'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

lovely parts Bhoomi...sorry for not replying everyday.... ab kya karein? ur parts r so small ..aise jee nahi bharta bilkul bhi .... toh 3 din ka eksath padhti hoon n tab jake reply karti hoon...aaj dekho main aayi aur dekha mera Ashu bhi agaya..n wooooooooowwwwwwwww ..he is in love n such a serious type ....uff ..now toh m more curious to read the progress of Ashu's story...

Jeet n Sachi's moments were v..v ..v nice ...i got a very cozy romantic feeling ...n yes...I just loved the pics this time ..so apt ...I can guess what kind of efforts u had puttn to suit the pics for the situation.. tusi simply brilliant ho ji...kuch dino mein alfaz ki kami hogi u ke tarif karne ke liye ....

Fav dlg for the day ,'' Pyar mey jitni takaat hai utni khone ka darr aur judaai ki tadap hai…'' So true ....waiting for the next part ..post soon dear ...

Hi Sara dear,

am glad that u enjoy it reading and readign at a stretch of three episode is like oh ho...u not gettign bored that means..hehe hey u liked Ashu and his charcter , love sory bhi na...actually its my observaion that people who r very naughty and ful of fun have a dar side and a very senstiive soul... So here u wil see he falls for woman who is as sensitive as he is inside not putside...lo..me n my philosphy..😆

hey u liked Jeet and Saachi ka graph ab tak....the actuall story link will come in few episodes ...just keep waiting.... u r likign few dailogeus that makes me feel really good..😃sometimes a single line if written icely can speak thousand emotions..na..

luv u tc

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

wow !!!!!!!! Ashu ko pyaar ho gaya 😳 😳 😳 ....Good ab new character ki entry ! 😛.....

Abt sachi-jeet, main background me ye gana baja deti hoon unke liye..

Hoo pehle se likha kuch bhi nahi..
Roz naya kuch likhti hai tu...
Jo bhi likha hai..
Dil se jiya hai..
Yeh lamha ..filhaal jee lene de ! 😳

Masoom si hasi bevaja hi kabhi
hotho pe khil jati hai.
anjaani si khushi...
behti hui kahi..
sahil pe mil jati hai.. 😛

Ye junoon hai to hai..
Ye sukoon hai to hai..
Khoobsoorat hai jee lene de.. 😉

Ye lamha filhaal jee lene de...! 😳

haiiii haiiii wah wah meri Vandu..kya baat hai....👏padhkey to I felt proud to have a reader liek u to my story...balle ballee.... kya songs and kya feel...i am sure kcuh aur hi rang aagaya...awww it was really thoughtful ekdam cretiev usee... issii baatpe ek poem ho jaye...😆

Ganoo ko chuna kitna sahi,😳

Tumhare jaisa to koi nahi,😃

Jab Jab tum kuch likhti ho Vandana,😊

Dil Khush ho chahta hai jahppi dena ...😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

another aewsome episode. loved it

Hi Golu, am glad u r enjoying reading the ff... thanks for appreciatign 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey really nice part just enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey really nice part just enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 20

20-03-07

Saachi and Jeet spoke with Arpita and went to meet Rithika. Rithika was surprised to see them at her place...But was very happy to meet them, she told them that Ashu had told a lot about them, especially about Jeet and his friendship.

Jeet: Rithika, Ashu is a very nice person; his heart is filled with a lot of care for everyone. He has a colourful image of flirting having girlfriends but it was a lot to do with his anger and revenge on his father. He was so very supressed by his father and his disciplianary ways that it lead after a while to total disbelief and do exactly opposite. He did everything which he disliked.. U can see by the hairstyle. His father an army man, could anyone say that? He tried to be a bad boy infront of his father. But he never got seriously involved with any girl ever... his belives honesty in the relationship he has made…

Dost mera har taraf ronak bharta hai,

Dil ki baat zubaanpe koi kapat naa dhoka hai,

Har rishta jo isney abtak banaya hai,

Puri imandari se harpal nibhaya hai…

Rithika: I know Ashu, He is a great friend to have… he has told me everything…

Saachi: U do admire him right Rithika, I can make that out from the way u speak about him…

Rithika: hmm… she had few tears… in her eyes…

Saachi: U know he loves u a lot, don't u feel anything for him, If u don't love him, we don't want to say anything…but we can sense some feelings…do u want to share with us Rithika..

Rithika just had a deep breathe and tried to control her tears which just flowed and she was weeping….Saachi went close to her and tried to ease her.. Jeet felt very confused, he knew Rithika has undergone so much stress already and they asking her may lead more pressure on her..

