~Raina~:143: UD pg 36( 07/29)

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Hi guys..

Here i am with a fan fiction once again of raj and naina..Before i start i would like to dedicate this FF to my fellow rajeevians as i am one too..

ok so here it goes...

Introdution:

  • Cadet Ali begh
  • Cadet Aalekh Sharma
  • Cadet Amardeep Huda
  • Cadet Yadhuvansh Sahani
  • Cadet Naina Singh Ahluwalia
  • Cadet Pooja Ghai

Faculty\Staff

  • Brigadier Chandok-Official comander of KMA
  • Major Nair-V.P of KMA
  • Capt. Rajveer Singh Shikhawat
  • Dr. Capt. Shalini Singhal
  • Subedar sukhwinder suri/ suriji-caretaker of the academy and mess.
  • Subedar Lolita Sen- Caretaker of girls hostel and Library.

PART 1

It was five o' clock in the morning and somewhere in the girls hostel an alarm went off. It was the room of Cadet Naina singh.

Naina was getting ready for her morning jog/walk. she wanted to be down to the lake as soon as possible. Unknown to the fact there was somebody there already, with the same habit of waking up early and going for a walk.

As she got down to the lake she saw somebody there, some body she knew and it was Huda..( I know you were expecting Rajveer.)

Now naina was both shocked and thrilled to see Huda there.

Naina was cold and so she sneezed, Huda turned around and he was impressed with the beauty of this girl. Seeing her he went up to her

HUDA: are wah chori, tereko mare se milne ki itni jaldi ki tu to subah 5 baje uuth kar mare se milne chali aayi.Waise isme teri koi ghalti nahin, kya hai na Huda ki personalit hi kuch aisi hai.waise ke baat hai?? bolde. meri mammiji kehte hai agar man mein koi baat ho to boldene chahiye. bojh halka ho jata hai.

Naina(not impressed): Mere paas tere faltu bakwaas sune ke liye waqt nahin hai and please mujhe tang mat kar.

Huda:Ek to tu subah subah mujhse milne aati hai aur phir kehti hai tang mat karo. aakhir chakkar kya hai?

Naina( irritated): mein tujhse milne nahin balki yahaan walk karne aayi thi.

Huda: are wah tujhe to please bolona bhi aata hai. Accha chal thik hai na baat kar hum atleast walk to saath mein kar hi sakte hain na.

Naina was now ahead of Huda.

Huda: are phoolan sun to...

catching up with her..

Naina: phoolan?? yeh phoolan kaun hai??

Huda: tu

Naina: mein?

Huda: tujhe hamesha hi gusa aata hai.. bilkul phoolan devi ki tarah hai tu..

Huda(in his flirtious ways): waise aaj ke din ki siruwaat hi itni acchi hui hai ab to gaana gane ka man kar raha hai...(now singing) aap jaisa koi meri zindgi mein aaye to

cut off by naina

Naina: to baat ban jaye..

Huda(shocke and flirty): phoolan.. tujhe gaana bhi gana aata hai.. aaj ka din to sach much accha hi jayega..are wah mammiji..

to be cont.......

hi guys..

this is m very first FF please excuse all the spelling and the grammar mistakes.

and please tell me should i continue or not.. waiting for your comments..

luv to all

sameera.😊

Edited by aRohAAnGeL - 17 years ago

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yes great job continuee plssssssssssssssss
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hey wooooooooooo gr8 ff cont.......... sonn............. 👏
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its great pls pls pls pls continue!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 😛
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hey i read ur fic its really good but humare capt. sahab kahan hain unhain bhi toh dikhaiye waiting for him update soon 👏
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awesom yrr plzzzzz update soon waiting eagerly ... 😛
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Good Start... plz update.... waiting for our best jodi RN to come on sceen...

