'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 5

Okie doke anu janu ab to mujhe gaan hi hai

Anu ki hooo anu ki hoooooooo anu ki ho gayi wah bhai wah.............

Wat a beautiful part yaar..........or else i shud say mind-blowing mahiya types part........u noe i was abt to ask u abt next part..........but before i cud ask u just fulfilled my wish.......... though i m late with my comments.......... but yaar trust me i loved it......

Ok now back to my comments.........

First of all I LOVE ATUL......... how cutely h said.....''Ek to pollution spread kar rahe hain n doosra insaniyat naam ki koi cheez nahi hai''😆how real is that..............u noe u are bringing out angi's character n her feelings so well, i can just feel angi's pain as i read that part where she was staring at random father-daughter trying to cross road........ man that was so touching........ 😭

Poor angi was told by her father to address him as Dr gupta, which is really very difficult on a daughter's part to do so.......when she is excited n wanted to share her happiness with her father.......😭

I m really liking angi now😉....... n the way atul said DID SHE REALLY SMILED cracked me up 😆 ..........poor atul was confused n shocked to think that he actually saw ANGI SMILING 😆 😆 ......... but i just hope atul can understand her pain n can make her smile more often............😃.

Anu VERY VERY NICE PART.......i must say angi's character has been studied so well by u..........keep it up........... 🤗

Ok now one song dedication to u for writing sucha beautiful part.........

ik charkha gali de vich da leya
dooja soorma akhan de vich pa leya
ni ik teri ankh kashni hiriye
ni ik teri laal ghagri sohniye............

Chalo jaldi se mere ko bhi koi song dedicate kar daal bidu 😆

Originally posted by: hira_786

okie dokie Anu!!
I finalli read da otha two parts of ur FF...
u said ur nah da great writer.. r ya kiddin me..srslli yar tumhare writing mein bhit reality hai.. i enjoyed readin each n every wrd of it...Mein apni ankhen computer se chipka ke bhete the😆😆it was tht interesting..Awww, thank you so much!🤗From the beginign u described Anjie's feelin so gud yar.. da misunderstanding and dooriyan bt Dad nd daughter soo sad.. it was realli touchin..😳 Yes, Angie's pain at Shashank's neglect is one of the things that has really touched me a lot since I saw it in the show, and I really wanted to explore it further.
k Now to Atul.. God even in ur FF he is hilaarious.. i loved his intro😆😆N da song he sang for Anjie.. cheeni kum hai😆 Glad you liked that!😆😆...It was one of my fav. moments while writing that part too!😆😆funni..
nd Armaan called Ridzi Behan ji..lmao😆😆
plzz cont soon Anu...Will surely try, Hira!😉
m waitin to read moe..
Nd memba to Pm me😃 Will do!😃

Lotssa luv:Hira😛

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Okie doke anu janu ab to mujhe gaan hi hai

Anu ki hooo anu ki hoooooooo anu ki ho gayi wah bhai wah.............Finally! Been waiting for your comment for AGES! I was about to bring my toap out pretty soon, Gabbar! Aaj to tu bach gaya!😉😆....

Wat a beautiful part yaar..........Awww, Thank you, Mehakoo!🤗🤗🤗or else i shud say mind-blowing mahiya types part........u noe i was abt to ask u abt next part..........but before i cud ask u just fulfilled my wish.......... though i m late with my comments.......... but yaar trust me i loved it......

Ok now back to my comments.........

First of all I LOVE ATULMe too! Me too!!😳😆😆......... how cutely h said.....''Ek to pollution spread kar rahe hain n doosra insaniyat naam ki koi cheez nahi hai''😆how real is that..............u noe u are bringing out angi's character n her feelings so well, i can just feel angi's pain as i read that part where she was staring at random father-daughter trying to cross road........ man that was so touching........ 😭 So glad you liked it, Mehakoo! It gives us all a different perspective to her cold behavior all the time, nahin?

Poor angi was told by her father to address him as Dr gupta, which is really very difficult on a daughter's part to do so.......when she is excited n wanted to share her happiness with her father.......😭

I m really liking angi now😉 lol, I'm glad ppl are liking her more now...cuz there's so much more to her than just the Ice Princess routine.......... n the way atul said DID SHE REALLY SMILED cracked me up 😆 ..........poor atul was confused n shocked to think that he actually saw ANGI SMILING 😆 😆 Kisiko bhi jhatka lagta, haina? Ice Queen...actually smiling?!😆😆......... but i just hope atul can understand her pain n can make her smile more often............😃. He will, yaar...let's see what happens in the next part!😉

Anu VERY VERY NICE PART.......i must say angi's character has been studied so well by u..........keep it up........... 🤗 Thank you sooooooooo much, Mehakoo!🤗🤗

Ok now one song dedication to u for writing sucha beautiful part.........

ik charkha gali de vich da leya
dooja soorma akhan de vich pa leya
ni ik teri ankh kashni hiriye
ni ik teri laal ghagri sohniye............ Oye hoye! What a dedication, yaar!! Haven't heard this song in ages! Thank you shank you haiji!😳

Chalo jaldi se mere ko bhi koi song dedicate kar daal bidu 😆Gabbar ke liye song dedication? Ok, here goes:

Gallan goriyan te vich toye
Aseen mar gaye, ni oye hoye!
Oye hoye duhayee pai gayee,
ni kudi kad ke kaalja lai gayee!😆😆😆

So how was that, Gabbarji?😉

Originally posted by: Leenasmg

Wow Anu!! I'm speechless!! I only came to know that u have a FF today when u posted the link in the Oasis!! 😳 Thank you soooo much, Leena!🤗That is such a nice compliment, yaar!😳

The way you portrayed the emotions through ur words was beautiful! 😃 The the way u have studied both characters - Atul and esp Angie and told us wot is going on in their head is amazingg!! 😉 Thank you, yaar...I tried😳😳

Atul confused about seeing Angie smile and giving his comments on pollution and smoking is hilarious!! 😆 ..its jus soo him!!

You've done an awesome job writing this FF Anu..can't wait to read the next part!! 😃 Thank you for liking it so much, Leena!!😃😃...will try and update the next part as soon as I can!😉

Originally posted by: sidsk

Hey Anu
I had just visited MPKDH to see wht was going on when I saw this link in ur sig box.And I'm so glad I clicked on it. Awww...I'm so glad you decided to read it!😳
You are seriously,seriously an amazing writer! 👏 👏 👏 omg, Thank you soooo much, Sid!🤗You have captured the true essence of Angie n Atul especially the former.Love they way you have portrayed the reason why she is the way she is.
Her childhood scene in the first chapter and the bit where she observes the father-daughter in the last chapter are my fav parts.Very beautifully written!Thanks, yaar!😳..Interestingly enough, those are my fav. parts too...along with the "Cheeni kum" scene in the cafeteria with Atul😆😆
Do continue soon. 😳 Will surely try to, yaar! Thank you so much for all the encouragement!🤗