' Humsafar'(Short story)Part VI(last prt)

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi Bhoomi, This the third fanfic of yours that I've read today. Each one so different and each one seems to be better than the previous one. This one was so romantic and cute. Your poetry lines are superb!!!!! You are really a very gifted writer. RABBA (GOD) BLESS U!!!!

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: ssh57
Hi Bhoomi, This the third fanfic of yours that I've read today. Each one so different and each one seems to be better than the previous one. This one was so romantic and cute. Your poetry lines are superb!!!!! You are really a very gifted writer. RABBA (GOD) BLESS U!!!!

Hi, Hmm feels awesome that not only u read but felt replying to all of them .. whcih made it possible for me to know how many readers i have and i should continue my process of sharing my work with u all..

U read all in a day .. 😊 i use to write short stories and whenever it reached 4-5 part i always wondered will readers feel like gogin to the next part wont they be bored and feel this is too long.. 😆and here u reading all in a go.. 😊..ohhh u liked it.. heheeh its surely romantic especially the lines poetic lines in this one in the last are surely even one of my favs.... aww gifted u feel... ahhahahha I dotn feel that way I think thoughts are somethign i have and i try to get it out throguh a story its all my readers who inspire and push me to brign out my work.. or else i never knew i coudl actually write poetry as well..😊.. Rabba bless u too😆..tc

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Sri

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

hey bhoomi..

seems like a nice story..

will comment again in detail//

sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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Sri

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Hey bhoomi..
Great story of noor and rab(nice name)..a muslim background story…u did very well!!
Loved the shayari all through the story..
Noor a girl waiting for her prince has finally found him,..her conersation with the go (rabba) was really touching,the bond made between god and humans I fell..is so undescribable…but u really potrayed it well..
Also u pointed out a social issue – Differently abled & challenged Children' n people..
thru rabs sisters character..
Great work..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

P.S.:will take some time to read u r other stories..

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey bhoomi..
Great story of noor and rab(nice name)..a muslim background story?u did very well!!
Loved the shayari all through the story..
Noor a girl waiting for her prince has finally found him,..her conersation with the go (rabba) was really touching,the bond made between god and humans I fell..is so undescribable?but u really potrayed it well..
Also u pointed out a social issue ? Differently abled & challenged Children' n people..
thru rabs sisters character..
Great work..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

P.S.:will take some time to read u r other stories..

Hi Sri,

Glad that u liked the names. I was a bit puzzled abotu the girls name while choosing and Noor later striked me. Yes i hadnt tried my hand at muslim family so tried with this story , am so happy i could manage it out.. Heeheheh u liked the shayari.. yup i had to in romance poetic lines not wanting to write is just not possible so my readers had to get to read them with no choice.. but happy to know u liked it..

yes mentally challenged or physcially the way people look at them is actually hide them behind and not happy to aanouned to the world they are part of their family its sad.. i did touch across it slightly to brign the sensitive side of the charcters...

Sri I am very happy to get to know how u looked at the story and what all things u liked in it..thanks for takgin ur tiem otu and replyign to the stories that u read so far... ur comments and kind words do help me to write more.. thanks ..n tc

Bhoomi

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

heyyy bhoomi
i dont y but this story just touched my heart
i really loved it
nd i really loved the part where u revealed that the guys name is rab that was the most amazing part

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
heyyy bhoomi
i dont y but this story just touched my heart
i really loved it
nd i really loved the part where u revealed that the guys name is rab that was the most amazing part

Hi seema,

this is story where love romance dreams which usually girls dream of.. i tried to make it filmy yet give it a certain Bhoomi style touch.. ehhehe.. so u read and liked it and it touched ur heart awww i am feelgin flattered now.. with my work.. thanks for ur lovely comments.. i hope ur heart gets all th ehappiness.. luv u

Bhoomi