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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

Oh wow...kripa and Angad had to change their names...but ofcourse they couldnt use their real names when their plan was to prove to the world that Angad khanna was dead...and that Kripa was now living with her son prateek as Angad's widow....But its said that a person's name gives the person its identity...and for AK their new names have not only given them a new personality but have given them a new life as well...which is far from any criminal's and bloodshed... But I was curious about one thing...Are Robbie and Prateek aware of the fact thaht AK had changed their names especially prateek....or do they know their parents and Anand and Tanya??

yes, they are far away from all crime and violence, with new identities! Good question....Robbie was born after they changed their names, so he doesnt know their old names. Prateek....Im sure Kripa gave him sufficient advise abt their name change, hes a smart boy! 😉

Omg Robbie is sooo cuteee!...chubby and short how cute...I absoloutly love him....he's just soo adorable..running with his favorite lunch box...awww 😆 ...

Oh so Robbie did turn out to be Josh's dad...well it definalty feels good to knwo that a part of Josh is going to be with AK and their family..Even though at first Angad felt his heartache...but seeing robbie for the first time definalty washed away all his insecurity or nay negative feeling which might have formed in his heart..

Absolouty adored the way Angad looked after Robbie...and took care of him....he certainly is a great father as well as a great human being...

Howw cute Robbie's first word was dadaa..lol...and Angad teasing kripa giving her victorious looks...he must have felt soo proud of himself at that time 😆...Well atleast Angad got to make up for all the lost time...when he wasnt able to be with prateek...

Robbie is Angad's son in every way but biologically! 😳 Yet Josh lived on with them as his son.....he never left them! 😭

Omg kripa's expecting again....so they are gonna have a trio all together...how sweet 😊

Yes, Sur completed their family! 😳

hahaha....Kripa indirectly calling Angad badmash...and Prateek making a wierd face when AK kissed...loll...so typical...but Robbie on the other hand seemed amused 😆...

Robbie is younger so he doesnt get grossed out watching his parents kiss and cuddle. 😳😆

Its sweet how Angad was trying to help kripa to get over her fear of water...and the way you described their little adventure in the coral reef made me want to take a dive myself...to bad I dont knwo how to swin as well 😆

Doesnt matter if u cant swim....u can still go snorkelling which is usually done in shallow waters on coral reefs where the fish reside. I dont know swimming either but went snorkelling twice like Kripa, with a guide holding my hands.....it was the most amazing experience ever....simply mindblowing! 😃

Its reallly wierd yet enduring to knwo that even though Prtaeek is Angad's child he's more interested in becoming a FBI or a polic eofficer just like Josh...and Robbie being Josh's child is more interested in Music just like Angad 😊 ...

Its Nature vs Nurture. I think kids turn out the way they are brought up. Prateek was influenced early by Josh whom he adored and followed ...so he wants to be in the services, while Robbie being brought up by Angad wants to be a singer/musician! As said before DNA really doesnt matter....😃

Omg i really did not expect Prtaeek to already be aware of the fact that Josh was no more...and that too five years back....he really is a really intelligent boy...and to grown up for his age...the way he figured out that his pap wasnt going to come back...and he didnt even utter a word abotu it to AK...and kept that little secret in his heart all these years...hats off to prateek for being so brave and understanding 👏

Prateek was waiting for his Mama to come clean abt the truth. Kids are sometimes wiser than we think.

Well it would have been really easy for not only AK but GF to be caught if he had lived with them...Even though all of them cant live in the same house..atleast they are all safe and will be able to share family moment with eachother

Kripa's stubborness and pleading to have her father live with her is justified...the fact that she has finally gotten her family along with her after her back after facing so many harships over the years...she wouldnt want to be seperated form him even for a moment...but circumstanses ask for something differant...atleat they all can visit eahcother whenever they want without anyones life being at risk..

Kripa wants her Dad with them after all she found him after 25 years.....but GF didnt agree for the sake of safety 😭

Oh wow GF had openened a restaurant in the memory of hsi beloved wife..how sweet...

And Mr. and Mrs. Mittal also get to spend time with them...its nice...they have peopple around them to call their own...and whom they consider their family...Mr. Mittal is really a loyal and great human being...after all the things GF has done for him..he still feels obliged and looks up to GF...that is what a honest, faithful, and true human being is all about!

