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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey.nice part.do update fast, cant wait for ur next part 👏
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Episode# 5 The curse is out there!!!

On their way back to Sanjeevani ,Atul is looking to his friends
and thinking about what Zoya told him and about the box.

In Sanjeevani, Dr.Keerti assigs interns their duties and leaves, Ridz is still standing there in thoughts, Atul goes to her.

Atul:Kya hua Ridz tum yahan is tarah kuyn khari ho?

Ridz kuch nahi wo main apnay patient kay baray main
soch rahi thi.

Atul:Wo patient jisko cancer hai kya naam hai uska haan Sumit.

Ridz:Hmmmmm I am quite tensed, main uski halat main jitna improvement
dekhna chahti hoon, utni hi uski halat kharab hoti ja rahi hai.

Armaan is standing nearby looking his case file, he comes near to them
and says:

A:Aur kuyn nahi bigday gi, wo harwaqt tumhari tareef karta rahta hai
Ridima, aaj aap bahut khubsurat lag rahi hain, ye color aap par hamesha
suit karta hai, aaj aap yahan aaye nahi tu main pareshan hogaya….(Ridz
looks at him angrily)ye sub tareef sun kar madam khushi say itni phool
jatio hain kay ilaaj karma hi bhool jati hain.

Ridz:Just shut up Armaan, tumharay liye tu har baat aik mazaq hai
kisi ki pareshani kit u tumhein koi parva nahi hai, agar tum mujhay
koi suggestion nahi dekh saktay tu atleast ye bakwas bhi mat karo,
she leaves in anger.

A:Ye kya hoga isay, such karwa lag gaya.

Atul:Armaan tub hi na kuch bhi bol deta hai,yaar Ridz such much
bahut pareshan hai.

A:Relax champ kisi aur baat ka ghussa wo mujh par nikal rahi hai aur tub hi…

Atul:Armaan mazaq aik had tak mazaq hota hai , laken us say ziyada nahi.

A:Listen champ apnay patient ko lekar main bhi bahut pareshan hoon magar iska
matlab ye nahi kay main bhi basket ki tarah sab par chilana shuru kardoon.

A leaves in anger.

Atul thinks that my friends really are disturbed.

Atul's patient is discharging and he is advicing something,
when he saw Rahul and Muskaan argueing over a case, he listens,

M:Mujhay meray patient ko treat karma ata hai, aur jo medicine mainey
us ke liye suggest ki hai wo bilkul correct hai, phir tujhay kya problem hai.

Rahul:Oye yehi tu problem hai, teri batai hui dawa ghalat hai.

Muskaan:Sahi hai.

Rahul:Ghalat hai.

Keerti comes there and scolds both

K:Shayad aap log ye bhool rahay hain ke ye hospital hai, kya main
jaan sakti hoon is indiscipline ke kya wajah hai, before Muskaan tries to
speak something, Rahul speaks up:

Rahul:Main ye patient ko ghalat medicine suggest kar rahi thi
main inhay rook raha tha, laken ye sunnay ko taiyaar nahi hai.

Muskaan:Lakne ma'm meri baat tu…..

Keerti cuts her off,

K:Dr.Muskaan, ye main bhi mehsoos kar rahi hoon kay aap
apnay patients ko lekar bilkul bhi serious nahi hain, apka ye case
ab Dr.Rahul handle karengay aur aap general ward main Dr.Anjali
ko assist karengi, m I clear.

Muskaan gets very upset,

M:Yes M'am.

While Rahul smiles and leaves, leaving Muskaan crying almost.

Atul feels bad.He thinks Muskaan is laughing and chatting all the time
but really she never discussed those problems which she's having with
Rahul.Atul is walking in the corridor, and thinking about the events happened
to his friends that day, he thinks that same will happen everyday, no matter from
outside how funloving my friends are but they are really facing problems in there
work.

He goes into the locker room, open his locker and takes outhis box and goes
on to the roof.

Atul:Mera khayal hai ab is box ko kholnay ka waqt agaya hai,main apnay
doston ko is tarah aur pareshann nahi dekh sakta.

He opens the box slowly, and than a look of shock comes to his face
he gets angry.

