new FF- PM- Toh Phir Aao- Part 3 page 2

Ok im going to start a new fan fic called Toh Phir Aao

This is the Character sketch


Prem Bajaj: 24 years old, very arrogant,keeps his cool on everything, lives with his family at Bajaj House, doesn't know Mukti yet. He had been living in USA for university, now hes coming back.


Mukti Deshmukh: 23 years old, is also coming back form studies in the USA and she is very sweet, very intelligent, has a very loving older brother who is living in Bajaj house, their parents died in a car accident.


Shreya Bajaj:25 years old. Mukti's best friend! she also lives in Bajaj house, falls in love with Mukti's older brother but not yet! she is played by Shreya Saran.


Ritesh Deshmukh: 26 years old. Mukti's older brother, he loves her more then him self, they have a big secret behind their parents accident. He soon falls in love with Shreya. he is played by Ritesh Deshmukh!

This is the begining.

We see a girl, shes running, why we dont know....
Girl: Aih!!!! Koi Hai!!! mujhe help karo!!!!! I NEED TO CATCH THIS TRAIN!!!!!
We see shes running after a train.
Girl: Help i need to catch this train!!!!
She sees someones hand out... she quicly grabs it.
The person pushes her in...
Girl is just staring at the person...
The other person is staring at her too.
Guy: Names Prem... Prem Bajaj...yours?
Girl: Mukti... Mukti Deshmukh...
Mukti: Ek minute....
Prem: Yes?
Mukti: Tumara last name kya hai?
Prem: bajaj...
Mukti: ohhh heyyyy tum tooo... some one pushes her and she lands on prem... they stare at eachotehr again...
Mukti: Sorry... Tum to Mrs.Prerna Bajaj ke bete ho, na?
Prem: Haan tumhe kaise pata?
Mukti: ooohhhhhh..... yaad hai? chote bache... pani mein... tumare trousers..
Prem: Mukti!!!????
Mukti: hannn!!!!
Prem: Oh im gonna get u back on that one!!!!
Mukti: Kher choro, tum train mein kaise?
Prem: mein toh USA jeya tha for studies... aurtum?
Mukti: Mein Bhi!
Hours and hours went by and they were just chatting the whole way there.
Anouncement: Hum kuch hi dher mein Mumbai poonchenge toh ap logh apne bags tiyar karen.
Mukti: oohhhhh! Choti maa! i cant wait to see her!
They get off the train....
Mukti: Choti MAA!!!!!

how do u like is so far should i continue ???
please let me know soon???

nice start but don't 4get ur other ff. U still need to update them as well. continue soon please

awesome, something NEW!! luv it! plz continue! 👏

(btw: THANK U so much for starting a new ff about prem and mukti..im getting annoyed with all the millions of ff's based on Kripa and Angad 😆 )

Originally posted by: Patel 1993

nice start but don't 4get ur other ff. U still need to update them as well. continue soon please

which other ff is being written? 😳

hey continue soon please 😊

Part 2

Mukti: Choti Maa!!!!!
Prerna: Arre Mukti? Tu Kaisi Hai?
Mukti: Mein bilkul theek, Ap kaisi hain? Aur...(whispers) Bhaiya kaise hain?
"Khud hi pooch lo..."
She looks back to see Ritesh,
Mukti: Bhaiya!!!! she runs to him and gives him a big hug.
Prerna: Mukti? Tu ne Prem ko dekha? she turns towards Mukti.
Prem: Kyun na peeche mur kar dekiye.
Prerna turns back slowly,
Prerna: Prem... she hugs him.
Prem: Well, im here, kaisa lagh raha hoon mein?
Prerna: Kitna Badal geya tu.
Prem: Ofcourse, you want me to stay that little?
Prerna: Acha to agle fate Sneha ki Shaadi hai, toh mein abhi bata rahi hoon take tumhe yaad ho, yaad hai jab tum chote they, jo bhi mein bolti thi, tum bhool jate they!
Prem: Yes I remember but now my memory works way better!
Mukti: Oh yeah mujhe yaad hai! Kitna bhool tha tha voh, har waqt…
Prem: Mukti… im not going to leave you!
Prerna: Bas Bas Bas now stop ghar bhi jana hai!
Ritesh: I think that will be better for the both of them.

