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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

WOW!! is what i can say.. this was a mindblowing update.. i could totally feel anjali's pain.. and atul is the biggest sweetheart... i cant believe shashank doesnt realize.. i mean if he thinks so much about her.. why doesnt he try to analyze his own actions.. or even try to talk to her.. but i think.. it might be atul who figures anjali's issues first... awww...you are a GREAT WRITER... so glad you updated .. please do contine soon.. and thank you sooooooo much for th PM.. much appreciated...



Thank you so much!😳😊 So glad you enjoyed this chapter! Shashank and Angie's relationship is somewhat complicated and it will take a while for that to smoothen out.....but meanwhile she has Atul, na?😉

Will try to update as soon as I'm able to😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nureat01


Aww Borna, believe me, I'm the one who's so touched to know that this chapter touched you so much🤗🤗🤗

I know AA1 have always been special to both of us, nahin? I would've LOVED to see something of this sort on screen with Sunaina-Pankit as welll yaar.....especially Sunaina who I just know would have done a brilliant job in the last scene. But I guess it's not meant to be.......I just found out the news as well...*sigh*....Guess I saw it coming in a way....I felt they'd degenerated and sidelined Atul's character since a long time now....so guess this was meant to happen ultimately

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments yaar!🤗Will try to do justice to AA1 in whatever way I can from here on forward😉

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I think I needed the hugs, jaanu! Thanks...
AA1 are SO much more than special to us...*sigh* PaNa (that's what I call them now) are just so unbelievably believable in whatever they do...I think I've analyzed their actions and body language so much that I have absolutely no trouble seeing everything you write as if it were a film or episode...It takes immense talent on the part of the writer, yaar! (And it also needs obsessive PaNa fans - like me...)
Yes, Sunaina would've managed to make me cry bucketloads of tears, I'm sure! And along with Pankit...My goodness, I'm feeling overwhelmed again. Such a beautiful scene...
I know, I've felt the same way for quite a while. But I kept the optimism level up...And nothing happened. So yeah, it was meant to happen. But we still have SNT...I like to think of this as the REAL story of Atul-Anjali's relationship...I guess DMG isn't going to hinder our imaginations anymore, na?
Main hoon na, Anu? As long as you need me around, I'll be here! And I KNOW you'll do justice to AA1 from here on out...You already have. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

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I think I needed the hugs, jaanu! Thanks...Awww....looooooooads more for you then!🤗🤗🤗Special Atul Bear hugs! 🤗
AA1 are SO much more than special to us...*sigh* PaNa (that's what I call them now) are just so unbelievably believable in whatever they do...I think I've analyzed their actions and body language so much that I have absolutely no trouble seeing everything you write as if it were a film or episode...It takes immense talent on the part of the writer, yaar! (And it also needs obsessive PaNa fans - like me...)
Yes, Sunaina would've managed to make me cry bucketloads of tears, I'm sure! And along with Pankit...My goodness, I'm feeling overwhelmed again. Such a beautiful scene...
I know, I've felt the same way for quite a while. But I kept the optimism level up...And nothing happened. So yeah, it was meant to happen. I know yaar....and I always was amazed at your patience and unending optimism...I'd given up a while back onlyBut we still have SNT...I like to think of this as the REAL story of Atul-Anjali's relationship...I guess DMG isn't going to hinder our imaginations anymore, na? Yep, we will most definitely have SNT, sweetheart! It's one of my favorite things to do and yes, I like to think of it as the real story of AA1 as well😳😳....We should never ever let the stupid storyline in the show hinder our imaginations yaar! Imagination is our biggest strength! We can go anywhere with it!! And it's therapeutic in some ways yaar! So if you have an Atul-Angie in your head, I say go ahead and write about them! Relive them on your own terms!🤗
Main hoon na, Anu? As long as you need me around, I'll be here! And I KNOW you'll do justice to AA1 from here on out...You already have. 😳 Muahh sweetheart! I know ki tum ho...thank you sooooooo much for that! And I'm always here as well🤗Whenever you need me.....🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME!!
you deserve a standing ovation for this one, Anu!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 and a huge hug too! 🤗 kya kamaal ka chapter likha hai, yaar!! pichle wale se bhi acha!! and i'd called the previous one your best so far! har chapter ke saath you keep getting better n better! Muaaahhh!!
the last part, 'Fire Escape', is my favorite! Anjali's emotions and Atul's feelings are very well presented!

