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Posted: 17 years ago
hey dear part kaafi acha tha jaanvi ka frustration dikhane ke liye 😊
lkein thre was no ryan in it😭😔😭 very bad
yaar aise na kiya karo plzz let ryan also b thre in all parts😳😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chinmayi

hey dear part kaafi acha tha jaanvi ka frustration dikhane ke liye 😊
lkein thre was no ryan in it😭😔😭 very bad
yaar aise na kiya karo plzz let ryan also b thre in all parts😳😛

aage bas Ryan hi Ryan n Jaanvi hi Jaanvi hai......so dun bother at all...n yup will keep ur suggestion in mind...Ryan to story ki jaan hai😉...usko har part mein rehnaa meri ff ki sehat ke liye zaroori hai😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part.........janvi it to good and ryan is to saxy to handle i think........great going ple continue.........thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice part........dunno if i'd ever be able to post on your ff again..........but ya i promise i will read every part..........thru my cell phone..........its a pity that the "make a post" option is disabled on the cell !!
luv,
vandu
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey akki...
pheww....finally read it all..kya kare dhamkii mili thi..he he..but seriously wow yaar..relli nice..👏
m luving it so far n m sure will continue luving it..👏👏
ur writing style is attractive..👏
m waiting for the update..plz do continue soon..😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey awesome part, hope you continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
oye kaha gayi?? continue !
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Posted: 16 years ago

So wats up now....Date with Sid...n then a bullet injury...the very thought of bullet injury shook Jaanvi badly...ab Zindagi se to sabko pyaar hota hai na....She was engrossed in thoughts ....till Meenal came in!!!!!!

"Wats up maam????"

Jaanvi looked at her for sumtime n then looked away.…

"ur not happy wid dis marriage na"

"how many times I have to tell u………I really really dun wanna marry him…….n not jus him…I'm not prepared for marriage at all"…she nearly sobbed….the reason wasn't marriage at all behind these sobs…The reason was ….well…..her gonna be meeting with…ummmm…..RYAN….

" r u in luv wid Ishaan?????"…asked Meenal with a face which said that I hope dis is nt true

"now who the hell is Ishaan?????"…she immediately regretted

asking this question …for she remembered that Last night she milwaaoed Meenal with Ryan saying her dat he is Ishaan …her school friend….for she dint really noe his name…n wasn't even bothered to find out

"Wat did u say….I'm sorry…I failed to understand ur question"….Jaanvi almost covered up her mistake in a nanosecond….

"I'm sorry maam….I shud nt have asked"

"Its okay…..afterall more than my secretory …I consider u my friend"….n Jaanvi was successful to flatter Meenal…

"Actally maam…I jus wanna noe…DO U LOVE ISHAAN?????"

Jaanvi thought this may be of sum help for her……for she badly needed to get out of her room without anybody knowing dat…so that she cud meet dat asshole …who already had created so much damage to her so called EGO…

"How did u noe!!!!!"…she said with feelings in her eyes as she was ROSE of TITANIC….

Poor Meenal…

"U must be joking!!!!!!….how many times r u goin to fall in luv …."…meenal's heart ached…oh the guy was really so cute

Jaanvi wanted to tightly plant a slap on her face…how dare she say dis to her….to jaanvi kaur…but she needs help RIGHT

"This time its not jus timepass…I swear I have never ever been truly in LOVE…I LOVE HIM …I love him a lot…pls help me get out of here…he's goin to meet me today….I dun wanna go on date wid Sid…oh meenal u'll help me right!!!!!"

Meenal thought for a while......

