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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice FF Maleka... will look forward for more.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really gud 👏
plz cont. soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey,nice ff.loved it..do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
hey malika i read both part 2gether n i just luvd it...wel w8in 4 ur next update...
urs truly ALIFYAH!!!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode# 3 Fortune teller!!!!

Now next day in evening after the work all interns sits together,

Anji:Oh GOD that was so tiring , main tu samjhati thi kay ye log samajhdar hain
laken , inho tu thaka ke rakh diya.

Ridz:Di ye Mussorie ki village side hai, aur yahan kay logon ko samjhana thoda
mushkil tu hai.

A:Specially jab tumharay jaisey doctors samjhaye to God can only save them.

Ridz is about to say something but Rahul speaks

R:Har doc ka apna aik style hota hai aur jahan tak mainey aaj dekha
Ridima nay kafi achi tarah say sab logon ko handle kiya.

Ridz:Rahul tum bekaar is say baat kar rahay ho who kya hai na
kuch logon ki nazrein itni kabil nahi hoti , ya phir wo dosroon ki burayiaan
dhondtay rehtay hain.

M:Mainey suna hai kay yahaan ka town market bahut acha hai,
she spoke to Ridz,Anji and Sapna chalo ghoomnay chaltay hain.

A:A says hum bhi chaltay hain.

They all leave.

All are seeing the market and getting happy,

Atul and Armaan pass by a bangle shop:

Atul:Main Anji ke liye choodiyan khareedta hoon, I hope ka usay
pasand aayengi.

A:Champ wo Anji hai aur usay is type ki cheezein pasand nahi ayengi

Atul:Usay pasand ayngay job hi cheez dil say de jaye wo zaroor pasand ati hai,
aur dekho na ye chodiyan kitni khoobsurat hain.

Armaan see at a shop Ridz is buying some bangles and are wearing them
also, A looks at her and smiles, she is looking very pretty, thans she pick
up and earing and wears it ,Atul says haina khubsurat A says yaa khubsurat
to bahut hai.

Atul moves towards another shop, while A stands there and keep
staring at Ridz, he see tht Ridz is laughing on something,suddenly she
looks at him, and see A staring to her she looks at him angrily and
A turn his face back and is going, when he heard a mysterious voice
of a woman behind him.

"So you love her a lot"

A gets surprised on hearing a voice in English in the village!!!

He turns around(the woman is none other than Zoya Segal who has
came before in DMG and predicted something about R and A tht
comes true,but here I am potraying her character in a different way.)

A:You are talking to me, aa laken is gaaon main aap…!!!!

Zoya:Aksar zindagi main insano ka samna aisay halaat say hota hai
jiskey baray main unsay socha hi nahi hota, aur isi ko kismet kehtay
hain, tu bataye kitna pyaar kartay hain aap us say???

A:Armaan laugh wo main aur pyaar wo bhi us basket say, aap ko
koi ghalat fehmi hai, meray liye kya basket hi reh gaye hai.

Zoya:Soch li jiye kahin aisa na ho kay aik baar phir apkay
samnay aisay halataa ajayein jiskay baray main apanay klabhie socha na ho.

A:Dekheiye……

Ridz comes there

Ridz:Tum yahan bhi shuru ho gaye, she whispers in his ears, atleast
apni aur unki umar tu dekho, kahin bhi kabhie bhi!!!

A:Basket tum tum bhi khain shuru ho jati hoo, kabhie socha tu karo main..!!!!

Zoya looks at them interestingly than she take out some cards, and smiles
AR are atill fighting, she looks at her crystal , and than again looks at them.

A:Ab sachai batao tumhein ye keh rahi thi kay kay….

Zoya:Aaap duno aik dosray ke liya banay hain.

A&R:(Looks at each other and than shouts together)Kya!!!!

Everyone around them start looking at them,

Anji to Sapna:Ye duno bi na, kabhie nahi sudharnay walay.

Atul and Rahul are standing together.

Atul;Ye mujhay koi fortune teller lag rahi hai.

Sapna to Muskaan and Anji:Chalo chal kar dekhein tu sahi ab kya hogaya.

Ridz:I think apko kuch ghalat fehimi hui hai.

A:Mujhay bhi yehi lagta hai.