Jeet: I think U need more time.. we really r sorry if we have hurt u in any way..

Saachi: Rithika, I can sense u immensely miss Ashu, isn't it?

Jeet was shocked to hear this, and when he saw Rithika looking at Saachi with an expression, 'how did u come to know' Jeet smiled feeling its so difficult to know what is in a women's heart…

Yeh Assu bhi kya kehtin hain,

Sukh ho ya Dukh to bhi laati hain,

Pyaar, nafrat ya Judaai ka dard dil mey hai

Aurat ke dil ki baat samjhna kafi mushkil hai…

Saachi: Rithika, if u can share ur feelings may be we will be able to understand things better.

Rithika: I know Ashu is a very nice person and I know whatever is there in his heart he says it. He has been a very caring friend; a support I and my father can trust and rely on. But what all he has undergone for us is just tooo much. Already Samar has filed a case againt him when they had a fight at my house. Ashu's work is affected as he doesn't take up any new case, I got to know this. I was married and people will call me divorcee, I think Ashu can get anyone much better than me, he will have to deal with so many tough times, my dad's health is not keeping fine, the court case, Samar's threats to stay away, I cant give him anything, I know how much money he spent for me, he will not say, till the property is indispute we r gogin thorugh a lot of things..I feel like a burden on him. I don't want to spoil his life, His father….

Kitna kuch to kiya aur hame sahara diya,

Humsey badley mey kabhi kuch nahi liya,

Hamare zakhm bhi ab usko na sehne dungi,

Uskey seeney par ab ek kharoch na anedungi…

Saachi: His father…??

Jeet: Did uncle call u up?

Rithika: Ashu had informed his mother than he is goging to marry the day when he proposed to ensure that he is serious about this. Uncle spoke next day, just told Ashu marring me is the final nail into his coffin…

Rithika: (Rithika cried) I want to go …I am tired…I…..(she started crying loudly this time)

Saachi: And u love him as well… or else why u need to think so much abt him, his family and why r u scared to talk to him, u know he will not listen and will surely want u in his life…

Jeet: Rithika if u r thinking that Ashu will forget u once u go away from his life then that's not the case, he will search for u and get u…and may actually get violent to himself, I know him, he cant take emotional stress for long, he is child within. Rithika u r thinking urself as a burden on him but am sure he can bring up things to ensure u stand firmly on ur feet and not depend on him or anyone. Also Rithika he loves u, jitna tum ussey door jaoo gi, utaa woh tadapeyga aur uska pyaar badegha… may be if u really love him , u can give that back which he gave u, that's not his sympathy for u but his immense love for u…

Saachi: Rithika, Agar pyaar karti ho ya time chahti ho, to theek hai lekin Tum Ashu ke zindagi mey ek thehrav layi ho, ek khushi layi ho, Pyaar ko ehssan ka naam matt do. Log tumhare baarey mey usskey baree kehtey hi rahengey, Ashu ki sabse achhi baat hai woh dilmey jo feel karta hai woh kehta hai…agar aaj tum usse jhod dogi kisi majburi mey to woh apni iss sachaai se bhi khafaa ho uthega..ussey matt badalne do, ussey sambhal ke kareeb rakho....(Rithika wiped her tears and smiled with their words..)

Jeet: Uff ab achaa lag raha hai… I don't know tumhe Ashu mey kya pasand ayaa…

Rithika: (she was shy but couldn't stop herself from saying) Sab kuch… Jeet and Saachi looked at her instant answer and were shocked..she hid her face and hugged Saachi feeling too shy…

Aapki badmashi,

aap ke neik irade sab bhatey hain,

Aap ki taakat hai,

aap kuch nahi jhupaa saktey hain,

Zindagi se nafrat hojati agar

miltey nahi aap apto Dilwaley hain,

Ashu Aap jeevan mey aye

Hum kitney kismat waley hain,

Soon the door bell rang and standing at the door was Ashu…scrubbing his hair feeling very nervous…

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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 lo janab tapak hi gaye.........ashu bhi na.....ehehehehe!! 😆 😆 😆
Edited by togepe30 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

😆 lo janam tapak hi gaye.........ashu bhi na.....ehehehehe!! 😆 😆 😆

haaanji haaan Yeh Ashu thodi na Rithika ke pass janekey apni tadap ko rookta..aur upar se jab Jeet aur Saachi hain to to tapak na hi hai...😉..ab dekhengey next episode mey kya hoga..

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Posted: 17 years ago
jaldi post kar na part!! 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey a really fab part bhot maza aya pad ne me gr8 job cont soon

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