'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 2

Originally posted by: nureat01

Sometimes I wonder how people don't develop diabetes with this much "sweetness" around them."

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Suddenly, a loud voice broke into her musings, "Arey haan! I also barely managed to make it in time this morning! At the very last minute, I found out that our local "Anti-Smoking Association" had scheduled a very important meeting early in the morning from 7 a.m to 9 a.m."

LIAR.

Did I hear you mention somewhere that you didn't know how to WRITE? This explain's the introductory "LIAR," I suppose? 😆 😆 😆

Thank you for the thank you 😆 😉 I am oh so glad that you finally went ahead with it, and posted the first chappie. Glad that I could get some AA1 love out of you! 😉

The way you captured Angie's childhood into one incident was 👏 👏 👏

I wasn't expecting you to start the ff from the beggining, but let's see how this turns out! 😳 You better include some good stuff in here, Anu. No pressure! 😆 😎

Atul's : "Anti-Smoking Association" meeting 🤣 🤣 🤣

Waiting for Angie's response 😍 😍 😍

--Desperately.

Originally posted by: trina1

Anu meri jaan!! *raises her glass of orange juice* Here's to you and your AA1 fanfic. May there be more to come. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

LIAR.

Did I hear you mention somewhere that you didn't know how to WRITE? This explain's the introductory "LIAR," I suppose? 😆 😆 😆 I really don't, yaar!! This is just ideas flowing randomly from my head...notice the haphazard style of writing😆....BUT I'm soooooooooo glad you liked it!!!😃😃😃...for some reason, our pm convo yesterday spurred me on😳😳

Thank you for the thank you 😆 😉 I am oh so glad that you finally went ahead with it, and posted the first chappie. Glad that I could get some AA1 love out of you! 😉 You are most welcome, yaar! I finally came out of my "writer's block" yesterday, and cranked this out in an hour😆😆😆

The way you captured Angie's childhood into one incident was 👏 👏 👏Thanks you soooooooo much!! I really wanted to explore that aspect...had it in my mind ever since I saw Angie crying so heartbreakingly over the adoption issue

I wasn't expecting you to start the ff from the beggining, but let's see how this turns out! 😳 You better include some good stuff in here, Anu. No pressure! 😆 😎 lol...I wasn't expecting to start at the beginning either...but I really wanted to explore her childhood for a bit, and couldn't think of any other way to do it other than this😉....No pressure??!!! Yeah, right!!😆...Trust me, I feel the enormous burden of responsibility as it is....let's hope I don't let you or AA1 down

Atul's : "Anti-Smoking Association" meeting 🤣 🤣 🤣 Glad you liked that one!! I figured I had to introduce him with the environmental aspect, nahin?😆

Waiting for Angie's response 😍 😍 😍

--Desperately. Which was my intention, precisely!!😉 Muhahahaha😆

Originally posted by: Catwoman

great yaar... another atulian writer!! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: psawyer

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The first AA1 ff that I've read that makes me want to hang on to every word 😍 Awwww...I LOVE you for saying that!!!🤗That is a HUGE compliment...especially coming from you!😳😳Love how you've told the whole "First Day at Sanjeevani, Angie leaves Ridz behind" scene from Angie's point of view 👏 👏 It has a really humanising effect on her that I am super-glad for, and you know why 😆 😆 I thought it would be an interesting way to look at things, nahin? Especially cuz we only saw things from R's pov in the very beginning...and now having kind of "known" Angie more, I felt that the other side of the story should also be told😉....

Loving the swing of emotions in Angie towards Ridz - love, protection and yet resentment. Very real and natural and very Angie - you've captured her essence completely.Thank you so much! I'm so glad you felt that way, cuz I did try to make sure I stayed true to her character...it is so amazingly interesting!! I always fear from reading ffs in case people suddenly decide to completely alter a loved character's personality, and in their ffs bring strange changes that would be completely out of character.My exact fears as well!! Which is why I don't read that many either. I'm so pleased that you've managed to keep Angie's char intact - as one of the few staunch Angie fans I'd hate to see her character have taken a beating 😆 😆 So so glad, Vasu!! Can't tell you how happy I am that the #1 Angie fan😉 liked the characterization!

Anu - who says you can't write well?! 😳 All those theses and English classes have paid off, in my opinion 😆 😆 lol....The last time I wrote extensive papers was for English class first semester, like 4 years ago!....I feel so out of touch...and I know I really need to work on making things more cohesive sounding, and reading back, I could also work on the detailing a bit more...hopefully the next one will turn out better😆

Continue soon, please? 🤗 Will surely try to as soon as possible😳😳

P.S. Thanks for the thanks, but it was my duty to scold you and Fatty into letting the creative juices flow, and if I had to do it again, I wouldn't change a thing! 🤣

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

oh god anu u deserve a big big big hug 🤗 Aww Mehakoo!! Thank you so much!!🤗🤗
First of all thnx to VASU AMMA..........for scolding u so that u can write...........muahhhhhhhhhhh Oh yes! Definitely a big thanks to Vasu and Fatty as well!!

Yaar this part was mind blowing mahiya types...........now humari to MAUJA HI MAUJA coz we won't get AA much in DMG but we will read ur FF *performs a bhangra step with mausi ji* 😆 Thank you soooooo much, Mehakoo!! *joins Mausiji and Gabbar in bhangra as well*😆😆😆

Seriously u have showed angi's character turning grey due to a valid reason............. 👏 n that was the best part........... n i loved the part ''ANTI-SMOKING ASSOCIATION'' n poor atul is still frustrated with his land-lady 😆 ..........so realistic na!!!!!!!!!!! So glad you liked it yaar!!😳😳

Anu i will be waiting for the next part eagerly...........muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for this mind blowing mahiya part 🤗 Muahhhhhhhhhhhhh to you as well, Mehakoo!!🤗

Originally posted by: nureat01

And some for you 🤗🤗

🤣 🤣 🤣 Gosh, you do make me laugh, Mehakoo!! You know, you're the second person to call me "Amma" on IF - the first person is as crazy as you are😆