The Sand Princess. Ending pg:60 - Page 5

Originally posted by: sun_423

very interesting..going good... 👏 do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

thank u soo much.

I will continue soon.

PART 3

Aaliya pulled open the door. She found in front of her a figure, she could not see clearly in the dark but she could make out that it was a male by the shortness of the hair. No female would want her hair that short.( Aaliya could be sure, as her hair was waist long.) Aaliya's hands then shot up. This action of hers resulted in the entire room being flled up with light.

Due to the sudden gush of light, it took Aaliya's eyes a few minutes to get used to it.

When her eyes had gotten used to the light, she saw her visitor still standing out.

She was right it was a male, maybe a few years elder to her. But he was very handsome. He was the most handsome person Aaliya had ever come across.

(She did not let her thinking affect her mouth.)

" Any help?" she asked. Her visitor just walked straight into the room, went to the place where the sofas were kept and placed the luggage he was carrying next to the sofa right besides Aaliya's.

He then started walking towards Aaliya. (For every step he came forward, Aaliya went backwards).

Though it was only for a few minutes Aaliya noticed that in his eyes there was innocence, along with that there was an intense feeling of achievement, revenge or was it cruelty. This is what worried her.

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very interesting...going very good..i'am liking it very damn much... 👏 do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😊 😛 😃

just started reading ur ff(haven't finished it yet 😆) but its really good so far 👏 👏 👏
keep up the good work 😛

very nice part....👏
hmmmmm.....a stranger....jo AALIYA ke room me aa gaya wid luggage....poor aaliya wht will she now.. 😲
is he AAMIR... 😕 may be????????????
well now plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....cant wait to know who is he?????????????

hey that was an awesome part 👏 . infact it was full of suspense 😉 .who is that person who has such intense eyes but with revenge or cruelty 😳 . is it aamir 😳 .if he the one then that's a wonderful entry of him . i loved the part very much 😉 . continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

gr8 part 👏 👏 whos the person who directly entered her room with his luggage 😕 .is it aamir......... 😕 😕

hey nice part 👏 👏 👏 !! continue soon !! 😛

luv,
vandu 😉

Originally posted by: sun_423

very interesting...going very good..i'am liking it very damn much... 👏 do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😊 😛 😃

Thank u soo much. I am really very happy that u like it soo much.

Don't worry i'll post the next part soon.😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

👏 fab part cont soon

Thank u soo much, sure will continue soon.