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Posted: 17 years ago
YIPPPEEEEEEEEEE!!!u updated finally!!it's been ages yaar!AWESOME part..worth the wait as usual.
i loved the sarcasm frm Armaan's side n the mocking tone for the night out!apt for Yummy boy!! ๐Ÿ˜†
Atul as usual was a sweetheart wid his ever green songs n Angie has this drastic change ..comparing Atul wid her Personal Santa Claus-Dr.Omi!!Ahaan!!story is heading in just the right way wid the right pace..LoVed it Soniyo!!
Plz continue soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey...so i was right in thinking that Atul being Dr Oni's son would have a positive impact on their relationship. Looks like history is repeating itself, first Dr Omi was her personal Santa, and now his son is turning into one!!! Nice touch there. Anjie finally accepting him as a friend, and starting to respect him... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘. Also the last scene at sanjeevani parking lot was good. Subtle and powerful, with she turning mid-way to wave back at him before leaving. The girl has surely warmed up to him, and as Sapna says, she has visibly changed.

Anu...thank you, thank you, thank you...for including the anjie-armaan scene. Loved the sarcasm he gives R. And loved the fact that he stands up for Atul, saying "I told you, didn't I?".

But the best line was when anjie says "A joke! Remember what those are?" ๐Ÿ‘

In short, it wasn't a random update as per your disclaimer ๐Ÿ˜Š. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Fantablous work Anu ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Truly one of the best parts I have read ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ The story is really good.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ Keep it up ๐Ÿ‘



Thank you very much, Jen! Glad you enjoyed it!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Pare ho ja soniye.......
Anu di rel gaddi aayi ๐Ÿค— Wooohoo!! It's my new song!!๐Ÿ˜† Muahhhh!

So u finally updated!!!!!!! I was abt to ask u abt this, but then i realized that since u are busy with other things. So may be u will update late......... LOL yes, I wasn't able to update over the weekend like I usually am cuz I was out most of the time...but had some time in the evening yesterday, and voila!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

But to my good luck......u updated today ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Once again an excellent part ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Thank you soooo much, Mehakoo!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

So anjali quiet enjoyed her ''Night-out'' with attul ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Ohhhhhh Pyaar ki shuruat hon laggi hai ๐Ÿ˜† Atul's camping skills finally impressed anjali ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ‘ Camping skillls??๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Nahin yaar, yeh to jungle ki taazi hawa ka kamaal hai๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

''When she will learn to harness her emotions'' uttered by anjali is my fav line ๐Ÿ˜† LOL reallly??๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

heheheheheeh armaan was totally in a sarcastic mood, it seems ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† how aptly he said.......''Rona band karo nahi toh floods aa jaayenge''........BRAVO!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Glad you enjoyed that yaar!๐Ÿ˜† Yaar anu tu hamesha armaan nu vadiya dialogues dendi hain, pehale oh shriek wala n now this flood wala....... Armaan surely will suggest u as a writer for real show,If he will read this ๐Ÿ˜† He is gonna admire u saying ''Koi toh hai jo mere jazbaaton ko samjhkar use kaagaz mein utaarta hai aur mere dil se nikali baat ko mere dialogues ke roop mein prastoot karta hai'' ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† LOL, I'd love to be Armaan's dialogue writer yaar! But I think waise hi usko show mein best dialogues mil hi jaate hain๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...in SNT, him and Angie are my favorite ppl to express sarcasm through๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

And and and.......jo vi hoye!!!!!!! kuch vi hunda reha poore trip vich.......tu akheer vich Karan-Naina nu bus vich bithana nahi bhulli ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ROFL, Mehakoo!!๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Yaar, you already know I had no interest in them at all, but hun end vich donan nu vaapis Sanjeevani vi taan pahunchana si!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

So now........in sanjeevani we will see ''Dosti ka Mausam''......right!!!!!! Toh madam ji eagerly wait kar rahe hain hum tuhaar agle part ke liye [Bit of chhatisgarhi mix kar ditti hai main] ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Oye hoye!!! Saadii Mehakoo hun Chattisgarhiya ban gayee hai!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....Will try to update soon, yaar!

Once again a big jhappi for u ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— Mazaa aaya padh ke.........muahhhhhhhhh So glad you enjoyed it, Mehakoo!!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—Big pappi and jhappi for you as well!! Muahhhhh!!

