love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 39

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Naina123 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey,
i love ur FF
its just beautiful, the way u write is so powerful. I especially love Atuls chracter... 😆 riddhima's character has alot of charisma!! keep writing!!
take care
Naina
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

lol jia i was askin where she at ... not seen her post in a while...

Im sure she update when time permits

Kat

that toh i am sure she will update wen she gets time but its been ages since she came on IF too😳

but i remember hersaying that she doesnt have net connection and all there sooooo..............

hope to see u soon mia

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Posted: 17 years ago
^^^ are really? i guess i was missing her around here ... i hope everything gets sorted soon as she is missed by many of us..

Come back soon Mia

Love Kat
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi mia this part was superb 👏
must say u have the talent in you
Edited by vidu93 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Mia...

When would you update your FF??? Plz update soon!!

Priya
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Posted: 17 years ago


Just updated the teaser.....



Edited by pixiecuty - 17 years ago
jia.. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

😳Miaaaaaaaaaa.............* a big huggie frm my side*.🤗

Missed u soooooooo much dear😳

Coming to the ff well this time i can just say

" WAT A COMEBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

I Mean it was absolutely amazing and mesmerizing as always...........👏

This time the start was truly a phenomenal one.........👏

So it finally dawned upon our dear darling hero that he is in love😆😆😳

But i must emphisize here that the entire setup was excellently and brilliantly put together once again by u.

"Their little roof-top garden was set with thousands of twinkling small fairy lights. There were basins of water set with floating flowers and minutely small lanterns were hung all over the climbing treeses of the vines that enguffled the whole garden.

Gentle chimes set against the over hanging were twinkling softly, playing a gentle rythym with the mild breeze and to glaze it all over the soft grass was strewn with tentatively sparkling mist.

The night itself was soft, magical with its spotted clouds and shying stars. Even the breeze had tapered down to caressing tones. The slight drizzle was touching the petals, sprinkling crushed diamonds trapping the light into thousands of subdued shiny rays.

In the middle of it all Armaan had set the table, a low rung table with reclining chairs. The whole shying display of soft lights threw a shadow over the table, giving it a warm cozy feeling. The lone small candle was the only accessory complementing the sheer elegance of crystal glasses set on shimmering tablecloth"

My gosh how do manage to achieve such a remarkable feat again and again????????? I mean that those lines are just out of the world!!!!!!!!!!!!

And then the entire AA scenario😆😆😆...........with atul telling angie " Give the kids some privacy" was like an icing on the cake. BRILLIANT is just the word here that i am left with as usual....................😳

And now coming to the show stealer..................ARMAAN ofcourse😳😳

Well u hav just managed to make fall for him a 100000th time !!!!!!!!!!

To surprise is lady love he almost sort of lands up kiddnapping her😆😆

Well u cant say kiddnapping here but landing up at in her bedroom climbing up the pipe as usual (this time courtesy anjie)😆😆 .............And then just sweeping her away was one of those truly fantastic ideas of yours which now i falling short of words to describe................😳😳 And our lady in love saying "With my life" was like decorating the cake with cheeries and sugar roses.......😳

Okkkkkkk so now as usual u hav landed up making me really impatient for the next part as always...............More this time bcoz i cant just wait for ridz's reaction.................i mean its gonna officially be their first date rite?????????

AND DARE u take such a long time to update😡😡😡.....................

Also ur writing skills hav the same old out of the world charm..........dont feel that u hav touch bcoz i feel that u hav come back with even more sharpened skills now..................😳😳

But there is one thing that u hav forgotten i guess and that is how much i adore ur lengthy parts...............its like the more the merrier.............😳

So darling i want a super long continuation of this chapter frm u and IT BETTER BE FAST........................or else i am coming with a big danda behind u to Mel.........................

ofcourse dont forget to pm me............

Love u

Jia😳

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks it had been days to read ur wonderfull FF were u a writer or a reporter earlier really u r acting as magician of expressing feling in words.
its just muahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi mia
what a comeback sweety awesome part yaar u totally rocked the part n if tthis was a teaser matlab picture(part) abhi baki hai wow simply superb
n i just loved the part where armi says trust me n ridz says with my life aawwwwwwwwwww 😳 it was soooooo cute
but this ones fgor u
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Posted: 17 years ago
Mia Mia....

OMG..thanks for updating and the PM of course. The teaser trailer is amazing!!!!! I can't wait for the actual movie..will be waiting impatiently today for your whole update.

-Priya

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