Atul:Ye kya ye tu khali hai us Zoya nay mujhay ulloo banaya,
aur main bila wajay uski baat par yakeen kar betha, he close the box
and leaves in anger.

Some colorful , lights takes a shape of heart, and blow up,the
seven lights moves in 7 different directions.

Next day Atul comes into Sanjeevani singing, when he bumps
into Anjali, and all her files fell on the floor, she looks at him.

Atul:Aisay kya dekh rahi mujhay pata hai, ab tu kahogi,
ke Atul kyat um dekh kay nahi chal saktay, meri sari files gira di.

Anji:Atul main tumhein sorry hi kehnaywali thi, laken tumnay intezaar nahi kiya.
She leaves.

Atul:Hunh intezaar nahi kiya sab ladkiyaan aik jaisi hoti hain.

Armaan comes from behind kya baat kahi hai champ
ye sari ladkiyaan waqai aik jaisi hoti hain.

Atul just look at A says nothing.

A ward boy is coming with some medicens bottles in his
hands, but he starts feeling dizzy and falls down both Atul and
Armaan comes running to him, everybody gathers around him,

Atul:Checking his pulse, isay tu bukhar ho raha hai, isay admit
kardena chahiye forum.A looks at him surprisingly isay kya hogaya
abhi thodi dar pehle tu ye itna attitude dikha raha tha aur ab..he thinks!!!

Rahul is checking Muskaan's patient, and thinking tht how he snatch away
the case from her, now he will gain more points like tht, and will teach her
a lesson too , like this, the patient asks Rahul about Muskaan and tells him
that Muskaan is a very good doctor and he likes her treatment more, and he
wants to be near him.

Rahul:Dr.Muskaan ke bajaye ab say ye case main handle karonga.

Patient:Laken Dr.Muskaan…!!!

Muskaan:Its no use now, she says, ab tumhein Dr.Rahul ki adat
dalni chaiye ye mujhsay ziyada behtar doctor hain.

Rahul is all schocked to see a new Muskaan in front of him,but
he looks at at her red eyes, Muskaan leaves, he feels bed tht he
did wrong to her.

The patient says:Kyun Dr.Rahul, plan kaam kar gaya,
ab dekhna aur kya rasta hain meray paas is kudi ko sabaq sikhanay kay.

Rahul gets angry he thinks how dare he think like tht about
Muskaan.

Rahul to the patient:Abay teri tu main rula diya na usay!!!

He leaves.

The patient:Haaaaaa, kal tak tu ye uska bahanay ke liye bhi taiyaar tha aur
aaj.

Ridz is sitting in the locker room, reading a file, when Armaan comes,he notices
tht Ridz is really looking worried he tries to talk to her but than stops himself,than he
again thinks he should talk to her, he comes forward, again gets back,Ridz finally
looks at him in anger and asks:

Ridz:Koi problem hai kya?

A:Haan hai, he kneels down (Ridz stands up from her bench)
Armaan picks up the pen under tht bench and says:

A:Oye kya samjha haan tumhara aashirwas nahi le raha tha main.

Ridz:Ridz sits down again angrily and copy him tumhara ashirwad
nahi le raha tha main.

Ridz again start studying the files Armaan reached the door to leaves the room
but he thinks something turn around and says Yoooooo future wife and than after
saying this he gets into shock, Ridz looks at him burning with Armaan, she walk
towards him in anger and says how dare you future husband,than she gets into
shock , they both look at each other in a big big shock.

to be cont...

Precap:Dr.Keerti asks Armaan to call Ridz,he says ok m'am
he stars reading his file,Dr.Armaan keerti shouts again,call Dr.Ridhima
now,Armaan calls Ridz!!!!

Maleka/Love Armi





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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
hey
loved that part
plz continue
😊 swansea 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
hey wat was tht.....watever it was it was kool jus read d whole thing its 2 guddd.a diff concept but 2 gud plz continue soon.......
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
nce! i hpe AR r 2gether! contd soon nce goi! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
very nice................keep it up..............plz post next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fantastic.....absolutely brilliant ya!!! 👏
dis is such a fascinatin angle ya....magic,spells nd curse amidst all dese interns....just wat ws needed!! 😆 😆
just loved d future husband nd wife bit....

can't wait to c wat happens nxt...plz update soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow maleka this is sooo good! very interesting and different! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode# 6 Everyone changing!!!