On the Way home, Prem and Mukti were fighting like crazy, who wanted to sit where, what they wanted to eat at home first, everything!

Ritesh: Okay! Abh Chup ho jao!
Prem: Par yeh Mukti bhi nah…
Mukti: Prem, tum mujhe blame kyun kar they ho? Mein neh yeh shuru nahi kiya, tum ne kiya!
Prem: Tum bhi nah, bout… pointing his finger at her.
Ritesh: Please! Chup!
They finally reach home.

Anurag: Prem beta kaise ho tum?
Prem: fine dad!
As you've realized Prem called Anu dad, so now Anu is his dad not Mr.Bajaj.
Anu: Kasia tha trip?
Prem: excellent, until I was coming home.
Anu: Kya hua?
Prem: Yeh Mukti bhi na, bohut bak thi hai! Iska naam Mukti, nahi Basanti ho na chahiye!
Mukti burns with anger!
Mukti: Prem! Im going to get you back on this one, get ready to run!
Prem: See Ya! He starts running. She starts running after him.
Prerna: Arre Yeh dono Bhi na.

While running

Prem: Arre Mukti, tumara naam toh Tasmanian devil bhi hona chahiye, tum itna fast bhi run kar sakti ho?
Mukti: Prem!!!! She had, had enough with Prem, so she ran up to him and pushed him, he fell face first into a mud puddle.
Prem: Ekkki!!! Yuck!!!! He spat out some mud that had come in his mouth, Ewww!!!
Now Prem was the one that was soooooo angry!
Mukti was laughing behind him.
Prem: Mukti!!!
He started chasing her back into the house.
Once they had entered Mukti tripped, almost fell, but Prem caught her in time, everyone was watching. They were staring at each other for minutes in front of everyone.

Prerna: Ehem Ehem, Prem and Mukti had got out of their thoughts.
Mukti j..j..Ji Choti Ma?
Prerna: Sorry to burst your, when i say your, i mean both of yours, bubble, but tum dono itni der ke liye kya dekh rahe they?
Anu: Aur voh bhi 'US' position mein?
Prerna raised her eyebrow at the 'US' he made.
Prem: Arre, kuch nahi, mein ne dekha tha ke us ke mo peh kuch hai, is liye mein us peh chipak geya.
Mukti: Kya, Jhoot!
Prerna: Prem aise nahi bolte
Mukti got upset and ran upstairs.
Sneha: Kya Prem, Ek larki po rulaiya!?
Prem: Meira yeh maksat nahi tha…
Anu: Abh Jao aur sorry bol! Jao!
Prem thinks: mujhe kya ho raha hai? Mein kabhi kisi larki seh is tarah dekh nahi karta…
Prerna: Jayega ya nahi?
Prem: Mein ja raha hoon!
He leaves.
But he doesn't go to Mukti's room, instead he goes to his room.

Mukti's room
Mukti: Im soo mad at him, im not going to forgive him, he isn't coming to say sorry!

End of part 2 hope you liked it, please comment!

awww i luved it 😛 ..awsome update please continue soon 😳

awwwwwwww so sweet. So PM are back to their old little fights and I think Prem is starting to fall for her.

Part 3

Dinner time!

Prerna: Arre, Mukti kidar gaye?
Anu: Prem???? Kya tu geya tha?
Prem: Nahi yeh mera style nahi hai!
Sneha: Jab kisi larki ka dil dukaya hai, toh phir sorry toh keni paregi
Prem: Par mein sory kyun kahun? Mein toh mazak kar raha tha, she should have known it was a joke
Prerna: Jao Varna…
Prem: But.. But…
Ritesh: Meri behin ko ruliya! Jao!
Prerna: Abh jao!
Prem: Fine!

