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He was lost in his laptop. His eyes were fixed on the screen and the thin lines of frown on his forehead were telling loud and clear that he wasn't able to do what he intended to. The screen flashed again and a dialogue box appeared on the screen for the third time....

"Access is denied."

"This bloody minister is all prepared this time. Never mind... I m gonna get him."

He again got down to his work with all his concentration that was broken with a peculiar sound.

"Oh no! This nuisance is up!" He was talking to himself until that 'nuisance' himself walked up to him.

"Dude… tum kar kya rahe ho… You could have at least got me out of this sari. I got tripped again."

"Yeah sure! Who do you think you are? Draupadi aur main Dushasan jo tumhara cheer haran karunga. Get dressed urself… Baaki tumhari dressing to maine kar hi di hai."

"Pehle khud aise weird se ideas dete ho & now… Mujhe samajh nhin aata ki main tumhein tolerate kyun karta hoon?"

"Kyunki you need me to mastermind your plans and then to save your skin when you goof up."

"Hello! Main…"

"Shut up & look at this file." He cut him in between.

He opened the file & scanned it quickly.

"Shit man! This information is incomplete. What are we gonna do now?"

"See that's where you need me… Now listen… Tumhare sources ke hisaab se he keeps all his information safely either in his office or in his Lonawala Bungalow."

"Matlab I need to enter his bungalow now. But this time he might have increased the security."

"Not just increased… he's put it at high alert."

"Tumhein kaise pata?"

His lips twitched at the end in the answer and he looked back at Yudi for the first time in all this while and winked at him.

"No… No way… You are not serious… You aren't actually again into… Hacking!"

"Hacking??? I m just scrutinizing their security systems…That's it!"

"Alekh…"

"Yesss!!" He shrieked in excitement. He wasn't even listening to him.

The screen went blank for a moment and a mechanical voice filled the room as a banner of 'Virtual Security Systems' flashed on the screen.

"You have now entered the Security Arena."

He was now inside their computerized security system. With every single key stroke he was entering deeper into the highly protected lanes of the virtual world.

"Alekh… Don't yaar. You know hacking is illegal. Tune hacking chod di thi na… isi condition pe we decided to work together. Remember."

"Yudi… I know what I m doing. By the way, breaking into minister's office is also a crime. And just in case you think you can break into this place as easily as his office… forget it!"

There was a silence that prevailed into the room. Both of them knew it was the only way out. Besides it wasn't for them. It was for the betterment of the society. That minister had to be exposed and for that they need proofs that were lying safely behind those strong walls. There was only one sound - that of the keyboard that could be heard for the next few minutes and the screen kept changing quickly and it appeared as if they were passing through the maze of strange lines and other geometrical figures those were flickering on the screen.

Alekh looked too occupied and pensive. He was studying different images and text that kept popping up occasionally for around another 2 hours. While Yudi unable to figure out anything going on in front of him, scanned the file in great detail to ascertain the amount of damage this piece of information could mean to the corrupt minister.

This was surely going to be the breaking news… His biggest ever.

Suddenly Alekh kept aside his laptop and took out a chart paper and a pencil and started making some lines on it that looked really inane to Yudi. At the end of another half an hour he was ready with the blue print of the Bungalow marked with three different colors at different places.

"Check this out now." He called out Yudi and continued.

"This is the blueprint of the bungalow… The red markings shows the position of the CCTV cameras inside the bungalow which unfortunately for you, is being monitored not just at the control room of this place which apparently is in the basement but also at the control room of the security agency. The green markings are the position of security alarms which are more concentrated in this area towards the back which I would presume to be our target and finally these blue markings. These are the extra sensitive sensors which can detect any kind of movement and instantly ring the security alarm."

"Bloody!! How do we break in here? Mujhe to lag raha hai hum Kohinoor churane jaa rahe hain."

"Correction… Hum nahin tum… I'll only sit back and enjoy the show."

"What? But how will I break in."

"Do options hain tumhare paas. First either let me HACK in and control this system for you."

"Cancel…cancel…cancel! Dusra option batao."

"Woh mujhe kya pata… Tum socho!"Saying this Alekh reclined against the back of his chair and stretched out to relax his body that has stiffened after a long work session.

