love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 5

hey mia its a very nice begining plz proceed im waiting for part 2 👏

Originally posted by: pixiecuty

u sure had me goin gud der Kat!!!😆😆😉

i just love ur ff.....nd ur comment means a lot to me....wow m soooo glad u liked it!!!😉😉

it tuk me a couple of days to finally post dis ff.....was not at all sure abt d reception.....all d ff writers here r just fab!!!!

tnx fer readin nd commentin.....nd ofcourse welcome aboard Mia's ff express!!!😆😉

luv Mia.

Mia u are sweet... believe me i know writting such things is hard work and toying with words as the scene appears.. so pat ur self on the back!!👏

Im am NO expert at these things and write how i feel most of the time... have fun and keep it up.

Love Kat😉

tru... u definitely shud continue wid it!....eagerly waiting 4 da next part... 👏 👏

hey pixie..
just read lil bit of ur FF
n i luuved it...
cont asap

tnk u guys fer all ur comments.........never expected soo many of dem!! 😉 😆
here's d nxt part...hope u all like it...


Chapter 1

"Ok,ok so tell me once more...why am I trying to jog with you at...gosh!! 5 in the morning!!?! RIDHIMAA.... decent people aren't even awake by now....i swear I have absolutely no idea how you manage to talk me into doing half of the things that i end up doing!!" Anjali remarked...in a thoroughly exasperated tone...

Grinning to herself... Ridhima turned to look at her sister and answered naughtily,
"di...really first off.. jogging is good for you, you will be thanking me when you are forty! Secondly its my charm that gets to you every single time" said ridhima..chuckling loudly, knowing just the right buttons to push,knowing how sacrosant her di's morning routine was...she would always wake with just minutes to spare and then sprintz...guzzling like a zillion mugs of coffee before she declared herself ready to face the world!! But not anymore, Ridhima promised herself, from today on Angi di will have to lead a more healthy life whether she likes it or not! And so here they were jogging in the early morning hours.

Pulling her wayward thoughts, Ridhima sought to set a more enjoyable mood,
"Oh come on di, look at the sky its sooo beautiful, with the sun just peeping through...don't you just love this fresh air.."
"Spare me the nature talk", snapped Anjali..." I'm here purely because I lost the damn bet nd as far as Charm goes, sweety, charm ka matlab bhi jaanti hai aap...what you do is nag nag and then nag again till I get a bleeding heada......aauggghhhhhh!!!!!What the........"
The rest of Anjali's retort was lost as she saw ridhima sprawled on the sidewalk with a huge dog, correction excuse of a dog jumping and tryin to lick her really very very enthusiastically, thought Angi disbelief clearly etched on her face, saying loundly,

"Where d hell did dis dog come from... " then gathering her thoughts,
"Oh my god.....ridhima are you alright!!?" Anjali asked leaning down over ridhima to help her up only to see a guy running towards her full on.....
"no no nooo Stooppp...."

"Oh shit!! I'm really sorry babe. Here lemme help you up, its no biggie, we just had ourselves a slight accident that's all!!" then turning his attention at the girl still under his dog's voilent clutches continued,

"Looks like you got the great brandy knock over.By the way name's Armaan"

So saying he straightened himself up before extending his hand charmingly... 'As if he hadn't just knocked me over!!' thought Angie with a sneer....some people....and today would have to be the day when I get to meet all the bloody pschco's in this world...uuggghhh, life she decided so enjoyed playing it's little tricks on you.!!!

Watching the interplay between her sister and this Armaan from the lying position, Ridhima ventured out,

"Do you mind, you know, controlling that thing", whatever the hell you call it..."Only I would rather not be knocked flat on my butt again, if its not too much trouble of course, and oh yes thank you so very much!!"

oh yes thought ridhima, even in this mortifying position she would be damned if she didn't get back some of her own. 'The gall...ohhh man!! the absolute bloody gall of this guy', she thought irritatingly, 'A DOG...uhh can't believe I actually got knocked down by a dog', this ws not the starting she wanted for the most important day of her life, even if the guy who owned the dog looked like he had just walked off the cover of some glossy magazine. 'God!!' she thought, 'I don't think I've ever seen a guy this handsome on any bloody cover! And I would so kill for that glossy hair!!....and that she thought was just the clincher, 'She just had to be on her butt when her prince charming finally knocked on her door, well on her butt literally' now sulky seeing a full stop on her new healthy plan!!