The family gathering was really sweet...definalty a kodak moment...after all the troubles everyone faced..its really humble to see them all together finally living together in peace and with happiness surrounding them..

Aww..Robbie and prateek sititng on their nanu's lap was really adorable...and talking about marine life...I guess the whole family really has a passion for water...As it has held a great significance in their life..

Water is an important symbol in this story.....😃

Really liked the scene between krip and Kalyani aunty with kripa getting crazy over little frocks and stuff for her little daughter...And talking about having a huge appetite...but to be honest even I was drooling over the food whiel reading it...they sure seemed yummmyy 😆

haha...Angad called Kripa a hitler in front of GF...and then their joke about facing the consequences of marrying a Don's daughter was really funny and sweet in its own way..

Awwww....kripa got her wished fulfilled...and Angad's and Kalyani aunty's instincts came out to be true as well...she finally got a daugher...and Angad called her Gurdiya...how sweeett!!

Oh woww...Its good to know that not only karthic's brother got better but he got settled in life as well...finally his longe awaited dream has finally been fulfilled 😊

What can I say about GF...he's just a fantaboulous human being...he's a missal to all...for his every charcetristic which he held within himself...and which portray what a true human being should really be like..He has always fulfilled all his relations...even at times due to fate he might have not been able to stop the misfortunate incident which took place in his life...but he had stood up and fought against wrong..and took his revenge for the once he loves...and finally after so many years he has gotten what he truly desrved...peace and harmony along with his family...but even today it seems that none of his preseant relations can take the place of his companion...but its also true that his beloved will always be in hsi heart forever...and now that he has his family as a reason for him too live life...nothing can come in his way!...

Yes, ur summing up of GF's character is perfect! 👏👏😃 Thats why hes the protagonist of this story.....

oh wow...lardki kya mili Nishant GF ko bhul geya 😆 ...jkk...but thank god that finally Nishant gave up on looking for GF...and its great to see that he has found his soulmate and settled in hsi life aswell...and aww he gave up his risky job for the sake of his child ..how thoughtful....maybe somewhere seeing prateek's state after Josh left...was one of the reasons for his desision about giving up his job...He oviously wouldnt want his child to face the harsh circumstances of life with having no father

huh!...Damodar's stupid gang was always selfish...and the results were to be the way they turned out...greedy and selfishness can never lead one to live a happy life....they all got what they deserved!...

D gang were just vicious criminals with no morals, no conscience.....they are another breed altogether!

GF was a gentleman at all times, he was a white-collar criminal actually!

Omg cant belive that the story really ended...but must say that you have done a fantastic job througout the whole story...I really enjoyed reading every single
part of it...The story was full of action, emotions, romance, cmedy, and most of all the truth about life and the differant phases...most of all I really liked the way that you showed the two differant sides of the criminal world...The two differant perspectives really played a major role in portraying human charcetristics through out the story...Absoloutly spectacular!! 👏 👏 ....

Thanks mita, for ur wonderful comments on each part! I really appreciate the time and effort.....makes my writing worthwhile! 😃

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thanks iqra! 😳

Never say sorry, Hun! I love long comments.....tum jo bhi likho mujhey achha lagta hai...😳.😃

Apni mom ko meri taraf se shukriya keh dena.😳....aww she liked it? Im delighted! 😃

The name Robbie Sabarwal is from Kasturi....😆 U know Robbie, the Junior Angad? 😆

Yes, their family is complete! Josh is always present with them in form of Robbie.....as Kripa had said once, Jo guzar jaatey hain, wo hamarey aas paas hi hotay hain. I really believe that although it sounds ghostly. 😆

And dont feel sorry for Angad...he got his Kripa and a lovely family of 3 kids, 2 of whom are his. 😳 He has no regrets!

