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wow just read dear awesome start 👏 👏
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good start.eagerly waiting for ur next part
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt starting...cont. soon



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Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow just read dear awesome start 👏 👏



Thanks monikaseth. Hopefully...i will be able to keep the "awesome" throughout the fan-fic.😆
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good start.eagerly waiting for ur next part



Thanks deeya123! I am posting the next part right about now.
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A Big Thank You to all my readers. You guys have really boosted my confidence to a higher level. Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. I am hoping i wont lose any readers throughout the story but i sure hope to gain more. Here are TWO parts (part 2, part 3)......My christamas and Thank you gifts to all my reader. Love you all TONS.


Part 2:

AT SHARMA MANSION:
Everyone was having dinner except for kripa. Kripa walked downstairs in the midst of the dinner.

Kripa: mamma, pappa, bhai.............mein shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hoon.

Pappa: really kripa?

Kripa: haan pappa..

Gayatri: to kal se ladke dekhna shuru kar de hum?

Kripa put on a fake smile and nodded. Josh figured out the sadness behind her eyes. He smiled weakly at her as if saying "i am proud of you".

At Khanna Mansion:

After about hours of thinking Angad walked into devyani's room.

Angad: dadi...mein shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hoon.

Dadi: sach?

Angad: haan dadi..

Dadi: naina aur dilip ko bulao

Angad went and brought his mom and dad.

Dadi: naina...dilip...angad ne shaadi ke liye haan kar di hai...jaldi se iske liye koi pari jaisi ladki dhundo..

The search for Kripa's groom and for Angad's bride were in full motion bur neither could say 'yes' to any proposal. After about two weeks, both families thought that rejecting the proposals was an excuse to escape the situation. Then one day, Suryaban's health got worse, they rushed him to the hospital as soon as possible. Now the pressure on Kripa increased to get married. No one could find a guy but at last josh saved the day...or did he?

Josh: um...mera ek dost hai...uski family waale bhi uske liye ek ladki dundh rahe hai

Voice from behind josh: haan bhai...dundh rahe hai...

Josh turned around to see who it was and exclaimed.

Josh: Naina aunty...kaise hai aap....

Naina: mere bete ki baat ho rahi thi? waise tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Josh: woh aunty...dad ki tabiyat achanak kharab ho rahi hai...

Just then Gayatri came out fuming. She was so angry that she did not realize Naina standing there. Gayatri went up to Kripa and shook her violently.

Gayatri: kis mitti ka dil bana hai tumahara kripa? apne pappa ko iss halat mein dekh kar bhi tumhe daya nahi aati? unki baat maan kyun nahi leti tum?? kya burai hai shaadi karne mein haan?

Josh: mamma...please...Kripa ne haan kaha hai na..abhi koi accha ladka nahi mil raha to woh bechari kya karegi? agar kripa ne bhi haan kaha hota to un ladko mein se kisiko mein apni behen nahi deta...mamma...papa ki khushi important hai mein jaanta hoon...kripa bhi jaanti hai...lekin iska matlab yeh to nahi ki kripa kisi bhi admi ke saath apni zindagi bitaane ka faisla kar le aur apni zindagi kharab kar le...

Naina: im sorry to interrupt but seems like you are in the same problem as i am gayatri.

Gayatri and Naina are friends since their husband's companies are allianced.

Gayatri: are naina? kya atlab hai tumhara?

Naina: Dekho...mere bete ke liye bhi hum ek ladki dundh rahe hai...mummy-ji ko dusra attack aaya tha...doctor ne kaha hai ki ek baar phir se agar attack hua to woh......woh chahti hai ki angad shaadi karle...lekin usse bhi abhi tak koi ladki nahi mili..

Gayatri: to tumhara kehne ka matlab hai ki tumhara beta aur meri beti?

Josh: i cant believe i didnt think of this before.....Angad and Kripa...

Kripa: Angad?

Josh: um yea...he is my best friend...i dont know how i forgot to put his name down on the list of your grooms

Josh was giggling when he saw Angad walking up behind Naina.

Josh: HEY ANGAD!!.....or should i say angad jiju...

Angad: what? namaste gayatri aunty.

Kripa didnt turn around because she had no intentions of looking at him.

Josh: dude....you marriage is being fixed...in the hospital..

Naina: angad...mein soch rahi thi....gayatri ki beti...josh ki behen tumhare liye bilkul theek rahegi...you both will be perfect..

Angad: josh..i didnt know you had a sister!

Josh: now you know....

Angad: but i have to see her first mom...

Naina: to dekh lo...

Angad: kahan?

Naina(turned Kripa to face angad): yahan.

Kripa kept her head down not showing him her face, hoping he would say 'i cant marry her, shes too shy'

Gayatri: Kripa....Look up.

Kripa reluctantly looked up to see a tall, fair-skinned, well built, brown eyed man standing. He was the hottest guy she had ever seen. He eyes fixed on his. Angad checked Kripa completely and came to the conclusion that she was the most beautiful girl he has seen. The tiny figure against his well built figure would look just perfect. Josh snapped his fingers between their faces to bring them back to earth.

Naina: so?