Originally posted by: nureat01

Fire Escape:

Anjali glanced up quickly as she heard the fire escape door creaking open and was stunned to watch Atul step in. She quickly averted her face, wiped the tears on her cheeks and sat up straight, bringing down her knees in the same motion.

Atul walked down the steps slowly, one step at a time, looking at her all the time.

Anjali heard him getting closer with each step, but she didn't look up, continuing to stare away from him at the wall opposite to her.

'What are you doing here, Atul?' she asked in her coldest tone, determined not to betray any sign of weakness.

He didn't reply, but continued to walk down the steps until he was finally standing in front of her. She still didn't look at him. He paused there for a few moments and then slowly sat down beside her.

'I said, what are you doing here, Atul?' she repeated again, her tone even icier.

Atul turned to look at her again, but he still didn't say anything.

'Have you gone deaf? Can't you hear? I'm asking you what the hell you're doing here, huh??' she said, her voice suddenly losing the iciness and rising in anger and frustration.

Atul finally spoke, 'Anjali'.'

WOW!! i really loved this one!! i dunno if it's just me imagining things.. but doesn't it depict the beauty of their love? the moment Anjali's voice loses the iciness and rises in anger, Atul speaks! wow!
okay, i guess, i've lost it! 😆

Originally posted by: nureat01

Atul got up and walking to her, slowly sank down to his knees in front of her. He reached out and slowly took both her hands in his. She looked up at him and watched as he reached out a hand and gently wiped the tears from each cheek, shaking his head gently. A few broken sobs escaped from her again, the look in his eyes undoing her even more for some reason. He squeezed the hands he held, shaking his head at her again. Slowly, she subsided and her sobs reduced to sniffles. Atul smiled at her slightly, a smile she wasn't able to understand fully, and reaching out slowly, he brushed the back of his hand softly againt one tear stained cheek. And as she watched, one single tear escaped from his eye and landed on their joined hands. She glanced down at the tear and then glanced back up at him again, only to see that he still had that slight smile on his face as he looked back at her her'a smile of'she didn't know how to describe it'but'it was a smile that seemed to say'I understand' and a thousand other things that she couldn't quite fully understand, but seemed to reassure her in some way'to soothe her in some way.

And that very smile seemed to finally unravel her completely and she threw her arms around him as if holding on for dear life. Atul automatically put his arms around her as well, hugging her close, trying to soothe her as much as he could. She burrowed her head into the crook of his neck and started to cry once again, unable to understand why, but it was if a dam had burst inside her and she just couldn't stop crying. Atul smoothed his hand down the back of her head, murmuring softly to her, 'Anjali, Anjali'it will be ok'.'

'Why? Why always'?' she cried harder.

'Shhhh, Anjali' he said, rubbing a hand down her back, 'Shhh now'everything will be fine''

He continued to do so for a while until finally she subsided completely. She loosened her grip around him a bit, but continued to rest her head on his shoulder, not really knowing why, but needing the contact for some reason.

Atul too continued to hold her, brushing her hair down her back slowly, savoring this unexpected and magical twist of fate, savoring that feeling of finally being complete in a way he had never thought possible.

And so they both sat there holding each other, two people as different from each other as night and day, yet in that moment, none of those differences mattered. In that one magical moment, nothing else mattered but the fact that they were there with each other, for each other, completing each other.

👏 👏 👏👏 👏 Beautifully written! I'm sure Sonali is ke baare mein zyada ache se likh sakti hai..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you sooooooo much, Iffy🤗🤗🤗I am so glad you liked this chapter! It's very special to me as well😳

And I love what you said about the moment Atul finally speaks....I swear it hadn't occurred to me when I was writing it...I was just going with whatever came in my head...but the way you've mentioned it....makes it sound magical!😍

So you're not losing it, sweetheart!😆🤗.....Thank you for the wonderful comments! Muahhhhh!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nureat01

And so they both sat there holding each other, two people as different from each other as night and day, yet in that moment, none of those differences mattered. In that one magical moment, nothing else mattered but the fact that they were there with each other, for each other, completing each other.