Okay now a song for AA

Resham si hain ye hawaiyen sanam
Aao zaraa paas aaye sanam
Jaage jaage armaan hain
Jaage jaage hum.......... ๐Ÿค— Awww...what a sweet song for them, yaar!!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜....Thank you soooooo much!!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

YAY!!!!
๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— Jhappis for you as well, sweetheart!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

I come back to find a new update! Wohoo! In Shashank's words: "Jantar mantar...Yeh lo, update!" ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† LOL yeah, I saw your post after I'd posted the update, and I was like...talk about co-incidence!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Shashank says that?? In which episode?
(Yep, I'm totally hooked on Sanjivani now...And Shanks-Smriti... ๐Ÿ˜ณ I'm even thinking of writing a FF for them... ) Sanjeevani was an awesome show yaar! It's no surprise you're hooked to it! Shanks-Smriti were the most adorable thing!๐Ÿ˜ณ I miss them so much!! You should totally write a FF on them!! Would love to read it!!

LOL! Nani calling her? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Angie is so cute when she's half-asleep!

The memories of Omi Santa were so sweet! ๐Ÿ˜ณ They make me smile and "awwww!" every time! I'm so glad that you're linking the Sanjivani days to the DMG days...It makes it seem like everything's so nicely connected! Glad you're liking it, yaar! Omi memories make me go 'awwwww' every time as well!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Until life taught her otherwise..."
๐Ÿ˜• What happened? Oh no...Now I want to know what that implies! Dang it, Anu! ๐Ÿ˜† I have a suspicion, but it's probably not even close to what you have in mind! Arey yaar! The story has to unfold gradually na! But everyone has a past๐Ÿ˜‰

Oh, I love HAHK! And I love that song! Atul doing the dance steps makes it a thousand times better, too! ๐Ÿ‘ LOL, the song is from Maine Pyar Kiya, yaar๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...but I love HAHK too!
Angie's laughter would make anyone glow inside, na? ๐Ÿ˜Š I love how she's loosened up so much around Atul now. So much so that she's even teasing him from time to time! Yep! Mellow Angie is adorable! And I'm enjoying writing this newfound cute little friendship b/w them๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Her overemotional sister crying yet again! ๐Ÿ˜• Well, at least Angie's chilled out enough to calm Ridz down...That was sweet, though, the "overemotional sisterly bonding" moment! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks yaar! Glad you liked it!๐Ÿ˜Š

The Armaan-Angie conversation in the tent was very nice. She even admitted that Champ isn't that bad! Yay! And it's so true, Atul really does have a heart of gold. How can you not love him? I agree completely! How can anyone not adore him??๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† "Oh god, Basket!! Tum yahaan phir se?? Why are you intruding on my quality time with Gorgeous??"

LOL, Armaan...He's always reliable when it comes to annoying the heck out of Ridz! Angie's right, Ridz really needs to mellow down! But I don't think that's going to happen...Not for a while... Yes, I enjoy writing sarcastic Armaan bugging R๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...and I doubt R will mellow down either...I think she's just like that๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...Childhood problem hai๐Ÿ˜†

Heehee! ๐Ÿ˜† "Woh uhhhโ€ฆkucch nahin, Sapna! Main to aise hiโ€ฆyahaan wahaan dekh rahaan hoon! Yahaan wahaan!" he said with a toothy grin on his face and gesturing around with his hands.

Hilarious, Anu! I love it when Atul says things like that! He's so adorable when he's flustered! But I love Atul when he's serious and compassionate even more... Awww glad you enjoyed that yaar! I could picture Pankit doing the toothy grin down to the T!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Arrey, Sapna's figuring things out too! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ She's such a dependable friend, and I love her happy aura! Haha, poor Atul - sitting with Sapna isn't THAT bad! ๐Ÿ˜† Well...Maybe it is if she's sleeping! Arey yaar, ab to Atul Bear ko ek hi insaan ke saath baithna accha lagta hai...samjha karo na๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Palat... ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hai! Cho chweet! The ice has melted! Or has it? ๐Ÿ˜• Wait and watch!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...