He walks to Mukti's room

"Knock, Knock"
Mukti doesn't reply to the knock
Prem knocks again,
Mukti: Kaun hai???
Prem opens the door.
Prem: Hi…
Mukti: Prem Tum??? Jao yaha seh, she throws the pillow at the door.
Prem: aah, Mukti watch where you're throwing that thing, I came here to say sor…
Mukti: mujhe koi sorry vorry nahi suna jao yaha seh,
Prem: Mukti mujhe maaf kardo varna…
Mukti: Varna kya?
Prem: Ill kneel down and hold my ears until you accept my apology.
Mukti: Kardo mein nahi maaf karoungi tumhe
So as Prem says, he kneels down, and holds his ears.
Mukti starts laughing.
Mukti: Tum bilkul Bandar ke tarah dikh the ho! Hah
She laughs even more.
Prem: atleast mein tumhe to hasaya. Abh chalogi niche? still holding his ears.
Mukti: Nahi, folding her arms and turning the other way.
Prem: Chalo nah, tumare dost bhi ayi hai.
Mukti: Kaun?
Prem: Tumare dost, Shreya, meri behen.
Mukti: kya Kabh?
Prem: Bas Abhi.
Mukti: Sach agar tum mujh se jhoot bol rahe ho toh phir mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karongi.
Prem: Chalo toh sahi.

So they go downstairs to find no one there.
Mukti: Prem mein ne kaha nah,
?: Mein Agayi !
Mukti and Prem look to see who it is and it's none other then Shreya
Mukti: Shreya!!! She ran to her and gave her a hug.
Mukti looks back at Prem and sees him smiling.
Shreya: Mamma, Papa! She gives them a hug also.
Prerna: Shreya, tu kaisi hai? Trip kaisa tha?
Shreya: Good, she looks around to see Ritesh…
Ritesh looks at her as if he were to fall in love,
Shreya walks up to him: Not bad looking, kitne saal hua aur tum itne badal gaye?
Ritesh: Tum bhi bohut badal chuki ho…
Shreya: In a good way I hope.
Ritesh: of course,
They stare at each other,
Prem and Mukti notice: Ahem, Ahem
Shreya and Ritesh notice them and look their way.
Mukti: Bhaiya chalein, kana, kana hai, nah.
Prem: Come on sis!
Shreya: Chalo Prem
They walk to the table and sit,
Prerna: Toh aj mein neh bohut dekh liya hai, Shreya.
Shreya chokes on her food.
Prem starts laughing at Shreya, Shreya burns with anger and chases him around the whole house like 10 times.
Prem: Bas bhi karo na yaar, mein toh tumare peh haas nahi ra tha, mein tho …toh…
Shreya: Meri hi upar haas rahe the.
Prem: No I wasn't!
Shreya: Toh kis ke upar, kane peh?
Prem: No, I mean ofcourse,
Shreya: Budhu kane peh kaise haas the hai? Mujhe toh bhi batao.
Prem: See you look at the food and if it looks funny u laugh.
Shreya: Budhu!
Prem: AIH bare bhai ko budhu nahi bolte!

The next morning.

Prerna: Arre, Mukti zaara Prem ko utana please
Mukti: Ok ek minute
She goes upstairs to Prems room,
Mukti: Prem! Utho!
Prem: Sone do Mother India!
Mukti: Mother India nahi Mukti
Prem: Chatter box, Mukti! Jao yahan seh mujhe sona hai.
Mukti: Fine! She goes to the washroom and grabs some water in her hand and goes and throws it on Prem's face.
Prem starts screaming and grabs Mukti's hand and pulls her towards him, (He is laying on the bed and she is practically laying on top of him)

Mukti: Choro mera haath Prem.
Prem: Nahi kya karogi tum
Mukti: Mein Choti ma ko bulaungi.
Prem: Mein tumhe nahi karne dounga, you pulled my pants down, you sprayed water on me, now thats 2 things i have to pay you back on.
Mukti: Mujhe choti ma ne sirf tumhe ko utane ke liye bola tha, abh uto aur mera haath choro.
Prem let go of Mukti and got out of bed.
Prem thinks: Mein ne aisa kyun kya? Why did I want to be that close to Mukti?

Thats where im ending it today... hope you liked it, please comment.

does no one like my fan fic?