … aap please humari puri baat sunlijiyega … aur ho sake toh gussa mat hoiyega…

MM: aisi kya baat hai putar?

A: wwoh mere aur muskan beech aisa kuch nahi hai, jaisa ki aap soch rahe hai…

MD: oye yeh kya keh rahe ho damadjee?

A: please aap meri puri baat suniye…wohh .. (n he tells how muski lied to come here n then couldn't say the truth and how he was passing by when MM's call had come n y muski said Armaan's name… also y he came to patyala)

MM: lekin tu agar humari muskan se pyaar nahi karta to tune uski help kyun ki? Tere dil mein kuch toh hoga na?

A: meine kaha na meine muskaan ki help sirf ek dost hone ken ate ki

MD: na na putar mein nahi manta, tu zarur muskan se pyaar karta hai.. haan bas.

A: nahi uncle aisi koi baat nahi hai, muskan sirf meri dost hai aur usne kaha ki agar mein uski help nahi karunga toh aap log uski shaddi kisi bhi ladke se karvadoge aur uski practice chudvadoge aur mein nahi chahta tha ki meri vajah se muskan ki career khatam ho jaye…

MM: muskan putar, kya yeh sab sach hai?

M: jee mummyjee( with tears in her eyes) yeh saach hai

MD: aur tu yeh aab bata rahi hai hume?

M: wooh mein dar..

MD: oye hume kuch nahi sun na tu kal hamare saath patyala chal rahi hai aur aab tu yahan Mumbai mein bilkul nahi rahegi

M: papa ji … (with fear in her eyes she looked at everyone)

What will happen? Will muskan;s fears come true? Please keep reading to know more

Please do give your comments .... if you feel it worthy of your precious time 😳

I have to leave now so i will send pms tomorrow... hope u liked this part... i will give one more part before 1st july (that's when i m leaving for India) and that part will reveal all the secrets I kept in the FF till now... 😳n it will also be the end of Muskan's story...

Edited by pari0706 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part!! soo glad the truth is finally out!!! 👏 👏 plz continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was awsommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz od continue soon
Edited by sarazahid - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
really a nice one please continue it soon


"Please tell me your INGREDIENTS because I mixed 100kg sugar with 80kg chocolate and 60 kg honey but .... stilli can't make a personas sweet as you."
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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