Kripa is definitely luckiest woman...😃 such a loving hubby...😉😳

Awww Thanks a lot for ur affection! 😳 I am too old to be ur sis but I can be ur Maasi! 😳😃

pallavi

haiii...so sweeet of u...how cum u r soo nice?

ohk...actaully i already did tht...actually i hav inherited the love of thriller /mystery stories frm her...thats y she loved it..

yea...i knoe tht...i lyk karan patel too

nah...maasi sounds like gha r ki massi....u can b my pallu mom!!!kya kehti ho?😆😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: me2you

👏 Congrats Di, for ending another blockbuster fanfic 👏
Again, I enjoyed reading it and as usual loved it too.
It had more action and drama in it and you wrote it beautifully. Kripa's character was indeed a very strong one..the way she handled all the ups and downs in her life..hats off to her and the writer 😉
So sad that the whole family couldnt stay together 😭
And, I think I dont need to say that I'm already looking forward to your next one 😉 Surprise us!

Thanks Dear! 😃

Yeah, Blockbuster....😆 Awww Thanks for the compliments! Im glad I could do justice to the genre of a Romantic thriller! 😃

Yes, kripa is certainly a strong woman....aakhir kiski beti hai.....GF was such a courageous man.....never gave up or bowed to injsutice and crime! 👏

I will post Intro to one FF tonight! 😃

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **~SoniHinnU~**

me no want shorter ones!:(

Tuney phir apna naam badal diya??....😆 😆

Sorry, Hun! Longer updates means more late nights and my health is suffering! I cant do it anymore, but they wont be very short....😳

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

haiii...so sweeet of u...how cum u r soo nice?

ohk...actaully i already did tht...actually i hav inherited the love of thriller /mystery stories frm her...thats y she loved it..

Really? 😃 I love mysteries and thrillers too.....😃 Especially Romantic thrillers. Phir toh tumharey Mom ke saath meri khoob jamegi! 😃

yea...i knoe tht...i lyk karan patel too ...me too, hes a good actor!

nah...maasi sounds like gha r ki massi....u can b my pallu mom!!!kya kehti ho?😆😳

Theek hai, bachcha! 😳 Mujhey manzoor hai.....do toh already the....u can be the 3rd...or rather the 2nd! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Awwww there are no words to describe the ending 👏 ...uhhh just fab, cute and sweet! 😳 seriously it's one of the best endings i've read 😃 aww how cute prateek thinks his father is josh while robbie thinks his dad is angad awww...and as for sur how cute she has two older brothers 😛 so lucky i wish i had an older brother lol 😆 and i was so happy that everyone was safe in the end!...this was seriously one of the best ff's 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolate_luver


Awwww there are no words to describe the ending 👏 ...uhhh just fab, cute and sweet! 😳 seriously it's one of the best endings i've read 😃 aww how cute prateek thinks his father is josh while robbie thinks his dad is angad awww...and as for sur how cute she has two older brothers 😛 so lucky i wish i had an older brother lol 😆 and i was so happy that everyone was safe in the end!...this was seriously one of the best ff's 👏 👏 👏

Thanks Chocolate! Its a great compliment to get appreciation from a good dramatic writer like you! 😃

I tried to show Nature vs Nurture issues here.....blood doesnt count, upbringing does. 😳 Perhaps when they are all grown up, A-K will tell their sons the truth....or maybe it will remain a secret. It wont matter cuz love is all that counts.

Yeah I also wish I had an older brother. But my cousin brother is very close to me! 😳

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey pallavi...

i've just read the whole of ur ff... it took me 4ever/... but i seriously loved it...

i loved angad 4m start 😳 ,..of course... 😊 he was sooooooooo sweet... but the whole ragging thing was reli funny... he had changed quite alot after he fell in love with kripa...
the kiss of life bit was reli cute... nd i was soooo glad kripa finally confessed... nd kissed him in 4nt of every1.. 😳 😳 😳

it was sooo sad abt the bomb blast... i felt reli sorry 4 kripa.. her husband dying on their wedding...

as 4 zaib.... his charactr was equally gr8... it was hilarious how he handcuffed kripa 😆 ... but a bit weird as he keeps it in his drawers?? 😕 lol...
i thought the bit whr zaib undressed in 4nt of the camera was funny😆 😆 .. as it gave them a free show... lmao...
the zoo scene.. nd the green house scene was mind blowing... reli romantic... i completely melted reading it!!!
kripa was reli brave in this ff... especially when she was taking off zaib's trousers 😆 .. tht bit was agen reli funny... but i felt bad 4 her... zaib was being soooo horrible... nd thought she was acting 2 spend a nigt with him... 😕

