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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 nice FF 👏
pls update soon naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey jasnoor i hv jst read ur all prts nd i mst say ur tooo good yaar nd i lvd their cute fghts so mch i am eagrly waitng fr ur nxt prt plzz cont soon its being a vry lng tme plzz jaldi se update kardo or intezar mat karwao............cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey jasnoor i just read the ff its cool yaar 👏 👏
please update soon 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nupur182

that wz gr8 👏
plz cont soon

thank youu.continuing real soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Episode 12:

Hey Guys,
Sorry for updating so terribly late!Actually i just got so caught up in all the stuff i ahd goin on as usual but im FINALLY BACK!

Recap: Armaan & Ridz are asked to go to Ludhiana together,the car breaks down,Ridz is surrounded by goons,Armaan saves Ridz from goons,its dark so AR find a safe place to spend the nite.

Okay so this is where we left off, AR find this one cottage & they decide to go there.

R:Chee!Hum yahaan rahe gay?Aur woh bhi akele?
A:Nahin!Tumhare papa ne toh humare liye 5 Star Hotel book karaya hai aur wahaan Hrithik Roshan aur SRK ki party hai.
R:Oh God Armaan.Sorry I asked.Tumhe toh mere poochne se hi problem hai.
A;Haan.Meri toh tumse hi problem hai.Tumhe goondon se bachaya aur tumho ki jab tumhare baari aayi toh mujhe jawab de diya.
R:Toh tumhe kya hua?
A:Yeh dekho.
Armaan showed Riz his arm which was covered in blood from hitting the goons.
R:Omg!Yeh kab hua?
A:Woh goondomn ko marte marte...
R:Aur tumne mujhe bataya nahin?
A:Tumne poocha kya?
R:Oh..Armaan Im Sorry!Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha..actually main woh tumhari fighting se itna impress ho gayi thi toh u know..
A:Tumne toh kaha tha ki yeh toh Hrithik Roshan bhi kar sakta hai!
R:Woh..bas yunhi..waise bhhi Hrithik sirf filmy hero hai tum toh real mein hi hero ho.
Armaan was so impressed w/ himself.Finally Riddhima had admitted that she was impressed by his fightin skills his plan was working w/ the wound even tho the wound was real.
R:Dikhao!
A:Kya?
R:Tumhara woh..kya kehte hai hindi mein?...zakam!
A:Nahin!
R:Kyun?
A:Kyun..mein tumhara yeh ehsaan nahin le saktha!
He said in a dramatic voice.
R:Armaan dikhaao!
Armaan showed his arm to Ridz he had a naughty look on his face.
A:Aah!Aaah!
R:Tumhe itni zor se marne ki kya zaroorat thi?
A:Woh is liye kyun main kissi ko tumhare saath zabardasti karte huya nahin dekh sakta.
Armaan said and this time his words were 100% true.
Ridz felt awkward she didnt know what to say so took a piece of her dupatta and tied it to Armaan's arm.
R:Lo!Ho gaya!
A:Thanks.
R:Kis liye?
A:Mujh par u know..dupatta baand ne ke liye.
R:Kyun?Tumne mujhe un goondon se bachaya nahin?Toh mera itna farz bhi nahin banta?
They both walked on.
R:You know..jitna bura mein tumhe samaj ti thi utne bure tum ho nahin Armaan..ur a nice guy.
A:Thanks.Compliment aur tumse pehil baar hogi!
They both laughed.
they finally made their way inside the cottage.
A:Are u sure ki tum yahaan teek raho gi?
R:Haan.
A:Sure?
R:Haan Armaaan!Tum toh aise kar rahe ho jaise mein 5-Star hotel mein peda huyi thi!
A:Ok Fine.
A:Wait.Hum aag kaise jalaye gay?
Ridz shook her shoulder in response.
Then he found a box of matches right next to the old fireplace.
A:Yeh raha!Is baar toh hum lucky ho gaye!
Armaan took the box of matches and lit the fire w/ them.
it was much warmer in the room.
A:Aisa experience to humme kabhi America mein dekhne hi nahin milta!
Armaan turned to look at Ridz,who he noticed had already fell asleep.He smiled.She looked so innocent asleep like that.She had fell asleep on top of herself(the way she did in DMG,in the Jungle episode)
Armaan picked her up and put her on the haystack. He went back to his haystack and fell asleep.


The Next Morning....

The sun shone bright thru the cottage and it woke R up.Riddhima woke up first and Armaan was still asleep.Ridz noticed that it was so bright that it had to be Mid-Afteroon and they had to get home or else Everyone would be worried.She decided to wake Armaan.
R:Armaan wake up!
A:Mmm!
R:Armaan!
A:Mmm!
R;Armaan utho!Humme ghar jaana hai!
He suddenly woke up.
A:Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?
R:Armaan bahut der ho chuki hai,ghar nahin jaana?
A:Oh Haan.Tum bahar chalo,mein aata hoon ok?
R:Lekin hum ghar kaise pohonch en gaye?
A:Hum lift le len gaye.Ok?
R:Ok.Mein bahar hoon,jaldi aana!
A:Teek hai.
R walked to the putside of the cottage.Armaan came outside after like 2 mins.
A:Chalo.Ride doonde?

END OF EPISODE 12

PRECAP:Armaan & Ridz are looking for a rdie & finally find one,Armaan gives Ridz his hand to climb up & she takes it,Both AR get home & there is a Surprise for them.....


PLZZ COMM+ENT && READ!SRRY FOR UPDATING LATE!

Love,
Jasnoor
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Posted: 17 years ago

Sorry for double post.

Promo Space.

Edited by jasnoor_sahota - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
awesome part, i really loved it
do update soon
i will be waiting 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaay u finally updated lol
really gd luved it
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part
update soon
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey the part was so sweet so now they r friends........
please ypdate soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey jasnoor finally u hv updatd thnks fr d wonderfull prts nd now ridz also said ur a super hero wow it ws sooooo good lke a typical ladki heroin ne hero ko dupatta banda wow it ws soooooooooooo sweet nd cute prt nd precap to toooooo good nd whts d surprise plzzzz cont soon..........luv uuuuuuuu

yachna

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