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our Famous RN jodi will be seen together in part 3. and they will be good fnds.. and for now i am updating part 2
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PART 2

Scene in the mess

Puja: Yeh huda aur naina ka singnal kha jam ho gaya??
Aalekh: Agar saath mein hoge to huda apni naiya paar lagane ki koshis kar raha hoga aur saath hi mein khali pili naina ke dimaag ki ghanti baja raha hoga.
Ali: Aalekh bhai aap bhi na;
Puja: Are Ali, Aalekh ne kaunsa mobile vibrate pe daala hai, voh to sirf ringtone sun raha hai

Now yudi walk in with a tacky look.

Puja: Ab tere network mein kaunsa signal jam hai?
Yudi: problem to ab hum sabko hone wali hai, specialy naina ko.
Ali: Aisakya hua Ydi bhai?
Yuda: Capt. Rajveer kuch dino ke liye academy se bahar jaa rahe hain.
Puja: kya??
Yudi: haan, ab to
Aalekh cuts him.
Aalekh: ab to Maj. nair ko ek au mauka mill gaya Naina ki acchi band bajaane ka
Huda walks i n.
Huda: matlab gayi bhes pani mein.
Aalekh is now almost about to get out of the mess when...
Ali: Aalekh bhai aap kaha chale?
Aalekh: Dimaag ko thanda karne.. chalega??..kya
Ali puts his hands up..
Suiji listens to all this and says : Put naina ki chinta to mujhe bhi hai par Maj. saab ke aage kiski chalti hai, hai ki nahin?? Chalo putr now cheer up!! hain!! lassi pilo..
Suriji to orderly: Lya oye putr lassi lya..
Huda(muumrs to cadets): ab inki lassi piko to....
Ali: waise huda bhai, aap the kahan subah se??
Huda: yahin academy, main kaha jaane laga tum sabko chod k yaaro..
Puja laughs..(oviosuly she understood he was wid girls)..
Ali: puja aap ko kya hua??
Puja: are ali, jodne ki koshis kar raha hoga
Yudi: kya?? koi device??
puja: nahi oye
Yudi: to?
Puja: Apna signal aur kisi ladki ka network..
And they all laugh and huda is embarrsed then he says: kya hai na huda ki pesonality kuch aisi hai.. jananiya huda ko chod ti hi nahin..
everybody is still laughing when naina walk in..
Naina:kya hua guys.
Yudi: kuch nahin, tu bata tu thi kahan subah se??
Naina: apne kamre mein; kyun??
Ali: woh hum sabko aapse kuch baat karni thi.
Naina: haan bol; aaj waise bhi mera mood bahut accha hai.
Huda(mmmurs): ab nahi rahega..and all the cadets xcept naina look at huda.
Naina: kya hua bolo bhi.
Ali: aaj waise aisa kya hua hai jo aapka mod bahut accha hai?
Huda: aaj phoolan ne mere saath walk jo ki thii subah subah..
Naina leaves and sees Aalekh drinking.. she walks up to him
Naina: aaj ini jaldi kyun??
Aalekh: Dimaag thanda karne ek yehich tarika aata hai apun ko.
Naina: par dimaag garam kyun hai?
now Yudi walks up to them
Yudi: Capt. Rajveer jo ja rahe hain
Naina(shocked): what?? kahan?.. aur kab..
huda comes too
Huda: academy se bahar, kuch dino ke liye
NAina:yeh sab tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho??
puja and ali come too..
Ali: hume laga aapko pata hoga;
Puja: haan waise bhi tera signal aur capt. Rajveer ka network to hamesha jura hi rehta hai.
Naina thinks: subah se mein sir ke saath unke kamre mein hi thi, to phir unhone mujhe bataya kyun nahi..(obviously she had lied to her friends)
Puja:snaps in front of naina..Naina, kaha kho gayi, sir ne tujhe SMS nahi bheja kya?
Naina: haan(coming bavk to her senses) nahin puja, aisi koi baat nahi hai
After saying that she runs off.
Huda: yeh phoolan ko kya hua??
Puja:SMS nahi mila na,
Huda: to
Puja: are yaar ab woh detailed MMS le gi.
Ali: puja aap bhi na....

To be cont..

Hi,
Thank you everybody for your wonderful comments and let those comments coming in..
please excuse all the spelling and grammar mistakes..

love,
sameera



Edited by chocolate p - 17 years ago
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