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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
i love ur ff especially cuz itz simple...i honestly dont want any fights.....cont soon yaar..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART-10
ar and ridz start staring at each oder ....
then suddenly dr.keerti syas
keerti:uhh !! uhh !! dr's .. can we continue ??
a and r embarassed but still keep smiling ..
r:sorry dr.keerti..
a:yup .. sorry .. dr .
k:guys , here i am ur friend .. i am just ur senior in d hospital .. so plz .. call me keerti . plz ..
r: yes doctor .. oops sorry i mean keerti ..
k:lol .. yeah rite ..
ar:neways , now dat all of us are friends , lets do sumthin' innovative ..
shubhankar:lyk wat armaan??
ar:sir i mea........
shubh:unh .. unh .. shubhankar ..
ar:okay .. shubhankar, i meant sum new game .. we played this game today .. so why not sumthin' else ??
ridz:lyk wat armaan??
ar:dat's wat i am thinking ..
shubh:but aaj thoda late nahi ho gaya??
i mean dinner ??
sapna:ya shubhankar .. u r rite ..
atul:dr . keerti ..i was.......
keerti:tuday .. i am keerti ..
atul:nahi .. no .. sorry dr.keerti .. i will call u dr.keerti only ..
keerti:atul , u need not worry so much .. i will not hit u ..
atul:okay kee..kee..kee..keerti .. thank god .. aakhir bol diya ..
everybody laughs loudly ..
r:atul u r a joker ..
then dey all go fr dinner ..
there keerti notices armaan luking at ridz ..
keerti:armaan , ab khana bhi kha lo .. baad mein dekh lena ..
ar:unh .. oh .. sorry .. nahi .. woh mein toh kuch soch raha tha ..
he gets very embarrased and ridz blushes ..
armaan holds her hand from under the table ..
armaan was sitting on the right side of riddhima so he held her right hand ..
she had to eat wid her right hand .. and told armaan to leave her hand .. but he obv . didnt listen ..
atul:kya hua ridz?? tum left hand se kyun kha rahi ho??
r:nahi .. atul .. kucch .. nahi .. aise hi ..
ar:kya hus riddhima tumhare haath ko kucch hua kya ?? dikhao..
she is constantly trying to get rid of his hand but she cant ....
r:nahi armaan .. it's nothing .. i am fine ..
then after dinner , every1 goes to sleep in their tents except a and r ..
ridz , anji , sapna,keerti in one tent and the guys in d oder .. dr.shashank wid the oder seniors ..
sapna:yeh riddhima kahaan reh gayi??
k:lets go and see if armaan is dere in d oder tent .. oderwise she must be wid dem ..
dey go and check .. armaan wasnt dere ..
den every1 starts talking abt genral stuff ..
ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA IN A SEPARATE TENT:
ridz in armaan's lap
r:armaan , i am feeling very sleepy .. let's go ..
ar:kya hua ridz?? tumhe mere saath time spend karna aacha nahi lagta ??
r:armaan , tumhe mujhe rokna aachi tarah se aata hai ..

ar:kya karein .. tumse door bhi toh nahi raha jaata .. (he said this while kissing riddhima on her cheek)
riddhima is blushing so much that she actually rturns red
armaan starts smiling ..
r:armaan plz mujhe chod do(he was holding her hand) i am feeling sleepy .. gotta go ..
ar:chalo mein tumhe chod deta hoon .. agar tumhara man kar raha hai jaane ka .. toh jaao .. mein nahi rokunga ..
but she obv . doesnt wanna goo.
they start talking and then sleep in the same position ..
meanwhile the oders also sleep in their own tents
in d morning wen every1 cums to luk for a-r they find them in dis pose(r in ar's lap sleeping)
they all smile and wake dem up..
keerti:guys , hum logon ko waapas jaana hai utho..
ar and ridz get very embarrased .. they start blushing and ridz runs away frm dere .. keerti and d oders just smile .. and pull armaan's leg .. then it's time fr dem o go to sanjeevani ..



next part tommowrow .. dere's gonna be sumthin' new in dat .. so watch out fr it ..
Edited by lrl_fan14 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
oh !! so only 1 person liked it ??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
yar amazing...............ur like an inspiration 4 me 2 create ma ff................do read it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
gr8 part 👏👏. i can't wait 4 the next part plz continue soooooooon 😛

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
yeah peppie .. i read it and even commented ..
thnx peppie fr giving me such a huge compliment .. but i am sure ur fic will prove to be much better than mine ..
keep rockin' ..

PART-11
WHEN ALL D DOCS RETURN TO SANJEEVANI , ARMAAN TAKES RIDDHIMA IN A VERY WUIET PLACE WHERE THEY THOUGHT THAT NO1 WUD BE THERE.. THEY CUD BE LEFT ALONE IN PEACE ..
BUT WHEN THEY REACH THERE THEY HEAR shashank talking to sum1 on the phone
shashank:i know that riddhima is my adopted daughter aur woh mera khoon nahi hai par mein usse utna hi pyar karta hoon jitna mein anjali ko karta hoon .. mere liye woh dono equal hain ..

ridz hears this and breaks down .. armaan also feels very sad fr her .. shashank sees them and is shocked ..
ridz runs away and armaan runs after her
she goes up to the terrace and sits down crying
armaan finds her crying
and goes and sits next to her ..
ar:ridz .. ridz .. plz dont cry .. look atul bhi adopted hai par woh apne dad ki bahut izzat karta hai aur bahut pyaar karta hai unse .. tumhare papa bhi tumsde bahut pyaar karte hain .. ek dad se bhi zyada ..
ridz (still crying):armaan ...sob .. sob...... mein bhi apne papa se bahut pyaar karti hoon ....sob .. sob .. ...... par .......sob .. sob .. ..... agar mujhe yeh baat pehle pataa hti toh better hota .........
sob .. sob ..
armaan:hey riddhima .. i know how u r feeling rite now .. plz dont cry ..
r:armaan .. sob .. agar di ko yeh baat pata lag gayi toh??
ar:yeh tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho?? woh tumhari behen hai .. she will undertsnad .. hey bakset .. plz dont cry ..
he is holding her around her shoulders ..
from both front and behind ..
ar:and remeber .. i am always there wid u .. no matter what happens ..
r:thnks armaan .. u have been a gr8 frnd ..
ar:hey .. now smile riddhima ..
r:thanks a lot .. u hv been a real frnd ..
ar:sirf dost ?? accha chodo .. agar dost hoon toh forget all these thanks and sorry's ..
and lets go ..
r:kahaan??(gaining her calm and composure)
ar:mere ghar..
ridz:kyun??
ar:aaj tum wahin ruk jao .. tumhe theek lagega ..
ridz:thanks .. but i am okay ..
and again starts crying
armaan hugs her and so does she ..
then when they get down .. they see shashank
shashank:riddhima beta .. beta mein tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha .. beta plz suno ..
r:papa , apko kisi bhi baat ke liye sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai .. aapne humesha mujhe ek dad se bhi zyaada pyar diya hai .. thanku so much ..
sh:thanks ?? kys humara rishta khatam ho gaya ?? thanks jaisa formal shabd beech mein aa gaya ..
r:nahi papa .. mera woh matlab nahi tha..
shashank and ridz hug ..
sh:beta ghar chalein??
r:papa .. di ??


will cont l8r..
Edited by lrl_fan14 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
gr8 part 👏👏. can't wait 4 the next part i wonder how angie reacts😉.

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah .. thanks guys .. will write next part really soon ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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but will only continue if i get more comments .. as i feel dat no1 is liking it ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i can't wait to see wat happens

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