'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 15

hey bhoomi i am really sorry could not comment 4 the last part as i have got a ligment tear and was un able to use the comp but the 2 parts were just amazing every thing was just perfect i am waitin 4 the next part wait to read what happens next plz cont soon

Ur fic is just awesome. Its just great.

another awesome part bhoomi. cont soon

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey bhoomi i am really sorry could not comment 4 the last part as i have got a ligment tear and was un able to use the comp but the 2 parts were just amazing every thing was just perfect i am waitin 4 the next part wait to read what happens next plz cont soon

Hey Jyothi plzz plzzz dont say sorry aisa lagta hai dosti mey dooooooooorii agayei hai😆..u got a ligment tear...ayaa ree....hope now u r feelgin better dear.... am happy u liked the episodes....hey next episode post karn emey thoda problem hoing its ready but time lagega... but will post soon

Originally posted by: nm16

Ur fic is just awesome. Its just great.

thanks so much ..feel glad u liekd reading my FF😃

Originally posted by: golu_1677

another awesome part bhoomi. cont soon

Hi Golu, hope u r doign fine... am glad u r likign the episdoes... will post btu this time will be late to post it

Hi friends,

I have never been late to post my episodes..but this time as I have saved from 18th episode in pendrive i cant post as am not finding it 😕 ...hopefully as i get it I will post it immediately..

catch u all soon with the next episode then... 😃

Episode: 18

14-03-07

Jeet went into his room. He threw all the things on the floor, Maa heard the noise and came rushing towards his room,

Jeet went to the fire place and started taking his arm close to it..Maa screamed and took his hands off it… Maa was very worried she told no way she will let him do something like this…Maa immediately tried to call Ashu who wasn't there..She called Saachi...

And Saachi told to take care of Jeet, she wil reach in a few minutes… Jeet calmed down and told his mom to go he will be fine and let him be alone….

Saachi reached and Jeet had till then locked his room, Saachi told him to talk to her and open the door, still Jeet didn't open. Maa came there and told Saachi Jeet will not, he doesn't open the door as he doesn't like to show his emotions to anyone…her son has learnt to take everything alone…he only shares with Ashu but Ashu isn't here.

Maa: Saachi Ashu phone nahi utharaha tha isliye maine tumhe phone kiya, pata nahi kyun aag ke pass jaa ke apne haath jalaa raha tha...shayad kuch gussa tha apne aap pe… ab woh shant hai, apne ko kamrey mey band kar kuch pal royega, baatey karega hum rehtey hain to woh apna dard nahi dikhata. Tum bhi jaoo beta, bahut raat ho gayi…Main driver ko kehti hun,

Saachi: Nahi, main ayi hun aur Jeet ko akele roney nahi dungi, jaanana hai kya hua hai…aap jayiye araam kijiye... Shayad main samjh rahi hun Jeet ki halat…

Maa went inside realizing Jeet and Saachi need time together to clear it up.

Saachi knocked at Jeet room. Jeet was lying on the floor and could hear her words but he didn't open the door.

Saachi later thought for a while, and said: Jeet tum jaante ho mere hath pe choot hai, ab tak ghav bhara nahi, tum darwaja khologey ya phir main unhathon ko aur bhi dard dun…

Jeet heard her words and immediately slipping on the floor rushed to open the door, Saachi saw him, his eyes were wet and teary Jeet tried to hide is face and tried to see the other side,

Jeet: Jaoo Saachi…main theek hun...

Saachi: To mujhse nazery kyun chura rahe ho…

Saachi pulled him to her side and Jeet just looked into her eyes, Saachi sat with Jeet along his side…

Saachi: kya baat hai…. Sach kaho… meri kasam.. Jeet held her hand...saying...

Jeet: I want to take the pain that u have gone throguh becoz of me… Shanaya planned this against u, I have became so helpless ...i feel I should teach the culprit a lesson. Now I know who it is, still I cant do anything...What all u have gone through...i want to take the pain alteast feel it...And that may heal me…thatas why took my hand arms near the fireplace..But maa stopped me...the pain that u r going through is becoz of me...and I gave u more pain by not trusting ur instinct...main tumhara dard kaise share karu… my guilt is killing me…my love for u ..(He saw in her eyes...i mean as a friend…how selfish I have become…

Saachi: Jeet agar tum apne aap ko chot pahunchaogey kya mera dard ussey kamm hoga…main to aur bhi dard mey hongi...pyaar mey.. (She looked into his eyes)…I mean dosti mey dard baatney ke liye u don't need to go through the same pain…apney aap woh mehsus hota hai.. mera dard main tumhari ankhon mey pehle din hi dekh sakti thi.. shayad mujhse jyda… she too had tears in her eyes..

Unknowingly they cuddled each other went into each others arms, tears were there in their eyes and feeling a relief that they will not be separated by anyone…from days they were scared their relationship may become weak..

They hugged and the breeze from the window made them feel happy to be in each others arms…

Sugandh ke sath Hawaa khidki se lehra rahi hai,

Humey chuu kar hamare dil ko sehlaa rahi hai,

Aaj hum yunh ek dusrey mey simaat gaye hain,

Pyaar ki mehak aur deewangi mey behak rahe hain…

As the window pane made noise with the wind blowing, Saachi realized it is Jeet's room, its night, and she is in his arms, she got up...feeling very shy…. Jeet too realized the closeness and he felt awkward to look into her eyes...Both felt very shy and blushed away...As Saachi walked into the drawing room..Jeet followed her...

Jeet: Thank u Saachi for coming and helping me cope with my emotions. Hamesha Ashu rehta hai aur main sambhal jata hun…aaj aur ek dost ko itne nazdeek mehsus kiya…

Saachi: Jeet phirse Dost kehtey ho aur thanks boltey ho… tumne mujhe itney kareeb aney diya, janti hun yeh vishvas ke balpe aaj tum apna dard mujhse baant rahe ho…

Jeet: Haan bahut waqt leta hun kissipe bharosa karne keliye lekin ek baar dost banata hun to zindagi bhar ke liye..

Both smiled, looked at each other. It was night they knew now can trust each other blindly, this trustand love have made their relationship grow in abundance. As they travelled back … Jeet told her he is so thankful to God he has her in his life.. Saachi blushed Saachi said, even I feel the same. There was this silence and they both together feeling the aura of the close hug they had..Saachi asked him, 'can I ask u something, can u give me, Jeet was surprised but very glad that she wanted something from him, Jeet said, 'whatever u say , can do anything for u' I would….she ws a bit shy…I would like to hear the song u sang at Masumi's birthday party…I loved every bit of the song… u really very a gifted voice.. Jeet just was more than happy to sing it for her..he sang instantly…. (and both dreamt them dancing together in their imagination)

Jeet: Tumse milke aisa lagaTumse milke armaan hue poore dil keAe meri jaane wafaTeri meri meri teri ek jaan haiSaath tere rahenge sada, tumse na honge judaaTumse milke aisa lagaTumse milke armaan hue poore dil keMere sanam, teri kasam chhodenge ab na yeh haathYeh zindagi....La la la ____________________________________________________________ _

wow i was just lost in the part is baar i was lost in the story more than the poems it was just amazing loved every word and expression of it and aaj ki baad sorry nahi bolungi lekin tum dur janeki baat mat karna plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

another ggrt part. Jeet and Saanchi are wonderful. CCont soon