Yudi took some time to think it over…time long enough to take his call…Compelete two seconds!

"Tum kya kar sakte ho?"

A big smile surfaced on Alekh's face and he almost jumped out of his chair. He was excited at the thought of doing something that has been his favorite task for long.

"Simple…I'll manipulate the functioning of the CCTV cameras to repeat a certain recording over and again. Censors can be disabled by passwords and alarms will be turned off for a while… I'll take care of that."

"How?"

"I'll ring them repeatedly once I hack into the mainframe of the security agency. And obviously if the bell gives out fake alarms then they'll have to switch it off for the time till someone from the agency comes to fix it up."

"And that's where I'll step in."

"Bang on!"

"Great! When do we do it?"

"This afternoon... Sharp at 3 you'll enter the bunglow to check the security system."

"Perfect... Its 4 in the morning… 11 hours to go then."

"By the way…If I am not wrong we were supposed to go somewhere last night."

"Shit! Man…I m so DEAD! Main to aaj afternoon tak mission ke liye survive bhi nahin karunga yaar. She's gonna kill me."

"Who?"

"Naina…Kal uska Birthday tha. I was the one to insist her to meet me at Sins."

"And you didn't turn up. Good. May your soul rest in peace then."

"Shut up Dude. Ab main kya karoon?"

"Pehle tell me where did I fit into all this. Why was I supposed to accompany you?"

"Oh that! I had planned a surprise for her."

"I m seriously not liking this hunch that is telling me you were to screw up again."

"Come on yaar…Main to tum dono ke liye sirf ek blind date arrange kar raha tha…And I m sure you won't mind… She's a stunner. Kehne ko fashion photographer hai but believe me she could have been a perfect model if she ever wanted."

The very next moment Yudi felt choked with Alekh's strong hands strangling his neck. His eyes showed his anger & his fingers were firm against his neck. Yudi tried to say something but nothing more than a squeak could he manage. His face was turning pale within a few seconds until Alekh let him go.

"Don't even think on those lines again…I m happily married with my Childhood sweetheart…Mrs. Dipika Alekh Sharma…Do you get this thing clear enough?"

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Okie Wo kya hai na Alekh ki heroine ka kuch scope nhin mil rha tha so I sed lets show he's married.....n then LRLT (its a comm on orkut...in case u guys dont kno) pe officialy Dipsie & Bittu ki wedding ho chuki hai to uske liye bride dhoondhne ki bhi maine zehmat humnein nhin uthayi😉...hehe.....

Ne-ways...A very happy Valentines day to all of u!!

Nxt update is due on MONDAY.......so I shall c u guys directly on Sunday....my xms r on!!!

Hope u guys likd this update.......I hve tried to keep this long...isse lamba nhin kar sakti. W8ing for ur replies.....
Luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv uuuuuuu allllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!! sorry for not commenting!!!! U know I am soo mad at sbs for showing raj at 11:30 am i.e the repeat timings...how can they show a live episode at the repeat timings...huh 😡 .


Anyways, Its a great Job done by you and Dipika diiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!! wonderfu FF👏 . First Update in awsome.And Aalekh ko to aapne kahaan se kahaan pahuncha diya 😆 .Bittu became a computer genius 😆 😆 😆 .And yudi ki entry is too good.
Ab waiting for monday....jaldi karooooo!!!!! 🤗
Edited by SAHELIGSWM - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
superb update yaar.its nice.but yaar start revealing d secrets atleast a little bit.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmm.. nice update.. but itna kuch hua nahin.. guess ur building a framework for the story first.. lekin bittu itna smart kabse ho gaya... and dipika is his wife.. hehe.. cho cute.. so naina is not in the army.. yaar.. main bahut confused hoon.. aalekh is some sort of ex-hacker.. yudi is as confused as ever.. naina ia a fashion photg.. n raj.. who we dont know is raj or not.. is some sort of superman.. n then the mysterious gentleman who saved naina.. must be huda or raj.. so basically by now i am truly and thoroughly confused out of my wits.. really sanya.. plz.. start unravelling something atleast..or i might end up insane.. phir toh main thanks bol bol kar tere bhi dimaag ka dahi kar doongi.. (in bittu-tongue) haha.. lol.. anyways.. jaldi update karna.. apun is.. woh kya bolte hain.. waitingggggg!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice

