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sanya dear first of all welcome back yaar🤗 i missed you & your writing very badly... ab me fulltoo khush that you are back.. 😊 😛 😃 ab sanya coming to thje story like all your other stories even this fanfic of your's has a different concept.. it is so interesting.. abhi se me getting more and more curious yeh sochthe sochthe kii agge kya hoga..this is the kind of impact your stories have on me..the first and second parts were writtemn very well by dipika & you... just too good yaad like always.. i seriously love the way you write... it is so different...in the first part the man's celverness was cooll..simply amazing..and i think that has to be our hero Raj...aur phir coming to the second part..second part mein bhi i think the gentleman Naina was referring too was Raj again... i liked Naina's irritation after reading the letter..uska ghussa... agar abhi itna ghussa aaya Naina ko tho socho if in the future she will come face-to-face with that person..aur usse patahj chale kii yahii hai woh gentleman tho uska kya haal karegi.. hehehe... really very well written parts..your story rocks & so does your writing style..simply superb.. keep up the good work going.. 👏 dear please do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

@ Suri
Hey suri.....Guud to see u & ur usual loooong reply again!!!!Waise a few fill in d blanks are already here...keep guessing n Thanxxx a lot darling!!!(Sryy m in a rush...kal se paper hain😔
Luuuv ya.....

haaaaaaaaahahahaaaaa.. yudi in a saree.. 😆 dude thats hilaaaaaaaaaarious.. n the last line.. whose goin to get him out of the saree.. lol.. too much yaar.. bless the file jiske liye yudi ko itne papad belne pade.. hahaha.. bechara.. runnin in a sari.. geez.. i find it difficult even in a salwar kameez.. hats off to yudi.. but i'm surprised when the guards pulled his hair how come the wig didnt come off.. unless yudi is sporting long locks in ur fic.. lol.. but its ws a good part.. wonder whats in the file.. good job.. waiting for the next one.. update soon plz.. thanks..

Hey Sanya and Dipika..Loved it totallyy.. I m reallyy waiting for the next update now..Fab Guys!!😳👏

ye sanya luved d update.its rocking.plz reveal d secret mystery guy soon.plzzzzzzzzzz

🤣 <--- i was like that when i found out that yudi was in the sari, it just reminded me of the scene in freshers ball where he dressed up like madonna, god i miss him, any ways that was quite a suspense i must say i actually never realised that the women wasn't a women it was actually yudi 😆 😆 the minister must have been thinking what the hell, my wife's in the house then what the hell are these journalist on about 😆 😆awwwww bless yudi having to run in a sari, i know how hard it is, i can't walk in one, i remember saying this is the last time i am wearing a sari but i still did after that any ways lets not get into that, the update was amazing, my favourite dialogue
"can you like shut-up?!....
meri band baji hui hai yahaan!

maar-maar ke bharta bana diya hai mera...
aur tu bakwaas kiya jaa raha hai!

i was laughing hard at this part 😆 😆 as well as feeling sorry for him having to get beaten up bless the poor guy.

from this part i could gather that him and alekh are not army officers, so is this not going to be about army but about something else.

hey sanya and dipika

both your parts were excellent

thodi aur pace lao yaar

reveal the characters soon dear

well all in all a good one

pl continue soon

@ khnk_rox
Hm....good point...may be uska make-up man achche waala hoga tabhi he tucked his hairs so very well.....lolll.....Bt lemme remind u thanx are not allowed!!!!!Dekha itne dinon mein tussi bhool gaye!!!😃
Update cming up rite away!!!

@ desi344
Glad u luvd it!!!!😃

@ angelic eyes
Thanxx Yoj!!!!Nxt update cming up rite away!!!!

@silentlove
mystery guy....chalo lets see how soon can we do that!!!Waise humein bhi nhin pata yeh kab hoga....u c we hvnt worked oout plot properly n both r running xtremely short of tym these days!!!!😔

@iqbal-pallavi
Gosh Yasmin...yaar I luuuuv wearing sarees...bhaagne ka try to nhin kiya abhi tak bt last sem mein we had a seminar n i was in d organizers so maine subah saree mein bus mein commute kiya pehle then saara din 4 floors pe up & dwn...arrangements chk karna n everything....last minute rudsh mein literally to nhin bhaagi bt bhaag daud kafi ki thi saree mein!!!!!!!!
& nvr mind abt Ud getting all d beatings...woh kya hai na...itni sweetu se replies uske chot p[e marham lagane ka kaam karenge😊😉

@ Yoginisahakari
I kno abhi pace missing hai bt kya karein yaar....my xms r on n Dips is stuck wid her prsntns n tests!!!Bt here on chars will begin to b revealed .