The Sand Princess. Ending pg:60 - Page 2

Originally posted by: fravashi

hey the concept sounds really really interesting 👏 . she hates US and i hate canada 😭 . lekin aik difference hai that she will run away with aamir. a guy which is really rocking, cool, handsome cause it's rajeev but me i don't have any chance of running away 😆 . but yeah u should continue for sure because i am surely going to read it with interest 😉 .continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Thanks a lot for ur comments really made me feel good.

Hey don't be so sure that she may run away with Aamir she may or she may not.

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey nice concept....loved it....cant wait to read more!plz continue sson

thank u soo much.

Will continue soon.

Originally posted by: bindaas girl

hey!gr8 concept........simply loved it 👏 ....even i loveboth of them.the intro sounds interesting.do keep writing.waiting to read more 😆 😆 😆 .
with loads of luck&love 😊

thank u soo much. I thought i should try something different.

PART 1:

It was mid afternoon of a wonderful day for fun. Step outside into

the open and we can see Mother Nature's outstanding creations.

But Aaliya instead of enjoying this lovely day is sitting inside her room

in a big mansion, where one can find everything he needs to live a life

of luxuries, but he cannot find that one thing without which life would

be meaningless, "LOVE".

There was no love in that house. It is odd but the father hardly remembers

the number of people that live in that house. It is surprising how a mother

could ever want to get rid of the daughter whom she carried in her womb

for nine months. The parents don't care for their child nor do they care

for each other.

Aaliya thinking about all this gets tears in her eyes, but she thinks,

" is there anything I can do to change my condition" this question

is very hard to answer but

Aaliya knew that the answer to this question was a NO.

She had to live a life of miseries until

God felt that she had enough and sends her something called

'HAPPINESS'.

Xmas was near and due to the holidays Aaliya's parents remained at home.

Aaliya sitting in her room gets a little shock when

she sees her mother enter her room.

Aaliya sits up straight and wipes away her tears quickly.

She did not want her mother to see her crying,

though she knew even if her mother did see, she would be the least bit interested.

Her mother stood next to her and said "Aaliya we are leaving within

a few hours to Arihant."

As she said this Aaliya felt the hope that her mother has changed draining,

like it does every time.

She continued, "Get yourself ready, we will be leaving soon.

We will spend sometime there, and remember don't be the simple

girl that you are, and dress according to the occasion. You will find

lots of people over there and I want you to talk to a few and become more social"

After saying this she left the room.

Aaliya does not like her mother but never dreamt of disobeying her.

She got up and started packing to set out to Arihant.

Aaliya would not have even dreamt of the impact that this journey

will have on her life.

Hope u guys would have liked the first part.

Waiting to read ur ideas,and ur suggestion

Originally posted by: sun_423

that's interesting..i feel very bad for aaliya... but i'am sure once she meets her love her happiness wil have no bounds... keep up the good work going... 👏 do continue the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

I feel bad for her too,but let her meet Aamir then we can see the change.

Thank u soo much.Will continue as soon as i think that people are reading this fiction and enjoying it also.

Originally posted by: fravashi

hey yaar aliya's life really suck .it's like she has everything.....a big house, money, mom, dad everything but yet nothing for her in her life 😭 .yeah!!! in such situation naturally everyone will crave for love and warmth of relations . jis tarah aliya tadap rahi hai koi bhi tadapta 😭 .myyy godddd....and her mom cares about the other people and not her own daughter 😡 .wowwww....what a family . bechari....aise mein i think uska bhaag jaana hi acha hai 😆 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Thanks a lot for the greta comments yaar.

Ur right Aaliya has everything that life can want but does not have something that each person would want love.

She is not running away this quickly if she is running away that is.😉

will continue after i get more replies.

hey arshie 😊!!!....your story sounds really interesting 😉!!!....love the main characters 😊!!! the first part it's really awesome 👏 👍🏼 👏 !!!!!!!!! i feel really bad for aaliya 😒!!! she's hates her mother, but doesn't want her to see her tears 😭 😕 😭 !!! i can't believe her mom....she just comes n tell her to get ready as they are leaving for arihant 😡, she tell's her how to behave n leaves....😕 😭 ........i feel sooo bad for her 😭 !!!!!!!!! ........aaliya without a words start getting ready to leave for arihant 😕 😊 😭!!!!!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait for the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!...........really interesting !!!!!!!!!!!!!