love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Wow.. superb part, Mia!! you really have good writing skills!
Keep it up!
waiting for the next!

hey....tnx fer d sweet comment!! lets c if i do well in d nxt part....hope u'll like dat one too!!😉😉

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: if.addict

hey Mia we are wiating for the next part sweety

hey kehan...promise i won't keep u waitin fer long!!😉😉

nd tnx fer such a quick response to my pm lol.....really app. it!!

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: sweet_supriya

its amazing!!!! 👏
continue soon.

tnx supriya.....will cont soon!!😉

luv Mia.

hey mia

thanks for the pm
sorry am commenting a bit late but this part was fab.
and the way u hav described each and every scene specially when armaan is staring at ridz and all was mindblowing. 👏
waiting for the next part.
Jia

awww....pixie..dats an awesum part yaar
armi desribin ridzi..omg..it just wooow..
cont asap.. 😉

Originally posted by: jia..

hey mia

thanks for the pm
sorry am commenting a bit late but this part was fab.
and the way u hav described each and every scene specially when armaan is staring at ridz and all was mindblowing. 👏
waiting for the next part.
Jia

tnx jia.....dats a very sweet comment!!!

d starin scene's ws a last minute improvisation.....m glad it worked out well!!😉😉

luv Mia.

awesome....i am no having words 2 describe it!!

da part wud hv bin boring widout da last minute improvisation! i m glad u added dat! cheers! 👏 👏 ....cont. soon.... 😊

Originally posted by: rhea26

awww....pixie..dats an awesum part yaar
armi desribin ridzi..omg..it just wooow..
cont asap.. 😉

i wanted him to be abso fascinated wid ridz.....m glad i ws able to get dat across...!!!

tnx fer such a lovely comment rhea..really app it!!!😉😉

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

awesome....i am no having words 2 describe it!!

da part wud hv bin boring widout da last minute improvisation! i m glad u added dat! cheers! 👏 👏 ....cont. soon.... 😊

wow...now m really glad i added dat!!!😆😆😉

tnx fer d lovely comment...

luv Mia.

your ff is pretty addictive...and Atul with attitude is quite a welcome change..so what else do you have in store for us? 😉