But then again whenever she had thought about her prince he had been the one who had been knocked out by her but only in the metaphorical sense but here not only was she on the recieving end but also literally!! 'Life', Ridhima decided with a long sigh 'was just not fair'.

Feeling her temper rise again, she added, "helloooo" waving her hand across that drop dead gorgeous face,

"Still here warming the grass, with your dog on top, do you mind?? You can continue checking out my sister later", not that you will ever be able to do anything else, 'oooo i can't wait for di to give him her piece of mind...as it is she's pissed at me for waking her up early...now she's gonna fry him alive!!! ridhima thought gleefuly while trying to save the still miraculously dry parts of her face from the dogs eager tongue....with a totally satisfying grin and her humor restored at the prospect of a good show down she even smiled at the poor guy's...

"Oh...umm, what...?" Armaan had difficulty trying to follow what she had just said, his heart he could have sworn had literally stopped breathing when he gazed into those eyes. Such a beautiful choclate colour, a man could drown in those pools, and this one looked like they would suck him right in.

Looking at her, he tried to get a handle on himself...'Get a grip on yourself Armaan, just clear your brain, she's talking to you.....oh man!! her lips...wonder how they would feel....ok ok get a hold on yourself man..you are not a juvenile on a first date or something...show some self respect and for god's sakes...STOP STARING!!!'

With a considerable effort he managed to get his thoughts in focus and decided he would figure out later why his mouth had gone dry and his thoughts had all but flown off his head!!!
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"Your dog"...said Ridhima with as much sarcasm as she could muster while trying to stiffle her smile, behind him she could see Anjali getting ready to fire the first round!!!

''Yeah..uhh...yeah,really sorry about that" said Armaan...bodily lifting brandy off her,then helping her stand up, before continuing,

''Can I help you...offer you a ride back home...your tracks are pretty dirty" .....'Smooth one', he thought patting himself on the back...'Good to have you back buddy, for a second there I had given up on you...', he said to himself...'And this will not only give you a chance to get the intros but I'll also see where she lives....whoever said you can't bake your own cake and have it too was obviously in need of some quick armaan pointers'!!!

''Excuse me...that has got to be like the most obvious pick-up line ever'' snapped Anjali, cutting through Armaan's reverie with a slice, making him swivel on his heel to come face to face with a very angry female, instantly putting his back up....

"Pick up line...darling i don't do pick up liners...I believe in personal pick up's, like I just picked you up, remember. I wouldn't mind doing a repeat to refresh your memory, if you don't. So hun, what's it gonna be".

'Babe...you might be cute but you are not cute enough to dole me out attitude with sarcasm as the side dish.....' drawled out Armaan to himself, completely tuning out her indignant,

"WHATTT!!" Angali shouted, she couldn't believe the nerve of this guy, oh man...he was just begging for a let down!! Just you wait...I'm gonna teach you such a lesson that when I'm finished with you....you'll be begging me for forgiveness!!!

"I said.....are you interested in another pick up....its a simple enough question hun" Armaan voiced already bored with the conversation and eager to get back to the other girl.

She looked so amazing, with that blue track suit. Seriously he hadn't seen such a pretty picture in quite some time, with the early morning rays filtering through the trees to rest on her tresses, beads of sweat dreanching her smooth forehead, tendrils curving around those delicately curved ears and that absolutely adorable streak of dirt running from her cheek to the side of her chin was driving him to distraction!!

All he wanted to do now was rub that dirt of her face and feel her skin to ascertain whether it really was as soft as it looked, and just look at brandy lying on her back, relishing the rub she was getting, she seemed to be in heaven, and 'who wouldn't be when being patted by such a vision!!! ' said Armaan once again to himself, completely oblivious to Atul's presense or even his friend's amusement at the way he was acting.

Looking at Armaan mooning over the girl in blue, Atul shook his head in amusement. 'Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega', he thought and turned his attention away from his friend to the promblem as he envisaged the other girl to be, getting ready to deliver an instant cut me down retort,

"Oh god, Armaan, have you finally lost it!! Pick her up, puhlease." said Atul now making Angali turn sharply on her heel only to find herself staring into a pair of eyes that currently verged on an expression for severe boredom.

"Trust me dude, even now you can do much better, actually make that a billion times much better" continued Atul.