Zoya:Bada ittefaq hai aap duno main, she says meaningfully.

Anji,Sapna,Atul,Rahul and Muskaan all reached there,

Anji:Ab kya hua Ridzi???

Ridz:Kuch nahi di.

Zoya:Main in duno say keh rahi thi ke ye duno aik dosray ke liye banay hain.

Atul is standing beside Armaan, he gets into shock,

Atul:kya!!!!!Main aur Armaan aik dosray ke liye banay hain?????

A:Abay champ he whispers in Atul's yrs ye meri aur basket ki baat ka rahay hain.

Anji:What???she looks at Zoya and says lagta hai apko medical treatment ki zaroorat hai.

Sapna:Bikul aap bhi humaray sath chalien, bahut experienced doctors milegay wahan apko
treatment ke liye.They all leave laughing from there while Zoya gets angry when they all
leave she says:

"Tum loog kya meri treatment karogay , treatment tu main karongi tum sabki, aur aisi
treatment karongi kay tum sari zindagi yaad rakho gay!!!!......

Precap:Same night Zoya gives Atul a wooden box and says it will
change not only your's but the life of the people around you as well
Atul is about to open the box……!!!!

to be continue.......



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Maleka/Love Armi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
OMG
I CAN'T BELIVE IT
PLZ CONTINUE
😊 swansea 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ITS LYKE A FARIY TAE! REALLY INTETRSTN! CONTD SOON!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi :)
I've just started reading your ff and it is very interesting 😊
Hope you have a lot of cute AR scenes 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the appreciation folks!!! 😃

here it goes again:

Episode# 4 Someone on his way to change the destiny!!!!

