'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 18

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey a really fab part bhot maza aya pad ne me gr8 job cont soon

hi jyothi am glad u r enjoying reading....😃

Episode: 21

20-03-07

Ashu: he looked at Rithika and as he saw her smiling, he knew she is relaxed and is not leaving to go…

Ashu: Mujhe to pata hi tha Jeet agar baat kare to Rithika 30 minutes mey samjh jayegi aur Saachi bhi saath hai..am sure 15 mint hi kafi tha..so main aagaya..late to nahi huaa na…

Rithika was smilgin with his words…

Jeet: Nahi….waise correct time pe ayaa..(he had this serious look on his face..)

Ashu: Jeet itna serious kyun ho raha hai… kya kuch time baad ataa…to theek rehta…woh mujhse raha nahi gaya..

Jeet: Nahi Ashu …dekh ab kuch sharatey Rithika ne rakhi hain…ab unko purey karega to hi woh rukegi keh rahi hai…magar I doubt tu puri kar payega….

(his face was absolutely serious…) Saachi understnaing Jeet wants to take revenge for pulling his leg also joined in..

Saachi: Hmmmm Ashu …I tried my best…but even I doubt ..

Rithika was so confused by the whole thing that she just kept wondering and

That scared Ashu,

Ashu: Kya sablog ekdam se daraa rahey hain..Rithika kya shartey rakhin hai tumney…ab main to har shart manlungaa lekin jiss tarah Jeet keh raha hai..kya shartein hai…?

Rithika: aaaaa..

Jeet: Main hi bata deta hun, mujhe umeed to nahi hai..lekin Ashu saachaa pyaar kya kuch nahi karasakta.. Ashu tu himmat matt haarna…jo agey hogaa woh tere liye mushkil kar dey magar Rithika ko tasaalli hogi…

Ashu: Achaa Jeet,(he looked absolutely stunned and wondered what more is there in Rithika's mind he had told her the full truth at the first meeting itself..when he spoke abt his personal self..

Saachi: Ashu, all the best…(she told with a hesistant look)

Jeet: Tune kitney ladkiyon ka dil todaa, kitne masti mazaak mey kya kya nahi kiya..

Ashu: Jeet,…. Rithika maine kaha tha..agar woh baat hai..to jo tum kaho…(he was in some pain…and wanted to change himself for her)

Main tumse kitna pyaar karta hun batalaya tha,

Main tumjo kahogi kar guzru itna tumhe kaha tha,

Ab kya hue baat jo tumne shartein rakh diye hain,

Tumhare bina ab do kadam bhi nahi chalsaktey hain…

Rithika just looked at Jeet and Saachi…as if to say, when did I?

Jeet: dekh tu dil chota matt karna..mujhe to tu jaisa hai waisa hi pasand hai..phir bhi …jeena to ab tujhe Rithika ke saath hai..

Ashu controlled his emotions: theek hai..jo bhi ho..main maann jata hun..bas batadey tu meri phikar matt kar.. Rithika se badkar aaj mere liye koi nahi..main khud bhi nahi..

Jeet wondered and smiled and looked at Saachi, while Ashu was getting emotional, Rithika gave a sympathetic look to him and requested Jeet through her eyes… to stop..

Jeet: Achaa Ashu …he hugged him..chal ab bataa deta hun woh shartein..

Jeet: 1.Tu aaj ke baad kissi bhi ladki sey jyada nazdeeki nahi dikhaye..

Ashu: Ofcourse… nazdeek kisiko nahi.waise sirf..Saachi magar woh to meri bhabhi hai.. (Saachi was feelgin shy and Jeet hit him on his back)

Jeet: Kissi bhi geir ladki ko…

Jeet: 2.Yeh jo teri halat hai..yun lambe baal, Rithika ke dost , pitaji kya kahengey, apne baal thodey trimkarlo..

Ashu : Rithika..tum….itni si baat bhi… nahi…Rithika just herself was shocked and her shocked expression Ashu thought she is shocked to hear Ashu has a problem to that…

Ashu: Mera matlab theek hai…. Yeh koi badi baat nahi..

Jeet:3.Ashu, tumhe apney papa key pass jaa kar unka bhi ashirwad lene hoga…

Ashu: Theek hai…woh dengey to nahi..magar mujhe jaaney mey koi aitraz nahi..wahan woh kahengey arrthi ka saaman kyun nahi laye..phir Rithika ko ronaa ajayega.. he had a grin..as if no use gogin there..