He had been overseeing the whole deal from his distance, and was silently cursing himself for letting brandy of the chain. 'I should never have let armaan talk me into freeing brandy....now look what mess we are in!!... but regardless no one gave armaan a rebuke when I am around', thought Atul ready to end this fiasco.

"And who might you be Mr. smart mouth?" Anjali demanded of him,

"That would really be none of your damned bussiness" came the sharp sarcastic retort.

'Seriously thought atul.....this armaan....i can't leave him alone for a second before he finds himself in trouble....and just look at them both...staring at each other like they have cataract or something....oh for heavens sake, Armaan snap out of it!!'

"Why may I ask is your friend staring at my sister like that?" said Anjali making Atul groan out loud before commenting,

"The same reason she's staring at him obviously, now call her off, flirting with people you hardly know." he retorted in an amused drawl, looking at the disbelief etched clearly on her face. 'Honey I bet no one's ever dared to speak to you like that huh', he thought to himself, 'too bad darling looks like its time someone's finally taught you how things stand...'

"Excuse me"...Angali almost choked out, she couldn't believe this guy's gal. This was just too much. 'First that guy now this one, oh man what is this world coming too!! I'm gonna kill Ridhima', she thought, 'And what is she doing staring at that guy, like his ego needs more fodder!!!'

"Umm" remarked Atul, easily following her thoughts, "Should I assume that you have forgotten how to speak....well you know since how you are stuck at excuse me!!"

"Uhhhh....whatever.....Ridhima we are leaving.... NOW!!!" said Angali dragging Ridhima with her....leaving the two of them staring after.....
"You woke me up for this...I told you decent people aren't even awake by now...see i was right or what!!..remind me to never ever listen to your half baked ideas again...!!" they heard her shout at her sister....

"Vaise Armaan", said Atul still staring at that girl's back, " Never thought you were one for milk pudding. I thought you preffered hot mix!! She's pretty enough but completely docile like a kitten.."

"Even kittens leave a pretty scratch...if pushed around much.." replied Armaan absent mindedly,

"What, the great Armaan's talking about kittens!! Wow lagta hai subah kuch jaldi hi udha diya. Anyways, Damn....didn't think she would give up so easily" Atul said aloud in a contemplative sigh ignoring Armaan's bemused thoughful expression....
"Now i'll just have to meet her again!!...Chal neways...we'r getting late so lets go...BRANDY...come on girl...time to head back.."

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"MOM..." shouted Sapna knowin mischeviously that she was already completely hasseled!!

"Uff......is ghar mein mere ilava koi kuch nahi kar sakta....i swear....what will happen 2 u people if i'm not around huh??"

"Arre mom,gussa kyu ho rahi ho....aap ho tabhi to hum hai na" so sayin she hugged her

"Hmmm.....chalo ab bolo sapna kya hua?? And tum itni jaldi kyu tyaar ho rahi ho...your time's at 9?"

"Yup...9 baje report karna hai sanjivani mein...but mom aap bhul rahe ho,aditi is admitted there..so i'm heading early to see her first." turning around she remembered why she had just called her mother,

"Mom,where are my clothes...you were suppossed to have chosen?" without waiting for the reply continued
"Acha acha,ok fine....don't worry I'll decide myself today" throwing open her wardrobe,sapna starting flitting through clothes and hit upon her fav. Taking out the trousers,she turned towards the mirror to see the effect....
'perfect,my darling sapna.....lets just team these with those blue and white strips top,some gloss,little mascara,a dab of purfume with that red bag and we are all done!!' Walking around the bed she started to pull on the trousers thinking about her new day's beggining. With her clothes in place, putting on some gloss she slipped into her leather high sandals and sighed in relief, shoes she thought added the zing needed to start the day in the right tune. Breezing through the doors she slipped into her skoda and took off.....today was going to be a beautiful day......

plz do comment nd lemme know hw u found it.....i'm waitin!!!

Originally posted by: rhea26

hey pixie..
just read lil bit of ur FF
n i luuved it...
cont asap

tnx fer d lovely comment rhea......

glad u liked it!!

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

tru... u definitely shud continue wid it!....eagerly waiting 4 da next part... 👏 👏

tnx ya....m sooo glad u liked it!!

luv Mia.

awesome 👏 !
cannot w8 for part 2 😉 😳 !!!

HeyMia..lovely part..I have sent a PM ..Just chk it out.

Keep us entertaining. 😉 😉
Waiting for the next.

Ash.

loved part 1 cant wait for part 2 plzzzzzz update soon