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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🤗 🤗 🤗 anu ki hoooo........anu ki hoooooooo.....anu ki ho gayi wah bhai wah!!!!!!! Mehakooooooooo!🤗🤗🤗 Tune ab yeh mera theme song banaa diya hai, hai na?😆😆

WAT A PART.........yaar mazaa aa gaya.......since we are not getting much of AA scenes in DMG.......we are so so so happy that ur FF is making up for it 🤗 Awww thank you sooooooooo much, Mehakoo!! I write for all you guys only, and it makes me so glad when you guys actually like it!!😳😃

😆 😆 😆 as usual i just loved the way atul is behaving n finally u made him sing '' KHUD KO KYA SAMAJHTI HAI N CHEENI KUM'' 🤣 songs perfectly suited the atmosphere......... I'm so glad that Alisha liked the songs I chose!!😳😳...I just knew you'd appreciate the songs aspect of it!!😆😆

Poor angi shashank was so rude to her.........thatz why she is like this......... n the way u mentioned ridhima's character ULTRA SUGAR COATED 🤣 yaar itz too true n too gud 🤣 🤣 ........ ridhima is a real NAMOONA 😆lol, Angie ke through, main apne mann ke bhadaas bhi nikaal leti hoon😆

I just loved the scen where atul the cleanliness n environment lover thinks abt kids throwinh wrappers on floor n the way to make them understand rather thinking n admiring angi's beauty 😆😆..........anu vadiya hai ji bahut hi vadiya.........chal hun apna gal agge kar main kisie deni hai😆Aww thanks so much, Mehak!! I'm glad you liked that...I could totally picture Atul shaking his head at ppl who didn't do their part for the environment😆😆

Armaan n atul scene was mind-blowing too.......heheheh both are frustrated with their partners........dunno why i have a bad feeling that AA are trying to exchange their partners 🤣 atul with ridhima n armaan with angi 😆 😆 I just wanted to write an AA2 scene so bad! and I thought what better scenario than to show their frustration with the Gupta sisters😉...Glad you liked it, meri jaan!

IN SHORT IT IS YOOMY YOOMY😳........

MIND-BLOWING MAHIYA PART TO PADH KE MERI HUI MAUJAAN HI MAUJAAN........ N I STARTED SINGING UNCHA LAMBA KADD IN EXCITEMENT 😆 🤗 I'm soooooooooooo happy you liked it so much, Mehakoo!!🤗🤗...*joins Mehak in dancing to Mauja hi Mauja*😆😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: if.addict

anu di yeh kya kar diya aapne , aapko aisa bilkul nahi karna chahhiye tha , kya kar diya maine??😆😆

Minddddddddddddblowwwwwwwwwwwwwing yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar,
raita faila diya. Thank you sooooooo much, Kehan!!😳😳

aap jaise mahan logon ki wajah se to bechaare atulko importance mili nahi , varna sabhi armaan ridhima ka jaap karte hain . lol, I'm trying to do whatever little I can, yaar!😳...My love for AA1, and all my super supportive friends is what's keeping me going!

lagta hai hot seat asar kar rahi hai 😉 😃 😆 .

aaur kaun kaun se roop hain aapke 😉 lol, aur zyada to nahin hain

maine to aap kan naya naam rakh diya -trianu . oh wow! thanks, yaar!😆😆😆

aap mein to nani , dadi , maausi, bhua sab ki qualities bhari hain . yaar, yeh baat samajh mein nahin aayee...mera ff padh kar aapko mujh mein dadi, nani, mausi vagairah ki qualities dikh rahi hain?😆

jaldi jaldi update karna next chapter , nahi to aap ko pareshaan karungi , hot seat par itne questions poochungi ki bas.... lol, I'll try my best yaar!

once again , rocking Thank you sooooooooo much!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Anu!!!! You rock yaar! I just read both parts lekin yaar tumne Anjali ki dil ki baatein itni easily pehchaan li. How nice yaar!!!! I can't wait until she hooks up with Atul. Yaar you're too good!!!! Love you kudiye!