They are both standing in shock, and their mouths open,
Ridz again shouts in anger at Armaan:
Ridz:Tumhari himmat kaisey hui mujhay ye kehnay
ki future husband,haaah,Ridz puts her hand on her mouth.

A:yoooo future wife mujhay bhi koi shauq nahi hai
tumhein future wife kehnay ka..ka ka,…he looks
strangely and in worriedly at her and Ridz looks at
him.
They both don't know what just happen,Anji enters
the locker room saying.
Anji:Ye Atul apnay aap ko samajhta kya hai, main bhi
usya bata kar rahongi kay har ladki aik jaisi nahi hoti.
AR both looks at Anji strangely and than looks at each
other, Anji says:
Anji:Hey Ridzi,Armaan main caf ja rahi tum duno bhi
chalo.
AR together:Hmmmm???
Anji looks at them, she says again.
Anji:Main caf ja rahi hoon tum duno bhi chalo.
AR together again:Haaan, theek hai.
Anji:Tum duno aik sath aik bat par razi.Strange!!!tu chalein??
They both look at Anji and than each other and again says
together.
AR:Nahi!!!! Never.
Anji:Ye tum duno ko ho kya gaya hai, never mind
main akekay hi caf chali jati hoon, aur mujhay us
Atul ko bhi tu sabaq sikhana hai.
AR together:Haaan!!!
Anji leaves looking at them angrily.
Now at house, Ridz cant sleep, future husband
aur Armaan Ridz thinks, and thinks ye kya musibat
hai main jab bhi uska naam leti hoon ye
At A's house he is also walking here and there,
basket aur future wife, main jab bhi usay kehnay
ki koshish karta hoon meray moon say, ye future
wife, aur wo bhi he again tries to say basket but
he says future wife.Ahunh, Armaan beats his head.
Next day in Sanjeevani, Dr.Keerti is assigning
everyone there duties, Rahul tries to talk with
Muskaan, but she did'nt want to talk to him,
Armaan is seeing all this, and he sees tht Atul is
giving both RM a sarcastic look, Atul murmurs.
Atul:(sarcastically)Ye sekho iska dewana bana phir raha
hai , kitna baikar waqt is kay paas ladkiyon ke liye.
Both Anji and Armaan is standing behind to him and
Anji is standing besides him at a little distance
,Anji looks at him in anger and says slowly.
Anji:Tumehin tu main sabaq sikhaongi, aur bataongi
kay kay har ladki aik jaisi nahi hoti.
Armaan looks at them with a strange look on his
face and thinks, ye champ kaisi batein kar raha hai aur
ye ye Anji Atul ko itni importance de rahi hai,Rahul
Muskaan ke peechay aur main future wife.He gets lost in
his thoughts.
Dr.Keerti takes Armaan's name, but he did'nt answer.
Sr.Keerti says sharply:Dr.Armaan.
A:Ji ji dr.keerti.
Dr.Keerti:Dr.Ridhima kahan hai, meray khayal
say kal mainey ap duno ko ko aik report aaj submit
karnay ko kaha tha.
A:Ji ji wo future I ..i mean unhi kay paas hai.
Dr.K:Angrily, aur Dr.Ridhima kahan hain, kya wo
ye bhool gayi hain kay wo aik doctor hain???Unhay call
kijeye.
Armaan looks in a shock at her,and gets lost in his thoughts,

Dr.K:Dr.Armaan, call Dr.Ridima now.
A:Ji, Keerti is standing there, and looking at him angrily.
Armaan calls her, Ridz looks at Armaan's number, she
thinks ye zaror Dr.K nay karwaya hoga.She picks up
the phone.
A:Main bol raha hoon.
R:Haan bolo.
A:Dr.Keerti report kay baray mai pooch rahi hain,
wo tuharay paas hai aur tum kahan ho?
Dr.Keerti takes phone from Armaan's hand and says

