' Humsafar'(Short story)Part VI(last prt) - Page 5

Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 Another fabulous story......Apki agli story ka intezaar rahega 😛

Hi Vandu... tumto sabse pehle meri story read karti ho and reply...luv u for luving my effort...so much..a hug ur way..🤗 so hope this sotry didnt bore u much..will post next sotry...but thinking to post a more serious one ... ya phir kcuh aur... lets se.. ab tak decie nahi kiya...aur yeh Aapki?? tumhari kahoo..budhaapa ayaa hai lekin phirbhi dil to baachaa hai.😆

Wonderfully written! Love your character development. 👏

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Wonderfully written! Love your character development. 👏

Hi Rabia,

Am so happy that u like the character developmt in the story... I often try and potray charcters with a certain degree of good virtues... hope u felt the same.. am thankful to u for all the encouragign words for me... 😃

Originally posted by: sanightingale

GR8888 story Dii!!! 👏 👏 👍🏼
post the nxt 1 soon..... 😊
take care..
luv, Nida... 🤗

Hi Nida, awwww sweety am happy yeh story ne tumse hasaaya na... made ur time pass by hapily bas yehi to i wanted... next one..hmm have few things on mind.. and yup will post but kya? thats a surprise for u..n even for San...may be soemthign totally new..😉

luv u too Nida...a jhappi ur way.. Allah Hafiz...tc

Bhoomi

this was awesome bhoomi.. sorry for the late comment. But it was a amazing love story.. So wen does the next fic comes up. will b waiting for it eagerly...

hey a locvely end to a lovely story sorry i wasant regular lekin i was held up with some work ab jaldi se ek aur story liko aur yeh tumhari jappi for duch woderful poetry🤗

Originally posted by: golu_1677

this was awesome bhoomi.. sorry for the late comment. But it was a amazing love story.. So wen does the next fic comes up. will b waiting for it eagerly...

Hi Golu.... thanks so much for ur encouragin words... dont say sorry its fine.. I am glad u liked the story.. the next ff hmm it wil coem soon..hope u enjoy even though it may be a bit to long to read...😃am workign on it

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey a locvely end to a lovely story sorry i wasant regular lekin i was held up with some work ab jaldi se ek aur story liko aur yeh tumhari jappi for duch woderful poetry🤗

Hi Jyothi..... areeeyy sorry kyun kehti ho... kitni baar kaha Sorry nahi kahona.😊i canunderstnad... jaldi se ek aur story..instead of the short story i have i thought to post soemthing else.. so workign on it..and as it finishes i will post it soon.. ..awww meri jhappi agayi😳 wah kya baat hai.. meri poems ki itni tariff ..am really feelgin so nice...🤗

As usual am the last to com...enjoyed reading this one again...luvely story n the poems were awesome...

luking frwd to the next one...

Originally posted by: binidoshi

As usual am the last to com...enjoyed reading this one again...luvely story n the poems were awesome...

luking frwd to the next one...

Hi Bini,

looking forward to the next one...???? ehheeh u will be surprised dear.its a totally new ff..and yup which u havnt read.. will be postign soon... hope u like it..and love u dear for always praising me (i dotn deserve i know) am learnign..but still al the kind words make me to feel i can... & that always helps..