At night when everyone is sleeping Atul cant sleep, he thought what
zoya said about AR, he thinks that she said something which is ofcourse impossible
but..
Atul:Kitni conviction say keh rehi thi woh, kya Armaan or Ridz ko dekh
kar koi bhi ye keh sakta hai kay wo aik aik dosray ke liye banay hain,kya aisa
mumkin hai…
Armaan murmers in sleep:Hey champ Anji kay sapnay dekhnay hai tu
dekh laken apna volume to mute karday.
Atul wakes up, he thinks tht he will meet Zoya, but tomorrow they are
leaving and this is the right time to meet her because if let anyone knows
than sure they will make fun of him so he tiptoed out of the camp and goes
to meet Zoya.
Now a beautiful garden is shown , everything is decorated, like in a wedding
Armaan is coming wearing a white kurta with a red and golden shawl and a
bride is standing in red dress with a ghoongat oh her face, he comes there and smiles,
and lift up the ghoonghat , the bride is none other than Ridz she blushes and lower
her face, he grab her chin and and lift up her face, and is about to kiss her when
both Armaan and Ridz wakes up shouting…
AR:Ahhhhhhhh
Ridz puts her hand on her chest, Anji wakes up too.
Anji to Ridz:Kya hua Ridzi?are you ok??
Ridzy:Haa.. ji di main theek hoon, I am ok.
Anji:Nai Ridz you are not ok, lagta tumnay koi bahut bura
sapna dekha hai.
While Armaan is sighing
A:ThankGod ye sapna tha,than he laughs, ofcourse ya sapna hi
tha, I hate basket, mera itna jeena haram karti hai kay sapnay
main bhi peecha nahi choda.
Ridz:Main theek hoon di, sab theek hai, she and anji leis again,
(she thinks)Oh God main aur Armaan, ye tu sapna hi ho sakta hai, main jiskay
sapnay bhi dekhna na chahon who meray sapno main,huuuh.
While A is so shocked by this dream tht instead of putting blanket
overhimself, he put the pillow on him and instead of the pillow he
put his blanket.
A:Ye mujhay itni sardi kuyn lag rahi hai, whoops mer blanket sir
kay neechay kya kar raha hai, aur ye pillow blanket ki jaga, zaroor
ye sab champ nay kiya hoga, Anji kay sapnay dekhtay dekhtay
mera blanket aur pillow hi khiska diya,par ye champ hai kahan
huh ab zaroor bathroom gaya hoga he sleeps again.
Zoya is looking at her crystal ball, she thinks tht
meray jadu nay shuru honay say pehley hi asar dikhana
shuru kar diya hai, abhi say aik dosray kay sapnay.
Zoya: (without looking at back),tumhein apnay doston
ke liye maafi mangnay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai dr.Atul.
Atul is all shocked and surprised,he thinks isnay kaisey
jana ye main hoon.
Zoya:Mainey kasey jana is sawal ka jawab tu main khud bhi nahi
dey sakti,(she turns around finally)
Atul:Ji wo main wo aap say, ArmaanRidz, nai woh main,
apnay aur Armaan , ab nai wo main….
Zoya:Aap ye janna chahtay hain kay aya apki daal,Dr.Anjali ke
sath galay gi ya nahi.
Atul:Sab kuch tu apnay keh diya ab kehnay ke liya bacha kya hai.
Zoya take sout a wooden box and give it to him she says:
Z:Ye sirf apki hi nahi balkay apkay doston ki zindagi bhi badal
dega, hmm take it.
Atul:Nai nai main ye nahi le sakta, main jadu ka istimaal karkay
Anji kay kareeb nahi jaonga main tu apnay pyaaar say usay…
Zoya:Pyaar khud bhi tu aik jadu hai, main tu sirf tumhari madad
karma chahti hoon, aur ye aik rasta, ismay main kuch aisa hai
jo tumhary doston ki bahut si mushkilein asaan kardega, mera
matlab hai unki wo uljhanain jo wo aik dosray say nahi baathtay
who bhi asaan ho jayengi, kyat um nahi chahtay tumharay doston
li chupi hui mushkelien asaan ho jayein????
She looks at him meaningfully
He takes the box from her and leaving, but Zoya says:
Z:Mainey tu tumhein aik rasta diya hai is par chalna na chalna
tumhari marzi hai,
Zoya smiles she thinks tumehin pata nahi kay tum kya bala apnay
sath le ja rahay ho, liken main kya karon tum jaisey ziddi , logon
ka ilaaj aisayhi kiya ja sakta hai, aur tumhari marzi ab nahi chalnay ki
aik baar ye bala bahar agayee tu…!!!! She laughs.
Next day the doctors are talking with the villagers, Ridima
is talking toa little girl:
Ridz:Acha ye batao tumhein hum sub se ziyada
kaun acha laga.
The girl:Wo
Ridz looks in the direction where the girl pointed her finger
its Armaan, who is standing there and talking to a little boy
he asks the same the thing to the boy and he pointed his finger towards
Ridima, A&R nods their hand and thinks together "kya choice hai duno ki,
the little girl goes, Ridz is sitting alone on that hill, the boy asks Armaan to play
with him,and he also asks Ridz the both agree,other children also joins them
interns and other docs also comes there they start playing catching the ball
they are playing when a child throw the ball higher in the sky, both AR see it
and about to catch the ball when they both collided with each other,Ridz fell
on Armaan, they get lost into each other's eyes,suddenly they both come out
of the dream and Ridz tries to get up she does'nt know while staring at Armaan
thth she is grabbing A's hand so when she gets up tearing one of his sleev.Ridz
mouth gets wide open , A looks at his sleev , Ridz gets up,A looks here and there
the children start laughing,A is still lying he hides his chest from both
his hands, and shouts.
Ridz gets angry she shouts too
Ridz:Kya hua????
A:(A gets up)main hamesha janta tha kay tumharay iraday bahut buray
hain laken itnay buray, he gets closer to her and whispers in her ears
Ridz still don't understand what is he saying, he says
A:Ridima in chotay masoom bacho kay baray main tu socha
hota, inkay samnay meri izzat par hath daltay huay tumhein sharam
nahi aai???
Ridz:(Boiling with anger)A apni bakwas band kardo warna, and
Armaan disappears!!!!
Precap:Atul looks at the box and says aakhir ismay hai kya,
now they show Rahul is arguing with Muskaan about a patient
Atul showing opening the box, Atul gets shock on opening the box,
Atul is walking into Sanjeevani, and than from a window of a room
he see something and his mouth gets wide open!!!!
To be continued….!!!!

Maleka/Love Armi


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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar jaldi se AR ko milado! so far really nce! i am w8i for AR romantic sences 😳 ! contd soon! 😛

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