Thank you, thank you THANK YOU meri jaan! ๐Ÿค—
Yes, I know nothing terribly earth-shattering has happened yet...But..."Aaaya mausam dosti ka!!"
๐Ÿ˜Š That's enough to make me sing! Awww you are most welcome, Borna yaar!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—...yeah, this chapter didn't actually have much "progress" per se....which is why I was calling it pretty random๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...but glad you enjoyed it nevertheless!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Now I'm going to go song hunting again! Actually, could you just PM me all the song titles after each update? LOL...sure, yaar!๐Ÿ˜‰

Love you lots, jaanu! And I'm patiently waiting for chapter 13! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Love you too, yaar! Will try to update as soon as I'm able to๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

YIPPPEEEEEEEEEE!!!u updated finally!!it's been ages yaar!AWESOME part..worth the wait as usual.
i loved the sarcasm frm Armaan's side n the mocking tone for the night out!apt for Yummy boy!! ๐Ÿ˜†
Atul as usual was a sweetheart wid his ever green songs n Angie has this drastic change ..comparing Atul wid her Personal Santa Claus-Dr.Omi!!Ahaan!!story is heading in just the right way wid the right pace..LoVed it Soniyo!!
Plz continue soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thank you soooooooo much, Sareena!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—I knew you would enjoy 'yummy boy's' sarcasm๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...So glad you enjoyed that as well as the bit about Omi and Atul๐Ÿ˜ณ....Will try to continue soon yaar!๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hdalal

Hey...so i was right in thinking that Atul being Dr Oni's son would have a positive impact on their relationship. Looks like history is repeating itself, first Dr Omi was her personal Santa, and now his son is turning into one!!! Nice touch there. Anjie finally accepting him as a friend, and starting to respect him... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘. Thanks, Hemangi! Glad you liked it!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณAlso the last scene at sanjeevani parking lot was good. Subtle and powerful, with she turning mid-way to wave back at him before leaving. Thank you for liking that scene too, yaar!! So glad to know that it made an impact despite being subtle. The girl has surely warmed up to him, and as Sapna says, she has visibly changed.

Anu...thank you, thank you, thank you...for including the anjie-armaan scene. Loved the sarcasm he gives R. And loved the fact that he stands up for Atul, saying "I told you, didn't I?". You are most, most welcome, Hema! I personally enjoy writing it a lot as well!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

But the best line was when anjie says "A joke! Remember what those are?" ๐Ÿ‘ LOL...glad you enjoyed it, yaar!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

In short, it wasn't a random update as per your disclaimer ๐Ÿ˜Š. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ LOL...you guys always disagree with me on that, don't you?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...pata nahin yaar...it felt pretty aimless to me when I finished writing it๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•...so I figured I should warn you guys in case you were expecting some cohesiveness to it๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...but thank you for still liking it yaar!๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey, i had not done this earlier, so am doing it now, a huge ๐Ÿค— for AA1 & Anie-armaan scenes.
And ofcourse we disagree with you on your disclaimers ๐Ÿ˜ƒ, coz what you write is not random at all.
Edited by hdalal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
DIIIII DIII DIIII! MERI PYAARI DIIIII!!! I have no words to express my love for your fic!!!!

Di you have no idea how much I'm dying to see this interaction become a reality!!

Now getting to your part.... WOW!!!! need I say more??? ๐Ÿ˜† It was totally amazing! Kya feelings express kiye. Anjali's flashbacks on Dr. Omi. Her comparison of the father and son! Her calling Dr. Omi her own personal Santa Clause! Tooo goood!!!! ๐Ÿ‘

Anu Di please yaar, meri FF ke liye tips do naa. Waise bhi meri FF toh aapke liye hi hai! Small thank you gift! Aap itna achha kaise likh leti ho???? Aapko toh standing ovation milna chaiye!!!! ๐Ÿ‘


Kya friendship define ki hai!!! Amazing! Kahaan se kahaan pohonch gaye yeh dono! Kahaan Anjali Atul ki shakl dekhne se chidti thi aur ab.... uske jokes pe HANSTI hai???? Uska sahaara leti hai. Usko dekh ke smile karti hai. Uske saath mazaak karti hai.

Anu Di tussi great ho!!! Tussi te thop ho! Oye yaar tussi zindagi di hope ho!!!! Love love love you!!!


Komzie!!!
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