Komal



Thank you sooooooooooo much, Komal!!😳😳 That is so sweet of you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed both parts, and Angie's characterization as well!😃😃...I love YOU for liking it so much, and saying such nice things about it!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Updating after a loooooooong time, people! I'm really sorry for the long gap in b/w...too many things going on. So without further ado...here goes Chapter 3!😉


CHAPTER 3: THE FIRST SMILE

Evening at the Gupta Household:

"Nani, could you pass me the dal please?" asked Anjali.
"Sure, beta. Here you go" said Nani, passing the dal over to her.

Shashank glanced over at Anjali, and watched her eating her meal mostly in silence. He wondered if she was still upset with him over their talk in the office. He was just about to ask her how the rest of her day went, when Riddhima walked in.

"Hi Papa!" she said, giving him a warm hug.
Hello Riddhima beta! How was your first day at work??
"It was fantastic, Papa! It was so nice to finally have real patients to work with…"

Anjali watched Riddhima chatter on about her day to Dad out of the corner of her eye, and felt familiar resentment building up inside her. She got up from the table, and turned to leave.

"Kya hua, Anjali beta? Why didn't you finish you meal?" asked Nani
"I'm totally full, Nani…I ate something at the cafeteria in the evening as well…can't eat anymore." Said Anjali

Riddhima finally stopped her chatter mid-stream and ran over to Nani and Angie. "Hi Nani! Hi Di!" she said, hugging each of them in turn.

"How was your day today, Di?" "It was good" replied Anjali with a small smile, I'm going to go and sleep now, ok Ridzie? I've got an early shift tomorrow. G'nite Nani! G'nite Dad"

"G'nite beta" replied Shashank, unable to read the expression on her face fully

"Ok, di! I'm going to go to sleep soon too, I'm just going to finish telling Dad about my day right now. G'nite!"


Anjali and Riddhima's room:

Anjali lay awake, unable to sleep. She kept replaying the scene with Dad in his office over and over in her head again…the way he'd said 'Dr. Gupta' to her in the corridor kept echoing in her mind, contrasting with how happily he'd been listening to Ridzie telling him about her day. Was she so unlovable?? All her life, all she'd ever wanted to do was make Dad proud of her, and to see the same love shining in his eyes for her that she always saw for Ridzie. But apparently, nothing she did was ever enough! She turned to look at Ridzie sleeping peacefully in the bed next to her. "Look at her! she thought to herself, Sleeping away so peacefully! Daddy's perfect little princess. She never even had to TRY! She was perfect, regardless of anything in Dad's eyes!" Anjali stared at Riddhima for a moment with all the bitter rage in her heart, and then she sighed to herself. 'What was the point in directing all the anger at Ridzie? It wasn't really going to solve anything. The only person whose love she had ever craved in her life was the one from whom she never seemed to get it. Maybe that's just the way it would always be.' A tear escaped from her eye at the last thought, and she brushed it away. Turning to the other side, she tried to will herself to sleep as usual.


Next morning

"Subah Subah yeh kya hua…na jaane kyun ab main hawaoon mein chal raha hoon!" sang Atul to himself as he biked his way over to Sanjeevani. 'Such a beautiful day! he thought, clear blue sky! And the early morning fresh air!' He took a deep breath in appreciation of the weather. Suddenly, he felt his bicycle start to wobble and he braked to a stop with a jerk. He glanced down at the tyre and noticed that it was completely flat.

"Dhat tere ki! Yeh puncture kaise ho gaya?? Ab main Sanjeevani time par kaise pahunchoonga? He looked around and noticed for the first time that he was on the little lonely 5 mile long stretch of road on the way. "Ab to main gaya! Dr. Keerti mujhe sach mein kaccha chabaa jaayengi aaj!" He suddenly got a visual of Dr. Keerti glaring daggers at him, and jumped a bit. "Nahin Nahin! Mujhe time par pahunchna hi padega! Par kya karoon ab?"

