Fan Fic: One Love *UPDATEDDPart 5 Page 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was great,plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thank you eveyone. and i promise i will continue soon.
darlingss today.
i have wriited it . but have to typ it thank you everyone.
i love you guys
happe you didnt tell iff you liked the jug idea
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23


nice job aisha..... do continue... its really novel!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
PLZ CONT URE DOING AN AWESOME JOB!!
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plzzzzzzzzz continue yaar
it's great 👏
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Guyssssssssss,
I am so sorry but yesterday I was writing a part 4 this but then some friends off my mom came and the ware talking and talking to me and my mother. And everybody that I didn't get time to post the part .
Sorry again forgive me please.
This is a long part for you sweetoos kiddoos.

A Mannan how dare you to talk so About my Qouzin happe( this is 4 you happe).
Have respect 4 her
M soryy u two

Go to the office they pick up 3 forms and information magazines abt that school and leave
They hang out chill at some places and go to the mall.

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😊 Usa 😊

8 am in the sweet morning

We see a girl riding in a Ferrari> She stops by a huge house.

The girl rings on the doorbell off the huge house.
A maid opens it and says. Ji aap kise milne aiie hai
G aap naeee heai kya me kripa ki dost hoon
M ji me ek naee maid hoon
G oh sorry maam.
M no its no problem you can go.
G ok. Butt feels a lill guilty.

She goes in the living room and sees aliya on the breakfast table. With gayatri


Its early in the morning when the sun shines in the face off a sweet and a pretty girl.
She dreams abt her dream boy. He looks very handsome . a pretty smile on his face he has a bodybuilder body. So hot and sexy but before she cold see him face. someone
screamss her name.
kripaaaaaaaaa. kripaaaaaaaaa. a girl comes in the room and jumps on the bed. the girl wakes up and sees her face.
G Aisha ( thats me. sonia you didnt told me that you are going to sett me in the fan fic how sweet off you)
K kya kar rahi ho idhar.
A Hmmmmm to kripa jee aapni beauty sleep far ma rahi hain. Ya to drea kar rahi thi. Khane ka Chinese, Indian fried chicken ice creams, lolly. Pizza.
budhu me tumko lene aee thi Delhi university ka form lene. 😛 😃 ( he guys isnt that the same school of Angad aaliya and mannan now everybody let me see your smilee.)
K oh god me to bhool hi gayi 😭 😭 😭 .
A Ji haan jaldi karo warna form khatam ho jaeenge. Kyun ke hum akele nahin hai jo je form lena chahtey hain. Kyun ke maine suna hai dusra students bhi music ke bare me sikhna chahtey hain. 😕
K acha baba mira ser ( head) mat khai me ati hoon
A. Jaldi karo na aliya aur aunty wait kar rahi hain
K tum neechay chalo me fresh aur tehiyar ho ke ati hoon
A fine jaldi karo. Kyun ke tayar hone me tum kitna waqt laga thi ho. Pehele ek shower phir kapre chouse karne me 30 minutes lagati ho. Phir make up aur phir apne wardrobe me se jothi mactch karo gi hahaha. Kripa look s angry and runs after her. And haves I will kill you look if you don't go immediately. Aisha runs out the room and goes downstairs.
Kripa puts the cd payer on and puts her favorite cd in it.
She goes in the shower. And then hears her song
The volume is very high. And you hear the song of ashiq banaya aapne.
The song aashiq banaya aapne ( I just love that song)

o o...
(aashiq banaya - 3 aapne ) - 2
(tere bin suni suni hain baahein
teri bin pyaasi pyaasi nigaahein
tere bin bin asar meri aahein) - 2
tere bin

(tere bin lamha lamha sataye
tere bin bekarari jalaaye
tere bin chain mujhko naa aaye) - 2
tere bin

(meri nigaaho mein tera chehra rawaa hain
gehre hain armaan jaane ja paagal samaa hain ) - 2
(apni daayre se toh main chutne lagi hu
tere baajuo mein aake tootne lagi hu ) -2
tere bin jeena nahi hain gawara
tere bin dil ka nahi hain gujara
tere bin kaun apna sahaara
(aashiq banaya - 3 aapne ) - 2

(bechainiyo ka faaslo ka silsila hain
dardejigar ka yeh sabab hamko mila hain ) - 2
(betaabiyo ne hamko chur kar diya hain
pass aane pe majboor kar diya hain ) - 2
tere bin raat kat ti nahi hain
tere bin pyas mit ti nahi hain
tere bin duri ghat ti nahi hain
(aashiq banaya - 3 aapne ) – 2

When the song finishes and kripa isnt yet out of the bathroom

Then the second song plays ( same movie aashiq banaya aapne )

Aapki kashish ( lovely song )

(aapki kashish sarfarosh hain
aapka nasha yu madhosh hain
kya kahe tumse jaane ja
gum hua hosh hain - 2) - 2
aapki kashish sarfarosh hain

baairiyan chav ka
jaadu joh chal gaya
deewana main ho gaya
dil machal gaya
halka dhuan utha
mausam badal gaya
roshan hua sama
parwaana jal gaya
jaagi re jaagi re main soyi
teri hi yaado mein khoyi
ab mera jahaan
teri aaghosh hain
aapka nasha yu madhosh hain
kya kahe tumse jaane ja
gum hua hosh hain - 2

duba rahu sada tere khayalo mein
uljha rahu sada tere sawalo mein
tere bina kahi ab na karaar hain
jaaneman tujh pe toh jaan bhi nisaar hain
jaana re jaana re maine jaana
tu mera tu mera deewana
na meri khata na mera dosh hain
aapka nasha yu madhosh hain
kya kahe tumse jaane ja
gum hua hosh hain - 2
aapki kashish sarfarosh hain
aapka nasha yu madhosh hain
kya kahe tumse jaane ja
gum hua hosh hain – 2

at the end of the song kripa comes out the towel is around her body she goes to her clothes wardorobe ( didnt you know that rich girl like kripa have that to ) .
she picks her Top with blue shiny letters dkny on it. With a soldier lillte skirlt bye her knies. Soldier pursue. An d blua heels ( love that matching).
Wears it quikly.
Does her make up and goes downstairs. She sees Aisha aliya and her mom eating breakfast. Fastly the girls eat fast the breakfast . aliya and kripa kiss her mom on ther forehead and leaves with Aisha. Al the 3 say bye.
Bacho jaldi a jana .
A and kripa say Ji mom.
They go in the Ferrari off Aisha and go to the office pick up 3 formds off the delhi iniversity and leave.
Later they decide to go to the mall. To buy clothes to wear in delhi.
hey i hope this is good 4 your guys dont forget to post your comments
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
that was a great part plz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
nice story but i had little trouble in reading as i didnt no who was talkin to who if u can put a little space in between the dialougues i guess itll be better
hope u dont mind wat i m writing.
but love ur story continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
that was great
plz cont sooon 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: zarna

nice story but i had little trouble in reading as i didnt no who was talkin to who if u can put a little space in between the dialougues i guess itll be better
hope u dont mind wat i m writing.
but love ur story continue soon

ZARNA I DONT MIND IT AT AL

I DO WHAT YOU GUYS WANT THAT WHY I SAY POST YOUR COMMENTS PLEASE TO LET ME KNOW WHAT I AM DOING GOOD AND NOT GOOD I WILL POINT THAT THANKS FOR READING MY FAN FIC

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