still yaar
story abhi tak suspense fil hai

enjoying

pl continue

great going both of u
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwww what an update 👏 👏 👏 alekh is a hacker cool, i never knew alekh had it in him from a tapori to a computer genious wow what a transformation 😆 but yeh kya he always makes yudi do the dangerous jobs first making him wear a sari to steal a file and now to break into a bungalow god bless the poor soul, i feel really sorry for him,i really love this character of him though and naina is his friend who is a fashion photograper and he was trying set up a blind date for her and alekh 😆thankgod alekh is married waarna what would happen to raj,any ways their is still alot of things going on that has confused me to no ends, first of all who was that saviour on the plane if that was raj who was the one saving naina, even though i think that both were raj,i still am very confused, and another thing is this anything got to do with army 😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice one Sanya..Reallyy cool.. I luv Yudi in dis..soo sweettt..!! waiting for the next update!!😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Hii guys,
I m sryyyyyyyyy I cnt reply individual comments...I m veryyyyy tired & not feeling too wellll...Bt thanxxx for ur lovely replies...Luuuv ya guys...
N now we'll directly get dwn on kaam ki baatein...
Updting in 5 mins!!!
C ya......
luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv u all!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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"childhood....sweetheart...Dipika...
shit!!...you're bloody married!!!"
yudi was in a daze...

"you bet i am!...
and i love her far too much...
so don't you ever...ever ...think that i'll ditch her for some..some..!"
aalekh's knucles had turned purple in shade....

yudi finally overcame the shock...
and grinning..he replied...
"spoken like a true husband!...congratulations!
tu to bahut chupa-rustam nikla yaar!
by the way...meri bhaabhiji hai kahaan?"

"you see...."
he replied sarcastically...
"i tend to keep her away from all the maniacs that
hover around me..!"
he pointed a finger straight at yudi....

"yeah right!...i wonder how she's coping having married
a maniac like you!"

"oh she's doing great!...
and just in case you remember....
we're not really here to discuss my lovelife...
or the one you were trying to get me into!"

"oh hell!...dat reminds me...
yaar...i'm so dead!...
ek to waise hi naina hates celebrating her birthday...
i forced her into coming ...aur agar galti se...
i would've hooked her to a married man...
gosh!....i can actually see myself lying in a morgue!"

"so...how're you feeling now?"
aalekh tried to change the topic....
a bit embarassed now...

"lying in a morgue....not too great my friend!!"

"saala duffer hai!...how's the pain in
your limbs you idiot?"

"oh...better hai...
par mujh jaise...a...a..."

"buddha!"

"shut-up dude!...mujhe jaise bechaare ke sar par
tune itne kaam daal diye hain ki ab kya bataaon!!..."
aalekh rolled his eyes...kya nautanki hai...!

"i'm kidding man!...and i'm absolutely fit...and ready to hit the floor!
chal..main nikalta hoon...last minute stuff pack karna hai...
afterall chor ke ghar jo chori karni hai!!"
he winked...and left....

aalekh reclined slowly on his armchair..
lost in the thoughts of his better half.....
..........................................

meanwhile...
two men were having an argument of sorts...

they stood in a weird chamber...one so large in size..
that it could actually fit ten bungalows in it!

it was located on the outskirts of mumbai..
in an absolutely serene...yet...heavily guarded place....!

they were surrounded by nothing but gigantic screens and computers...
and since the chamber was closed with nothing but glass...
they could see the wide empty land outside..
as well as the enormous sky looming in front of them...

anyone who was a first time visitor in this area
would've been shocked to the core after seeing the enormous dimensions
of this hall...but not these men....

while one had been a frequent visitor here...
the other had spent many years working there....

"why me out of all the people?..."
the man was irritated...and seemed to be there out of some
gratitude and compulsion instead of pure will....

"why not?!...you're the best to handle stuff like this...
and you know dat!..."

"you exaggerate!...besides..
main ....i didn't want to come back here in the first place!"

the other guy stepped forward and held the first one's shoulder..
shaking him hard...