"okkay I'llhelp u!!!!".....she said half-heartedly

"He luvs u!!!!"she asked Jaanvi.....
"Oh a lot.......he'll kill me If i wont turn up to meet him"...Jaanvi muttered under her breath....
"Why r u asking me all this...."...jaanvi asked ..her voice a bit louder....
"oh nothing maam....bas aise hi!!!...I have an idea...a filmy one"....Meenal successfully changed d topic
"Wat!!!!"
"wat happens in a HIndi movie....wen heroine is engaged to sumone else n she isnt allowed to go out of her house...n she wants to meet her hero"
"Oh u noe..I dun watch hindi movies...hurry up I...mum will be here anytime..."Jaanvi got irritated...
"HEROINE RUNS AWAY FRM THE HOUSE THROUGH D WINDOW...to meet her hero"...Meenal said enthusiastically
Dis time its the villain....thought Jaanvi...he certainly wasnt goin to be her hero....aisa wo sochti hai... but we noe the truth ....right ....actually he is her HERO...but in disguise hehe....
"Great!!!!!....but wat shud I wear!!!!!"
Dis was wen the jealiousy crept in......Meenal looked at the cloth on the bed...oh that backless n revealing one.....may be Ishaan hates her being dressed like a slut...n breaks up wid her......oh ..great idea.....good guys like their ladies to be all covered up..n he seems one....
"Wat r u thinking meenal....I'm getting late"
"oh maam!!!!...this one jus goes perfect....it'll make u look like a greek goddess"....she confidently showed her the black backless gown...which Jaanvi was cutting wid her scissors.....
"alright!!!!"...jaanvi dint even think for once ...n wore that gown which wasnt even able to cover herthighs properly...she looked very pretty..but the dress was a hell lot revealing.....she wore the best pair of her black stilletoes to match her dress....with matching black earrings......afterall she had to show meenal na...dat she was goin on date......she checked her hair in the mirror...which had the perfect curls at the tips which any gurl wud crave for...yup she was looking very very beautiful n sexy...jaanvi said looking at herself in the mirror.....
"these magazine people have seriously gone nuts to vote DEEPIKA PADUKONE as world's sexiest"
oh so true...why is she so beautiful...thought meenal.....
"Now???????"
"oh maam!!!...do u have anything like saree etc......I'll tie it by the window n u jus go down in d grund wid its help...."
"okkay..yes I have!!!!!"
they took out sum sarees frm her wardrobe ..n tied them end to end...so dat it cud easily reach d ground...rest to u all noe na....Hindi films to sabne dekhi hai...hai ki ni.....
Jaanvi carefully kept her purse which had the microphone n the cellphone ryan had gifted her last night...hehe.....she reached the city coffee house at bout 1:15......she looked everywhere but cudnt spot him....she remembered his face very well...oh how cud she forget his face.....the one who had created havoc in her life a single night....she wasdeeply engrossed in thought..dat somebody patted on her back....she looked at the person...it wasnt Ryan....
"wat!!!!"...she raised her eyebrows...
"come...he wants to meet u....in dat car"...pointed out the man towards a black mercedes...
"today...even a blackmailer owns mercedes...
huh"...she murmered n started to walk towards the car.......as she went towards the car...the man behind her forced her inside the car....n tightly shut d door...
"Wat d hell !!!!!"...there wasnt any trace of Ryan inside the car...there were 4 men inside
"come sweetie!!!!!...we knew u wud come....we'll pay u watever u want....oh baby ur so hot...cum kiss me"...said one of the men
"oh ur probably mistaken...leave me....cum on let me go!!!!!"...she started to open the door to get out of the car...but a man caught both her hands....
"Do u think ...we'll let u go without even touching u"...grinned one of them....n started to get hold of her
Now , she really wanted to cry...scream.....oh she was trapped..they were probably goin to rape her...they had nothing to do wid the guy she met last night...n where the hell was he...he had to be there no!!!!!...he asked her to come at 1'o clock ...she wanted to murder him...for he was the reason behind it...but tabhi.....d door opened .....swiftly came a hand frm outside and took her out of the car...n before she cud look at the person who was god sent for her rescue...the person got inside d car...n shut d door behind him.....
"who sent u?????"...asked the stern voice frm four of them.....
All four of them were now shivering.....one of them who was sitting closer...dared to say
"Robert!!!!!!!"
Instantly the guy took out a swiss knife frm his pocket n held it at that man's throat
"n wat were u trying to do wid dat gurl"
"we...we jus thought dat...sh ...she...she's a prostitute... we dint noe ...that ...that....she had anything to do wid u.....D'sousa"
"wat does Robert want !!!"...
"He wants to meet u Ryan...we came to noe dat u were cuming at this coffee shop ...so had sent Allen in d coffee shop...where we found out this gurl n well....."
"tried to rape her....right"...Ryan's voice became stern again...
"yes!!!!!!"
"aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!"......the man who said yes instantly got a tight blow on his mouth....
"How many times ...I have to say that I wont work for Robert....I have a better life with Samuels...n I cant do robert type of work".....ryan said coldly
"Robert has promised to pay 10 times more than wat Samuels gives u!!!!!!"
"Sorry...I reject d offer"
"think again.....ur acting like a loser"
"U better tell robert nt to think bout me!!!!!"
"then lets take u to Robert!!!!!"....the man sitting next to ryan had by now snatched d swiss knife frm his hand n held it across Ryan's throat....
"I'll count 3......if u wont leave me by then...I swear I'll kill u all".....all four of them laughed at him...n one of them started to drive the car...
"1"
"2"
"3"
Ryan opened the door of the moving car which had by now a speed of 60km/hr ...n jumped out of it...n before they wud think of even stopping the car.....
"BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMM".....the car was in ashes...ryan rolled down the road with as much speed as he can
Jaanvi who wasnt even half a kilometer frm this scene..was looking at the car wid horror in her eyes...people bagan to gather at the spot...hearing the bomb blast...Jaanvi ran towards the car to see..if everybody out there was dead ...or her saviour alive....she had seen frm a distance ..someone in the black coat rolling down d road....she saw a man in torn black coat behind d tree...down d road...rest of the people were busy looking inside the car....
She came towards him...
"Oh my god!!!!!....uuuuuuuuu...."
"My name is Ryan"....he said while looking at her ......
"yeah!!!!....yeah!!!...bbb..but ...but......oh my god....blood is oozing out of ur nose........u....u r hurt.....I think we ...we shud go to d hospital..."....she said in a heavy breath...
"I'm fine"......he started to stand up...n started to collapse again....
She ran to get hold of him ...so dat he cudnt fall on the ground........she adjusted him towards the tree so dat he cud stand up properly.....he looked at her frm head to toe......
"I'm glad atleast u wore something .....to leave some things to my imagination".....he grinned...
"I havent ever met a guy as disgusting as u are...huh!!!!"....Jaanvi gave him a real disgusting look
"right now its not me...who is dressed like a prostitute.."
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey cartoon kahan chali gayee thi itne din huh?
neways the pasrt was awesum lekin 2 shrt & i hate u 4 writing such a shrt part
plzzz try 2 post more parts asap
wil b eagerly w8ing 2 read the next 1
keep up the gud gr8 wrk
luved ryan 4 ths part 😊👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hahahahahahahahhahahahahahaaha!!! Mindblowing !!
It was such a fabulous part !!

Now , Keeping your promise now...I hope u are gonna update daily till sunday !! U better....warna tumhe chodungi nahi...hehehe!!

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