Gayatri: Kripa?

Kripa: mom..woh...

Angad: i dont...rele........um...

Naina: you dont what?

Gayatri: Kripa!!!!

Naina: you know what gayatri...mujhe lagta hai....hamare bacche sirf jhoothe vaade kar rahe hai ki woh shaadi karenge....lekin ab faisla humein karna hai...

Gayatri: sach kaha tumne...ek kaam karo..dilip bhai saab ko yahan pe bula lo aur mein unse baat karti hoon....jab bhai saab aa jayenge to unhe room mein le aana...

Kripa: but mom...

Gayatri: I dont want to hear anything Kripa.

Gayatri walked away in anger. Kripa felt defeated and looked at josh for help, josh just shrug his shoulders which didnt help much. Kripa stomped her foot and walked off.

Angad: mom this is..

Naina: bas angad...faisla ho gaya hai..mein bas tumhare dad se baat karungi..is baar hum bolenge aur tum sunoge.

Naina called dilip and dilip reached right away, naina and dilip walked in. after What seemed like a really long time, Kripa came back to find josh and Angad sitting quietly. Kripa's cell phone rang in the silence which startled her and made her drop it. She bent down, picked up cell phone, she saw the name flashing on the screen and a big smile appeared on her face. Angad looked at her smiling face totally awstruck.

Angad(in his mind): if looks could kill...i'd be dead right now...

Kripa walked out to receive her call as it was not permitted in the hospital.

Kripa: ANJALI!!!!!!

Anjali: KRIPA!!!!!! you are in mumbai and you didnt even tell me!!!!!!

Kripa: anjali listen...

anjali: no explanation kripa..

Kripa: explanation? anjali i dont have an explanation for whats going on in my life....

Anjali: what wrong?

Kripa told her about everything from her arrival till the moment with angad a few seconds ago..

Anjali: dont worry kripa..look im in dehli right now....i'll be back the day after tomorrow and i will help you out of this alright?

Kripa: thanks..

Kripa and anjali talked and reluctantly parted as anjali had to go for her important work. Kripa walked back into the hospital and turned the corner when she heard "so the engagement is tomorrow and the wedding takes place three days later". In shock she dropped her cell phone on the floor causing all heads to turn to her.

Gayatri: Kripa..aao...hum tumhari hi baat kar rahe the...tumhari aur angad ki engagement kal ke liye...

Before gayatri could finish kripa took two steps back and ran out of the hospital not caring to pick up her cell phone. Josh ran after her and caught her near the entrance.

Josh: Kya hua Kripa?

Kripa: kal?????? Bhai..thats too soon...if they want me to marry angad..i will...he seems like a nice guy afterall he is your best friend...but in five days?? can i have some time alone with my life? this is all too rushed for me.

Josh: kripa...its rushed for him too...he is 20 just like you.... infact he is only 2 days older than you. you both are similar...you will get along...trust me...you have nothing to worry about..angad is a decent guy...i know him for a long time...he will never hurt you...and this is just as weird for him as it is for you.

Kripa: i guess you are right...but can i talk to him before the engagement?

Josh: No you cant...after your engagement you both can meet alone if you want but the family members are not willing to let you two meet fearing that you will plan something.

Josh convinced her and took her back inside. Angad was relieved to see that she wasn't crying. he didn't wanna be the reason behind anyone's tears.

Kripa: I am sorry about that...it was just really shocking..

Angad: i dont blame you...everything is happening so fast.

PREVIEW: THE ENGAGEMENT!!!
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Part 3:

It was a big day for the Sharma and Khanna family but for Angad and Kripa, it seemed like a nightmare. they were about to be engaged to someone who they met for merely five minutes. Both angad and Kripa wished that some miracle would happen and this wedding would stop. But as destiny plays its games, angad and kripa's wedding was destined. No matter how hard they tried getting out of it, they would have to get married.

Kripa sat in her room getting ready. She had dressed herself in a baby pink and light sky blue fish cut lehenga with heavy matching jewlery. She didnt need any make-up, she looked like a fairy without any make-up. Angad was getting dressed in Josh's room in similar colours. He was scared, nervous, and to his surprise somewhat happy. He didn't know why he was slightly happy but it was true, he was a little happy.

Angad(thought to himself): Well....i dont know if she's nice or mean but she looks like a sweet person.....and she is the MOST beautiful girl i have ever seen in my life...

While on the other hand Kripa thought that she was glad to have the hottest guy in town.

Josh walked into his room to call Angad.

Josh: angad....or shud I say angad jiju.....neeche chalo sab aapka intezaar kar rahe hai..

Angad: lets go....man...im scared...

Josh: dont worry...my sister doesnt bite

Angad: i can tell by looking at her innocent face..

Josh(raised his eyebrows teasingly): Innocent face eh???

Angad: josh...stop it...

Josh and Angad walked downstairs. While walking down the stairs, Angad's eyes searched everywhere for Kripa but there was no sight of her.

Angad(whispering to josh): Josh...Kripa kahan hai?

Josh(whispering back): don't you know? girls take forever to get ready for these kinda things...aur sabr karo.....paanch din..baad mein har jagah tumhe Kripa hi dekhegi..