"wake up dammit!...you're an indian...!
and the country needs you....
you're not the only one who's suffered a loss yaar....
meri haalat bhi tumse kuch acchi nahi hai!
we were best friends!"

"par main...."

"dekh yaar....i'm not going
to try and talk you into it anymore.....

tu waapis jaana chaahta hai...to yahi sahi...par
main jaanta hoon ki kahin andar hi andar tu bhi yahi chaahta hai...

you're not one of those men jo kisi ki baaton mein aa kar
koi kaam karta hai....
you left NASA ..and came here because you 'still' love this nation...
not because i asked you to.... ...
tu jaanta hai ki tu yeh kar sakta hai!
if not for me...not for the country..
then let's do it for.....
i think we both owe 'the' matryr atleast this much......"
his voice had softened....

the other one looked up...
his face hard enough....stiff....
as if he was overcome by emotions yet again....
remebering dat one face...that still haunted his memories...
afterall...hadn't they actually spent so many years together...
as friends..as companions..
joking...laughing...

he gripped a chair nearby and sat down...

"i have to report back to my job within a week...
you have to brief me about the entire problem as soon as possible..
aur agar phir mujhe lagta hai that i can help you...

mind you...i'm not doing this out of any patriotism...!!

to main ruk jaaoonga...
i'll finish my task...and quickly get out of here...."
he added crisply..


the first man nodded...a smile on his lips...
tum maano ya na maano...you're here only for one reason.......
.....YOU LOVE YOUR COUNTRY MY FRIEND!


"alright....here goes....
India was planning to set up an information network that would be spread
across metro cities here . This information system would
basically store all kinds of defense secrets, details of
Monetary transactions of states & the country with other
international organizations including the indian monetary fund...and the world bank...,
trade agreements with European Union countries & defense agreements with the Russian & British
army for world peace."


"jaanta hoon...Apart from this india has entered into a tech agreement
with USA & this sytem was to keep an eye on major nuclear vehicles across the globe.

All this was to be monitored with a satellite right???

anyway UN has given lot of consideration
to all this.....yahaan tak ki...
it has also decided ...(yeh andar ki baat hai by the way...not to be leaked out)
to make india a permanent member...if....the launch is carried out successfully!!
......yeh sab to puraani khabar hai boss..
and having worked with United Nations for so long...
i know about all this....kuch taaza hai to bataao!!"

"impressive!.....theek hai...
to ab main tujhe andar ki baat bataata hoon...."

and in those enclosed...confined hall...
two smart...talented ...genius minds cracked their brains
on an issue that would change their life for years to come...

after about two hours....


"shit!....yeh to kaafi serious hai!...
what i don't understand is...ki main kahaan fit hota hoon is sab mein?
aur current status kya hai?"

the man sighed..
"Indian secret services and the
Army Intelligence has been asked to coordinate together with you guys.."

he pointed his finger out into the fields...

and the other man saw a gorgeous beauty outside...
she was stylish...sexy...long-legged...extremely hot..
a perfect model.....and was lying calmly on top of him...
a handsome figure...hotter...ready to be blown away by her...

it was KARMA....India's first defense space satellite..
settled calmly on DHARMA...the rocket that was to launch it...

the man's eyes widened...
"wow!...quite a technology...
but the design seems familiar..."

"obviously....tumhaara hi design hai boss!..
one you made 5 years back..."

"oh...anyway...you still haven't answered..
why me???"

the man sighed...

what an impossible man!!

" you've been with NASA....
and your genius mind has created all those supercomputers...and
unimaginable designs of many satellites....
and you've also had the experience of working with the UN..
and you've created security systems for protecting billions
of dollars and foreign exchange with the world bank...and......."

"fine!!....ab channe ke jhaad par mat chada!
i need time....i really have to think about all this...."

"but are you in it with us?"

the man stared at the questioner...
and walked away without replying....

the first one smiled....

silence..this man was a gem...
a man of few words...but when he spoke...nothing but wisdom
radiated through....and undoubtedly....he was a genius....
bas.....yeh yahaan rukne ke liye haan kar de...!

"accha listen!...."

"ab kya hai colonel??"

"well.....i've been given the responsibilty of this mission...
and have been asked to set up a team...
to...."

"to kya?"

