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Posted: 17 years ago

cool part gurl!!!!!!!!!.........ryan is scaring jaanvi wt his acttitude.....but who wouldn't get irriteted wt her high picth voice!!!.......ryan kou apnie baat manwane tou atie hay par jaavie is no less!!!!!!!.........let's see wht does ryan want jaanv we to o.........continue soon plzzzzzzz

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Posted: 17 years ago
kool part agian dear
though i luv ur ff very much & never miss reading a single part & i luv ryan 2 4 his awesum attitude lekin i hate u 4 thse smally dolly parts😭😭
aise mat karo yaar zara bade bade parts post kiya karo okie?
neways keep writing well the same way, u simply rock lekin less then ryan haa!!😉😜
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aaakkii

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report karun kya😉......chal maaf kiya😆....kal next part pukka post kar doongi wo bhi badaa....I hope dis is fine now😜

jhooti.....makkar.....kal post karne wali thi.......ab tak nahi kiya........jao.......ab im not talking to u !!Sleepy
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Posted: 17 years ago

Jaanvi broke into cold sweat....to see the gun pointed at her....n the person holding the gun was so cold n cruel dat...dis was very obvious dat he meant it?

"Alright !!!.alright!!!!Ill do as u saynow please ....please..she almost lost her breath.....

"Good!!!!"

This was the first time she felt helpless...n damn...dat too before a GUY..... there r these guys who cud do jus anything for her n here comes this one.....wat u call it??DESTINY?S SLAP....whatever.....but the few days were goin to be the days....she was never goin to forget for a lifetime..lets see aisa kya hone waalaa tha in dinon mein.....

The man even remotely dint seem kind or concerned.....n his bloody laptop, she dint want to even look at his face, oh how much she hated dis guy....but at least it was better than getting engaged to Sid .but really!!!!!!

"Come !!!!!!..We have to leave"

"Where????????"

He cut the ropes to set her free....she had deep red marks all over her hands....soft gurl

"Lets go !!!!fast"

She was walking in front of him ...n he was jus at her back wid as usual....his revolver pointed at her head..

"Sit into d car!!!!!.hurryyeah !!!!in the driver seat"

All this while .....she quietly followed wat he said.

"We r goin to ur farmhouse"

She drove towards her farmhouse..in between

"What if I fail!!!!!!".she finally had an urge to ask him

"U noe better!!!!!"

She was quiet .she understood wat he meant....he'll kill her..she wanted to cry, scream ....weep this was the Z of helplessness in her life ...she felt miserable of herself....she stopped d car, they had reached her farmhouse

She started to get out of the car..

"Wait!!!!"

she stopped midway .at the car's door.he came close to her .....really close, n stopped n then happened d cheesiest thing ....his heavy breath carresed her neckline n of course captivated her mind...she stood still...as if she were a statue...he held her by her waist n now it was another world..but....then they were apart.. it took some seconds as she came out of it all, n now ....she felt all the more disgustedshe stared angrily at him

"There's a prepaid mobile in ur coat pocket!!!I'll contact u"

She checked her pocket ....there was a cellphone

"wont u let me in???"he smiled at her

"Do I have a choice!!!!??"she said repeating his words

He jus grinned....u can call it a naughty smile

"So jus get in!!!!".she said ,irritated

As she opened the main entrance..She saw Meenal n the farmhouse guard looking at her almost numb..

"where were u maam!!!u noe we were in such a tension...." ....She stopped midway as she saw Ryan approaching jaanviher mouth opened as he hugged Jaanvi really tightly

N now Meenal more or less looked like a fused bulb.....this time too ...she found a real hot guy ..n see.....he too after Jaanvi maam...who's gonna be engaged to an equally hot guy....it seems god has no pity for people like her ....at least He spared dis one for her...however ...the thing happening between Jaanvi n Ryan was completely out of her imagination...lets see what was happening out there....

His mouth was close to her ear...he whispered slowly

"I'll be watching u Jaanvi....so jus once u try to get out of dis..u'll be doomed forever...so never try to act smart alright...I cant take betrayals"

she jus gasped nervously... her eyes turned moist...after all she was so scared ...n the guy who seemed to be like comforting her ..was the real reason of all this trouble.... He continued.....

"there is a microphone in ur upper coat pocket....keep it safe"

N now they were apart again....

Jaanvi looked at Meenal...her eyes had become as big as a one rupee coin....not to mention her mouth which too was open equally.....Jaanvi smiled nervously

"School friend....yeah....Ishaan, Ishaan chaturvedi...." damn....she dint even noe his name

"So Jaan!! ...wont u invite me in ur engagement?"