Suddenly he noticed a car driving up the road. "Car! Lift!" he thought to himself, and made a motion with his thumb for a lift, but the car just zoomed past, leaving a cloud of smoke in its wake. Atul coughed and tried to clear the smoke away by waving his hand, and stared at the car angrily, "Ek to pollution faila rahein hain, aur upar se insaaniyat naam ki bhi koi cheez nahin hai!"

He turned and saw another car approaching. "I've got to catch this one!" He hurried into the center of the road, and started waving his arms for the car to stop. The car screeched to a stop in front of him. He hurried over to the driver's side and knocked on the window, "Could I please get a lift? I'm getting really late to work, and I need to reach on time!" The window gradually lowered down, and Atul's smile collapsed when he saw who was driving the car. "Tum?"

Angie gave him a withering look. "May I ask what you are trying to do by standing and waving your arms about like that on the road, Dr. Atul?" "Uhh…woh…uhh…canigetalift?"
"What???"
I mean, "Can I get a lift to the hospital?" "Please" he added. "My tyre…I mean, my bicycle's tyre just got punctured, and I'm getting late also, and Dr. Keerti…"

"Ok Ok…You can stop talking now." She gave a disdainful look to the bike lying along the side of the road, and then looked back at him. "Ok, get in then…but I'm definitely not taking your bike along." Atul started to say something, but decided to just nod his head instead. "Thanks" and he got into the car.

"First I barely manage to get a wink of sleep all night! And now I have to suffer this idiot so early in the morning?? You're having fun with me this morning, aren't you God?" Anjali thought to herself, while staring straight ahead and driving.

"Hey Bhagwan! Atul thought to himself, Subah Subah YEH kya ho gaya?? Bas ek yeh AnJALI hi bachi thi jise aapne is waqt yahaan par bhej diya??" He glanced at her out of the corner of his eye at her, and watched her staring straight ahead with the generally sada hua expression on her face as usual. "Did the woman EVER smile?" he wondered.

They had finally reached the city now, and were stopped at a red light caught in snarling traffic as usual. Angie rubbed the side of her head as she felt a pounding headache building up. She glanced out her window, and saw a father and daughter attempting to cross the street. The little girl would try and just run forward, and the father would hold her back, and give her a stern look and tell her to wait. This happened a couple of times before they were able to cross the street. Finally the father turned to his daughter with a look as if to say, and THAT is how it's done! The little girl looked at him for a second, and then started giggling, and he started laughing with her, and picked her up and tossed her once in the air before setting her down again. Angie watched them walk away, unaware that she now had a wistful smile on her face.

Atul watched the crazy early morning traffic outside the window, and made a face at the amount of fumes that were being expelled by all the cars, buses, and other vehicles on the road. He suddenly saw an autorickshaw pull up next to their car and saw the black cloud being expelled from the back of it. "Oh god! he thought, WHAT are these ppl using for fuel these days?? Kya waise hi pollution problems kam hain, that these autowallahs are making it all the worse??!" He turned to the other side, and was totally taken aback by what he saw. Anjali was looking out her window and smiling…actually SMILING!? Were his eyes deceiving him? "Anjali?" he asked? She didn't respond. "Anjali, what are you looking at? He tried again. She started, and suddenly seemed to come out of a trance. "Huh? What?" "I was asking you what you're looking at outside the window…it must be something really nice, cuz you were smiling" he said with a smile.

"Nothing that concerns you, Dr. Atul," she said in her usual cold voice, leaving him wondering for a second if he really had imagined the smile. "Oh" he said. The light turned green, and they drove off. He glanced at her surreptitiously again. She had her usual closed and stuck-up expression back on her face. Looking at her now, no one would've believed that she had been smiling 5 minutes back. And it had been such a soft and beautiful smile too! He would never have imagined ever seeing such an expression on her face! It definitely had not been his imagination. "Well well, he thought to himself, lagta hai Dr. Anjali ko smile bhi karna aata hai. Maybe this AnJALI is not as "jali" as she appears to be after all.
Edited by nureat01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: nureat01


The only person whose love she had ever craved in her life was the one from whom she never seemed to get it. Maybe that's just the way it would always be.' A tear escaped from her eye at the last thought, and she brushed it away. Turning to the other side, she tried to will herself to sleep as usual.