Dr k:Aaj tu apko sirf phon kiya hai, next time apka
resignation leter apkay ghar bhijwaya jayega, she cuts off
the phone and give it to Armaan and leaves in anger.
Now Muskaan is in general ward with Anji and they
are talking with a patient, a little girl, who gives Muskaan
a flower.
Muskaan:Thank you(she gets happy).
The girl says thank u mujhay nahi usay bolo.
M:Kisay?
She turns around and see Rahul standing there,she looks
at him angrily and throws his flowere on the floor and leaves.
Rahul gets upset.Atul comes there, when Muskaan is leaving
Atul looks at her and says:
Atul:Wow Muskaan you are looking very nice today.
Muskaan:(She blushes)o thanks.
Rahul gets envious and angry at Atul.
Anji looks at them and thinks, nahut bhao kha
raha, isay tu sabaq sikhana hi padega.
Atul to Muskaan:Waisey agar tu is waqt farig ho tu
coffee penay chalein?
M:Ya sure.
They both leave, and A comes there and says:
A;Kal tak tu ye Anjali par jaan chadak
raha tha ye achanak isay kya ho gaya??
Ridima comes from behind:
Ridz:Future hus…mera matlab hai mukjay tumse
kuch zaroori baat karni hai.
Armaan turns around:
A:Yoooo(Ridz looks at him)am.mm.mujhay
bhi..
R:Meri samajh nahi araha hai, ye kya ho raha hai?
A:Aur meri b hi, jab bhi hum aik dosray ka naam
leni ki koshish kartay hain, hamesha hum…
R:Wohi tu, ab karein tu…
Rahul comes there saying.
Rahul:Main us atul ko chodnay wala nahi hoon,
meray samnay meri muskaan ke sath openly flirt kar
raha hai.(Ar looks at each other and says without
making noise meri muskaan!!!)Rahul puts his coat
in the locker and says, ab main ?Muskaan ko
apnay pyaar ka yaqeen dil kar rahonga.
Now AR looks at each other looking really worried.
Ridz:Tumne note kiya problem humaray sath hi nahi
hai sab ajeeb harkatein ka rahay hain.
A:You are right, ye tu bahut badi gadbad lag
rahi hai.
Ridz:Laken Sapna, usya mainey subha
say nahi dekha.
A:Yeah, I hope kay woh theek ho.
Sapna comes there,O god aaj tu main
buri tarah thak gayee hoon.
Ridz:Tu chalo na caf chalet hain ftum fresh jo
jao gi.
S:Excuse me caf wo log jatay hain, jinkay
pass karnay ke liye koi kaam nahi hota,bas idhar
udhar ki hanktay rehtey hai,aik acha doctor honay
kay natay humein apna aik lamha bhi zaya nahi karma
chaiye(A looks at Ridz and slowly says ye bhi gayee)
coffee tu hum ghar ja kar bhi pee saktay hain,aisa tu
nahi hai kay aik din baatein nahi karengay ya coffee
nahi peyangay tu mar jaaengay, patients ki zinbdagi
ziyadi precious hoti hai, coffee aur humari fazool
baton say, some doc gathers there and so as Dr.
Shubhankar they all are listening to her speech, she
continues,zara socho agar humaray coffee peenay
kay time par kisi patient ko humari zaroorat pad
jai tu, hum kya jawab dengay???humein apna
aik bhi second waist nahi karma chahiye.
The docs clap when she is finished.
Dr.Shub:That's the spirit dr.Sapna,laken aik
advice karonga kay hum apnay patients ka
ka khayal tabhi theek say rakh saktay hain
jab humari apni sahet bhi achi ho,aur main
subah say apko non stop duties par dekh raha
hoon, I think you need a break ok.
S:Ok sir.
Armaan to Ridz:Sapna ko Dr.Shubhankar subah
say notice kar rahay thay.
Ridz:Main tu sooch rahi hoon kay is pagalpan ka shikar
aur kaun kaun hua hai.
Precap:Ridz is talking on the phone with Anji,
Di ye aap kya karnay ja rahi hain, Anji is standing on
a hill with a rope tying around her back,Ridzi aaj
main Atul koye bata dongi ki main aur ladkiyoon
ki tarah nahi hoon,Anji jumps, and Atul comes there
shouting there Anji rok jao please it is too dangerous!!!!!

do comment
thanks


Maleka/Love Armi



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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehehehe.funny part, just loved it. loved future wife and future husband is just awesome 😆 do update soon

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