She hated him....she hated him even more .....how the f**k he dare call her Jaan????something that she had reserved for ....yet to come someone special.... in her life......yet she dint noe dat her guy was already there before her..by some default though..hehe

"Do I need to give an invitation??"...her enamouring smile covered it all up

he smiled in return....to meenal both of them seemed like real good friends...less did she noe bout the venomous hatred Jaanvi had for him

'Wud u like to come inside??".....she continued

"I have to rush actually?see ya!!! Good night"

"bye"

She hurried inside....with Meenal following her

"U noe maam ....now I actually am feeling better"

Jaanvi turned to look at Meenal's lit up face.....

"I thought something wrong happened to u.or may be u ran away.....oh I mean!!!!I was so scared to say anything to ur dad....I am sure He wud have kicked me out of this job...becoz u noe ....I was the one who thought of him as the electrician n send him to ur farmhouse!!!!!"..n now Jaanvi really had an urge to kill Meenal....but she kept her emotions under wraps....

"Take a chill pill secretory!!!!!.....we were college bum chums....really close friends"

"I see"

"yup !!!! oh how much I want to thank u(rather murder u) that u told him where I was!!!!" a plastic smile captured her face....she turned to get into her room

"He is really hawt!!!!!!.".Meenal jus cudnt control?hehe

"U bet!!!!".......oh how hard it was to utter sweet words for dat bloody COCKROACH

Jaanvi jus ran into her room, now she jus cudnt hear a single praise bout him...as soon as she got into her room, she threw her coat on the bed...n sat on it sulking....

"He is really hawt"..jaanvi mimicked meenal......her expressions were really nasty,but she looked funny

"WHO THE HELL CARES!!!!!!".......she screamed again....kya karegi..bachpan ki aadat hai

Then she remembered him holding her by her waist....n then his breath on her neck..she immediately sat up.....dat drainage mosquito had touched her.....she needed to take bath haha.....she hastily went inside the washroom.....after about half an hour of water remedy(to cool her mind hehe).....she came out draped in a pink towel , her hair all wet....water droplets falling from them ....the cellphone in her coat pocket started vibrating...she got it frm her coat kept on the bed

"Hello!!!!!"

"so how was the shower?????"

She looked everywhere in her room out of suspision.....

"U look surprized"

"U can see me"......she asked nervously

"Wat do u think"......he whispered softly

"I HAVENT SEEN A GUY AS CHEAP AS U !!!!!!.....OH I UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH U ENJOY DOIN THESE SHAMEFUL ACTS.....LOOKING AT A GAL IN A BATHROBE HUH!!!....but this time its JAANVI WID U......DO U UNDERSTAND.....JAANVI KAUR!!!!!!!!😡"

"ur sexy"

"I HATE UR GUTS!!!!"

"hang on!!!!! Meet me at the city coffee house......sharp at 1 pm"

"BLOODY HELL"

"Sweet dreams"..he grinned while she groaned

Edited by aaakkii - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing honey
i'm just 2 much in luv wid RYAN
but 1 thg wat meenal said was tru ''he is hawt''😳😳
keep up the gr8 wrk & plzz try 2 post asap ths 1 was really late & i think short 2
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

jhooti.....makkar.....kal post karne wali thi.......ab tak nahi kiya........jao.......ab im not talking to u !!Sleepy

Sorry yaar...maaf kar de...😭...part post kar diya..padh to le...kahin teri bhatakti aatmaa ko shanti mil jaaye😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
U bet😃...keep reading ...n thanks for this compliment once in a bluemoon😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow wat beautiful and superb part it was 👏.my my omg ryan is amazing ......and wow wat a naugty person he is........😆.........i m falling for him😳😳😳.plz continue soon😳😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

She wanted to bang the cellphone …right on the opposite wall… but then maintaining her cool… threw it on the bed with as much force as she can…

"Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"

She took deep breaths….n tried to get a nap…but ab toh Ryan aa gayaa tha naa….neend kahaan se aati hehe …..

Early morning, her sleep got disrupted by the beep beep of that cellphone… she opened her eyes…..the cell phone flashed….

"1 message recieved"

She opened to read the message…

It read

"Get up goodie….time to get started…keep d cell n microphone wid u….see ya soon

ur well wisher "

The last two words gave a burning sensation to her body…..n she entered her bathroom like a ROCKET …

She began brushing her teeth ….wid a frowned face ….her life changed in one night….she was being blackmailed …n this wasn't funny , on d other side of d mirror …appeared another Jaanvi (arre her aatmaa yaar!!!)….in her glowing best…she laughed at her…

"Isnt it wat u want!!!!!….stop being so dumb Jaanvi…..he's of great help for ur already sinking life….Do as he says…n u'll be a free bird forever…"

"Do u think I'm sick….haha…do I look funny….HE WILL KILL ME ANYWAY…..am I a fool dat I'll trust him…He is a BAD GUY…does dis look like a deal…..DAT ASSHOLE is blackmailing me…."…she was on the verge of sobbing

"Do u have a choice"

" oh well!!!! So now u too r uttering his words…how much money has he given u in bribery ….. how much haa…..to sell ur soul"

"Act smart….I'm nt telling u to trust him…gain his trust…I'm telling u ….life will never be d same….U'll have a life on ur terms….nt on terms of ur mum or dad or dat Sid"

She calmed dowm a bit….