^^Beautifully written, Anu! Especially loved the quoted part of your post, which has just the right amount of emotion.

Loved Atul's exiting cue..😉 😆 Akhir kar, Dr.Anjali, itni bhi jali hoyi nahi hain?! 😆 😆 😆 😉

The daughter-father moment that Angie caught was 😳 This narrative really gives another, so much more vunerable perspective to Angie, huh? That her life/thinking revolves around her relationship with her father. Her insecurity is wonderfully portrayed! 👏 👏 👏

Why do I have a feeling that Dr. Joshi is going to be going on Mission: Make-her-smile? 😆 😆 😉

Felt really good to read this after a long time 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Thank you so much, Fatty! I guess it was a bit of a sombre read this time, nahin? It's funny cuz I had all these random ideas floating around in my head, but never managed to jot them down anywhere...and this entire chapter was done totally on instinct...started off as a random thought as to how to start it...and then I guess it just flowed.

Thank you so much for liking that part especially...That's a wonderful compliment, yaar! 🤗

and keep guessing as to what Dr. Joshi is actually going to do! 😉 😆 😆

I'm so glad you liked it! 🤗 🤗 🤗 Ahh, I have satisfied one out of my three permanent readers of this FF 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Omg dis is such a nyce part👏👏
i realli enjoyed readin da whole thing😃 oh god yeh atul or iski bicycle..humehsa kharab hojate hai.. poor guy😆😆
I luved da way u described Anjali's feelin wen she was lookin at da Father with a child.. I dint read ur previous FF.. buh m plannin to..Dis is is amazing so m sure.. da otha ones wud be great as well😛
N atul called anjali.. jali..lmao😆😆 FUNNI.Oh god dis guy sure hav Pollution problems😆😆
Newyas i liked da whole part.. n I m eagerlii waitin to read more..So wen u update ur FF.. plzz pm me😊
Btw: Is ur name Anu??

Lotssa luv:Hira😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: hira_786

Omg dis is such a nyce part👏👏Awww, thank you soooooo much!😳😳
i realli enjoyed readin da whole thing😃 oh god yeh atul or iski bicycle..humehsa kharab hojate hai.. poor guy😆😆
I luved da way u described Anjali's feelin wen she was lookin at da Father with a child.. Thank you! I really liked writing that part as well!😳I dint read ur previous FF.. buh m plannin to..Dis is is amazing so m sure.. da otha ones wud be great as well😛lol, actually this is the first and only ff I've ever written😆😆...not really that good with this stuff yet😳😳
N atul called anjali.. jali..lmao😆😆 FUNNI.Oh god dis guy sure hav Pollution problems😆😆
Newyas i liked da whole part.. n I m eagerlii waitin to read more..So wen u update ur FF.. plzz pm me😊Will surely do! Thank you soooooo much once again for liking it so much!😃😃
Btw: Is ur name Anu??Yep, my name's Anu!😉

Lotssa luv:Hira😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww anu... 👏
wonderful fanfic.. ur FF is a mixture ov every emotion... 👏 👏 👏
em speechless seriosulyy.. the wayy u described anjali's feelingg wayyy kuuuuuuuuuuuullllllll...

words will end butt i cant stop praising ur writting... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: luv4prc

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww anu... 👏
wonderful fanfic.. ur FF is a mixture ov every emotion... 👏 👏 👏
em speechless seriosulyy.. the wayy u described anjali's feelingg wayyy kuuuuuuuuuuuullllllll...

words will end butt i cant stop praising ur writting... 👏 👏 👏



Thank you soooooooooooo much, Sabika!🤗You really liked it that much??? I'm really humbled, yaar!😳😳...Thank you so much for saying such wondeful things!😃😃

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