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MeethiMirchii

@heavenlybliss

Master

+ 59

Posted: 17 years ago

#1151

Loved itttt!!!!
awwww they changed their namessss
except sunny hehe...omg he alwayz knew his father woz dead! bless him! hez so understanding!
awwww they had a daughter tooo....both prateek and sur had nicknames...why didnt robbie??? lol
My dad calls me Gudiya:D hehe
cant wait for ur nxt ffs! when u starting?
oh yeahhh and congrats on being writer of the week
this ff was just as spicy as the channa chaat im eating right now lol

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Mittal Patel

@sweet_mittal

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#1152

OMG di it was such a wonderful end i loved it very much

wow sunny already knows about this and that's nice that he accept angad as his father and robbie he is so cute ans chubby

wow kripa is again pregnent well that's all angad's fault he lover her so much 😆 😆 😆

thank god GF is also alive and live his life happily with grand sons

lastly angad is always funny and cute

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue the next ff soon di

love ya di

mittal

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ms_gujju_92

@ms_gujju_92

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#1153

omg, AWESOMEEEE im gonna miss ur constant updates...well it was a gr8 one, u really deserve all the praise!!! 👏

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Kristina

@jdsean

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#1154

Wow I didn't think it could get any better than this, but the Epilogue was great. 👏 😊 I"m glad finally everyone has some peace, and can live together happily. I loved that Angad accepted Robbie as his son, it really shows that sometimes blood relationships don't matter , as long as you love that person. I think this is probably the best ending I've read for a story, the whole story was great. Can't wait for you to start ur next one.

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nycdesiqt

@nycdesiqt

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#1155

beautiful 😃
a simply superb and lovely ending!! couldn't have been better 👏
prateek knew along...but still he took it well...robbie soo cute! lol! and finally they had a little pari in their household!
good to know all of them still stayed in touch!
loved the little reunions every weekend!
nice that godfather split his money to everyone!
angad is still hot! lol! kripa is still sweet and beautiful! and their children simply wonderful!!
looved this fan fic a lot!!
now i can't wait to read ur others! can't believe ur writing two at at time!
once again...great job!!! 👏 😃

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Shalini

@sweetmagic4u

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#1156

"Kya kahen, kya na kahen yeh kaisi mushkil hai, koi tho batadhe iska hul tho mere bhai!"

Sach di, picture perfect ending! Loved it!!👏 👏

You chose a very unique setting in the Fiji islands! Sun, sand, and a tanned Angad *sigh* 😉😛 And two little mini-Angads!😆

Heehee, Bermuda shorts reminded me of Angad's Charlie Chaplain comment to Kripa! 😆

Even though the GF doesn't live with them ( I completely understand his caution) at least he meets them quite frequently! 😳

And Sur!Spoiled Gudiya!😳 I always imagine that little girl child artist! So much attitude!😆 She came on the dance show Boogie Woogie just recently...

Kartik and his poultry farm and twins in the mountains-perfect!😆

That music video was tooo cute! 😳

I LOVED the way you described the importance of dil ka rishta, how Angad's biological son was raised by Josh, Josh's by Angad and they both loved their sons whole-heartedly! 😳 😳

LOVED THE WHOLE FF!! Definitely my favorite one by you so far! Can't wait for the next one! 😊

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pallavi25

@pallavi25

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#1157

Originally posted by: rima791

wonderful epilogue!!!😳 i am content with the way you wrote it i find it a different style 😛 in a good way 👏 😆 loved the hitler line that angad said 😆 although i was hoping for a romantic part its okay i aam happy with the way you wrote it!😛

Thanks rima! 😳 Im glad u liked it! 😃

Romantic scene was in last part....this was just an overview of their life in Fiji....with kids and GF, Mittals....and what happened to all others. Kind of rounding up the whole story. 😃

pallavi

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namelesssr

@namelesssr

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#1158

Excellent ending, Pallavi. So Angad's not afraid of his don f-i-l... he gives back as good as he gets from him. Sirf beti ke saamne bechare ki bolti band ho jaati hai 😆. Found the idea of Nishant giving up on nailing GF because he got married... interesting.
Good one, Pallavi ... and you fully well deserve the "writer of the week" title.
Btw, I loved the opening lines of the poem... who are they by?
I don't mean to pester you, just curious to know when you're starting your next story?

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pallavi25

@pallavi25

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#1159

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel
beautiful. It was a sweet and perfect ending , I can just imagine it. aww it's sweet, robbie who's josh's biologically is angads known and prateek his biological known to be joshs. It shows a beautiful bonding. I loved this fan fiction. It was sweet and complex telling us that a bad person isn't a bad because he wants to be, its the world which makes him/her bad. Beautiful story.

I'd love to read your next story's its a pleasure reading such great stories. But yes, rest , look after your son and then start writing, personal life comes first.

Awesome part , oh and congrats on being the writer of the week 😃

Faiza

Thanks Faiza! 😳

I tried to show that DNA doesnt matter in the long run! And GF was forced into a life of crime but he was always true to himself. 😳

Yeah, I will take a few days break ....but posting the previews asap.

Thanks for telling me abt the WOTW! I wouldnt have noticed it otherwise! 😃

pallavi

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shagun

@sweetangle04

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#1160

hi di..wht a great ending to a great story..it was perfect..as u said..it did tell us that bonds of heart..r more precious and deeper than those of blood..which is so true in today's world..there r so many ppl who dont get along with their families and relatives and have stronger bonds with their friends...

thanks ..di it was a pleasure reading such a beautiful creation...which was full of entertainment, romance, and suspense...above and all it gives us a life lesson..as i mentioned earlier...

will wait for the next ff..but take a breakand rest..and celebrate one more success story.. 😉

shagun

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