Angad(whispering back): Shut Up!

All relatives complimented Angad on how handsome he looked, and congratulated him on the special occasion. Angad caught Naina in the corner.

Angad: mom....aaliyah ko phone kiya?

Naina: haan.....she can't make it to the engagement....she has exams...she said she will try her 200% to make it to your wedding.

Angad: but mom...i never take big steps as such without my sister alongside.

Naina: angad...aaliyah to Kripa se baad mein bhi mil legi lekin tumhe abhi dadi ke baare mein sochna chahiye.....tum chinta mat karo....Gayatri aur Mr.Sharma ki beti bahut hi sanskari hai..meine uske baare mein bahut se logo se suna hai...aur tum to josh ke best friend ho na? josh ki behen hi to hai woh!

Gayatri(walked up to them): Naina..mein Kripa ko lene jaa rahi hoon...pata nahi aur kitna waqt lagayegi ye ladki...tum saath chalogi?

Naina: haan...mujhe Kripa se waise bhi kuch baat karni hai...

Josh(walked up from behind angad): mamma...aunty.....Angad ko bhi saath le jayiye...iski aankhein kab se Kripa ko dundh rahi hai...

Naina: badmaashh!!

Naina and Gayatri walked upstairs to Kripa's room to bring her down for the ring exchange ceremony.

Angad: josh...whats with you? why are you teasing me so much?

Josh: ok look...i know you both dont love each other...i know how tensed you are..im just trying to make it smoother and comfortable for you...

Angad: hm...thanks...im sorry...im just kind of annoyed..

Josh: so is Kripa...in frustration, she almost slapped me when i was teasing her..

Angad: what did you say to her?

Josh: she was listening to a romantic number and i said 'thinking about Angad are we?'...she ran behind me like a tiger runs behind his prey...

Angad: she just ran after you? i would have killed you!!

Josh saw Kripa walking down the stairs with Gayatri and Naina on either side. Angad couldn't see her as his back was facing the stairs.

Josh: aww....there is my gorgeous sister...

Angad turned around at once to look at her. his eyes got stuck on her and would not move to anything else.

Angad(thought): koi itna khoobsurat kaise ho sakta hai...sometimes....she feels like a dream....angad!!! what are you thinking? thats the girl you are being forced to marry!!! she must be hating you right now.....

Gayatri walked Kripa beside Angad. Angad's eyes were still fixed on her while she tried not to look at him but at last she couldn't stop her self, after all she had to take a look at her fianc. Angad gave her a quick smile.

Angad: looking beautiful.

Kripa(a bit awkward): um...thank you...you are looking great yourself.

Josh: you guys look like you are made for each other...you know what? now maybe im not so mad at mamma pappa for forcing you into this kripa..

Kripa: why?

Josh: because angad is a really nice guy...if i had to handover you to a guy...i would give you to angad with my eyes closed.

Angad: josh...stop...i think you are making her uncomfortable.

Suddenly all the lights went out and two spotlights focused on Angad-Kripa.

Angad-Kripa(mumbling): Oh My god...

Suryaban: Good Evening ladies and gentlemen. Today we have gathered here for a very special occasion. My daughter, Kripa, and Dilip Khanna's son Angad, have decided to spend their lifetime together.

Dilip: I am really happy to announce that today is their engagement. Naina...can we have the rings please?

Naina and Gayatri walked up to angad and Kripa and handed them the rings. They were told to exchange them. Kripa reluctantly raised her hand so angad can put the ring on her finger. Kripa felt uncomfrotable under the spotlight and in the attention of all present in the room. Angad tried slipping the ring in without holding her hand as he didn't want to make her feel any worse. But he had to get a hold of her hand when the ring wouldn't slip in otherwise. Everone clapped as the ring possessed Kripa's ring finger proudly. Kripa placed the ring on his finger while gently holding his hand. Both looked at each other and gave a faint smile. Dilip announced a slow dance for all the couples present in the party. Angad and Kripa were , as usual forced, to take the center of the room.

Kripa: josh...can i please NOT have the spotlight on me...you know i dont like being the center of attention...

Angad: neither do i..

Josh: alright...i'll have them turn it off. but first you guys walk into the middle of the dancefloor so that i can get the guy to switch it off.

Kripa: okay..

Angad held out his hand for Kripa, as any guy should when asking the girl for a dance. Kripa gently placed her hand in his as both walked to the center of the floor. Kripa and Angad felt awkward with the whole close dancing thing but they had no other choice. Angad waited for Kripa to response. She gave her consent for the dance by placing her hands around his shoulders. Angad slowly placed his hands on her waist which made Kripa giggle. Angad stared at her in confusion.

Kripa: that tickled..

Angad smiled and both danced away until the music stopped. By the end of the party, everyone was tired and had no energy from all the dancing.

PREVIEW: Mehendi and sangeet ceremony
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Thanks. I will continue ASAP.....most likely tomorrow..
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👏 sorry late great , awesome , mindblowing dear 👏 👏 👏
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this is an amazing fanfic!
they look so cute together (:
continue when you can.

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