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Posted: 17 years ago
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Cool I love the video and the poster I love how you have Priyanka,Rajeeva and Vikas in the Fanfic I hope its Love Triangle and Naina likes Huda and Huda likes Naina! 😛


Huda and Naina Rock! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sanya diiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!.Main bhi kuch kahun?? 😃

Iss FF section mein:

Aap aayi to bahaar aayi
Aur bahaar ke saath saath
Hum bhi aa gaye 😆

Me bad in making poems. Aapka woh lovestation waala aaj tak yaad hai 😍 .

Waise start kab karing???

And haan dipika diii ko bhi mera biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigggggggggggggggggg congoooooooooooooo for starting another FF .

Me still reading Roller coaster 😭 😭 . Ab tak poora nahin hua...par jitna hua usse i can say....I almost start rolling on the floor reading it 😆 .

Jaldi Jaldi start karo...cant wait 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey well come back

waiting for it

well wont be able to read regularly because of work

but definately will comment after reading every part.


jaldi karo
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey well come back

waiting for it

well wont be able to read regularly because of work

but definately will comment after reading every part.


jaldi karo
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey well come back

waiting for it

well wont be able to read regularly because of work

but definately will comment after reading every part.


jaldi karo
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Update ke liye kitne zor se chillana padega 😭 .Update dooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ohehoyee.. So U Guys are Back.. Was dying to read a NEW FF.. yeh toh sone pe suhaaga.. Waiting for the FF now..😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hiii.sryyyyyy for being late bt here goes the first update written by Dipika:



PART – 1

This flight from New York to Mumbai was special for a number of reasons...

it was to mark new beginnings..

was a stepping stone to a new life...

and a detachment from the past...

the end of something that had begun beautifully but had been marred by violence..

and the deepest of loss...by death...

this flight was a call...a call for help from a dear one....

but it was special in another way....

for this flight....stood HIJACKED!

his fingers were busy typing away an important draft

..something to do with certain global financial reforms...

and he was quick....

so friendly with his lap-top...

dat he didn't have to bother even looking down at the key-board...

so he simply gazed away into the blue skies...as his fingers paved way

for a change in the financial world market scenario....

when suddenly a scream rent the air....

"no one moves!!!..."

three ruthless men stood up....guns in their hands..

his hands ceased from typing...

and he looked up....unmoved...unnerved...

his gaze shifted to the guns in the hands of those hooded men,

and he couldn't help appreciating the make of the guns...

they were latest...sleek...smooth...shining...

the gadget freak that he was...he wished to hold them in his hands for he truly

believed that only a man with the courage to be in front of the gun...

should be the one pulling the triggers too...

and facing bullets had been his pass-time....or maybe his hobby....

or profession....until....until everything had changed....

he sighed....as the terrorists took controls of the plane from the pilot..

throwing him out....

yawning....he shut down his laptop...

and instead began working on his palm-top...

so that he could avoid catching the eyes of those careless freaks...

back at the airports...the traffic controllers were disturbed...

stunned...and absolutely worried...

for a flight was constantly causing problems..

it was changing its route..and that would mean nothing but a delay

in the flightplan of several other routes ...

the only reason that this could be happening terrified them ...

the plane had to be hijacked...

and then...all of a sudden...the green huge screens

in the controller's rooms began fluctuating...

numbers changed...everything was going haywire....

someone...a mastermind was playing a game....

routes were being altered...layouts changed...

someone was meddling with the entire airport base across the globe....!!!!!

back in the flight...this man had a slight smile on his face..

as he played with numbers...it was like a puzzle..and he loved solving puzzles...

loved taking calculated risks....

but this time he was alert...

for a number of lives depended on his single move....

and finally after 15 minutes....a grin broke on his face....

he had access to the entire database of the airport..

and well...he was almost flying that plane now!!!!

with a few instant clicks the plane was out of control

from the hands of the terrorists and was back on its original track...

the screens at the control room back

at the airport were in its normal mode...

and the men in the rooms were stunned...

something had happened for the worse...

and had also been rectified...

were they all drunk?...

back in the plane..

"what the hell do u think you're doing?"

one of the men asked him...

as he smiled...keeping away his palm-top....

and stood up...

the guns were pointed straight at his forehead...

but he continued smiling....

"you crazy man??!"

another terrorist looked baffled at this passenger's guts...

"we'll shoot your brains out...!"

the man uttered no word...

he simply raised both his hands as if in defeat...

and the terrorists grinned...

"aah!..seeking the washroom eh?...

spineless indian!...."

and then .....the hijacker screamed...for someone was crushing his foot....

and before either could react...could retaliate...

the two found themselves being knocked out....

and were now unconcsious....lying on the floor....

the third came out quickly from the pilot's cabin..

and fired a shot at the handsome man who'd ruined their plans....

the man ducked...just in time....as if he had practiced

it throughout his life...and with two strides...and two punches

had knocked out the third guy too....

half an hour later....
the plane descended at the mumbai international airport...
amidst huge chaos..and terrified security personnels...

but to everyone's surprise..everything was absolutely normal...
no one was hurt...

three hooded men lay tied in the washrooms...

the passengers who had had a hard time believing
anything, quickly disembarked...
and were immediately surrounded by reporters who
by now knew that the plane had been hijacked....

"how many casualities?.."
the press was doing its job..

"none..."
a passenger answered..

"what happened exactly?"

"a man...he saved us all...
God Bless Him..."
an old grandfather was crying...hugging his little grandson...

"where is he?.."
the reporters looked around....
and so did the passengers...
but the man had vanished into thin air...

"he's gone...!!"

"can u describe him to us?"

"well...he was an indian..a brave indian...
exceedingly handsome...a business-man it seemed...
wore a long black coat...

a knock each..and every hijacker was down....
he was....he was...'wow'!"

the young girl was all praise for his saviour...
and well....her eyes really did search for that hero!


and then there were kids who told the
reporters their own theories...

"he was batman!...or maybe super-man..."

whoever he was....HE WAS SIMPLY THE BEST!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi sanya.. first of all.. a big WELCOME BAAAAAACK!!!! great to hv a fnatastic new ff to read.. n this one sounds really interesting n fast paced judging by the first part.. brilliant job.. piqued my interest.. hope to get the regular updates as we were used to.. i guess this man is raj.. who else can be superman after all.. poor terrorists.. haha.. didnt know wat hit them.. literally n otherwise.. cant wait for the rest of the characters to be introduced.. now i can say smthn i hvnt said to u for a loooooooooong time.. waiting eagerly for the next update.. haha..

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