Aapke agey jhukneka mujhe afsos nahi,

Aapke kehne par jhunku aisa bevakuf nahi,

Meri zindagi ki khushi aapko kabhi naa sukun degi,

Balki society ko nagavaar hogi yehi baat chubhegi…

Jeet:4.Ashu tu Rithika ka pura khayal rakhega..aur jitney assu uski ankhon se bahe ..issbeech ..woh sare dard bhuladega itna khush rakhega…. Kabhi dhoka nahi dega..aur masumiyat ka mazak nahi udayega..

Ashu smiled: Woh Rithika ki masumiyat hi to hai..jissey dekh mujhe usse pyaar hua hai..Main yeh puri koshish karunga ki main ussko jaan se bhi jyada pyaar karu..( Rithika was feelign very shy with his answer and also felt the immense love and respect Ashu has for her..)

Jeet: Yeh sab to itnee serious nahi the…ab thoda heesab kitaab ki baat …woh….

Ashu interrupted: Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye..main to apni property bhi sab uskey naam pe..papa ko keh dena Rithika… aur divorce ki deir hai phir to woh S*** Samar bhi nahi kuch karsakta…usko uski aukaad to main dikhaunga...mujhpe case karega….ab to..

(Rithika again felt tensed..with his anger… )

Jeet: Ashu, Gussa control mey rakh…

Ashu : Yeh bhi kaha hai Rithika ne…

Saachi: Ashu , woh dar jati hai..tumhare gussey se..tumse pyar karti hai tumhari parwah to pareshan to hogi na..

Ashu looked at Rithika and realised and calm down..

Jeet: haan to Panchvi shart…

Jaldi jaldi batahun ab..

Tu aur Rithika 'Bhoot bangala' movie dekhney jaoogey.

Ashu now suddenly felt this is all Jeet mishcive.

Tum aur Rithika ghar mey sirf Capsicum pizzaa hi khaogey,

Saachi was laughing and Ashu blushed with his..shart and realized Jeet is now taking the badla on him…now he understood heesab kitaab for what…

Ashu bahut dusro ko tang kar liya,

Aakhir mey mauka Jeet ko bhi milgaya,

Ab bachke kahan jaana tha bachhu,

Dono doston ney dil jo lagaa liya…

Ashu: Areeey theher jaa…

Jeet : Tu jab bhi ko movie dekhne jayega mujhe pehle inform kardega…

Ashu feeling like a total fool remembered how to Stop Jeet ...He pulled Jeet at a corner and said in his ears,

Ashu: Mobile mey jo click kiya woh Saachi ko abhi dekhadun kya?

Jeet: Blackmailing… (He felt too conscious and looked at Saachi feeling extremely like a cute baby face, blushed and said to Jeet) chal theek hai....

Saachi couldn't understand: kya baat Ashu ne kaha, that made Jeet to leave him so easily, this was his chance to pull his leg… and why is he so shy and smiling and what's on the mobile…

Jeet tumhari jhijak kuch to keh rahi thi,

Aise laga manoo dil ki baat zubaan pe agayi thi,

Tumhare dil ki woh dastak mujhe milgayi hai,

Aap ke dil ki baat apki ankhen kabki gar gayi hai…

Jeet brought both of them together and congratulated Rithika and hugged Ashu.

Jeet: U have to do that imp work which u once told me… hmm..he said in his ears…while Saachi heard it…

Ashu looked at Rithika with love .. Now Saachi was understanding what the imp work meant.. and she was feelgin shy… Jeet told Saachi lets go…both went out and Ashu went hugged Rithika and as Jeet saw behind them getting jhapi…. Jeet had a huge smile ..

Jeet and Saachi now felt its about time even they should tell the magic words to each other..

As Jeet and Saachi went out of the building Jeet tried to get coruge and his mobile rang, it was Ashu,

Ashu: dekh maine kaam kardiya..tu bhi kaam kardey yaar…

Jeet just said..hmm.. and looked with love at saaachi..Saachi realized..and Jeet went close to Saachi, held her hand..and looked into he eyes.. Saachi was like waiting for this moment..she too felt shy but didn't say word and looked into his eyes and again smiled..

Jeet: Tum milee, Dil mi…..

Saachi's phone rang and Jeet felt Oh, No... Saachi couldn't help but take the call..