"But……"

"yeah!!!…I noe"

"MY EGO HURTS……its been years dat I've kept men on their toes…n now dis one!!!!!!!"

"Isnt it a great change…isn't he sumone u craved for!!!!!"

"Oh please!!!!"

"With almost whole of Amsterdam business class sick for u….there has to be one like HIM no!!!! The one who's sick of u…"…..her atma laughed at her

"ENOUGH IS ENOUGH OKKAY…..He is crazy if he thinks like dat… n don't u remember …even he admitted last night …dat…dat I'm sexy"…she said…her head held high…

"U liked it no!!!!!…"….her aatma grinned

"Liked wat??????"

"His breath caressing ur plunging neckline"

"CAN'T U JUS LEAVE ME ALONE"…she was red with rage

"Stop being Double standard…even u noe…He's jus awesome"

Jaanvi reached for a rod …n hit the mirror wid it…it broke into several thousand pieces….Meenal came running into her room…she banged at the bathroom door

"Wat happened maam!!!…..r u alright"

"aaahhhh…ouch..mar gayi" sum glass pieces had struck her feet

The guard broke d bathroom door…n took her out safely…there were tears in her eyes…..her face all red….Meenal removed d small glass pieces frm her feet….Jaanvi cried throughout…whole of her feet was bandaged

"We need to go maam!!!!…there r sum rasm today….ur mom jus called!!!!!!"

"FINE!!!!!!"……she glared at Meenal

After half an hour…..Meenal n Jaanvi were off for PUNJAB DA TADKA….Jaanvi was greeted by a hell lot of relatives at d main door itself as she reached there…..one of her Aunt almost screamed as she saw her bandaged feet…

"Ki hoya puttar!!!!"

"THE PUNISHMENT OF AL DA SINS I'VE EVER DONE!!!!!"

The crowd dispersed …seeing her kaali maai avatar…n she went inside her room without looking if anybody in the vicinity got a HEART ATTACK…coz of her supersonic vocal power!!!!!!

Within 5 minutes, her mom was in her room…

"JAANVI!!!!!….wat the hell was dat…cant u behave properly"

"I dun care!!!!"…she said in a feeble voice…

"Its for ur good bachchaa…..I dun think there's a better match for u!!!!"

"I noe!!!!"

"Jus get up frm ur bed…..get up…..dress up…I've brought this sari..(she pointed at d heavy zardozi worked pink saree)…many people have come…..let them see how much we can spend for our only daughter's marriage…..its ur mehndi today"

"Oh cum on mom!!!!…I cant take the smell of Mehndi…ewwww….forget bout putting it on"…she said childishly

"Stop being nasty……ur dad has spoilt u a lot!!!!!"

"Alright……wen is it goin to take place"

"6 in the evening"

"So!!!!"

"So what!!!!"

"I'll be there at 6….abhi I jus wanna take rest"

"arre baba!!!!!….Sid has come….he Has planned a surprise date for u….oh I jus!!!!"…her mom pinched herself…as she already told her daughter bout the surprise….

"So u want me to go in dis Saree…..that too pink…U noe how much I hate dis color….neways tell him I'm nt coming …."…Jaanvi got irritated

"CANT U STOP ACTING WIERD"…I hope now u people understand…y Jaanvi screams so much….KHAANDAAN HI AISA HAI…..to kya karegi

Her mom continued…

"I dunno anything else…ur goin wid him…..in whichever dress u want…..nt this sari…...its for the party tonight…n do ensure U have a great time wid SID OKKAY…COME DOWNSTAIRS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE"

"Okkay"

Her mom left d room in a huff!!!!!….Jaanvi opened her wadrobe…..took out a Black backless gown……n started cutting it wid the scissors to make it more n more revealing……she used to do this since she was a child to cool her mind….u can say…she took out her frustration on her dress…..

As she remembered something….tension lines grew on her forehead……yeah right……wat an idiot she was……dint she remember …she had to meet dis guy at 1pm …n now….she had to go on DATE wid Sidharth……she saw d time…..it said 12: 30……now how come 1 jaanvi be simultaneously meeting 2 persons…..she held her head

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow once again mindblowing and superb!!!!!!!!!part................ 👏....and aatma of jaanvi is more sensible than jaanvi herself😆...............................................and.....................i m waiting despirately for d meeting b/w jaanvi and ryan.................and sid also...................😆.wat wil happens if sid find out janvi wid ryan........😳.......................plzzzzzzz continue soon............

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