nd omg... the little Prateek... he was quite a charmer himself... soooo cute... i loved his view points... nd can't blame him abt the weird- adults point...
i felt reli bad 4 him.. when he thought abt the 1- way ticket... but it was also reli funny...
it was reli good how he saved kripa 4m josh... urgh i hated josh soooo much 4m coming in b/w AK... but i guess i can't blame him.. as it was HIS wife... nd he was just protecting her... but RAPE... omg he was seriously gonna cross his limits... but i was glad sunny came as a saviour... nd tht josh regreted wht he did... but his death was quite sad

but u didn't mention prithvi or mishti... it wud hve been cute 4 them 2 meet angad...😊

hmm... it was reli romantic also... i also loved their little suhaag raat scene... reli romantic... nd reli cute... so sad its finished😭..lol...

ok... this msg is getting reli long... sorry...



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Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

hey pallavi...

i've just read the whole of ur ff... it took me 4ever/... but i seriously loved it...

Thanks Dear! 😃Im glad u enjoyed it!

i loved angad 4m start 😳 ,..of course... 😊 he was sooooooooo sweet... but the whole ragging thing was reli funny... he had changed quite alot after he fell in love with kripa...
the kiss of life bit was reli cute... nd i was soooo glad kripa finally confessed... nd kissed him in 4nt of every1.. 😳 😳 😳

it was sooo sad abt the bomb blast... i felt reli sorry 4 kripa.. her husband dying on their wedding...

as 4 zaib.... his charactr was equally gr8... it was hilarious how he handcuffed kripa 😆 ... but a bit weird as he keeps it in his drawers?? 😕 lol...

Zaib was a womanizer, he kept handcuffs in his bedside drawer.🤢
i thought the bit whr zaib undressed in 4nt of the camera was funny😆 😆 .. as it gave them a free show... lmao...

He was shameless....😆
the zoo scene.. nd the green house scene was mind blowing... reli romantic... i completely melted reading it!!!
kripa was reli brave in this ff... especially when she was taking off zaib's trousers 😆 .. tht bit was agen reli funny... but i felt bad 4 her... zaib was being soooo horrible... nd thought she was acting 2 spend a nigt with him... 😕

Zaib was really BAD....😆

nd omg... the little Prateek... he was quite a charmer himself... soooo cute... i loved his view points... nd can't blame him abt the weird- adults point...
i felt reli bad 4 him.. when he thought abt the 1- way ticket... but it was also reli funny...

I feel thats how kids think....😳
it was reli good how he saved kripa 4m josh... urgh i hated josh soooo much 4m coming in b/w AK... but i guess i can't blame him.. as it was HIS wife... nd he was just protecting her... but RAPE... omg he was seriously gonna cross his limits... but i was glad sunny came as a saviour... nd tht josh regreted wht he did... but his death was quite sad

yes, he crossed his limits but Prateek saved him from committing a horrible sin. But he paid his dues with his death. 😭

but u didn't mention prithvi or mishti... it wud hve been cute 4 them 2 meet angad...😊

Angad couldnt return to India becuz of CBI chasing him.😭

hmm... it was reli romantic also... i also loved their little suhaag raat scene... reli romantic... nd reli cute... so sad its finished😭..lol...

ok... this msg is getting reli long... sorry...

Oh plz dont say sorry....I loved ur comments on the story! Thanks again for liking it! 😃


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Posted: 16 years ago
PAALAVI
U alwaz creat miracle.In this ff i found so many
emotions r intertwine.All males r above from human nature.
All fathers r just like an ANGELS to teach us how o love ?
u r absolutely right
'LOVE IS MUCH MORE DEEPER THAN BLOOD"
Human life is itself very short so one should stop thinking about blood shed.
Learn from JoshWhat luv means. He really luv KRIPA more than himself.
I was crying while reading josh's death parts & his Sunnys restlessness.
These parts were heart wrenching,Angad's change over was mind blowing.
he really love Kripa from core of his heart. He alwaz adore Robbie as his own son.
I think its take several pages to comment,if i start frm begning to end parts.
SO in short
THANKS for giving me these memorable moments of love.
thanx from core of my heart.
I really appreciate ur writing skills.
May MAA SHARDA give u more from her treasure.
Take care of ur self and ur dear ones.
bye. & sorry for mistake⭐️👏
Edited by janu1610 - 16 years ago

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