Saachi: Heloo... Papa... kya hua ? Oh God... (Saachi was much tensed)…. Main arahi hun, Mamma ko kehna I am just reaching in half an hour..

Jeet: Kya hua koi problem?

Saachi: I will have to immediately rush home. My bhabhi who lives in Canada, my brother's wife has been admitted to the hospital. Bhaiya is very worried, she was little sick but now she is very unwell, mom is worried and I will have to go home to be with her and consult few doctors tonight or tomorrow.

Jeet drove the car and told if anything needed he is there for her.

Tumhari chehre ki pareshan

mujhe dard deti hai,

Tumhari dard ki ek kaddi bhi

mujhe kamzzor kar deti hai,

Saachi main tumhara hun

aur hamesha sath hun,

Iss baat ko baar baar

dil har saans kehna chah rahi hai…

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Awww..........ye galat time pe log beemar kyu padte hain......Sab kehne ke baad phone ata to kya ho jata..!!

Ye phone ka network galat time me sahi se chalta hai!!! 😆

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awww..........ye galat time pe log beemar kyu padte hain......Sab kehne ke baad phone ata to kya ho jata..!!

Ye phone ka network galat time me sahi se chalta hai!!! 😆

Hi Vandu....

ehheheh galat timing...lol... yaa yeh Jeet ke saath kyun hua na....bechara...and lets see how the next episode turns out... kya kehta hai..kya hota hai.. hope u enjoy that one too.... and yup my episodes will take little time as a bit busy with few things...to meri speed kam hogayi uparse computer milta nahi..miley to net ka problem...😕... and have to upload pic before i post my episode...

hope u like what thoughts i put in..and Vandu thanks for ur immediate response it always feels great to read and see the smiles😃

hi dear!once again gr8 part😊👏jeet should try to learn something from ashu😆.ye phone bhi naa....galat time pe bajta hai😡...jeet ke propose karne ke baad nahi baj sakta tha kya🥺..anyways continue soon 😊

AWESOME PARTS. great parts loved the way jeet teased ashu.

Originally posted by: bindaas girl

hi dear!once again gr8 part😊👏jeet should try to learn something from ashu😆.ye phone bhi naa....galat time pe bajta hai😡...jeet ke propose karne ke baad nahi baj sakta tha kya🥺..anyways continue soon 😊

thanks so mcuh for ur encoragign words..am gald that u likeed reading tha parts.....haan bhai phone network hi aisa..jab imp ho to lagtanahi aur jab jarurat nahi jab time pe..😆hum writers bhi bade woh hain😉 will post soon the next ..tc

Originally posted by: golu_1677

AWESOME PARTS. great parts loved the way jeet teased ashu.

awww thanks for the sweet words Golu, hope u like ti even when it gets a bit on sserious track..lol..😉

Episode: 22

25-03-07

Jeet was worried for Saachi; she was neck deep with her family troubles and work pressure. Saachi could get little time off she would call him, speak with him and have some time to relax.

01-04-07

Ashu came to meet Jeet. He marched into Jeet's room and immediately told him,

Ashu: Jeet tu kya kar raha hai yehan, dekh Saachi is leaving Mumbai. Jeet was very tensed and immediately rushed saying No… this cant happen… Jeet's eyes were full of emotions.

Ashu: Jeet yaar, I was just making April fool, oh.. u love her so much..

Jeet was so very tensed and he said,

Jeet: never do this to me, without informing she gogin away I felt as if we r getting separted, I was getting mad…I love her……I love her…I cant live without her..dont play such prank Ashu, I can;t even imagine my life without her now…

Ashu: Jeet u love her so much, I think u should let her know this soon…

Jeet got emotional wiped his tears and said, ya I know...i am waiting for her family problems to solve... (He took a deep breathe with a sense of confidence on his love for her)...He said I WILL…

Mujhe apne pyaar pe pura bharosa hai,

Yeh dil deewana kaise, kab, kahun sochta hai,

'Saachi' Tumhara ab yeh 'Jeet' hochuka hai,

Kya tumhara mann yahi baat kehne ko taras raha hai?

05-04-07

Jeet decided to go to Saachi's office and meet her, Saachi was coming out of the office and Jeet was standing outside. He saw Saachi and had a smile on his face, Saachi too was very happy to see him,

Jeet: Hi Saachi.

Saachi: Hi Jeet, it feels really nice to meet u, I wanted to meet u but with work and family was tied up.

