A-R FF PART26 Pg60 totally A-R - Page 25

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey good start... 😉 😉
urs is da only FF wich hz an AR scene just at da starting...
cool one!!!keep it up...
👏 👏 plz continue...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

hey good start... 😉 😉
urs is da only FF wich hz an AR scene just at da starting...
cool one!!!keep it up...
👏 👏 plz continue...

hey thnx .. ya i know .. in all d oders , dey patch up l8r .. thnks fr d comment .. yeah i'll continue soon .. today only ..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: if.addict

yaar slow poisoning mode mein jaan kyun le rahi ho tia, main te do din ho gaye mari jaa rahi hun tumhaari update parhne ke liye , 😭

awwwww!!!!!!!!!! dats so sweet !!well i hv no such intentions !! i will post d next part very very soon !! withing 1 hr fr sure .. maybe even within half an hour ..

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Posted: 17 years ago
PART-21
Sh:aur who keh rahe the ki vivek (he was sounding very tensed and d atmosphere was very tense)
Armaan had teary eyes and riddhima was also very scared as to wat her dad cud be saying and den after a pause of 10 seconds shashank says
Sh: keh rahe the ki vivek pakda gaya hai .. (and den starts laughing out of happiness and coz he joked wid armaan and riddhima creating such a tense atmosphere)..
Armaan heaved a sigh of relief and he told d thing to riddhima who was abt to jump wid joy .. but den she realized dat she was in d hospital ..
Ar:dad ?? vivek jail mein hai ??
Sh:haan beta ..
Ar:I want to meet him dad ..
Sh :but why ??
Ar:mein use sabak sikhana chahta hoon ..
Sh:okay fine u can go and meet him ..
Ar:okay dad ..
He keeps d phone down
R:armaan even I wanna go wid u
Ar:nahi riddhima u wont go to d police station wid me .. it's obviously not a very pleasant place to go to and besides tum wahaan kya karogi ??
R:nahi armaan plz .. vivek mujhe maarna chahta tha .. even I want to go ..
Ar:okay .. lets go

AT THE POLICE STATION

Ar:toh viek tumne kya socha tha ?? kit um mujhe aur riddhima ko alag kar doge ?? dekh liya ki tumhare paagalpan ka anjam kya hua ??
R:vivek agar tum mujhse pyaar kartee hote toh tum mujhe armaan ke saath dekhne par maar nahi dete balki tum apne pyaar ki kurbaani dekar mujhe khush dekhna chahte .. par aisa nahi tha ..
V:nahi riddhima .. I love u riddhima ..
Ar:apne gande muuh se riddhima ka naam mat le vivek warna tu nahi bachega ..
V:plz riddhima mujhe maaf kar do .. mein tumhe iss armaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karunga .. plz riddhima ..
Armaan was about to go and hit vivek
R:nahi armaan rehne do .. aise logon se baat karne ka kya faayda .. aur vivek haan .. agar tum apna bhalaa chahte ho toh aaj ke baad humare bare mein sochna bhi maat aur kabhie humein contact karne ki koshish bhi mat karma .. samjhe ??

And den dey leave from there

IN D CAR
R:finally !!
Ar:wat ??
R:I said finally dis vivek chapter is over………..
Ar:toh ab ??
R:ab ??
Ar:remember ??
R:wat ??
Ar:ab tum khush ho naa ??
R:ya ofcourse I am very happy ..
Ar:so my kiss ??
R:meine kab kahaa tha ??
Ar:toh ab keh do ..
R:armaaaaaaaaannnnn… pehle ghar chalo .. dad ko fikar ho rahi hogi .. okay ??
Ar:ohhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How unromantic basket ………..
Ar:waise basket ..
R:hmm .. bolo ..
Ar:humaari shaadi ka kya sucha tumne ??
R:oh man !! armaan tum toh totally paagal ho .. tumhe kuch aur bhi soojta hai ??
Ar:kya karoon basket .. u've driven me totally crazy ..
R:armaan .. kabhi toh flirt karma band kiya karo ..
Ar(pretends to be sad): tum nahi chahti toh mein tumse nahi baat karoonga
R:armaan .. meine aisa toh nahi kahaa .. I was jus' joking .. mera who matlab nahi tha ..
Armaan doesn't reply
R:I am sorry armaan
Then she bends forward and kisses him on his left cheek ..
Armaan smiles ..
Ar:see ?? I got wat I wanted ..
R:armaaaaaaan……… u are also really mad ..
Ar:ab tum jaisi Hitler girlfriend ho toh aur kya ho sakta hai ??
R:mein Hitler hoon ??
And she starts hitting him
Ar:dekha ?? choti choti baton par maarti ho ..

RIDDHIMA'S PLACE
R:hey dad .. hey di .. hey nani ..
Ar:namaste nani ..
He touches her feet ..
Ar:hello dad .. he hugs shashank ..
Ar: hey anji ..
An:hey armaan..
Sh:so u visited d jail ??
R:yeah dad .. finally vivek got wat he deserved .. sadne do use us jail mein ..

An:riddhima u talk like a pure Hitler .. kahin tum armaan pe bhi toh saara din aise gussa nahi utaarti ?/
Armaan and riddhima remember d Hitler convo dey had in d car and start laughing a lot
Anji , nani and shashank get very confused as to why r dey laughing so much over such a small joke ..
An:kya hua guys ??
Ar:no nothing anjie .. actually mein bhi aaj riddhima se
R:shut up armaan !! kuch nahi di .. bas aise hi ..
Dey all sit down ……….


Guys dis was all fr today .. hope u guys like it ..

Edited by lrl_fan14 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
guys , part21 posted .. plz read and comment ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww..loved it!!!vivek finally out..ab mat khench ke le ana usko!! 😆 loved the hitler conversation ..agar aisa real show mai ho to kia baat hai..tia send ur ideas to creatives yaar...kal ki eppy mai to ruladia total bakwas ne...neways 😆 ur ff is just rocking n u rock wid it!!i know u just updated but plzzzzz contniue soon wid lots of cute AR scenes.okkk 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey......simply owesome and i'm happy that the mystery is solved.....when will they get married?? 😳
Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

aww..loved it!!!vivek finally out..ab mat khench ke le ana usko!! 😆 loved the hitler conversation ..agar aisa real show mai ho to kia baat hai..tia send ur ideas to creatives yaar...kal ki eppy mai to ruladia total bakwas ne...neways 😆 ur ff is just rocking n u rock wid it!!i know u just updated but plzzzzz contniue soon wid lots of cute AR scenes.okkk 😃 👏 👏

hey thnk u so much sanaya !!yeah finally vivek is out of their life .. no i wont bring him back so dont worry ..

even i am very frustrated wid all dat is happening in dmg rite now .. bechara armaan .. i wont hurt him in my ff ..

i am happy dat u liked d hitler convo .. even i found it cute ..

even i wanna send my ideas to creatives .. hope dey listen to dem ..

yeah i'll continue very soon .. wid loads and loads of a-r scenes fr sure ..

i'll continue tomorrow only if i get more comments ..

so guys plz comment ..

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *riddhima*

hey......simply owesome and i'm happy that the mystery is solved.....when will they get married?? 😳

thanks fr d awesome comment .. gud dat u liked it .. even i am very happy dat d mystery is solved .. abt d marriage , i will decide abt dat l8r .. coz i want more suggestions ..

neways , thnx a ton fr d comment ..

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey, great part 👏 👏 , love ur ff, update soon 😊

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