Powerful.
Really impressed by this part 👏 👏 👏 Truly some controlled writing, that involved just the right amount of emotion and its expression.
I was almost hoping that Atul would lash out at Angie and give her some of her own medicine, as she continued to berate him; thinking that had I been the writer, I would definitely have done that, but found myself extremely gratified to read the way you handled it 👏 It keeps Atul in-character, and along with that, shows how Angie burnt and crashed, all on her own. Deft characterization, a fitting scenario, and apt reactions.
Has the great iceberg melted, or is it still in procession? Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank you, Fatty!🤗🤗🤗

I can totally understand what you mean about Atul lashing out at Angie atleast once and not just sitting there quietly.....and believe me, that time will come....everyone just has different triggers...and Atul is but human too😉....As for this scene...yep, pretty much like you said....Angie burned and crashed on her own....it was just this vivid thing in my head....I could clearly picture it...her rage, frustration, finally helplessness...a breakdown....and Atul just being there throughout it....knowing that nothing he could say could help her in any way and she just needed to let it all out in the moment....a person who keeps so much inside her had to have a moment when it all bursts out in some way....

Lol@ has the great iceberg melted😆😆.....Hmmm, let's just say that this was definitely a turning point in their relationship and things should be taking an interesting turn from here😉😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

ANU KI HOOOO

ANU KI HOOOOOOOO, ANU KI HO GAYI WAH BHAI WAH🤗🤗


anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗wat a mind-blowing part yaar.............superb....................

Sorry for replying late n u know the reason, so so so so so so sorry🤗

First of all toh i was touched by anjali's thoughts........she was so happy to imagine that winning this award will make shashank like her🤗awwwwwwwwww i really feel bad for her 😭

and mili is just super cute, she reminds me of those days where mini use to be the star patient of sanjeevani n now here mili is the same, not star patient, but atul's little friend atleast😉, i love mili's character a lot...........

I like how atul defended her by saying ''she is little moody at time''😆😆, it shows how close atul-mili are..........and i loved reading atul-mili scene.......... and that baby elephant wala toy🤣, i can imagine sumone's sweaty face in that toy elephant🤣.........mili shud throw that baby elephant out of the window....... i will be so so so happy😆

and now........... atul-sapna conversation.........it was cool n cute as usual...........sapna n atul always made a cute frndly pair hai na........ i always loved to se them together........specially when atul use to tease her abt jignesh n sapna teased him abt anjali😆😆😆, they shared great comfort level as atul-sapna.....and reading ur scene made me smile🤗🤗

Now the ceremony.........fultooooooooooo mind-blowing filmy ji......... majedaar........... and the consequence accerelated our AA ''lowe-ishtory''😆............

award ceremony will cum n go, but here the consrquence was bhery bhery ghood ji..........their hug🥳.............. so basically anjali's defeat acted as a catalyst for their relationship, 😆😆😆.......... i loved it i loved it i loved it.............

U remember how we always wanted to watch a scene atul consoling anji on sumthing n we always wanted to see anjali's break down😊..........and today u made my day..........muahhhhhhhhhhh🤗🤗🤗 i loved this scene sooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhh...................

i hope ULK is on itz way now😆

anyways.......... anu janu muahhhhhhhhhhh muahhhhhhhhhhhh muahhhhhhhhhh🤗🤗 i loved each n every thing here................ seriously too gud🤗.........

U made me proud😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu 🤗🤗🤗 for the wonderful update. Loved every word of it. Anjie's heartbreak was so poignant portrayed. Could visualize and feel everything she went thru, excitement, anticipation, her desperation to make her dad feel proud of her, and the heartbreak and distress that followed the IOTM announcement. Her eventual breakdown and allowing Atul to give her solace was just superb. The fire escape scene was one of the best you've written so far. You've brought out all of anjie & Atul's emotions with intensity, without letting any of the scenes get melodramatic. Kudos for that 👏👏👏


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

and that baby elephant wala toy🤣, i can imagine sumone's sweaty face in that toy elephant🤣.........mili shud throw that baby elephant out of the window....... i will be so so so happy😆

You want her to throw Tubby out the window? Noooooooooo.
😆 😆 😆
Edited by ftm_ca - 17 years ago

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