Jeet: Ya, I know… (He had a smile that took her stress away and she felt really nice)

They walked a distance, and Saachi was looking very tired and Jeet could sense,

Jeet: Saachi u want to take some rest, u look so tired ghar drop kardun…

Saachi: No, let's walk a distance, ghar pe bhi again too much stress to take up…will have some time off and then head to my home.

Jeet: Ok.

Saachi after a stretch said, 'let's have some sugarcane juice'. Jeet and Saachi went and sat to have the jucie.

Saachi: We have taken the opinion of so many doctors, they r'nt able to detect the cause of the inner swelling. When bhabhi was bit sick Dad went there to help Bhaiyaa. Bhaiyaa would take care of kids and bhabhi and Dad would look after the shop mean while. But now everyone is running to hospital doctors and the kids' r also missing their mom. Atleast the cause shouldbe detected, and then they can cure it.

Jeet: I know how difficult it is Saachi, now u relax I am sure ur bhabhi's condition will be better.

Saachi held Jeet's hand which just gave her some strength, Jeet held her hand kept it cosy with both his hands around her hands making her feel that he is with her for life long assuring her strength and never to get upset with life.

Tumhara hath jo maine

apne hatho mey liya hai,

Dono hathonse manoo

dil key jazbaat keh diya hai,

Hatho ka choona,

tumsey pyaar ka ikraar karna hai,

Hatho mey bandhna,

Pyar ke Rishte ko swikaar karna hai..

Later as the glasses of two full sugar cane jucie came, Jeet told her to have it, Saachi was a bit hesistant and he kept insisting her.. Saachi then told him with shyness, 'Jeet tum mera hath jhodengey to ganeey ka jucie piungi na '…Jeet realsign he was holding her hand for so long, just losen his hands and freed her hands… Saachi just felt the warmness on her hand and feeling that was so beautiful..she would love his hands to be always around her making her feel composed to face life. As she was having her juice, Jeet said,

Jeet: U know I have drank this sugar cane jucie after a long time, reminds me of my school days.

Saachi didn't say much just a half hearted smile… Jeet knew her stress is taking away a lot of her.

Jeet: Ganna reminds me of my school for one more thing, U know there was this girl in my school, her name was Gunshil but pet name was Gunna…we all in the class would call her Ganna…

Saachi: Ashu and u were in the same class.

Jeet: Yaa, Ashu and Ganna were always fighting, she was monitor of the class but too proudy, one time… (Jeet was smiling and laughing little bit remembering the incident)

Saachi: what happen…

Jeet: It was annual day celebration and our teachers decided as boys r very very naughty they will take only girls form our class, complaint was from Gunna….so Ashu planned to teach her a lesson..Nothing worked and she was the presenter of the show that evening… (Jeet again laughed..)

Saachi had seen him laughing like this for first time..: what happened.

Jeet: He requested me to do something, we were in just 4^th standard, so I had seen her rehersal she reads out from the paper loudly… she use to read para about the story and later reads the intro with each charcter and students names…

Saachi: What u did?

Jeet: I really feel sorry now but at that time..i don't know I just changed one thing on that sheet and when Gunna came to read, she read the whole story summary and she was about to say 'Now here we start introduction….what spelling I changed.. poor girl infront of the whole school…She read , " Now here we start Reproduction"…

Saachi was laughing loudly after hearing this line…and she was almost in tears thinking of the situation..

Jeet: U wont belive the whole school was laughing, the teacher, the students everyone… and we clapped like anything, she was so embarresed that she ran inside the changing room.. I feel sorry for what I did, but the way all laughed…God.. The noise still is in my ears..And Ashu was so happy he gave all of us Ganna(sugarcane juice) treat that day.

Jeet was talking but his eyes were engrossed at the smile Saachi had, he felt atlast he can see her laughing and smling..He felt like a cool breeze in his heart with that sound of laughter which made him to just look at her and let this moment be always like this…

Tumhari yeh khubsurat hassi kitni pyaari hai,

Tumhare chehre par lagey roshni chahi hai,

Kaash yeh lamhal yeh pal yehi tahar jaye,

Rab kare teri duniya yunh khushi se bhar jaye,

Meri ankhen sirf chahrahi hai,

Har subha hote yeh khushi ki kiran dekhun,

Saachi pyaar mera kehra hai,

Tumhe yunh har pal har kadam muskuratey dekhun…

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hahhahahaha!!

Ganna........Poor Gunna!! 😆