THE GODFATHER- Part2...Index/ pg1 - Page 118

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

beautiful 😃
a simply superb and lovely ending!! couldn't have been better 👏
prateek knew along...but still he took it well...robbie soo cute! lol! and finally they had a little pari in their household!
good to know all of them still stayed in touch!
loved the little reunions every weekend!
nice that godfather split his money to everyone!
angad is still hot! lol! kripa is still sweet and beautiful! and their children simply wonderful!!
looved this fan fic a lot!!
now i can't wait to read ur others! can't believe ur writing two at at time!
once again...great job!!! 👏 😃

Thanks desiqt! 😃

Sometimes kids are smarter and wiser than adults....Prateek realized Josh was no more when Nishant gave him the wrong toys....he knew Josh hadnt sent them. 😭 He accepted that his papa wont return to him...😭 and he accepted Angad as his Dad cuz he felt Angad's love for him. 😳

Yeah, gudiya completed their family. 😃

I will write shorter updates so I can write 2 at a time. 😃

pallavi

Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

"Kya kahen, kya na kahen yeh kaisi mushkil hai, koi tho batadhe iska hul tho mere bhai!"

Sach di, picture perfect ending! Loved it!!👏 👏

Thanks Shalini! Im glad u loved the ending! 😃

You chose a very unique setting in the Fiji islands! Sun, sand, and a tanned Angad *sigh* 😉😛 And two little mini-Angads!😆

Fiji was as far as I could send them.....far away in the South Pacific...😆

Yeah, a tanned Angad.....😉😳

Heehee, Bermuda shorts reminded me of Angad's Charlie Chaplain comment to Kripa! 😆

Charlie Chaplin.....😆 can totally imagine her wearing Angad's Bermudas..😆

Even though the GF doesn't live with them ( I completely understand his caution) at least he meets them quite frequently! 😳

And Sur!Spoiled Gudiya!😳 I always imagine that little girl child artist! So much attitude!😆 She came on the dance show Boogie Woogie just recently...

Yeah shes terribly precocious! The way she talks ....😆 I saw her on Boogie Woogie shooting her mouth off.....shes in Naagin too....😆

Kartik and his poultry farm and twins in the mountains-perfect!😆

That music video was tooo cute! 😳 Yeah Thanks to Ashu!

I LOVED the way you described the importance of dil ka rishta, how Angad's biological son was raised by Josh, Josh's by Angad and they both loved their sons whole-heartedly! 😳 😳

LOVED THE WHOLE FF!! Definitely my favorite one by you so far! Can't wait for the next one! 😊

Thanks, Dear! I will start them on Wednesday or Thursday......😃

pallavi

Diii

Nooo.. rula diya apne.. Read the storyy 5 times from the begining noww! 😳 This one is def going on My Top fav ff forr shureee.. Im gonna make sure my friends read itt tooo 😃 and sumtimes when ii used to read it my sister wuld come beside me and start reading it too.. ii remember this one this she was leik Madihaa, ii wanna read tht story your always readiingg at nitee.. ii wus like shure and tht was the part, like in the beginning when Angad was teasing Kripa 😊 But for shure this will be one of my cherished ff frm yu..
& congrats on becoming ff writer of the week 👏 Yu trullyy deserve tht and moreee 😳
and ii cant wait to read yur other dhamaka's

as for the epi and the last partt.. Tooo cutee.. Kripa preggy with their third childd...😳 Def these twoo aree smartt. changed their names soo no one wuld find outt.. wow.. Beauty wid Brains😛 & Prateek he knew all allong.. one smart kid for sure.. And Robbie.. lovee thtt nammeee😳 Glad to know everything is alrite wid them😃

Luv ya
Madiha<3

whoa!!!!! what an ending??? mast di!!! too cool!! brilliant!! awesome!!! fab!!!(cant think of more adjectives 😆 )

I was really scared that something might happen to GF but thanks to you Nishant found Gauri and settled down... I love the two kids.. so cute....And Sunny knew the truth and aceepted it gr8... 👏

Do start with your new ff soon I wont be able to wait....This ff and Bholabasha tops my favorites list...

Congratulations for being the writer of the week.. for me you are the writer of the FF.. 😊

fantastic ending di.
i wud definitely remember this.
all of ur stories by far hav been grossing.
i m always hooked to ur ffs.
great job and best of luck for ur new one.

hey great ending.. really amazing ff an will remeber it.. 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: namelesssr

Excellent ending, Pallavi. So Angad's not afraid of his don f-i-l... he gives back as good as he gets from him. Sirf beti ke saamne bechare ki bolti band ho jaati hai 😆. Found the idea of Nishant giving up on nailing GF because he got married... interesting.
Good one, Pallavi ... and you fully well deserve the "writer of the week" title.
Btw, I loved the opening lines of the poem... who are they by?
I don't mean to pester you, just curious to know when you're starting your next story?

Thanks nameless! 😃

GF is like a father to angad....they share an easy camarederie from long ago....Angad certainly not afraid of Ex-Boss/ FIL...beti ki baat alag hai, usey haath mein rakhna padta hai...😉 Na jaaney kab bigad jaye...😆

Nishant gave up active duty, didnt quit CBI...he didnt want to end up like Josh, I guess, and leave his kid fatherless. It was coincidental that his retirement stopped his search for GF...😃

The opening poem is by Jean Ingelow, a Victorian writer. 😳

I will post intros for new Ffs on Thursday and Friday...😃

pallavi

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

hi di..wht a great ending to a great story..it was perfect..as u said..it did tell us that bonds of heart..r more precious and deeper than those of blood..which is so true in today's world..there r so many ppl who dont get along with their families and relatives and have stronger bonds with their friends...

Thanks shagun!😳 U got my point exactly! 😃

thanks ..di it was a pleasure reading such a beautiful creation...which was full of entertainment, romance, and suspense...above and all it gives us a life lesson..as i mentioned earlier...

Thanks a lot for all ur support and appreciation....and Thanks for correcting Angad's Punjabi dialogs! 😳

will wait for the next ff..but take a breakand rest..and celebrate one more success story.. 😉

Yeah I will rest for some days, but I will post intros this week...😳

shagun

pallavi

Originally posted by: hipreet

That was an amazing story
love the ending
well done

Thanks harpreet! Im glad u loved the ending! 😳😃

pallavi