Fan Fic: One Love *UPDATEDDPart 5 Page 12 - Page 5

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Posted: 20 years ago
#41
wow, awesome part, plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#42
that was graet...plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#43
its very nice
will u pls continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
#44
2 gooooood! 😃

plz continue! 😕

YummY 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
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part 4

She runs away and bumps to no one eather than joshhhh.

( info abt josh

(Josh has a little crush on Aisha '

Butt doesn't know that he is that.

Aisha doesn't have interest fore him

Butt very soon she haves some feelings)

Aisha doesn't notices him and says. Cant you see where you walk.

Aisha doesn't see him clear cuz he had a sunglases up and doesn't regocnizes him.

Josh : agar tum ko pata nahin me kaun hoon to tameez se to baat karliya karo. Aapne aap ko samajti kya ho haan

Ek pari jo taj mahal se aai hai and then he sets his sunglasses off now you can see him face

By the time kripa and aliya had heard their conversation

.

Butt when kripa wanted to shout on josh and hasent se the face off the guy

aliya pinches her

Kripa is shocked to see her brother.

Kripa says : uhmm bhaiyya aap yahan kya kar rahein hein.

Josh : kripa tum apni dost ko sambhalo jane kya me karne wala tha

Aisha ooiiiiii kya karne wale the han tum kya samaj te ho. Agar kisi larki ne koi galti kar li hain to wo kya uske liye maafi nahin maag sakti who larki.

Mein to tumse maafi maangne wali thi but now forget it

Josh to maine kab kaha tha ke tum mujse maafi mango maine sirf kaha tha ke tumhare paas koi tameez nahin hai

And finally laughs. Kripa and aliya to.

They 2 say humari bhi to tumne aise hi besti ki ti. Aur mazaak udaya tha.

Aisha says me tum dono ko nahin chodongi aur josh tum to dekhte raho me tumko deklaun gi.

Josh dekhlena dekhlena lekin ab ghar ajao tum tino kyun ke shaam ko party jo hai.

Kripa haan Bhaiya lekin abhi to 5 baje hain aur mama ne kaha tha 7 baje ke pehle ghar hona hai.

Haan meri pyari bhenon lekin ab 6 bhaj gaye hai

The three girl say whattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt and run to they car aliya screams to josh hum ghar chaltey hain aap bhi ajaye.

Josh goes to his car and says to them wanna race girls

Aliya kripa and Aisha say oke who the first home is can have the car off josh fore week

And if we lose is Aisha gonna dance with josh Aisha says what

And if josh loses is he going with us to delhi/

Josh says forget it. Butt after some minutes he says chalo phir race karte hain

Aisha aliya and kripa shout yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee as little kids

And josh just laughs.

Aisha counts 3 2 1 and startttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

The two car race to al the streets first right then left then righttttttttt and finallyyy they reach home the first one was kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

The girls say yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Josh say buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. This is not fair hun .kripa jaldichuru hoi thi kyun ki je mujse pehle chali gayi thi

Aliya and Aisha say ya sureeeeeeeeeeeeee in your dreams you cant take you it that you losed.

Josh says tum tino ko me kabhi bhi nahin chodonga and runs after them. When the three notice that he is running after them they go in the house and run to their mom and dad.

Suryabhan gets pissed of because he sees this cat and mouse fight everyday over and over.

Aliya screams because josh has grabbed her hand. And that one of kripa.

Dad aliya tum to aise kar rahi ho ke tum maria ka booth (ghost)dekha hai.

Aliya stands there shocked and runs to her room. Kripa says dad ye aapne kya kaha. Aliya remembers maria and prithvi

And here ends this part.

Guys in the next few parts that I will write will be the flashback off who maria was and how she met prithvi.

Abt angad manna n and Harshini will I cont butt after like 3 parts

Hope you don't mind it cuz I wanna tell you goes how aliya falled in love with prithvi.

Take care

Keep smiling

Love you all

and

Dont forget to comment

and tell everyone about this fan fic

i hop you guys wll do that.

and shivs check you pm box i am going to send you an message

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Posted: 20 years ago
#46
loverly aisha....u write really well..
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Posted: 20 years ago
#47
that was really nice hun. 👏
continue soon. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
aww aisha i luvd it yaar cont soonn 😊
Edited by newkidontheblok - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
dat was awesome
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
please continue... 👏

And who is this Maria????

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