’what DESTINY holds’--RA-part19+epilogue.. - Page 14

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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part 👏

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
so up wid nxt part.... 😊 😊
hope u njoy it!!

gimme few mins to edit it though...
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART-18




it ws her 1st international ramp walk.1st international assignment.she ws very nervous.wen i called her , she ws very upset.she told nethra wid a dreamy look on his face.memories seemed to become as fresh as real.



'bt rahi i hv to face international audience'



i ws like always giving her courage to go n walk.dnt think whr u r...give ur best!!that ws d last time i talked over fone wid her.from then , no contact ws made wid me , almost delibrately.i knew something ws wrong , very wrong.wen nothing cud b found abt her i decided to leave fr singapore.there i came to know wat all had happened.




'natalie , i will walk widout ne tension now.come on , give me the last minute touch up.'she said to her make-up artist.

'and next ladies n gentlemen is an exclusive ROCKY S design.'the speaker said

and came the ever b'ful asmi.the dress really ws beautiful.it ws a long white sleevless gown wid deep neck line n siler thread work...heavy one.it had huge cut in the right side , showing her frm mid thigh.the back of it ws deep too...eyes worked up wid all the eye liners n makeup , hair tied up in a big bun above her head.a beauty...wearing stilletos...she walked the ramp magnificently...high on confidence , representing the famous indian designer at such a huge event.

it ws wen she ws going back...wid all the lights frm camera n chandelier...the world went black in front of her she disbalanced on the long heels...n collapsed on the floor.then n there...everybody ws worried...she looked like a diva...the most glamorous model....she ws carried away immidiately...to d nearest hospital.

'she is fine'said the doc to her mother , her eyes puffy wid constant crying.everyone thot it ws due to her nerousness...bt she ws smiling all the way while walking...she wsnt nervous then y the dizzyness.

'has she ever felt like that b4??'
'it ws just twice or thrice...bt it ws due to long hrs of working.'she replied.
'have u ever chckd wid d doc??'
'no.'came d plain response.
'i m sorry , bt the initial chk up shows a medium sized clot in her blood.it might not be the case bt we hv to conduct few more tests so plzz complete the formalities as soon as possible.'

her parents were freezed whr they sat in doc's cabin.

'i know its not a good news to u , that too in new country....bt u hv to be strong!'

she ws wondering wt all ws happening??she ws admitted to this sick looking hospital...nurses wud come n take her blood sample.wen it ws third time...she panicked.

'wat all is happening??'she askd very angrly.
'mam plzz let me do my job.'she adjusted the needle.
'u take one more drop of blood n i will scream of u murdering me.'

sicnce the laws are strict there , she took the amount of blood she had taken n fled frm the room.

'plzz send my family in....'she said to fleding nurse.

'ma ye sab kya ho raha hai??' she askd her mom who just entered d room...
'arrey kuchh nahi beta bas thodi si formalities hain kuchh tests hain jo karwane hain...hw u feeling??'
'its ok ma...aur ye sab to pehle bhi hua hai fir tests ab kyu??'
'yaha ke docs ko to tu janti hai , chheenk bhi aaye to full body chk-up karte hain..bas..'
'achha mera fone do , rahi ko fone karna hai..'

her mom knew this wud b coming.she didnt wantd to bother him...aftr all it ws just weakness n momentarily nervousness her daughter ws facing.

'arrey beta use bhi fone kar liyo , pehle ye dawai aur aaram.....'
'ohh ma aapko pata hai , rahi ko fone nahi karungi to kuchh achha nahi lagega..'
'janti hoon beta , par tera saara saman wahin par hai..'
'to mangwao na...wo bhi fone try kar raha hoga..'
'haan bas aata hi hoga , natalie ko kaha tha , wo aati hi hogi..'she said giving her the mediscene.

she stroked her hair as she went into sleep , she still murmered rahil's name.a tear dropped frm her mother's eyes.she ws worried fr her daughter.

'how much time will it take to chk the reports??'askd asmi's dad.
'it will be wid me in d morning , bt i hv a request , god forbid bt if its the case of clotting we will hv to take asmi to australia fr operation.'
'is it really serious doc?? she is just 23.'

doctor put a hand on his shoulder.

'i think so.make the necessary arrangement.'

he ws totally dejected.asmi is 23 , b'ful graceful top model n so much in love y her god??

'kya kaha doc ne?'askd his wife.
'it is serious sumi , we might hv to travel to australia..'
'meri bachi'she whispered.

they both sat there on the bench , she rested her head on his shoulder.he too ws worried.his only daughter.

'asmi ne kisi ka kya bura kiya??'
'bas sumi , pehle reports to aane do , kya pata doc ko galti lagi ho.'
'yahi hona chahiye...'

that night ws d most difficult night.asmi slept peacefully , atleast it seemes , maybe coz of strong mediscenes.her parents were tear stricken , bt still had hopes up.here rahil ws trying her fone desperately.

'hello , can i talk to asmi..plzz it urgent.'
'sure rahil , i m her make-up artist..just a moment.'

it ws natalie , she has reached hospital unaware of all the things.she thot its better if asmi ar some1 frm her family talk to rahil abt asmi's health.
bt by d time she cud take the fone to her parents the battery ws finished n cell switched off.

'aunty , rahil ka call tha..'
'tumne use kuchh kaha to nahi?'she ws panicked.
'nahi , main chahati thi ki aap baat karein lekin shayad battery khatam ho gayi.'

she took the fone , n kept it in her purse.

**

'i m sorry , she has got two clots in her blood.'
'TWO'
'yes , she has to be operated as soon as possible.'
'y we need to take her to australia n waste d time.operate her here.'
'we cant , our senior doc is there , its a conference there so many of d docs of major of the hospitals hv gone there to attend.'
'oh god!'
'dont worry , our hospital has got air ambulance we will b there in few hrs.'

**



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Posted: 17 years ago
its more of flashback...it will continue in nxt part also until the whole things clear up...

hope i m able to manage flashback.. 😊

waiting fr ur precious replies...love them immensely.a BIG thanks to all my readers...

luv ya all
😊 mehendi 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey i felt i have read this before...! I think it was there as a flashback in one of the earlier episodes.......Haww......dil nahi bhara ye padh ke......i was waiting since soooo long to read the new part..... 😭 😭 😭 ...I wanted Rahil -Nethra !! 😭

Ab u will post after another 10 days....tab tak to i will wilt and die 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part. 👏 bt plz continue soon
-Aarti- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 part 👏

plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey where are u yaar?? post the next part plzz !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
are yaar kabhi toh jaldi cont karo
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Posted: 17 years ago

my laptop had some problem wid it..so ws trying to fix it up....

n i did..so here i m wid nxt part...
keep replying to my fic...
luv u all..
😊mehendi😊

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