"ummm...i'm counting on you ...
and we need to make a team..."

"team?....sorry!...i don't trust anyone...
if i work...i work alone..."

"but...."

"look colonel...the last time i worked with a team...
i lost my partner....aur ab.."

"but this mission is too large to be handled alone!!...
you do need a team...look...ek kaam karte hain....
you decide on the team members...and i'll do so too...
aur jo main chose karoonga...you can verify facts about them....
chalega?"

the man was reluctant....

"come on!....colonel hoon yaar....
i'm not that stupid!...trust me!"

the man sighed....
"fine!....two things then...
pehli....jisse bhi tu choose kare...tell him to stay out of my way...
i'm not going to take any shit from anyone...and no one asks me
any personal questions....clear?"

the colonel nodded....

"secondly....i've zeroed down on a man that i need immediately...."

"wow!..that's fast....you're damn efficient...
isiliye i called you here....!
kaun hai...aur kahaan?"

"kahaan...i have no clue!...
kuch saal pehle to mumbai mein hi tha...."

"great!...you've made the whole thing so easy....
mujhe dhoondne mein koi problem nahi hogi!!"

"look!...stop being sarcastic!....
or i'll walk off"
the man replied calmly....

"phir dhamki!...you've become absolutely hot-headed!...."
patthar ho chuka hai....emotionless....
but then.....he knew why this man was behaving like this...
"is janaab ka koi naam hai by the way?"

"aalekh...aalekh sharma..."

"what??!!....you mean...woh...woh aalekh jo...."

"haan..wahi aalekh...my biggest competitor...
rival....and a man whom i respected immensely..."


"yeh wahi hai na....the hacking expert jisse..."


"jisse baahar nikaal diya tha
secret service mein se because 'illegally' he had saved the
nation from being bombed out!....

absolutely outrageous!....that guy was a mastermind ...
jo ab pata nahi kahaan ek wasted life jee raha hoga....

but on second thoughts...he was a fighter....and i bet
woh abhi bhi jee-jaan laga raha hoga is desh ki sewa karne ke liye....

huh!....you know what?...you shouldn't take the risk of appointing me
on a sensitive mission like this...
i really do detest this country....yahaan ki corruption...red-tapism..
bureaucracy...institutions...politicians..."

"shut-up!!!....don't start that all over again please!"

"well...it really has become a part of me !...."
the man succumbed to a bit of grief that he had
been feeling ....ever since he had come here.....to INDIA....

the land where political will could destroy lives.....
the land where nothing but money made all the difference...
the land where people were brutally tortured and killed....
just like....

damn!....
the man took a deep breath...
he had to calm down..he had to be normal...in control
of his emotions.....

"kahaan kho gaye tum?"

"kahin nahi colonel saab!....
i'll do it...yes...i'm in it...."

"great then...!!..."
the other man smiled...
"welcome to MISSION PARINDA ..."

the other smiled sarcastically....
"mission parinda...well-suited name indeed...!"

"it has a double meaning to it....
for we also need to cut the wings of those birds
who're trying to break this indian nest...
who're aiming for nothing but destruction...."

"well...badi-badi baatein karne se kuch nahi hoga...
find that man...and by the way...
i want my team together in 48 hours!"

waving...the man strolled away...
leaving the colonel in daze...

"why do i have the feeling that i'm
already being ordered around???
i thought i was the colonel!!!!"
shaking his head...he began his work....

a phonecall to the president was made at the outset...
informing that the mission was on...

as the other man stepped out onto the road...
he wondered if he had done the right thing by accepting....

as far as he knew this country...
all wrong things were always being supported...
and the right ones obstructed...

how could this mission be carried forward without
any hiccups when it was so good for this nation ???

he looked back at the building...
feeling a sudden pride arise in his heart after many years...

his gaze drifted to the rocket...and then to the hoarding that
boldly gave away the name of this destination...

THE INDIAN SPACE RESEARCH ORGANISATION....

he felt as if he was back..
back in the true sense...back to where he belonged....

at that moment one question ran through about 10 odd minds...
simultaneously...
minds that hardly knew each other....
minds that were dedicated...disciplined...patriotic...
minds that lay across different regions....

'what the hell was happening to their economy?????'

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